[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hehe they just keep getting it on and Charlie just keep having to hear the end of it. Love the update. Can't Wait to see what happens with Bella and the camps now that she's on her menstrual cycle.
Author's Response:
LOL. So true, Charlie does keep having to hear it. Thank you so much =) Makes me happy that you enjoyed the update. I'll cover more about Bella and her menstrual cycle and what will happen with that. But just wait until I cover the Vampire mating cycle...oh boy! lol
Thank you for reading and commenting.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
gah yeah creepy stalker/murder mike is dead and hopefully tyler is going to be out of the picture soon. such a great chapter, i just reread this story a little bit ago and can't think of anything else ever since - definitely did a happy dance when i saw it updated!! feel bad they are going to have to go through even more especially with aro and the whole blood donation, no turning her issues - so much to deal with. But while its sometimes annoying they have to deal with all that and it just can't be all happy and better, that at least guarantees more chapters to come :D
Author's Response:
Hiya westernem!
Aww Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I always get nervous when I post a new chapter. lol So I'm glad it turned out well.
Yes, you're totally right, there are so many conflicts that need to be dealt with that it does guarantee more chapters to come. To think about it, there's so much more I still have to cover including the lighter topics. My outline is crazy...there's just so much that it makes my head spin. lol This easily could be a 50 chapter story or more esp since I'm taking it day by day.
Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. And hopefully I can keep you entertained. =)
~Jells
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
GAH! That was INCREDIBLE! I really loved the cherry lemonade...why can't this Edward exist in real life to help me through my time of the month? I cannot wait to see what happens next and how they finally change Bella ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
I ask myself that all the time. Why can't there be an Edward like this? hehe Thank you, i'm flattered that you like Edward =)
Thanks again,
I'll post more asap.
~Jells
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter. love when they all took her to the donation center.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Awesome!!!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED the chapter and had a blast working with you on it. You totally rawk my dearest! The you are the bestest there is...
You are my hero, my inspiration and my Goddess... hehehe...
Tanya and her nappy ass can wait til next chapter, she would have just soured the lemonade and who wants that?!
LMAO... I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVES ya Babe!
XxOo ~ Fangs
Author's Response:
Awwwwwwwwwwwww thank you *blushes* I so owe you for those lemons! If you ever need really dark ask me. That's prolly the only thing I can kinda get right....with Tygs help of course. lmao
You're my lemon Goddess and lifesaver!! ;)
LMAO@ Tanya and her sour ass lemonade. Yeah, the biatch is back.
I loved working with you! You're the bestest !!
Love ya
XxOo
Jells
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Where are you getting the vampires native lang from? Some of the words sound famillar.
Author's Response:
Hiya again!
Great question. LOTV is actually a language made up of Serbian, Russian, some latin, Romanian...a little English mixed in there, too. I know I'm missing like two more languages here. lol But I tend to use more Serbian words and mix around the letters.
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
I know this is gonna sound creepy but how will Bella handle school when she has her monthly cycle? you know with just a small cut how vamps reacted.
I think there was something explaind in either a FF story or S Myers outtakes and midnight sun (can't remember) about it.
Author's Response:
Hiya!
It's funny you should mention that because in chapter 13 there's a scene where Bella has her monthly cycle. I should have that chapter up soon, it's with my beta right now.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
=)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my lord! I am a sick stalker once again. I just saw that you are online and I am praying with all of my might that it's because you are about to update this kick ass story. I need a pick me up tonight in between the papers and lesson plans!
Author's Response:
LMAO! No, you're definitely not a sick stalker. I was online to read a reply from another author. I'm actually editing the final scene for ch 13 right now which means I can send it to my beta later tonight or tomorrow. Soooo hopefully, I can post before the week is over depending when I get this chapter back. She's usually pretty fast. =)
I'm sorry for taking such a long time. I feel like shit about that =( This chapter was a little pain in the a**. lol And then RL Sh** didn't make it any better. I have another teaser for you =) I wish I could give you a lemon....but that's the last scene I'm working on right now, and I have to put up a little warning for this lemon anyway....it's um...well...it may be offensive to some. You'll see when I post lol Again sorry for any mistakes. Hope it doesn't suck =(
xo
Jells
Ch 13 Bella's POV
OoOoOo
“How was class?” Edward asked. I knew from the look in his crimson eyes as I pulled back to gaze up at him that he wasn’t just asking me how the lecture went. He wanted to know if there was anyone dumb enough to fuck with me after that little speech he gave. “Well…” I began casually as we walked down the hallway, hand-in-hand, “…the lecture was really boring and-” I paused suddenly as a redheaded male vampire scampered away from us, bumping into another vampire couple along the way. Poor guy couldn't get away fast enough from us. The dark haired male turned on his heel sharply, shielding his female protectively with his body, and snarling in L.O.T.V at the terrified redheaded male. I turned my attention back to Edward and glanced up at him while his dark eyes were locked onto the other vampires, his fangs slightly extended. Everyone around us was moving far away, giving us room as we continued to our next class period. It was easy to see that Edward was radiating pure menace while low warning growls resonated deep within his massive chest. He was so intimidating that most couldn’t even look him straight in the eye as they passed by us. He looked down at me momentarily before shifting his attention back to the vampires in the hallway. “And? Continue what you were saying, kitten,” Edward said, flashing his fang tip at me as the corner of his mouth pulled up in that crooked grin I loved so much. “Aaaaannnd…that’s it. Yup, that’s it,” I replied with a smirk, trying to keep my laughter in. I loved teasing my vampire. Edward chuckled, drawing me closer to him. He moved his free hand to my waist, tickling me. “No, that’s not it, silly kitten. You know what I want to know. You can’t deceive me, I feel what you feel remember? It’s almost as if I could read your mind by feeling your emotions.” I giggled, slapping at his hand. He pushed me back against the wall by my third hour class period. “Edward,” I laughed, my eyes filling with tears from amusement. “Stop!” “No,” he growled playfully, pinning me between the wall and his massive body. “Not until you tell me. You do a great job of hiding your emotions from me when you want. And I want to know if anyone messed with my little kitten.” I laughed harder as he continued to tickle my waist. “Okay, okay…okay… I’ll tell you,” I gasped in between breaths. He stopped immediately, cupping my face in his large palm, leaning down and kissing the tip of my nose. My face was now flushed as the blood rushed to my cheeks, causing my vampire to growl his appreciation. “So?” he coaxed. “Or am I going to have to tickle that tiny waist of yours again?” He arched an eyebrow. I held up my hands in surrender. “You win! Just let me catch my breath first you big, bad vampire.” He cracked a smile, crossing his arms over his chest. “I’ll wait. I’m a patient vampire, kitten.” “I sure hope so. You have all the time in the world,” I giggled. “To answer your question, no, no one said a thing after you left. Most of them just stared at me curiously.” “Good.” His smile grew wider as he puffed out his chest proudly. "I didn't want to have to mess up my favorite shirt," he teased with a wink. I snorted at him, rolling my eyes. "Oh I'm sure that a torn shirt would've ruined your day." He chuckled, pulling me closer to him. “Come here my little kitten.”
