LOL

Thank you so much. My beta is working on it. I should have it posted this week sometime.

Thanks again, love hearing from you.

XxOo

Jells

Hiya!

Thanks so much! As soon as I get my chapter 15 back, I promise I'll post it that day.

Thanks for reading and commenting. hope you'll like the next chapter

XxOo

Jells

Hiya!

Yeah, don't worry. Edward will be fine. =)

Thanks so much. I love hearing from you

xxOo

Jells

Hiya! *waves*

Last night I was trying to finish what Tyggy wrote for LAH and I flipped flopped back and forth between ch 16 LAV and Ch 7 part 2 LAH so hopefully we'll post in LAH a few days. No worries. Dolls are creepy. You most likely, actually most defintely wouldn't want to see my room then. I have tons of Chucky dolls. lol Before Twilight, everything was Jason, Michael, Freddy...Chucky. lol Gaaah ! I sound nutz, huh? lol

Thank you. I hope you like our original.

And thanks for reading and commenting. love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Hi!

Thank you for reading.

Great guesses, but he isn't succumbing to The Thirst or reacting to the little arguement. You'll see soon.=)  My beta should have the chapter back to me this weekend sometime or Monday.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you still like this story.

Thanks again, love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Glad you still like =)

I'll post ch 15 asap when I get it back.

Thanks again,

Jells

Thank you so much!!! Your comment made my day. So glad you still like. =)

The last time Edward drank blood most likely was that same morning he collapsed. My vamps have breakfast, lunch and dinner. lol

Good guess, but it's not The Thirst. It can be quite serious if he doesn't recieve the help he needs, but he isn't really sick per se. I really hope you will like the next chapter.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Hiya!!!

I promise it will be really soon. My beta told me last night that she started working on the chapter.

Yeah, bad cliffy. Sorry lol

Thanks for reading and commenting. Love hearing from you

XxOo

Jells

Hi again! Shit! I somehow missed your comment.

I looooooooooooooooove mindfuckery. =D

Love your guess btw. But you'll see....

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

PS: Looking forward to more of your story

LMAO!!!

*waves back*

IKR? Bella is a bitch with a capital B. Interesting, I like how you think...but....you'll see what's really wrong with Barbedpeenward. I hope you'll likey next chapter.

Thank you,

Ms. Barbedpeenward *giggles

XxOo

Jells

Hiya nicnak55!

Thanks so much! =) I'm happy you like. Ch 14 is in my beta's inbox. And ch 15 is 95% complete.

I'll post as soon as i get back the chapter.

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Tiny teaser (sorry for any mistakes it's a rough draft) lol

Ch 14 Bella's POV

A scream left my lips and before I knew what was happening, I was no longer nuzzled protectively in Edward’s lap, but lying on the cold, hard floor with my bra exposed. Mr. Greene hovered over me as he ground his pulsing erection into my thigh. His black orbs widened, taking in my nipples poking through the white lacey, ripped fabric. He licked his lips hungrily and purred. I quickly grasped my blouse and pulled it together to close it. But I gasped as I unexpectedly felt the rough ridge of the tip of his cock rub against my inner thigh while his long fangs pressed into the side of my neck, ready to penetrate my skin any second. I coughed and gagged as a thick, gooey, sticky, and foul smelling substance dripped onto my neck, saturating my skin.

Immediately my neck began to itch from the mysterious substance. It felt like a thousand ants and mosquitos were biting me continuously, injecting their poison into my body. “Get it off! Get it off, it itches!” I squeaked. I wanted to tear off my skin. It was itching so crazily that it started to hurt.  But the principal began to push his fangs further into my neck, almost on the verge of breaking my skin.

“GET IT OFF!” I cried, flailing my arms and legs around wildly. “It hurts!”

Sudden fear coursed through my veins at the thought of this disgusting goo being injected into my body, but it was short-lived when Edward grasped Mr. Greene by the collar of his dress shirt and simply picked him off of me, throwing him across the office like a ragdoll. There was an earsplitting crash as the principal landed, completely destroying his desk as it lay in a pile of wooden shards on the floor.

