[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
OH my!! This chapter was great! And add to that Bella's POV and I was floored!! :)
Lovely! :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
omg i just love it! i got the out take like three mins ago but i had to read this first! i love it that much!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 14 The new playroom
lemony time intheir new playroom yum
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Awesome! Hum! this is still intriguing the crap out of me. Why is he hearing only bits and pieces of her mind. Who killed her father and what is the connection with all this.. Questions, Questions!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Geez Jealous Edward is right! Shit! was that hot or what
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Okay I was laughing so hard at Emmett, Rose and Diana's (Not to mention the inner dialouge of Bellla, Rose and Alice) bantering.. I thought I was going to have to call for oxygen.. Seriously that was something! Your a fan-fucking-tastic writer!
Later BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 The faux pas
This is a terrific story and I really am intrigued by it, first off that Edward can hear Bella's thoughts, Well for the most part!!! I simply could not believe Esme and Carmen several chapters.. Holy Shit! I have rarely liked Tanya in a FF story, but she I mean get the Volturi and burn her up!!! Shit she is devious!
And the Sex Class with all the siblings Shit that was hysterical, I couldn't stop laughing, poor Jazz!!!!
Later BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 15 Mar 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Put in my vote! *checks off list* Great chapter. Enjoyed it. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Keye
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
You are one of my favorite authors!!!! This story is also one of my favs. I'm actually reading 4 of your stories at once and can't wait for updates. You rock lady. Thank you for this gift.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
OMG!!!!! I CAN NOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT EDWARD DOES TO HER IN THE NEW PLAYROOM. CAN NOT WAIT TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT BELLA.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
DOES BELLA EVER GET TO EXPLAIN WHY SHE WAS IN LA PUSH AND WHO IT WAS THAT SHE WAS VISITING?
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
I worry how she will be when she finds out he can read her mind But I think she will be fine with everything else Loved it all very much and update when you can.....
Date: 14 Mar 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
this is really good!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
As always you have my vote!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Great chapter. So like this Edward, he is different. Still wish Esme was never involved with that Tanya bit with trying to violate Edward. It still saddens me for Esme to be thought of that way.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
You got my vote. So now she has meet the family when is moving day and then how is he going to tell her what he is????
Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Great chapter. thanks for the update!
good luck with the voting!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Girl thats so fucken hot like always I cant wait for more again like always
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
that is awesome! yes I all ready voted for you. actually I was on there voting for my favorit story and found yours, so I looked your story up. I love it.. can't wait for the next chapter. Still wondering why he can't here all her thoughts. maybe when she yells her thought out he can here her?
:)Leona
Date: 13 Mar 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
So good I loved it of course
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
i guess Esme did a great job on the room.. is it really a good idea for them to move there when Bella feels so much tension with Esme around
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Wow, what more need be said.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
This chapter was great...as they all are. I went and voted for your story. Hope you win. Looking forward to what happens in the playroom.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
updates on this story make me smile! yea!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
I don't know why, but it kind of bothers me that Edward treats Bella like a sub in front of his family. It's just me.
I can't wait to see how things go in the new playroom.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
SoEdward he only hear part of what she is think.. I wonder why he can't hear all. what is it that makes on thought heard and the other not...
:)Leona
Ps. awesome chapter.. i do think if the guy did not want to suck on the dildo he should not been forced. that is my opoinon.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
nice chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 The fixer
I had to say I was shocked at what Emse did to Edward/. it was rape and the floored me. You have a wild Imagintion. awesome chapter.