I groaned when the bell rang, signaling the start of the next class period. “See you in an hour,” I said somberly. He leaned down and crushed his lips to mine. I could feel him harden as I pushed my body up against his. As our passion heated up, we ground against each other, creating sweet friction between us. I wanted so badly to touch his thick, long hardening cock. My hand was itching to just touch it, grab and stroke it. I wanted to suck him off, letting my tongue sensually lick his glistening head, giving him ultimate pleasure as I fucked him with my mouth. I squeezed my thighs together as my sex began to ache. A sudden pained growl rumbled in his chest, breaking our kiss. “Be good, you little tease.” “Always am.” I winked.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow! Not to sound like a stalker but I saw that you are on the site right now and I swear I felt almost star struck haha. I know you ladies are busy I just want to say thanks for writing two amazing stories. I cannot wait until you update again. I get the craziness though. I'm a student teacher right now and I am sadly waaay behind on my fanfic readings since I have zero free time. Hope all the studying is going well!
Author's Response:
Awwww thank you. No, you definitely don't sound like a stalker. lol I'm flattered that you stopped by and left a comment. And thank you so much. Your kind words me alot to me, us. IKR? RL is kicking our butts big time. I know it's been waaay too long since I posted a new chapter. I'm in the process of editing it, and sometimes it takes much longer than writing the chapter itself. Thanks for understanding. I'm way behind on my reading too. I try to catch up best I can, Sometimes it helps me to get back in the writing mood esp after that report I had to write. What a killer. lol
Thanks again,
Best of luck too you, too. Hopefully, we'll see you around more. =)
And as always, thanks for reading. It means a lot.
XO
~Jells
PS: I finally have a tiny teaser to give out. Here it is. Sorry for any mistakes, Oh and I have two versions of chapter 13. lol I can't make up my mind which is the better one.
Bella's POV ch 13 version #1
“Bella! It’s alright. You’re safe now,” a velvety voice spoke. “Sshhhh it’s okay, love.
My eyes snapped open at the familiar sound. I swallowed audibly, feeling my heart race in my chest, on the verge of exploding. I couldn’t see as tears streamed down my cheeks, causing my vision to blur. A cool thumb began to wipe my tears away gently. “Shhh…I’m here, Bella..." the velvety voice cracked.
“Edward?” I croaked, confused.
“Yes, kitten. It’s me.” Cool lips pressed against my forehead, calming my nerves as I blinked feverishly. “You’re safe. I promise.” His lips hovered in close proximity over my forehead, lightly brushing my skin as they made their way down my cheek and to my lips. I gasped softly as the tip of his fang grazed my lower lip as he kissed me passionately. I deepened the kiss by tilting my head forward. I craved the contact. I needed him as much as a fish needed water. We let our tongues dance, tangling as the passion increased significantly, his kiss needy and rough. But all too soon, he broke our kiss. “I thought I lost you…” his voice trailed off.
“Edw-” I began to say before he silenced me with another kiss. This kiss was gentler, softer this time. I could feel all of his love in the kiss. I squeezed my eyes shut, relishing everything he had to give me. I was taken back by the intensity of his love for me.
I crushed my lips further into his, putting all my love that I felt for him into that kiss, a kiss that I thought I would never share again with him. But I was alive. I could feel my heart beat, my blood rushing through my veins just as his venom-filled heart pumped his venom through his veins. We were very much alive. He was here...he was here with me. I was here...with him. I let my tears flow freely as my frail emotions took over me entirely. I didn't need Heaven, I had Edward. He was my personal Heaven. As long as I was with him, everything would be okay. My tears continued to cascade down my cheeks like a waterfall as his fingers gently ran through my hair in effort to soothe me. “Please don’t cry my love. You’re safe. I promise I won’t let anyone hurt you,” he vowed against my lips with a growl. The tone of his voice scared me a bit as he said this. But I couldn't concentrate on anything but our love for the moment. I blinked a few more times, needing to see him.
I smiled as my vision cleared, taking in Edward’s face. His dark crimson orbs were somber, but the love that glimmered in his eyes took my breath away. His expression was severe, determined but his unwavering love for me was evident as he gazed down at me fiercely. My smile widened. His bronze hair was disheveled, more than it had ever been. His fangs were slightly elongated and his shirt torn in some places. He hovered over me protectively, never breaking eye contact, the pad of his thumb stroking my cheek gingerly as if I were made of porcelain.
“What happened?” I asked, trying to sit up, but a firm hand pushed me back down. I wanted to reach out and touch him. I needed to feel him. I stretched my arm out, but immediately winced. I glanced down with a frown at my left wrist that was in a cast. All of a sudden, everything rushed back to me. “It wasn’t a dream was it? Mike…it was him.” Tears began to well in my eyes once again. "M-M-Mik-"
"Shhh." Edward placed his finger on my lips, silencing me. His other hand drifted to my arm, stroking me soothingly as his face turned somber before twisting into a sneer. “Bella, he’s gone now. He can’t hurt you anymore,” he growled the last part, his fangs stretching.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Brilliant story, great chapter!! I can't wait to read what happens next. Upload soon plz.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you like so far.
I should have the chapter up very soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Where have you been all my life? this story is soooo addictive i stayed up 2 days straight to read it all. Mike deserves to get everything that I am Damn sure Edward will do to him, and I can't wait to read how it all turns out
Author's Response:
lol Thank you so much. =) I'm happy that you like so far. And I'm totally flattered!
I should have the next chapter up very soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
Nooo! Don't stop now. Where is Edward? Doesn't he feel Bella's emotions? He has to get to her in time.
Author's Response:
lol I know mean cliffy =( You're absolutely correct, he can feel her emotions.
I'm sending ch 13 to beta this week and hopefully I can post very soon. RL has been crazy for me for the past two months.
Thank you for reading! =)
~Jells
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon! This story is soo awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much =) I'm happy that you like.
I'm sending chapter 13 to my beta this week, so hopefully I'll be able to post very soon.
Thank you for reading and commenting =)
~Jells
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well HELL!!! I finally caught up you little sheathen!!
I restrained myself so well I almost feel like I deserve a cookie or something!!!
haha!!
