Yeah, not so fun for Bella.

Thanks for your review =)

Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you are giving  my story a chance. It's quite different.

I just started reading EEK! And OMG! I LOVE it! Her Edward is so HOT! I'm on chapter 10 atm. My bf had to drag me away from the computer so I could go get something to eat. lol

Thanks again,

Jells

LOLOLOL!!!! I couldn't resist the cliffhanger. =D

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

I'll try my best to post asap. =)

Thanks again. You're awesome!

XxOo

Jells

LOL. I always tend ot get nervous when posting new chapters. Thank you so much. =) Glad you enjoyed it. *giggles* @ sexy mofo. Thanks, I'm happy you like him.

Yup, Emmett carved Rosalie. Poor guy. lol

Thanks again,

~Jells

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm happy that you are liking it so far =) I hope you continue to like it.

Thank you for giving this story a chance. I appreciate it.

~Jells

Thank you so much for giving this story a chance. I'm happy that you're enjoying it. =)

lol sorry about that evil cliffy. I'll post more asap.

Thanks again,

~Jells

lol  no prob. =)

Thank you =)

Yeah, the vamp gov't isn't going to make it easy for Bella.

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xo

~Jells

LOL. Awww why not? I love them. They're fun. LOL j/k

Thanks for reading and commenting =)

~jells

Thank you so much! =) I'm happy that you like so far.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thank you =) I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter.

I'll post more asap.

Thanks =)

~Jells

Thank you =)

I'll post more soon!

~Jels

Hey fall up! =)

Aww thank you so much! Your comment made my day!

Yay! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. Initially, I was going to let Ben claim Angela in front of everyone, BUT then I decided against it. Angela wouldn't of wanted that kind of attention. LOL So yeah, hopefully Edward will help Ben control his vampire intstincts. Aww yeah, poor Brock. Edward really loved him like a brother. Oooo so you like some dominant Edward?=D Awesome! Me too! LOL Yeah, Mike is a creepy vampire. Victoria stood no chance.You could be right, there are other villians out there. Edward felt Bella's fear and pain so he's on his way to Bella. Hopefully, Renee will be okay.

Thank you =) Oh so I only have a few days to post another chapter? LOL Wow! I better start writing then like asap.

Thanks again,

I enjoy hearing from you. I appreciate it.

~Jells

lol. No worries, Edward's on his way

Thanks for reading and commenting=)

LMAO!!!! OMG!  LOVED this review!

So Aro is King of Vampires, but since he rules over everyone, including humans you could say he's King of the world.

Yup, some hybrids have special powers, very few do. And that terrifies Aro.

LOL. Kay, Ben is a Cullen now and Angela is a Swan. Sounds great!!! I wonder though....just how far will Mr. Cheney will go to keep Ben and Angela apart? Hmmmm...*evil grin*

LOL. Yeah, love them cliffies.  LMAO! I'll be watching my back for Mike. He's a crazy and creepy vamp.

Thank you soooo much! Loved each and every review! You've made my day!

I'll post more soon.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thank you =) So glad you liked!

Soooo as for your question about Bella.....here it is...

A little spoiler: 

 ~Bella is slowly falling ill. This is why the vamp gov't is panicking, distributing those pills for increased red blood cell count and forcing humans to donate more. They want to drain out as much blood possible before everyone falls ill. However, I won't cover that until a little later, ch 15 or so. I guess it depends how long my next chapters will be. lol. But what Bella is experiencing is the first symptoms of the new human illness, however, Edward's marking venom is slowly down the disease at an incredible rate.~

LOL@ Alice being the first bipolar vamp. I think so. lol

LOL. Love your comments. Oh boy your on ch 11. Not one of my faves =(

Thanks again,

~Jells

Awww lol. Thank you, I'm glad you like the long chapters. Some readers do not, I guess they feel they have to read them in one sitting? lol IDK But, I'll keep writing long chappys. =)

I will cover more on the drugs that Bella is taking and why the vamp gov't is forcing humans to take them as well. I will reveal that soon.....hopefully by ch 16 or so.

Yeah...there's a killer on the loose. And a couple of strangers lurking around in the woods. But do they belong to the vamp that covered his scent? Hmmm....lol

Thank you for reading and your awesome comments =)

~Jells

LOL. Thank you =) I enjoy your comments. Makes me smile =)

I adore Esme and yeah, you know Emmett. He loves to tease. lol My  Carlisle is a fierce vampire yet compassionate. He will always lay down the law. lol However, you'll notice that Edward's parents won't mind them sleeping together. They understand that Edward and Bella are true mates so it's a little different for vamps.

Thanks again

~Jells

Thank you so much =) Glad you enjoyed it. And the lemons. lol Ch 11 is smutty-ish. And ch 12 is angsty with lots of stuff revealed. Hope you like.

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Take care

~Jells

LMAO! Yeah, it's like no big deal to male vamps. lol

Thank you so much =) glad you're still enjoying the story!

LOL. She might share. Heck, just take Edward from Bella. ;) lol

Things will work out...eventually. There's away around this mess. lol Aro won't be around until chapter 14.