I hope Edward will forgive his mom. I think bella will have to forgive her too.. that was aweful. :)Leona
Date: 12 Mar 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Wow, that was AMAZING :) I really enjoyed it so much! I cannot wait to see what happens next with these two ;)
Date: 12 Mar 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Yunmmy chapter. Esme does have a lot to make up for.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Loved the chapter and was very happy to see an update.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
nice work
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Great chapter, can't wait for the playroom christening.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13 The wooing begins
Rockin' chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2011 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I frigging love it.. I can't wait to read up to the last chapter you have got. awesome.. :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
I pounce on every update...and it never disappoints!!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
How's he gonna explain his behavior to her and his reasoning for him not wanting her there? What will Jake do when she doesn't come around? Also jealous Edward is hot as hell, I hope he comes out again soon
Date: 27 Feb 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
yay!! good chapter. i love a jealous, possessive edward. i also love me some outdoors sexin'. that was good stuff. i'll be sure to vote for you. i figured bella had her training with jake and ...leah maybe? so i knew there was nothing romantic there, but it doesn't mean i didn't enjoy edward going all caveman and demanding that bella "wash the stench off". you rock!!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
wow...jealous Edward is crazy but i loved it...although did she just agree to never see Jacob and her La Push friends again?
Author's Response:
Actually...she agreed to never go to La Push again...
You know i love to play with words. Thanks for reading and reviewing! More to come soon! Nails233
Date: 20 Feb 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
That was scortching HOT!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
About time he figured out she was his mate. Just can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yeah he can't resist forever. but now he has to get her to feel the same way. thanks for reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Loved this very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can......
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! more to come soon. tahnks for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 19 Feb 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Vamp scorned. Great chapter. Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Great lemony chapter. You write so naturally, it's wonderful. I can't seem to do that with my own writing! Btw, I'd already voted for you before I saw your link :D I'd sign myself Avid Fan but that's far too Silence of the Lambs for words!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words! Thank you for voting! LOL wrong lambs (this is the stupid lamb...sorry twilight moment there! LOL) again thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see how Bella reacts to Edward being a vamp. Update soon please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! more to come soon, not to mention the special chapter about Bella's past. Nails233
Date: 17 Feb 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
jealous much Edward! so hot!!!
Author's Response:
I love jealous Edward! thanks for reading and taking the time to review! nails233
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
I'm glad Edward is finally realizing his feelings for her. She is so devoted to him. I hope he explains why she can't go to La Push anymore, it will have to be included in his conversation with her about what he is. How come Alice can be around her during her period but Edward can't? Is it because she's his singer? I wish your chapters were longer, I love your story so much. Also, I went to the link you posted for the 'Fuck Me Friday' thing to see the outake but I'm not sure where to look. Maybe I'm blind, what is it called?
Author's Response:
Edward can't be around her during her period becuase she is his singer so her blood screams to him, I am working on making the chapters longer. in the begining there is less to tell and not to mention it would torture the readers if i explained everything in every chapter. but i will continue to work on making them longer.The outtake is not up yet so far all they have told me was it would be up around march. well i guess vague works. i will let you know once i see the link, i will post it for you all! Thank you for readin and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Oh shit! I thought he was going to go all vamp on her for a minute. I can only imagine her confusion when he came at her like that.
By the way...forest fucking was very hot!!!
Author's Response:
Hope i didn't scare you, her confusion will be addressed in the next chapter.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 17 Feb 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
hmmm wonder if the mutts smells him on her..... great chapter though
Author's Response:
There will be a chapter when all is explained by the wolves. and the outtake that will be posted to the FMF blog first then here, will explain a lot. thanks fro reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
wow, Bella must be like...WTF??? he didn't say she couldn't leave.....
Author's Response:
oh she will be examining things in the next chapter. she admits she wasn't told she could leave. but she understands that without the chasity belt she was at risk.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Dayum but Edward is the extremely possessive jealous type!
Wonderful chapter - thank you so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
seems like it has been forever and it was short but still enjoyed it
Author's Response:
Sorry snow has been an issue in the north east. my poor beta was snowed out of her home and left to suffer through extra days in disney. more to come soon and no worries as the story gets more involved there will be longer chapters.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
If that's slightly how's a lot??? Him going apeshit and carrying her back to his cave/tree?? lol
I loved it! I'll vote and read everything else!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
LOL yeah he did turn a little cave man 9on her butt! thanks for checking out the voting!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
So, Edward's a bit jealous, indeed. So, if he can smell the dogs, can they also smell the vampire on her and wonder what their reaction is to her being with a vampire. I wonder about the vampires that killed her family? Many questions still out there unanswered.