There was yelling, snarling, hissing and growling from Charlie and Edward as he tried to get Edward to calm down. But it wasn’t working. Edward was enraged…feral, determined to kill, to protect me. I saw the wild, lethal gleam in his black orbs and his unbelievably long fangs as they dripped green venom.

I crawled quickly to corner of the office, pressing my back against the wall as I feverishly swatted at my neck, wiping off the itchy substance. I abruptly brought my hand to my face, growing confused as the goo began to dry on the tips of my fingers.

 Orange venom?

Thank you soo much! You made my day. =)

Nah, you're not annoying by asking. I'm happy that you care actually. lol  I'm almost done with the chapter. I had to rewrite it since I wasn't happy with what was happening. I need to listen to my gut more, and screw the outline. lmao I'm actually working on it now. It's been tough b/c after classes ended, I got a job which requires me to work the graveyard shift so I sleep in the day. But.... I'm almost finished. =)

Here's a tiny teaser (sorry for any mistakes)

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

Bella's POV Ch. 14

OoOoOO

Before I knew what was happening, I was lying on the floor with Mr. Greene hovering over me as his pulsing erection stabbed my thigh and the tips of his fangs pressed into the side of my neck, ready to penetrate my skin any second. I coughed and gagged as a thick gooey, sticky, and foul smelling substance covered my neck.

Immediately my neck began to itch from the mysterious substance. It felt like a thousand ants and mosquitos were biting me continuously, injecting their poison into my body. “Get it off! Get it off, it itches!” I squeaked. I wanted to tear off my skin. It was itching so crazy that it began to hurt.  But the principal began to push his fangs further into my neck, almost on the verge of breaking my skin.

“GET IT OFF!” I cried, flailing my arms and legs around wildly.

Sudden fear coursed through my veins at the thought of this goo being injected into my body, but it was short-lived when Edward grasped Mr. Greene by the collar of his dress shirt and simply picked him off of me, throwing him across the office like a ragdoll. The principal landed with a crash, completely destroying his desk as it lay in a pile of wooden shards on the floor.

I feverishly swatted at my neck, wiping off the itchy substance. I abruptly brought my hand to my face, growing confused as the goo began to dry on the tips of my fingers.

Orange venom?

Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it.

Nah, you're not weird for thinking the end scene was hot. I agree, it would have been totally gross if Edward were a human lapping away at Bella. lmao

Annabel will be back. =)

As for bad vamps working at blood donation centers, yes, most vamp are mean, cruel anti- human. But there are some nice ones out there like you mentioned. However, I've only covered one donation center so far. But there are nice vamps at some of blood banks, just haven't mentioned them yet.

The Cullen men are quite intimidating. They're taller, fiercer, and they radiate this confidence. They can be quite menacing when they walk in. And most know the legend of the Ultimate Vamp. It's survival of the fittest. The strongest are feared and most respected, but of course you have jerk vamps like Mike Netwon who didn't give a crap for the most part. Other vamps can sense who is strong or who is weaker. But some like a good ol' challenge like James. lol

Thanks again,

Jells

Hey!

Great q. Okay, I have 3 versions of this story outlined. lol And if I follow my current outline, Bella will have an ill spell again...but you didn't miss anything. Right now, her symptoms are extremely mild-almost non existent- due to Edward's venom flowing in her bloodstream...and that's connected to why the increase blood draw in humans and those pills that increase red blood cell production that the vamp gov't has ordered. I'll try to cover this in ch 16 or 17, maybe sooner depending how much I can squeeze into ch 14. Sometimes I feel it's like info overload with all the stuff going on. lol

~Jells

Hi Coleen!

Thank you so much =D I'm happy that you're still enjoying this story!

Thank you. Yes, I was extremely nervous posting the last scene, but I said what the heck, why not. I always wanted to do it. Phew! Glad it turned out alright.

No worries. I totaly understand. I think my betas freak out when I send them the monstrous chapters. lol

Thanks again for everything! =)

XxOo

Janine

Thank you so much =) Glad you likey!

xxOo

Jellybean

Thank so much =)

LOL. Thanks, glad you likey my Edward ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Thank you so much =)

We'll post more soon

Ginny!!!!!