Thanks for the reviews. I appreciate it =)

~Jells

Thank you =) The vamps in my story don't have any special powers, no mind reading and seeing the future etc. However, you'll find out something very interesting about hybrids and why they are forbidden in ch 12, that is if you are still enjoying the story and continue reading. lol

Thanks again. I appreciate it.

~Jells

LOL. Funny you should mention an EPOV. I'm actually working on an outtake before Edward met Bella and when he first sees her and saves her from James. I should have it posted soon. Then I will work my way up and do an EPOV for when he sees her arm, the marking...sex which will be coming up soon if you continue reading. lol I even want to do an EPOV outtake for ch. 12- since that's a very important chapter, lots happening and things revealed.

 Thanks again for all your reviews. Love 'em all

~jells

Thank you =)

Wow! That means a lot to me. I appreciate it very much. I'm happy that you're enjoying the story. Truthfully, I didn't think anyone would.lol 

Thank you

~jells

LOL. Yeah, sorry. I couldn't resist the cliffy. Edward will be so very very very pissed! But so will Charlie, and Ben won't be pleased either. They'll have to fight one another over Mike.

Wow! Thank you so much! I'm so happy that you liked the chapter.

Yeah, ick ---> RL. Wish I could just read and write all day =) But I'll do my very best to update asap. 

Thank you so mych for reading And you're awesome comments as well!

~Jells

Oh I'm so very sorry to hear that. =( The world is a scary and crazy place.  I also remember that you mentioned you were in the hospital. I wish you a speedy recovery.

Thank you. I'm happy that this story helped keep your mind off of all the chaos.

I appreciate every review. Thank you =)

Take care

~jells

LOL! Yeah....I couldn't help myself. Bad cliffy. Thank you so much! makes me happy you enjoyed the chapter. =)

Yes, you're totally right, if the marking is unwanted, it will be extremely painful. Hopefully, it won't come down to that. If it did, Edward would be devastated, he'll feel like he's failed at being a good mate to Bella. He wouldn't necessarily feel disgusted, but he would want to mark her asap to reclaim her because Mike's scent would aggravate him, make him extremely angry.

 I'm working on LAH. =) I'll post asap.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

~Jells

I'm sorry but I fucking LMAO @ your comment! But srsly, I didn't think you wanted to preread cuz I saw your comment about being busy and studying for a test, neuroscience or something. BUT I am am vERY very SOWWY Tygssss!!!! Forgive me?  Pwease?  Just haven't heard from you in a while so I wasn't sure if you would be intersted to read the long ass chapter.

Anyways, you mixed bitch lmao j/k

I'll be in chat lattah, like....midnight.

Thanks for commenting tho... you know I appreciate it.

Laters

I'd like to know where Edward is too. lol j/k  He's on his way, he felt Bella's fear and pain. Hopefully, he does get to her in time.

Thank you for reading and commenting! I appreciate it =)

~Jells

Thank you so much! =) I'm happy you enjoyed it!

I've had a very few people ...um...complain about chapter length on another site. Maybe they think that they need to read the entire chapter in one sitting? lol idk But  I totally agree with you.

Yeah,  you do have to watch out for the quiet ones! lol Very true.

Thanks again for review! I appreciate it very much =)

~Jells

Wow! Thank you so much!=)  Your comment made my day!

No worries, Bella will be...alright. lol Edward felt her pain and fear, he's on his way. I don't think Mike will get too far. But Bella's lost quite a bit of blood, and that won't be good because there's another donation coming up soon. I don't know if the vamp gov't will be merciful and let Bella skip it even though she's on the medication that increases her red blood cell count. So we'll see. lol  

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate it =)

~Jells

Thank you so much for your reading and your reviews! =)

Thank you =) for reading and commenting!

I hope you'll like my version of Edward.

~Jells

Thank you so much =) I actually didn't think anyone would like this story. lol

Your penname looks familliar. Oh hey! You're reading the other story LAH, right?

Thanks so much for giving this story a chance. I appreciate it!

~Jells

Hi *waves*

Thank you =) Glad you liked. I adore Ben and Angela as you can tell. lol  

Thank you for reading and commenting

~Jells

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it =)

~Jells

Mike's definitely a major creep. He's crazy! Hopefully, Edward will get there fast. =)

Thank you for reading and commenting =) Glad you didn't mind the long chapter. lol

~Jells

Thank you so much! Glad you liked =)

I'll post more asap, but first I have to finish my chapter for Living Amongst Hell. lol

Thanks again for reading and commenting!

~Jells

Yeah, Mike won't get very far at all since Edward felt Bella's fear and pain, he's on his way to her. =) You'll see about Renee. I think Charlie and Edward will have to fight over Mike, they both want to rip him apart.

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. Always love hearing from you.

Thanks again,

~Jells

Thank you so much =) I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Thank you for reading and commenting

~Jells

Edward is so so so very pissed off. lol

Thanks for reading and commenting.

~Jells

Thank you =) Glad you liked!

Edward will be so so sooo very pissed off.

OOoooo you did?! OMG! That's awesome! Yay for you indeed!! lol

Thanks for reading and commenting!