AWESOME STILL TOTALLY AWESOME!
The cock and barbs....can we say HOLY SHIT!? THATS JUST CRAZYYYYYYYYYYY!
Man I thought I had a twisted fucking mind!!! hahaha....
I am now tapping my finger on my chin and wondering I wouldn't mind being STUCK with Edward!
haha...
too fucking HAWT FOR WORDS!!!!
You my dear are scandalous! This is great! Now I have to wait and that just plain ass SUCKS!!!
Still love your story!
HuGs!!!
Drea~
ps....I am utilizing this photo of Edward for my next story! This photo is just FUCK HAWT and he fits the description of my new VaMp DoM!
Author's Response:
OMG!!!!! That pic is FUCKHAWT!!!!! *fans self* hehe
Thank you so much! I'm glad you still likey. I'm trying my best to finish ch 13 this weekend. RL has been tough, and classes added with hw and research and studying. Just UGH! I hate it =(
LMAO@ twisted mind. Hehe And I'm holding back too. I could turn this reeeeeeeeaaaaallly twisted. lol
Awesome about your new story!!!! I will check that out when you start posting. I'm still playing catch up with EEK too and a few others. I promise I'll get back to it after this weekend. It feels like I never have enough hours in a day, the days are flying by.
Thank you so much =) Loved your comment!!!
*hugs*
xxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
I just love this story. Can't wait for the next update! Hoping Edward gets there in time. If Mike were to mark and force Bella to mate, would that be the end of her and Edward?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're liking so far.
I'm still working on ch 13. I should have it completed soon. RL is crazy for me right now. lol
Great question. If Mike claimed Bella as his, he would break the true mate bond between Edward and Bella. She would belong to Mike, but Edward could reclaim her, bonding her to him once again. It would be tough to do so, esp since Bella would carry Mike's scent. Bella would smell all wrong to Edward. =(
Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad that I started reading your story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! =) I'm happy that you gave my story a chance. It's funny because I added your story to my faves list about a week ago. Furiousstrength rec'd it. I will read as soon as I get some time.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh. My. God!!!! I don´t even know wht to say right now! I´m speechless!!!Mike AND Tyler?!?! WTF??? (I know it was only said that Tyler only distracted Chrlie, but still he must at lest know about it!!!) Oh my....Ben and Edward or Anybody! better get their asses there and soon!!! Well, I´m waving my hand and say "Bye, bye, MIKE!"
Angela and Ben were really cute!! The whole instant marking/mting was sooo awesome!!!! ;D Especially Ben´s ' "Ram, bam, hello Ma'am " !!! ;D LOl!!!
As for Aro...Jeeez! That is going to be something!!! I´m both anticipating and dreading it!!!
Please update soon!!! This story is soo awesome!!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much=)
I will post more asap.
Thank you for reading and all the comments along the way =)
xo
~Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
*lits cigarette* Fuck me, that was hot!!! Jeeeeez!!! Not that vampire sex itself is wild and crazy in itself, nooo! Edward and Bella need to include bear-foreplay, threesome-mastorbation (kind of ;D ) and Edward adding little facts like his dick having fucking barbs that could tear her up from the inside, like they werre nothing here and there!! Damn, if that ain´t adventorous than I sure as hell don´t know what is!!! But seriously, the barbs freaked me out bit!!! ;D ;D ;D
I may have to rethink my opinion about Mike Newton...he IS pretty creepy and/or really, really dumb ... I mean to taunt and spur Edward on like that?! He definitely has it coming if he keeps that up!!!
OMG, the fight was really good! But I´m freaked out about what Aro will do now...Geeeeez!!
Where does the language come from, btw?! It kinda seems like a mixture of Latin and English ^^
Really good chapter! Looking forward to the next one and the Ben/Ang encounter!! ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you Sue!!! =) I'm happy you liked. So yeah the barbs...lol...that's why I tend to get nervous when ppl read ch 10. It's....umm..different. lol
The language is a mix of Serbian, Romanian, some English and a teensy bit of Russian and Latin. But I mix around the letters. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
please hurry and updat :)
Author's Response:
Hiya!
I'll post more asap! =) Sorry for the long wait. =(
Thanks
Date: 23 Feb 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
update soon please its eating me up nt knowing whats going on next
please update soon
May
Author's Response:
Hi May!
I'll post more asap. RL has kept me busy. But I'm working on ch 13.
=)
Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG I just can't wait for your next update because this story is just unbelievable!! I soooo love this dominating, possessive and passionate personality you gave our favourite vampires...Damn, this is so amazing and sexy!! Every chapter just keeps feeding my submissive nature and I can't help but ask for more ;)
I hope Edward will come back soon, very very soon, like right now because Bella seems to be pretty badly injured....
Anyway, I really loved all the differences you introduced to your story: they made it exciting, captivating, very pleasant, smouldering and extraordinarly addictive!!
That's brilliant and I really really want more :D
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much!!! =) Your comment made my day!
Thank you. I'm happy that you like the vampire world and the vamps in it. Edward will become more dominant, possessive, passionate as time goes by.=)
I will post more as soon as possible.
Thanks again. I appreciate your comment =)
xo
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
"home planet" I guessed right:::)))
"Edward walked up to the board awkwardly, clutching the book to his crotch" LOL Ha Ha Ha
“Mr. Cullen, please refrain from marking your mate in the classroom, although I have nothing against public marking, but the act can be quite distracting to others.” LOL Their society makes our society look pretty tame (prudish)
"All of a sudden, we heard Mr. Greene’s deep voice nearby" LOL LOL should have known::))
“Actually Bella, there is no need to anymore. Ben introduced himself halfway through our mating. He said, “I’m Ben by the way” and shook my hand,” LOL LOL If Ben had been human & tried this, Angela would have kick him in the balls::)) 2 human/vampire bondings is going to make Aro pissed. Bet this isn't as rare as assumed!
Male vamps having quite the personality disorder goin' on when they get horny:(
Author's Response:
Yes, you guessed right! =)
LOL. Yeah male vamps can have quite a personality disorder. They get very ...animalistic. lol
Thank you so much for reading and your comments along the way. =)
I'll post more soon.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
"Emmett being Emmett, made some sex jokes when he noticed I walked awkwardly" LOL OMG
Wow, death by 'O'! What a way to go::))
Random thought - where does the barb land when he or Bella jacks him off? And, God forbid, when/if he cums in her mouth? That could be nasty::)) Worse than getting a fishhook in you throat:(
"The mating scent, along with the marking scent could clear a whole room of males in a matter of seconds" Talking about your period can do that too::))
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I still cringe when I think about ch 11. lol
So when Edward cums, the two barbs, which are slightly curved at the ends to resemble hooks, will pop out from under the head of his peen. It's just a natural reaction when he orgasms. Now if Bella somehow let him cum in her mouth, the barbs would've hooked onto the sides of her mouth, inside her cheek. Yup, Ouch! Then the two barbs will automatically retract when he becomes flaccid again.
