Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
so basically momma and poppa went and fucked with eddie and bella's destiny when they got married. that is sonot cool.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
i knew he was into her! i knew it was more than brotherly. i wonder how it all would have gone down if the parents had waited like a year or so after bella and eddie met on their own? would they have followed the sibling code or gone in a kinkier direction? makes you wonder if they were dating before the parents got married what would have happened? would it have still been wrong?
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
that bitch! it is crazy stupid girls like that that make things hard for the rest of us. i am so glad bella was able to help eddie find out the truth and now they can move forward. it is a christmas miricle!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
it is funny how even to apologize the boys go over the top and force her to listen.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
holy shit can you say cave man? they should both be happy she is a responsible girl with a good head on her shoulders and leave it at that.
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
so now that she said that you just know one of the brothers are gonna show up at some point! heehee that is sibling karma and yet one more reason i am so very happy i am an only child!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: My Other Brother
so not fair! why is it always ok for the guys to just throw any girl in bed for fun but when a girl wants to do the same thing the brother and friends get all protective and ' you're better than this' ?but i think eddie may just have a little more to his side than she thinks....
Date: 22 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
good i loiked ir
Date: 31 Jan 2011 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great ending. Good luck in writing your book.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was a wonderfully told story. Thanks for sharing it.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
not going to be easy
Date: 29 Jan 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great story! I laughed so hard at the "virginity" scene! Great, well written story! Ending was a little rushed, but the overall story was excellent!
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
aww sweet just a family love should be
Date: 29 Jan 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
well said Edward
Date: 29 Jan 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 24
A beautiful end to a very beautiful story. THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR AWESOME FIC. I really enjoyed reading it. Sher
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
such a wonderful story
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
WOW a Juliard scholarship. No one should have to pass up on that. I think that Bella is doing the right right by her man and should go with him to New York. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:51 AM Title: My Other Brother
good start
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
AW....SO SWEET....
Date: 29 Jan 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
I have really enjoyed this story. The relationship between your Edward and Bella is romantic and passionate. They are truly soulmates. Thank you. You are a wonderful writer.
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:55 AM Title: My Other Brother
Hi
I like yor introductor chapter it is awesome. I see you have written a lot of chapters. So it will be nice to read tell I get to you last One. I will give you a over all review once I finished reading all your chapter. So far I think you go mystical mind going.. I can't wait. Lucky me I don't have too for the 23 more chapter. Smiles Leona
Date: 27 Jan 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
This was really great thank you for sharing it!
Date: 27 Jan 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
They did it their way. It was how their relationship was. They had to leave their family to be a couple, but they made it in the big city. It might be financially tight right now, but in a few years it will be better and they did it all on their own. Their parents should be proud at the strength of their children and their love for each other.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
that's sooooo sweet! I'm gonna miss your writing...but have a great break and get back to us soon.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awww i am going to miss these two i was so hoping they would have babies baby we can get a futuretake sometime.
Thanks for another excellent story
Date: 26 Jan 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was a wonderful end to a wonderful story about love that will concer all even the family. I will be looking forward to anything else you do.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
Congratulations on a job well wriitten.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 24
Beautiful!! They did this all their way! Great job!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Surprised they waited 6 years to finally get married but with both of them in school and working I can understand not having the time. I'm happy the family wasn't too upset over missing the wedding.
Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
awwwe loved the story
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
I can't believe it is over. I love it as always! I can see why they got married when they did. It was time for them even though it didn't work for the rest of the family. I am so glad everything has gone so well for them in New York. They are so happy and that is all their family can ask for. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow great, great, awesome chapter!!! thank you for that!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
*happy sigh* Lovely ending! This is so sweet!
Hugs,
Gwen (and best wishes for your second book!)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
awesome ending! wrapped up very nicely :) as always...lol. loved this! Good Luck with 'Induction'!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
so great! but so sad it's over
Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awwww. Very nicely done. I liked the closure offered here.l
Date: 25 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
This was a very good story---I have to say, I teared up at the end....bitter sweet but special as usual from you!!!
Thanks for always sharing your talent with us, you are a very good writer and I always enjoy your stories.
Good luck w/ your Creation series!!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
well that was a great ending! they never did anything the parents wanted! it was all for them
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Not as happy ending but happy enough. :-)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow a great ending, I can't wait for the epi, I will truly miss these characters.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'll miss this story.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Things are coming together for them I am happy that Esme and Carlisle are helping them out because they would of did it there way. I cant wait to read the epi.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
Whoo-hoo!! Columbia and a decent job that doesn't include the phrase "Would you like fries with that"....
Date: 23 Jan 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!! Thank you!! I can't believe it!! I can't wait for the epi even though I am a little sad it will be over!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 23 Jan 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
WOW!! Beautiful chapter, it was so nice to see how hard they worked for their dreams but I am super glad it worked out. Smart thinking on Bella's for the leg in the door for both places. ty for updating!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad that Esme and Carlisle finally realized they were fighting a battle they couldn't win. And they were willing to help them out financially if needed.
Bella and Edward were so determined to make this happen that nothing was going to stop them. Good for them. They had a plan and made it work.
Can't wait for the epi but I will be sad to say goodbye.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I'm so sad this story is almost over i am going to miss these two.