~Jells

Thank you so much =) Yeah, RL is busy. Ugh! Wish I could just read and write all day. lol

I'm actually just editing the crazy long chapter now. <--- when I mean crazy long, I'm talking over 25,000 words. lol I should be finished soon. Hopefully, in a few hrs.

Thanks again,

~Jells

A tiny scene from Ben's vamp party:

Bella's POV

I never tried alcohol before, but tonight was the night to try new things. And I always wanted to try a certain drink that caught my attention at my favorite restaurant. I locked my eyes with the vampire bartender. “I’ll have a Green Apple Martini please.”

He nodded, shifting his gaze to Edward who was staring at me in astonishment. Edward broke his gaze and cleared his throat, ordering his drink, “I’ll have a BloodShot with Tequila and type O positive blood.” Edward turned his attention back to me, smirking. “Alcohol, Bella?”

I shrugged. “What? There’s a first time for everything, right?”

He chuckled, leaning down and whispering in my ear, “I’ve never seen a drunken Bella before.”

“You might get lucky tonight,” I giggled, taking a sip from the light green liquid. I moaned, savoring the sweet and sour flavor. The alcohol stung a little as it went down my esophagus, but I welcomed the feel.

“I’m sure that could be fun,” Edward purred, licking my cheek. “And interesting.”

Edward grabbed his BloodShot, tilting his head back and downing the thick red liquid. He licked his lips and set the shot glass down on the bar with an audible clank, watching me swish around a little chunk of a green apple in my martini glass.

Thank you so much! =) That means a lot to me that you are enjoying it. I should have the next chapter up later today. 

Thank you for reading and commenting.

~Jells

 Ch 12 Scene: Bio II class

“Jeezus…fuck!” Edward hissed, clenching his teeth as his fangs punched from his gums. His hands were balled into fists on the science table, his fingernails digging into the palms of his hands as he growled.

Mr. Banner’s head snapped up at Edward’s outburst. “Mr. Cullen…” he eyed Edward with a scowl, “…since you and Miss Swan are apparently finished with the assignment, you may write your answers on the board under group number three.”

“Ah fuck!” Edward cursed under his breath.

I squeezed my lips together to contain my laughter as I glanced down at Edward’s crotch. His pants were so tented that they were about to burst open from his straining, throbbing cock. He was so hard and big that I thought that he was going to cum at this instant.

“Mr. Cullen? We don’t have all afternoon. Would you please?” Mr. Banner stuck out his hand, wanting Edward to take the blue dry erase marker.

Scene: Ben's party

I nodded and wiggled out of Edward’s embrace, causing him to hiss from the loss of contact. I cautiously made my way to the DJ, dodging the large vampires along the way that moved vigorously to the beat of the music. Crimson eyes immediately locked onto me as I passed by some male vampires that were eyeing me curiously and some lustfully. Their huge bodies were propped up against the walls as they brought the lips of their Blood Beer bottles up to their mouths and took big swigs. I even noticed a couple making out in the far left corner, growling and snarling as the male felt her up. I stretched up on my toes, chewing on my lip anxiously as I looked around for the DJ. It was a futile effort trying to glance over the tall and immense bodies, but a few moments later I successfully found my desired target.

The vampire DJ who had a shaved head and a black goatee, snapped his gaze to me as he heard me approach. He grinned momentarily before he spoke, “You have a request?” He arched a pierced eyebrow at me, stroking the point of his pearly white fang with his thick tongue.

Hiya!

Thank you =) I'm happy you are enjoying the story. I'm almost finished with ch 12 so I'll be able to post in a day or two.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. =)

A tiny teaser: Sorry for any mistakes, it's still a rough draft

Scene 3: Teasing Edward

A wicked gleam burned behind his eyes as he snatched my hand and pulled me in the direction of the P.E. building outside. “I need to have my way with you now. I’m not going to wait,” Edward hissed, his fangs long. Some males scampered away from us as we made our way down the crowded hallway.

“Now?” I gulped.

“Yes, now,” he confirmed, pushing the door open.

Scene 4: Ben's party

 I was extremely happy for Angela, but what was going on? Where was he taking my friend? I quickly dashed after them. I had to make sure she was alright. Everything was happening so fast to her that I wasn’t sure if she was taking it well.

“Bella!” Edward yelled after me.

I raced around the corner, halting abruptly in my path as moans and deep growls sounded from a room. I quickly and silently made my way down the dimly lit hallway. “Angela?” I called out.

~Jells

Thank you =) Yeah,  a lot is going on. There's so much to cover, and lots needs to be resolved. lol Aro will be coming up soon. Depending how long ch 12 will be, I would say ch 13 or 14. It seems like Edward is taking a lot of blood, but that pill Bella is taking increases her red blood cell count. She'll be okay to go to the blood bank, she'll be donating a pint of blood. Speaking of blood donation, that will be in ch 13- except Carlisle and Edward will go along since Carlisle can draw the blood this time himself, however it has to be under supervision of a nurse and a vampire employee.

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

~Jells

LOL. You'll see about Victoria in ch 9. Hmmm...I wonder what you'll think. It could be James....or not. lol I will reveal that very soon.

Thanks for reading ,

~Jells