Yep, it is. lol

Hiya my Daddy C luvah! lol

Thanks for giving this story a try. Hope you like it =)

~Jells

All I can say is I love the way you think. ;)

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're enjoying the story!

LOL. IKR?  Bella caused quite a reaction. lol

Thank you again, I loved hearing you thoughts and thanks so much for reading!

~Jells

lmao! Yeah....I guess if you had a vamp as your mate it could be that fun. lol

Thanks. Glad you like Em. =)

Yeah, Aro is coming up. *gulps*

Thank you so much for reading and your comments. I appreciate it. =)

Thanks again,

Jells

Hey again!

So the vamp language I used some Serbian, Russian, ummm... *thinking* a wee bit of Romanian....English, Latin....Polish....and I think that's it.....I swear there was another one ....But yeah so I just mixed around the letters and formed a weird language. I initally wanted to use Romanian, but since these vamps are from another planet, I decided against it.

LOLOL. Yeah, Bella is lucky. Jeez! I want what she has. lol And yup, vamp parents are pretty cool about the sex thing since they know they are true mates.

Yeah, this Ed wants to keep Bella for the rest of his existence. He couldn't stand to see her wither away and die slowly.

Thank you. I appreciate you reading and giving me your thoughts and q's. =)

Jells

Hiya!

Thank you so much! =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter!

Thanks again,

~Jells

Hiya Bammers!

Glad to see you here. Thanks so much =)

I'm working on ch 14 atm. I'm planning on updating really soon.

Thanks again,

Jells

Hya again!

Yeah, Angela wanted what Bella has with Edward, the true undying love. She's s'cited! lol

Ben's father is a monster. He's horrible. =(

Cool! So you suspected Mike! Awesome!

Thank you for reading! And commenting.

~Jells

Ooooooooo questions! I love questions. lol Just serious! I do.

Okay...let me see if I can answer just a couple since the rest will be covered much later throughout the story. The reason why humans can't be changed should be coming up in chapter 12. It has something to do with what happens when a human is turned into a hybrid. It freaks Aro out. lol If Edward changed Bella he could face punishment, death. However, Aro does like Edward. I'm working on a scene atm in ch 14 which involves Edward and Aro. Marking venom won't change her alone. It's more complicated than that. I will try to cover that soon, possibly before chapter 20. As for Ed getting in trouble for mating with a human, the answer is no. But let's say Bella would become pregnant, the baby would be a hybrid so that wouldn't go to well with Aro. As long as vamps don't have half breed babies and turn humans into hybrids, Aro doesn't really care so much. Yuppers, Bella can totally get pregers from Edward. She needs some birth control asap. lol I wish Edward could stop the donation, but you'll see it's quite difficult. But Carlisle will try his best.  It's a crazy story. lol

I hope you continue to likey. It's um going to get kinda...um different for the mating...you'll see in chapter 10 if you  stick around. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thank you so much=) There will be um...more period scenes. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thanks for reading =)

Thank you for giving my story a try. =) I hope you'll like.

~Jells

Hiya!

Thank you so much for giving my story a try. I hope you continue to enjoy it. =)

Glad you like the mating ;)

Thanks again. I appreciate it.

~Jells

Hiya!

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you are enjoying the story. I'm working on ch 14 atm so hopefully I can post asap.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. Hopefully, I can keep you entertained.

~Jells

Hiya troberts!

Thank you so much! =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter. IKR? The wait was long, but I'm glad that you'll stick with me. It means a lot. I've' started ch 14 and i'm trying my best to finish asap.

I looove WB, too! FangMe is working on her next chapter so it should be posted soon. =)

Thanks again, I love hearing from you.

~Jells

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're still enjoying this story.

I'm working on ch 14 already so i'm hoping I can post asap! =)

Thanks again,

~Jells

Ikr? I hope they don't get into too much trouble either.

Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it! =)

~Jells

Hi again, samic =)

You know whatty? That's happened to me before, too. So don't feel bad. I appreciate that you take the time to comment. It means a lot to me.