Thanks again =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
These vampires are alot different than S.M.'s I like these better:) When I read about how they look & act my mind pictures something a little like the movie 'Battlefield Earth'
Edward is such a dork! He takes stitches over his mother's venom? I guess even vampire males are idiots
Edward drinking from Bella surprised me. I don't remember him doing that before & with all the blood donations she gives I wouldn't think it would be wise.
And there we have Lauren::)) All good stories need 'The Uber Bitch'!
"This place should have been called “I Scream shop” LOL good one::))
Vampire 'romance' tends to be a little public:)
Barbs? Really? OMG having sex with a vampire doesn't sound so hot anymore:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm happy that you like my vamps.
LOL, Yes, he can be quite a dork. =) Yeah...the barbs...lol. A piercing made me think of it, although I can't quite recall the name.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
The vampire laws & the way humans are treated sounds very familiar to something that happened in the past:(
LOL Bella arm wrestling Emmett:) They must be totally bored
Oh! A hybrid is a human that's turned!?! So much for vampire/human true mates:(
“The Vampire Association for Human Rights” Yah right!
“That doesn’t sound like nothing to me,” Carlisle bellowed. Oh shit! Damn vampire hearing::))
Jasper doesn't talk much but when he does it's to antagonize Emmett - to get him in trouble “Jus’ sayin’.”
Author's Response:
Hey csp4!
Yup a hybrid is a human that is turned.
Yeah, poor Jasper doesn't have many lines yet. But I plan on including him more....he'll be important for later chapters.
Thank you, I enjoy hearing from you.
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! Really loved it so much! How old is Edward? Just wondering since he is the Ultimate Vampire. Cannot wait to see what will happen with Aro, Tanya and everyone else ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I should have the other update soon.
oh I believe Edward is around 17 or 18 yrs. He's older than Bella. But he's young since my vamps can have offspring.
Thank you again. I enjoyed hearing from you.
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved the watching of vampire porn ;) Also, love them talking in LOTV. Wonder if Edward can have a dirty talk session in LOTV to see if Bella can understand it? Wonder what Aro wants now?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you liked. I still cringe when i think about chapter 11. lol
Hehe. Oh I'm sure there will be a scene or more when Edward speaks dirty to Bella in LOTV. ;) lol
Thank you
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Holymothereffingshit!!!! What the hell is going on?!?!? *Grrrrrr*
Wow, A.Lot. was going on in this chapter!!! I don´t even know where to begin!!! Jeeeeeeez! ^^
I know, it´s part due to the fact that he is the usual suspect/villain, since he already was in SM´s version, but I really do think that James killed the Bella -Doppelgänger and Victoria! Besides, no ther suspicious characters were mentioned yet. Except for Laurent and wel Mike but I don´t think Mike would do that,...or would he?! ^^
Don´t ask me why, but whenever it is mentioned that Edward is markind Bella or licking her cheek, I can´t help but get the picture out of my head how Bella does the same to him ;D Of course, she can´t mark him like that since she is neather a vamp nor does she have any venom to insert, but I still see it! Like she playing to be the vamp and claims him?! ;D ;D And I absolutely love how they are teasing each other and that Bella isn´t really that shy when jit comes to Edward ;D
Oh yeah, their little 101 stunt was prety damn hot!!! ;D
I really, really wonder how you are going to make Bella a vamp without sealing her fate!!! And what was up with her being sick?! And who the hell is watching her?! And who is coming for the Cullen house?!?! Soo many questions!!!^^
-Sue
Author's Response:
LOLOLOL!
Yeah, it's almost information overload. I'll cover more about Bella's "illnes" in ch 13 or 14.
Hmmmm... i love the way you think.....you'll see soon about the vamp killer...really soon.
Hehehe. Yeah, when Bella becomes a hybrid. Which you'll find out the physical characteristics in ch 12. You'll see when the time comes for her, how animalistic and playful Bella will be, even more so than now...including Edward.
Thank you =)
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, that was amazing! Even if it will be a while before she is changed, I know it will seem a short while for them :) I cannot wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Yeah, it won't be long for them....I would say about a year tops before she is changed. It's a slow paced story. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh shit!!!! Edward is going to go ballistic when he finds out what happened!!! Geeez!!! That poor girl!!! Really every bad thing that could be after is actually after her!!!
Do you want my suspicion as to who the killer may be?! JAMES!!! He is so obsessed with her, wants her as his mate but can´t have her, so he does teh next best thing and kidnappes, rapes and then kills girls who look like her, pretending it was Bella!!!! Some fucked up shit that is!!!!
I´m so impressed with how much thought you put into this vampire world with all its little datails- i mean c'mon blood chewing gum?! Or the fact that the vamps actually eat certain food as long as blood is in it etc....not everybody could make stuff like that up!!! As I said before- effing brilliant!!!
Those ignorant vamps pissed me off to no end!!!
I loved Charlotte, Pete and Ben, though!!! Especially Ben!! Is it just me or will he get to know Angela when she come to visit Bella?!?!? ;D ;D ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
James is one sick twisted vamp that's for sure. But my lips are sealed. lol You'll see soon enough. lol I love the guess =)
And thank you, I try to think of everything that I can to create this vampire world. There's soooo much more I need to cover. lol I'm not even halfway there yet.
I adore Ben. I like the way you think. Angela....will visit soon ;)
Thanks again. I enjoy hearing from you
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE :) I really loved it so much! I wonder how they will defy the vampire law of changing Bella? Also, how much longer before he changes her?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked. *looks at outline* Oh boy, it's going to be a long time before he changes her. I'm not even half way through the story yet. I have so much to cover. lol Oh there's a certain way they will be able to defy the law. ;) I hope you'll like it when time comes.
Thanks again,
~jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well shit, the ending only confirmed that stuff was going on!
Oh yeah...Eff. Me. Sideways!!!! The making was really,really hot!!! James is freaking me out, since there is no way in hell that he learned his lesson by now, but the marking was hot! And it was in front of the whole school! ;D
The tattoo-carving was an amazing idea!!! Effing brilliant!!!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
OH SNAP! I really loved this so much! Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hey!!!