This has been a great read, hope you do win awards;-D) Yes, I'm surprised you've had so few reviews. Left us speechless maybe?
Good luck, and thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
when they figure out who she is with it will be explosive! answers are coming. Love your speechless reasoning! sounds good to me.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Great chapter. I love jelous Edward. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I really loved it so much! I am so happy he forgave her and maybe now he will realize how much he loves her :)
Author's Response:
There is no denying its love now. now the question is how does she feel?
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
great story keep updating thanks love it:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Edward realized he can't go on without Bella in his life always. The thing is for that to happen he has to kill her. will she want that? He needs to know, he won't do it unless it is what she wants. With that in mind, he was feeling better, until he got home.
Alice's vision altered him too much. He was really angry, he went to her but didn't say much, he just showed in his actions and stance how unhappy he is. That is something that made Bella feel very, very sad. She wants him to be happy, to please him. Her actions did the opposite. He might forbid her going and she will agree to it. But I think they really should talk. Hopefully very soon.
Author's Response:
you said the magic words he forbade her from going...answers are coming!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
I love this story! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Jealous Edward is hot! Although he should already know that nothing sexual is happening since he can read her mind, right? Is he just afraid that she might get her going to La Push where the wolves are? If Jacob and Leah are wolves, can they not smell Edward on her since she is a vampire?
Author's Response:
her thoughts were the only thing that soothed his temper slightly. yes he wants her to avoid the wolves. but he should have rethought his words. she showers before going so they haven't figured out yet about edward.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Yea, I am glad that Edward is finally admitting that Bella is his mate and is thinking about turning her. She is so worried about being alone I wonder how she will respond to being with Edward "forever". And you are right, Edward is a tad bit jealous there, love it!
Author's Response:
yeah it was time for him to see what life was like without her, but we know and love edward but he can be an idiot when it comes to giving in!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Whew! A pissed off Edward is a hot Edward!! Can't wait for more!
Keye
Author's Response:
Yummy when pissed!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Wow a jealous Edward is a hot Edward but he is not being very fair to Bella. Is it reasonable that she cuts her friends for him? Hmmm
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
He's overthinking as usual
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Holly shit he has figured out that he wants her forever and then he thinks she is going to be lost to the wolf's????? A jealous Edward is fuck hot but when isnt he lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
GAWD that was HAWT!
I love jealousward! Seriously :)
And how come the wolves didnt say anythinga bout Bella coming smelling like a sickly sweet vamp?
hmm...
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
That was hot loved it I can't wait to read her pov.I hope he does change her
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
Jealous Edward- so hot! I love this story! Thanks :)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's
I'm glad that Edward has at least admitted his feelings to himself. Now, how is he going to handle that?
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Dear writer congratulated for their boldness, courage, intelligence, sex hot, hard, fri, lollll.
Thank you for sharing this fun thrill.
Diana-Brazilian Chica
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
I can't wait to read more, good job
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 The apology
I have enjoyed the story, sorry I have not written after each chapter, just reading LOL
Author's Response:
I am so happy to hear that! i know its hard to review after each chapter. i am guilty of the same thing, sometimes you just need to get to the next chapter. LOL Nails233
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Does Bella still own the boat that she lived on? It would be pretty hot for Edward to "rock her boat" and show her more than just a full more and shooting stars...
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I thought it was a great start
Date: 23 Jan 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Still taking in the whole story. So at this point their whole relationship is just sex? Can't believe Esme in this one. Tanya I see.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
When is he going to realize his feeelings for her!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Love it..More more more si'l vous plait!!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
:)
Date: 22 Jan 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom
I hope that you will continue writing this story. You`ve really captured my interest and I like your writing style
Date: 22 Jan 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Love the update! :)
Date: 22 Jan 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 The Claiming
I don`t care for the ``Little Eddie`` nick name. It takes away from his DOM persona.
I thought that the rest of the chapter was great.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The collaring
I like your Edward and that he knows what he wants
Date: 22 Jan 2011 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
Great opening chapter
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
When is Edward going to admit that they are a couple? And that he wants her to be with him forever?