Thank you =) I'm happy that you did enjoy the chapter. It was kinda a pain in the arse to write, but I'm glad that it did turn out alright.

Yeah, there's so much to cover....Angela/Ben situation...Bella's tainted blood...illegal human hunting clubs...Volturi...hybrid situation...vamp jail and court...possible human disease...and even lighter stuff like vamp concerts and stuff like that. I haven't even covered 1/2 of it yet. There' so much more that it makes my head spin. Almost info overload. lol

No prob, but you aren't badering me. I love to answer q's and whatnot.  =)

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked! It was a crazy chapter. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

LOL. Thank you! =)

I'll try my very best to get the next chapter out asap!

I'm sorry about that wait esp with that mean cliffy =(

Thanks again,

~Jells

Hiya Sue!!

OMG! I LOVE your comment. Thank you so much =)

BTW I'm lovin your story! I'm going to finish it prolly by tomorrow. Once I got to reading I couldn't stop. I adore your dark Cullens. Truly unique story you have there. =)

So yeah, IKR? Thank goodness for no word limits. lol It was crazy to write. I kept editing and editing...it was exhausting. lol

Yeah, Mike is finally gone for good. He had to go. Edward was acting on his vamp instincts.

Aww thanks. I'm happy you enjoye dteh blood donation scene. I actually had two versions of it. I'm glad I picked the right one. Phew. lol

Yeah, Ben and Angela are in for some tough times. But I hate to keep them apart. I think the move to vamp tonw will happen soon. I wonder what the vamps will say to that. lol

LMao! It's just like the AXE commercials. Hehe

Hahah yeah the cherry lemonade....it is quite freaky. But I guess to vamps it could be described as a treat. Like....dessert. OMG that sounds so wrong. lol

Thank you. I'm happy you like Edward's vampire side...his animalsiticness <-- is that a word? lol

Yeah, I'm nervous for the Aro scene. It's nervewracking and idk why. lol Lots of pressure, I guess. Bree is sweet....and Riley....well you'll see.

Again, Thank you soooo much! I enjoy hearing your thoughts. =)

*hugs*

Jells

Hiya!

Thank you so much. I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter.

Thank you for reading =) It means a lot.

~Jells

LOLOLOL!

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

~Jells

Omg! *squeeee Your comment made my day!

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Riley.....he's......you'll see. :) lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thank you so much =) I was nervous about that cherry lemonade. lol

Thanks again!

Hi again, samic!

When I saw your comment earlier I was like *facepalm* How could I miss that?  And I did it twice, too! Gaaah! lol Thanks for pointing that out. I've already corrected it. I appreciate it. =)

And thanks for reading!

~Jells

Hiya PINKSAPPHYR!

Thank you so much! I'm totally happy that you enjoyed the chapter. It means a lot to me. =)

Aww I'm glad that you enjoyed the period scene. I was nervous to post it. But i figured what the heck, he's a vamp and she's bleeding.  lol

Yeah, Mike had to go. Even if let's say he was  locked up in jail...he's a vamp, they live for eternity so he would have been a problem when he got out. And you're totally right, Mike caused too much damage. And Edward was doing what any male vamp would do, get rid of thr threat permanently to ensure the safety of his mate, no matter the consequences.

Thank you, glad you liked the donation center scene.

And yeah, I'm worried about the meeting to with Aro too. I have two versions of that meeting in my mind...one not so nice...and the other...well. lol

Thanks again. Your comment made my day!

I hope I can keep you entertained. I'll try my very best to post more asap. 

XxOo

Jells

Yeah, it can be quite difficult. But she has Edward, so it isn't so bad. lol

Thanks for reading =)

~Jells

Thank you =) I'm happy you liked the chapter. I'll have more posted asap.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Lambyyyykins! Hi *waves*

LOL. Glad you enjoyed the update Ms. Barbedpeenward *giggles*  IKR? I wish I could have my own barbedpeenward, too. Just wait til I cover the vamp mating cycle...oh boy! lol

You know I still can't find any pics of barbed peens, other than the ones I told you about. lmao

 I think Tyggy is going to write the next update in LAH this weekend, hopefully.

Anyhoo, thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jells