Please don´t think I´ve abandoned your story, since I suddenly stopped reviewing hust after you told me chapter 10 possibly could be a little too much for me!!! I was just preoccupied with other stuff and fully intend on finishing reading this story!!! ^^
With that being said.. I´love your vampires,even if I´m only a few chapters into the story! But theres something about them...They are dangerous, animalistic even but caring, gentle ,teasing and playful at the same time! Oh yeah, and they are pretty damn hot ;D
I wonde if it is actually allowed for Bella and Edward to mate, since she is a human and whether it would be allowed for her to be turned?! I mean, they can´t have forever if she is mortal and vamps do mate for life...because if not, they are pretty much playing with fire, aren´t they?! Bella stated that she ´d get punished for giving birth to a hybrid, but can the vamp government actually forbid mates to reproduce because one partner is human?! Or did I get something wrong?! Sorry for the rambling! ;D
Geeez, Jasper claiming Alice without so much as an hello was brilliant! ;D
Oh God- Bella´s blood danation kind of remembered me of myself!! Not that I´m donating blood on a regular bases to vampires, but the nurses always have a hard time taking blood from me, which pisses me off because it takes for ages and I had needles...
Something about the whole situation with the new pills and having to donate twice a month is absolitely fishy!! Oooooh and Edwards is there and not too happy!!! Hmmm...angry Edward!!! ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Hiya Sue! *waves*
Thank you for letting me know. That was so kind of you =) I appreciate that.
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you like my vamps. I always get nervous since they are so different than SM's.
No you're not rambling. I love questions. Vamp law is very strict, and unfortunately a human is not allowed to have offspring, but they can sex with a vampire just as long there is no hybrid created between them. And as of now, humans aren't allowed to be turned. Aro is one crazy vamp. But since I want a HEA, I think there's a way around this crazy vamp law. lol I do want them to be together for forever.
Thank you. =)
LOL. Could you imagine if you had to donate blood to vampires? OMG! lol Awww I would be pissed too. I mean to poke at your skin the entire time. Ugh!
Thanks again,
Loved your comments!
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
I knew there was a reason I was uneasy about the medication. If they give humans this pill because of a blood shortage, there will be a complete blood shortage:( I know if Bella doesn't take the meds she will be killed, but I find it a little odd that knowing what the meds WILL do she would willingly take them:( I guess it's a 'Brave New World':(
With all the red & green venom these guys are dripping everywhere, it must look like Christmas::))
It's nice that Ben finally got to be big! He's always such a pipsqueak:)
"I have to say that I find it ironic to find a human in a vampire grocery store, Bella" I never thought I'd agree with Newton
WOW everyone showed up in this chapter.....Ben, Jessica, Peter, Charlotte, Tyler. I bet Lauren is slinking around out there too!
My stomach is really twisting up:(
Author's Response:
lmao! Yes, that's true it must look like Christmas. =)
Yeah, I adore Ben. I have plans for him. lol
Thanks for reading and commenting =)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was amazing! I REALLY loved Edward's carving ;) Can I ask a weird question? How big is Edward (and yes, in the way you are thinking, I have a dirty pervy mind sometimes)?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story.
As for your question *giggles* I also have a pervy mind, too. Now since Edward is around 7 feet tall because all my vamps are huge esp the men, I would say larger than 10 inches? LOL I never mention the size of ...his....peen....because it can be whatever size you want it to be, but yes he's BIG. LOL Whatever size floats your boat, he is. *giggles*
Thank you for reading and commenting. I enjoyed answering your question.
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, that was amazing! Poor Bella with taking the pills and having to donate TWICE in one month. I hope Edward changes her ASAP ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much! Yay for being mates :) One tiny mistake I found that needs correcting, if you don't mind. "“I want you to,” should be "I want you too". :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! And thanks for pointing out the mistake. I'll correct it tonight.
Thanks again
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, that was amazing! Why can't Edward's I read about in Fanfiction exist in real life? Ahh, dreaming of this Edward tonight (I hope). I really cannot stand Tanya, but what else is new? Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
LOL. I wish I could dream of Edward too.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
OH NO! Poor Bella! Not the most pleasant of first days of school. Hope she can meet Edward soon ;)
Author's Response:
She'll meet Edward really soon ;)
Thank you =)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story is absolutely amazing so far! I really love it so much :) Cannot wait to see what happens next ;)
Author's Response:
Oh Hey RAH07890! *waves*
Thank you so much! I'm happy that you like so far.
I hope that you keep enjoying it. =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
"~ Totally nervous...but here is the next chapter. *runs and hides*" I'm almost scared to read this chapter:)
Edward's venon healing Bella's scarred arms is cool:)
In a really surreal, kinda sick way, Edward's marking of Bella was very romantic:::)))
"They believe that sex should wait at least until the third marking" Is that anything like the 3rd date rule? LOL
Male vamps carving their chests is interesting! Ouch!
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you liked the marking.
LOL. Yup that is like the 3rd date.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think it was the 1st chapter that mentioned where humans thought vampires came from. I vote for Outer Space:) With those long (and might I say very sexy) fangs, how could they even hide?
Vampires are very 'passionate':) Which brings up another question that I hope the story will answer. I'm assuming the way Bella is reacting toward Edward (aroused) isn't normal for her. Is she feeling the 'mating' thing on her own or does Edward have pheromones directed at her?
Procrit is very powerful & has some pretty heavy side affects. If all humans have to take this & also donate blood more often, the vamps will eventually end up killing off the human race:(
I've been wondering if Edward marking Bella will show up in her blood & cause problems with the vamp authorities.
This is a horrible thing to happen to the human race:( I see so many bad things happening
Author's Response:
The marking venom may or may not cause problems with Bella's blood donation. I will cover that soon, possibly in ch 13.
Thank you so much =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
hmmmm, Edward the ultimate vampire:)
So Edward's favorite blood type is O-positive? The same as Bella's? I would be concerned that his attraction wasn't for the right reason.
Male vampires average about 6'8" & Bella is 5'4". I'm interested in how awkward a lemon would be::)) LOL
I'm looking forward to finding out how this 'mating' "will work out in the end". The vampires in this story are so different that everything is new & unknown:) My main question is, that I'm willing to wait to find out in the story, can humans be changed?
Author's Response:
Yeah, my vamps are quite different. lol
Thank you for your comments. =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
I agree with Coach Clapp! Putting Bella in a gym class of all vamp is pretty stupid....unless they were trying to kill her....or as a joke:)
I think I'd call Tanya's bluff, but I'm not Bella's age. I'd tell Charlie 1st chance I got. After all Tanya did threaten the life of the Police Chief & his wife.
As for Edward....in this AU, it seems inconceivable that a vampire would be interested in a human in a romantic way. I'd give him a wide berth but stay friends with Alice:)
Author's Response:
Yup, vamp gym class is not such a good idea.