What's up with the three vampires that killed Charlie and some of the things that Bella is saying seem a little unusual for someone who doesn't know anything about vampires.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
What is going on with Bella? Why did she refer to "DRAINING" the teacher?
Author's Response:
you are close but it wasn't bella saying it. thats a hint. I hope you guess it no one has. nails233
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Heißes Kapitel
das hat mir echt sehr gut gefallen
Date: 21 Jan 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
I was surprised by the fact that Edward still doesn't see all of Bella's fears and insecurities. All she does is focused on and for him. She needs him as much as he needs her. Which brings us to the topic he dreads so much, time passing. He will have to make a choice, sooner rather than later. His conversation with Diana left an open window for other Domms to ask about Bella "when/if Edward moves".
Did Alice and Bella set the date for shopping? What are they going to buy?
Author's Response:
I am doing an outtake for this story in Bella's pov for a blog, but then i will put it up here. he does see her insecurities and he keeps reassureing her but her fears are real and when you see her POV it will all make sense. Yes there will be a shopping date in there future. Alice will be babysitting for atleast one day. New toys and outfits i think.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
That was a whole lot of dirty fun! Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Little Bella is not to be messed with. What you say!!!!! LOL
Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
When is he going to figure out Jake's a wolf and why was he not jealous or pissed or something about the phone call?
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
I really enjoy your writing style. Has a tendency to draw your reader into the action.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
I love this story, although I'm dying for them to admit their feelings for each other & become a couple as well. Still curious about the break in her thoughts he experiences & how violent & strange her thoughts were during class. Will we find out why soon? Thanks for the great story! :)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
girl you know i loved it and i just let your pen go cause you can come up with some fuck hot scenes you just as pervy as me awesome chapter expect quicker updates or do i need to get the chains out again
Author's Response:
*Bows submissively* Yes Ma'am. I will not dissappoint you again. ;)
no worries already working on the next chapter tonight. i am clearing up the older stories and then i will have more time for these. i have a new idea for a new poly with JXEXBXA do you think i can pull it off? my EXBXM poly is doing well and i was tortured by a video of JXE and it just hit me. it will take a while to get it down and posted but i will get there once things losen up.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
That was pretty funny I mean the things with the guys having to learn have to give a blow job. I love that Bella is showing signs of being jealous it just shows her love. I was thinking that you need to put Bella in some kind of real danger so that Edward will have to save her and she can see that he is a vampire. Also I would love for it to be while she was on her period so he can see that he can control himself when he thinks he is going to lose her. I have read in another story once where Edward was actually able to enjoy her period and drink from her vaginally.
Author's Response:
In my story The Singer Connection i wrote about that. but i am sure it was in others too. i am sure i m not the first to think of that. there will be a scare in the next chapter because she is going to la push again. where no one from the cullens can see whats happening. its time for them to see each other scared. who knows maybe they will get a glimps at their feelings. only time will tell! thanks for reading it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Haha! Yeah, that was well worth the wait! You've got me so intrigued to find out just what exactly happened to Charlie and what did Bella's cryptic comments mean? What does she know? And why do her thoughts cut out every so often? Well you´ve left me guessing. Lol! I can´t wait until the next update! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Uh huh.........Edward says he and Isabella are not a couple and yet he does not want to share. Very interesting! *snicker* Fun scene between Rosalie and Diana!
Can't wait to read more!
Keye
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Wow, that was incredible! I really hope Edward decides to change her soon! Maybe for the next class Edward could enjoy going down on Bella or they could have a special class devoted to the "art" of squirting ;)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
What a way to finish class!! You gotta love the homework!! :)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up
Great chapter, and yes worth the wait. Not crazy about the wait, as I missed reading this story and the characters. He's starting to realize his feelings for her and not just the lust and blood lust.
Author's Response:
I know about the wait but it took me over a week to write it and then the beta needed to do her thing. sorry we'll try to keep it to a minimum but we are always working on it in one form or another. Thanks for reading it!