Thanks for a wonderful inspiring ride.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow so much in that chapter, glad all things all lining up for them, she had quite the presentation ready for the parents -- smart, funny, and classy
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
clap...clap...clap...sniffle...sniffle
I love a happy ending
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
good! i knew they'd make it work!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet! Good job for standing their ground! Can't wait for the epilogue.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thies two will be fine. They are just Edward and Bella here. Two young people trying to work and going to school in the big city. It will be tough, but they have each other. They just have to remember to take time for each other and enjoy the little things which are free.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow. They are behaving like the grown ups they are trying to be. Kudos for them both. Very impressed with their positive presentations to their parents; equally impressed with the parents respecting their choices.
Date: 23 Jan 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
well happy that everything finally worked out for them!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh dear! Are the parents gonna talk her into staying? I can see their point though- free ride and all. Maybe Edward and Bella would do well with a little distance (not that I want them too though!) Looking forward to your next update. Love this story!!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
The parents just need to realize that either they go to New York together or they stay in Washington together. Bella and Edward have to show them that they are committed to this relationship. It isn't a faze. They are old enough they can get married, if they can't get family support for their decision. They can also get grants and loans if needed. They just have to show them that they are a package deal.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
They wont try to stop her from going with him??? I am glad Emmett has came around to accept them as a couple.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, you are a little devil leaving that cliffhanger.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
a lot has transpired during one school year. Wonder about the 'sleeping' arrangements when they return home. I think the parental units have voiced their opinion in the past about what is allowed and what is not.. Hoping the acceptence process works out well for Edward and Bella in re: to New York... thanks much for the post...covered quite a bit in this update.. Pam B.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
it would kill them to be apart, but let's see how the discussion goes......
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
well that went better than expected!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Sweet! Edward getting accepted to Julliard. Esme and Carlisle raised good kids.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Young people. They don't see the whole picture. Everything cant usually be worked out if you try hard enough. You can't turn down Julliard. Bella can try several schools. NYU is another amazing school if she can't get into Columbia on such short notice. There are lucky that money really is not a big problem and Bella is a smart girl. They will make it in New York just fine. If Edward want a career in music, Julliard is where you want to go if you get the chance.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yippee! Love these two! Can't wait to see them "on their own"!
Date: 17 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
How wonderful for them sometime even bitches are useful if it was not for the two bitches raging about Bella she would not know what was going on so Thanks Bitches lol.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad that Bella overheard. There is no way that Edward should give up a oppertunity like that. And if they are meant to be then it won't matter how far apart they are.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter, so sad that this story is almost done, because I really like it.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
amazing opportunity, i'm glad she had a positive spin on it and sold him on the idea
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
OHHHHH I love this story, TY for updating!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward is sweet!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
well im happy shes making him take it! cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
glad they ot one sweet romantic night alone together before they have to face the world. wonderful chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
glad they are all starting to move on and repair relationships. I can't wait to see what happens now that they are all away from the parents.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
love it! i wanna read more of it! i love it!! cant wait for more!!!!! there were a few mistakes but nothing to worry about :)
lots of love!! xxx
Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
They didn't use a comdom!
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
pls continue this story!!! pls i really hope u continue this story!!! i love it!! so pls continue soon!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
i want to be Juliet !!!!!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the lemon!!
And I got my brother to get me the book in hardcover fro my b-day today!! I can't wait 'till it gets here!!!!
I am so fucking excited!!
xx
Marianne
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
congrats on your publication... glad to know you can keep the YA readers happy and the lemon lovers happy all at the same time.. such a versatile woman.. glad B and E were able to get a short stent of time to themselves before facing the real world again.... thanks muchly for the post.. Pam B.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was just fuck hot they need to do this from time to time because real life is not going to be as plesent I think.
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope things can settle down for them now. They deserve to be happy together. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for that. Bella and Edward definitely needed their alone time together and who would have thought that this Edward was frugle by hiding all of his money in the floor. I very much enjoyed reading their steamy love scene. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
so romantic. perfect that you are showing how strong their bond is right before they go face the rest of the world. love this story
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Nice to see them get away for one night as a normal happy couple...and that was one nice long lemon to enjoy! Thanks!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was so romantic. I am so anxious to see what is going to happen next.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
Very Sweet and loving chapter. But I get a sad "gut" feeling something is about to maybe 'hit the fan'???? Well I have every confidence in our two young sweethearts!!!
CONGRATULATIONS on your new publication!! I saw it advertised up on the banner. Am planning to buy it for eBooks (have a Kindle!!). Good luck!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
first off congrats! Im happy about your book. Second of all I'm so happy that you updated this story and WHO cares that its one big lemon, I know I don't. lol thanks again soo much and hopefully now more chapters will come out more often now that you got your book done. :D I can hope. lol thanks again bye
Date: 04 Dec 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
How cute that they had a list of extravagent ways to spend the cash stash. Since they survived the trial by fire in Forks I think they can pretty much withstand anything that comes their way.
He is just so sweet and romantic!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
They needed a night of just the 2 of them.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
well i hope for her sake that it gets better keep the chapters comming
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
money worth spending....lol Em...just don't even question where they were
Date: 04 Dec 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Stupid popping bubbles. I guess it might get boring living in one after a while, right? What am I saying, if Edward was there, I would never be bored. Great bubble chapter.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow that was hot but ver sweet and romantic, an di loved the whole romeo and juliet reference!
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
a lovely get away
Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
Sweet! I love the Romeo and Juliet thing. :-)