You'll see about Edward. There's something special that draws him to her and vice versa.
Thanks for reading. I hope that you'll continue to like it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I should have know Mike Newton was going to make an appearance:)
"Tomato juice, tomato juice, tomato juice" I can't imagine Bella going into the cafeteria for lunch. Nothing but vampires there then the 'bloodbag' walks in. Almost like an invitation:(
OK, now I'm pissed at Charlie & Renee:( And while I'm at it, I'm pissed at Bella's dead parents too! What was everyone thinking sending Bella to an all-vampire school in an all-vampire town?
Author's Response:
I know right? Not a very smart move. lol
Thanks for the comments =)
~jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
"I wondered what they would put on their sign now, Vampire population: 3,120, bloodbag: 1?" LOL LOL
"Today was the day I was going to die" LOL Actually, Bella's situation isn't funny:( I know the Swans were good friends of Bella's parents, but does Charlie really believe that him being Chief of Police will keep Bella safe?
Author's Response:
LOL
Yup that's what exactly Charlie thinks. He thinks no one would mess with Bella b/c he's Chief Charlie Swan. lol But yeah, it doesn't quite work like that. Poor Bella =(
Thank you =)
Date: 20 Feb 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I find it creative making Charlie & Renee Bella's adoptive vampire parents! This will sure make life hard on poor Bella. But, of course, Bella ALWAYS gets kicked around in FF::)) Why stop now!
"sent their little bloodsuckers to school" Bella has a big attitude problem since she will probably be going to school with those same 'bloodsuckers'. Hope the Cullen's are nice 'bloodsuckers' cause she will definately need protection:(
"Charlie was a vampire of few words" He sure said alot more words than he does when he's human:)
Great 1st chapter - you came highly recommended by 'Rob's Hand Monkey'
Author's Response:
Hey csp4!
Thank you. =) I hope that you continue to like the story.
Thanks for the review. I appreciate it very much.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
There are some really stupid vampires in this chapter...james...mike....vic....
duh...but i cracked the fuck up at the little six year old vamp!
“Can we take her home and eat her, Momma?” The little blond vampire asked, his expression hopeful. "I wish, honey,” the mom replied solemnly.
THAT SHIT WAS FUNNY!!!
I could hear Edward saying the same thing.
"Can I take you home and eat you Bella?" hahahahah....okay my bad! sorry...hehe...
Edward is gonna flip when he sees his kitten all marked....
SIC HER EDWARD!
lol....I am so lost in this but I swear only two chapters today...thankfully i have to work later woo hoo...
MUAH!
Author's Response:
Oh shit!!! I went back to look at the reviews I gotten and I saw I missed your review! Pleeeease forgive me, it was late last night and I was writing LAH in between! Which I have almost finished btw....gahhhh but I have difficutly with extreme darkward. I can't get him right. =( *pouts*
Anyhoo,
LMAO Yes Very stupid vampires. You'll find more along the way. =/ Some very dumb ones at that lol
LMAO! Yeah can you believe that little demon spawn kid? Ugh! I wanna slap him. But that won't be the last of them. lol They'll be back.
LMAO@ Edward wanting to eat Bella. Hehehe Well...he does kinda snack on her ;) lol
Edward definitely will flip. But I hope you'll like it still because I didn't do the obvious.
Thanks again for your comments. I LOVE 'em all!!!
Again, sorry for not responding sooner. =(
Hugs
XxxxOOo
~Jells
Date: 19 Feb 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
OH MY FUCKING GAWD HE CALLS HER KITTEN?????????????????????????
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I AM IN TEARS!!!!!!!!!!
SERIOUSLY!
FUCK ME SIDEWAYS RUNNING! CARVING TATS AND POWDER GLOWING GREEN VENOM AND BLOOD SPURTING ORGASMS ALL ASIDE THIS IS JUST SHIT FUCKING HAWT!!! MARKING IN PUBLIC ON A CAFTERIA TABLE LOVING! WOO HOOOOO...I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOW WHEN DOES HE TAT KITTEN ON HIS ASS CHEEK? LEFT ARM? BACK? HIP? HAHAHA....
JELLS BABY I AM CATCHING UP....YOU BETTER START RUNNING!!! GIGGLES... NEXT CHAPTER...I WILL SAVE FOR TOMMOROW BUT THIS IS REALLY USING EDWARD CONTROL AND STRENGTH I HAVE TO ADMIT THIS SHIT IS HARD...UGH....
I♥♥♥U!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOOOO!!!
Yup. He calls her Kitten in here, too. We think alike. I ALWAYS loved Kitten, sounds sexy when it leaves Edward's lips. If I were a vamp, I'd purr everytime Edward would call me Kitten. ;) Just fucking serious!
Thank you so much!! =) I'm happy you like my F***ed story! lol I LLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEE yours. EEK is so fucking HOT!!!! I'm constantly sneaking in to read more. ;)
Hhahaha he so should tat her nickname to other body parts as well. me likey!
Thanks for your awesome reviews, they made my day!
Love ya <3
XxOo
Jells
Date: 18 Feb 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sighhhhhhhhh...okay so I made it through chapter six...that means i am gaining on you girl....lol...
Me thinks Edward is going to be a little pissed off at the bruising...that can't be good...god he is so fiercely sexy as all fuck...ugh makes me girly parts tingle...
hahaha....
hope school is out for the weekend and we get to hear from you? bats her lashes at you and winks too....
giggling my ass off!!!
yes that is exactly what you think it is....sorry i am slut for the mans hand....now if i could just get him to stick it in a ink pad so i can have it transferred to my right ass cheek i will die and go to heaven literally a happy heathean!!!
hahahaha!
I am venturing on...next chapter
Author's Response:
OMGGGGGG!!! You're so awesome!!!
LOVE that hand print!!!! Thank you!!!! hahhahaa@ stick on an ink pad to transfer it on ur right ass cheek!!! Buahhaha!!! IKR? I'd wear it proudly!!!
Yeah, I'll be around. I'm working on LAH right now so I can get to write ch 13 for LAV. Message me if you fee like it. I'll be taking breaks here and there.
XxOo
Jells
Date: 18 Feb 2011 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
enjoying this story. looking forward to updates. Your vamps are different but still good vamps :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you like.
I'll post more soon.
~Jells
Date: 17 Feb 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome more I need more of this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm currently working on a research report =( But I'll post more asap. I'm itching to finish ch 13.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Your Edward is so hot, hot, hot!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you liked.
~Jells
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
K, I'm confused. Angela left the last chapter or maybe the one before that. So, did she come back for the party, then?
I may be just having a blond moment, because my son is here chirping while I read, but did I miss something?
Author's Response:
Hi =)
Yup she came back for the party. Sorry I didn't mention it. You didn't miss anything.
Thank you
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm happy you liked ch 11. I still cringe when I think about it. lol
Thanks again,
~jells
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Again LOVED this chap- this feral love making business is uber hot- Js.
I did notice someting though, and I am anal, so please, feel free to ignore me, but you said earlier on in this chapter that B and E had sex once in the cabin and once in the forest, but last chapter you mentioned that they had sex a cpl more times after the lemon before B fell asleep.
Just thought I'd point that out.
Loving this fic.
xx
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you. I'm happy that you liked ch 11. I still cringe when I think about that chapter. I just...didn't feel it. I think I was scattered brained writing it.
Oh no I won't ignore you. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll have to reread that again and then change it. I usually reread my chapters a bunch of times but there's always something I miss. lol
Thank you. I'm stilll happy that you like =)
~Jells
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
I absolutley adored this chapter- this primalward is so f'ing hot. It is still a bit unique to get used to, but I love it. Great job, sweets.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you liked. Yeah, it's quite different but I'm glad that you're still enjoying it.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well, wasn't that a packed chapter!
I still think it is James, of course it is, right!
He is a smart lil bugger, ain't he?
But, now I am left wondering about all these vampire laws, and how Bella and Edward can actually have a normal relationship- or more- with them in place. He is obviously going to need to turn her at some point, and pregnancy could very well be inevitable, with or without birthcontrol. I mean, Edward's swimmer's have to be a helluva lot stronger and more potent to a human girl. I doubt vamps have thought of making the pill for human -vamp sexual interaction....
Meh, anyway- I'll stop rambling now....
Author's Response:
LOL. No you're not rambling. I love to hear your thoughts.
Edward and Bella's relationship will be tested in so many ways. There is so much working against them.
Thank you
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
AAAAACCCCKKKKKK *runs pulling hair and screaming* NNNOOOOOO - Edward better move his cute little ass and find Bella - follow the blood trail!!!!
I love that Ben and Angela are together..
I can't tell you how much I love this story - definitely in my top 5!! Thank you so much and I look forward to the next update - that gives me time to stock up on batteries and panties..hehehehe
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you liked.
I adore Ben and Angela, they're my fave sub characters. =)
Hehehe@ batteries and panties. ;)
I'll post more asap. I'm currently working on a report =(
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) I'm glad you enjoyed ch 11. I still cringe when I think about it. lol
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent chapter so glad I was recommended this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed the story so far.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh god - wouldn't you just love to be walking funny because of Edward?! I thought this chapter was awesome. I see a very cold shower in my very near future :D
If I could give you more than 10 coffee's I would ...
Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
LOLOL. IKR? Hehe I would definitely want to walk funny if Edward had something to do with it. ;)
Thank you so much =) I'm glad you enjoyed ch 11. I still cringe when I think about that chapter . lol
Awww thanks again. I cherish every review that you give =)
Xxoo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMFG - So was this chapter the hottest ever! Mmmm vampire style with Edward - I better go buy extra batteries...hehehehe, hubby won't be able to keep up!
Fantastic chapter!!!!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much! =) I'm actually quite relieved that you enjoyed it.
LOLOLOL! You totally made me giggle when you said that your hubby may not be able to keep up. hehe
Thank you =)
Jells
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
It's a good thing Edward got a little bit of relief there! He was going to have a major case of blue balls - hell, I even had a case of blue balls... LOL
So who is in the forest......
Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah poor guy. I kept cockblocking them. lol
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
HOLY HELL!!! I sit wrong that I find this Edward extremely sexy?!?! Like, A. Fucking.Lot. !!! ^^ I´d let him mark me!! ;D And you made him some kind of vampire - wunderkind ?!
I really wonder if that was the last we´ve heard from Tanya... Hmmmm.!!!!
Can´t wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =) I'm glad that you find him sexy. Actually, i'm relieved. Sometimes I doubt myself about Edward's sexyness. lol Hehe at vamp wunderkind.
I just hope that you'll like ch 10. It's.....different. That's all I'm going to say, that's unless you'll still like this story of course and continue to read. lol
Thank you
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok where the hell was Ben and Edward????? I cant believe Mike got her and she is bleeding from her head and broke her wrist. Wow the world will pay when Edward finds out. I hope you are not going to make us wait to long for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey!
Nah, it won't be too long of a wait. I'm currently writing a huge report on medical disorders. I will do my very best to update asap. This story is my baby. I won't leave you hanging.
Thank you for reading and commenting along the way. I appreciate that very much. And I hope that you'll like the next chapter.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well, damn it all to hell!!!! This is soooo good!!!! Sending Bella to a all-vampire- town to visit a all-vampire high school!!! That´s like presenting the sacrificial lamb on a silver plattern in the lions den!! Jeeeeez!!!! ^^ The storyline so far definately seems interesting so say the least, and from what I´ve read so far it didn´t disappoint!!!
I like your idea of the vampire-race and that they are even able to reproduce! I have to admit though, that I need some time to get used to the extendable fangs! I think the idea is awesome, but my wicked mind makes me depict them always huge, like a sabertooth or something like that!!! I KNOW you said they aren´t THAT big- but my stupid mind just won´t listen!!! ;D ;D ;D Oh yeah, and the idea of a Bloodsicle freaked me out a bit!!! ;D
Charlie and Renee as vampires is definately interesting also!
Hmmm....Victoria, James and effing Tanya....sounds like a lot of fun....NOT!!!!^^
Can´t wait to see more of the Cullens!!! ;D I´m so curious to see all the things going to happen!!! I definately have some ideas (most of them involving this smooth and confident Edward.....;D ) but you never know!!! ;D
Really awesome so far!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you are enjoying the story so far. It's quite different and my mind is umm...kinda twisted. lol
Yeah, lol, the fangs aren't too long. I probably make them sound really long like you said, a sabertooth. They're just average size...think of True Blood. It's sort of like that. lol
Thanks again,
Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
My guess is it's James killing the humans - I could be wrong tho! Ooooo Victoria better watch out - Edward is pissed!!
Now I understand your comment about me hopefully liking chapter 10..hehehehe I can't wait to read it!
Thanks sweetie!
Author's Response:
Thanks again Tamara. I enjoy reading all your reviews =)
XxOo
Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
I want to be bent over a table with Edward whispering "now your mine" - holy shit!!!!!! Panty change time!! :)
Have I told you yet how much I love this story! But WTF is up with the cliffy? :D
Carlisle (DILF) has just got to come up with something for Bella....those pills are bad news!
Thank you!
Author's Response:
LOLOL!
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you like this story. Sometimes I doubt myself if it's any good. lol I love your reviews btw. They made my day =)
Hell Yeah! I LOVE Daddy C. lol He's def a DILF *giggles*
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow what do you mean you werent sure I would still like it??? I fucking love it. This is awesome. I really love there mating and the dominant possesiveness of Edward. Yeah I was a bit worried when she wanted to give him a blow job, I am glad he pulled out, that would have hurt. I am so anxious for the vampire party so that Angela and Ben can meet too.
Author's Response:
I think the reason why I didn't like ch 11 was because there really wasn't any plot progression. I was stuck too and then I had to develop the relationship between Angela and Bella. It was just one of those chapters. lol Thank you so much. i'm happy that you liked the chapter. =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have to agree - those pills have to be bad news.....
Wouldn't you just love to be laying on Edwards bed with him over you...heavy sigh......
Thank you!
Author's Response:
I would looooooove for Edward just to lay over me. ;) lol Why can't he be real? I ask myself that all the time. lol
Thank you =) I'm happy that you're still enjoying the story. I'm so nervous about chapter 10. I hope you will like it.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
WOW, I LOVED THE MATING. That was awesome. I thought when he got the bear that maybe he would realize that they could live on animal blood but guess not. That was interesting what you did with the after efect of him cumming, LOL it was like a dog. He gets stuck inside her. I am so glad that he is huge, it is so much more of an excitement to read. But I love how careful and sensual he is with her.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much =) I'm always nervous when readers get to chapter 10. I'm not sure if they'll like the vamp mating or not, or the barbed peen. lol Yeah, unfortunately my vamps can't live off of animal blood. All my vamps are quite huge, Edward is about 7 feet tall. lol
Thanks again, I'm happy that you still like the story.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oooo I love your portrayal of Edward - I want him :) He can lick my cheek and mark me anytime he wants..hehehehehe
I am so glad he heard Tanya the bitch confess :) She so deserved that.
Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
LOL. My co author for Living Amongst Hell is obsessed with face licking. lol
Thank you so much =) Glad you like it still.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah- so ummm..that mating bit was pretty crazy. I'm not sure if I'm more intrigued or revolted by it, but it is kinda hawt. I so can't tell a lie...lmfao
So, m'dear. What's up with the pills??
Author's Response:
lmaooo!!!
Hmmmm the pills, huh? You'll see later. I will cover more about the pills in ch. 13.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, that was rather fast, but whatever- at least it isn't drawn out and leaving us hanging....lol
xx
Author's Response:
lol yeah, I totally didn't want to draw out the whole Tanya sitch, but I have a feeling she'll be back. lol
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
Tnaya eh! What a biatch....Is she really any sort of powerful or resourceful? Or just full of a lot of hot bullshitty air?
Author's Response:
lol. She's a major bitch. She may be just full of bs ;)
Thanks for reading =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
I wondered what they would put on their sign now, Vampire population: 3,120, bloodbag: 1?
Too f'ing funny. Loved it!
Author's Response:
lol Thank you so much =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
This idea kinda sorta reminds me of The Morganville Vampires. I love it. And it is cure how u have Charlie actually express himself.
xx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving my story a chance. I hope that you continue to like it.
XxOo
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow! I read all 12 chapters at once, couldn't stop. I started reading this story because of a high recommendation from another author. I like their writing as well and just had to check it out. So glad I did. Please keep up the very entertaining and wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much! =) And thank you for giving my story a chance.
Thanks again. I hope that you will continue to enjoy it.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and the smiley faces =) I'm happy that you like the story so far.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response:
thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
i freaking LOVE this story!!!!!!!! So so so creative...what a clever girl!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much =) I'm happy that you gave my story a chance. Thank you
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like James is taking his anger out on other females that look like Bella. At least that is who I think it is. I think Edward is going to flip out again. And yes we do wish you would get to the lemon for these two.
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah...the lemon is coming soon. I defintely drag it out, but hopefully you'll like ch 10.
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
*runs screaming* Oh Tanya is the biggest BITCH ever!!!!!! Love that Bella stood up to her, not sure if it will do any good - but it was great!
Thanks so much
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Tanya is the biggest bitch.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
God James is such a sleaze..... :)
Yeah - Edwards turn is coming - he so needs to protect Bella. :)
Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
IKR? I hate James. lol
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. =)
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love the marking. But why doesn't him biting her turn her into a vampire???? Can she be turned into a vampire????? That seems like it would be the best solution. I so love this Edward. He is so sensual and loving and so protective. I really thought James was going to get her at school. I am so glad that they got there in time.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Yeah just a few bites won't turn her into a vampire. Edward would have to inject a large amount of green venom into her body to turn her. Bella can be turned, but she'll become a hybrid, which is a half blood. Hybrids are a little weaker than vampires but they can live for the rest of eternity just as a vampire. I believe ch 12 is where I explain the difference between hybrids and vampires. Oh and Aro forbids a human to be turned into a hybrid, but you'll see why in ch 12. lol
Thank you. I'm happy that you like Edward =)
Thanks again. I appreciate it.
~jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love the story so far! Can't wait to see where this goes. Thank you so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you're giving this story a chance. I hope that you'll continue to like it.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
I knew Edward would be pissed about them taking blood from her. Are these vampires gifted with the regular gifts, i.e. mind reading, telling the future???
Author's Response:
My vamps don't have any special gifts. I have a reason for that actually. lol But you'll see in chapter 12 what hybrids possess, that is if you still are interested in reading the story. lol
Thank you =)
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Yes well that was different as claiming her goes. Just kissing her and licking her neck and cheek??? I guess that is what was marking her. I thought we would claim her sexually to claim her. But I guess not. I like this Edward he is very sensual.
Author's Response:
Oh you'll see how male vamps claim their females. It's more than licking or kissing, but that's a way that they spread their scent onto their mates. And yes, they also claim them sexually. There's two ways, sexual and marking venom. I sound like a perv, don't I? lol
Thank you. I'm glad you like my Edward.=)
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
I have been waiting forever for this type of story!! When I came upon it, I had a Calc exam that week, but I read this instead of preparing for it! My grade was better than expected, so I don't mind!!!
Your Edward is soooo sexy in this story!
How usually do you update between your chapter?!?!
Can't wait for more!!
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nan
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you enjoyed what I have written so far.
When I first posted this story I used to update every week. But since classes started up again, I update about once every two weeks. It also depends on the length of the chapter, the longer the chapter, the longer it takes for an update. But I plan to have the next chapter posted in about a week or two.
Thanks again for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.
~Jells