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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 29

well im looking foward to what happens next chapter but locking them in the room .... not a good idea ! 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

Okay, this can't happen again. I hate to say it but someone needs to ask them what they want to do or their going to have to go somewhere to be watched over (hospital ward).

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 28

I''m still here. As hard as this is to read I can only imagine how hard it is to write. I know it will be a long road but I am along for the ride.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 28

B.B.

The two of them better accept Jane's help!!!! Or it's over for them. I can't believe that you & your muse are even thinking of the two of them not letting Jane help them. Woah!!!! Can't wait to see what you've come up with!!!!!!!

Great chapter as always!!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 28

i hope taht they talk to jane ! i think they need to start to work it out together before they bring everyone else in 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28

Well, hopefully Jane keeps at it b/c sometimes it's helps to talk to a stranger than a family member or loved one.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow....

 

This was an intense chapter.

I felt the dispair and the angst.  For a moment there it felt like Bella was about to end it all... then Jane came.  None too soon Im sure.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: cassyrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 27

thank you, I love this story. It is keeping me on the edge of my seat.

 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 27

I'm sorry that anyone would have to go through what both Bella and Carlisle have. I hope that some form of peace can be found.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

B.B.

A break is well deserved IMO. It's been a tough few last chapters. I'm just glad that you're going to finish this amazing journey!!!

I'm so ready for Bella to realize that she needs help!!! I think she knows it already and maybe Garett showed her that it's the right thing to do!!!!

Can't wait for the next chaper!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 27

excited to see what happens next 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 26

B.B.

That was a tough one to read. I really do hope that they will in time believe that they are loved by each of there loved ones!!!!

Fabulous 4 updates I just finished B.B.!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

B.B.

This is going to be a rough ride for Bella & Carlisle I'm a thinking.

Great chapter!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

B.B.

Thanks god they are all back together!!!

Now for the healing to begin again.

Cory

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

B.B.

Back from holidays and catchiing up. And the first chapter back I get a stinking cliff hanger. UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

Thanks god there's more chapters for me to catch up on!!! Off to the next one!!!

Great stuff B.B.!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 26

I think the families need a huge group therapy session and your readers might need to sit in on it too.  I feel so raw after reading these last few chapters.  I don't know how you write it, but you do it so well.  I know it won't come for a while, but I can't wait for them all to get to a happy place.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25

My heart is breaking for Esme.  How horrible it must be for her to have Carlisle scream at her that way.  How does someone get past being so broken to allow themselves to be intimate with the people that they love again?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 24

Ugh, that was so emotional.  I hate to see Carlisle and Bella so raw and volitile.  I wonder how they will ever recover?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!  I am so afraid you are going to kill off Carlisle!  I was holding my breath through the whole last section of this chapter. :(

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 26

This is truly emotional you should take a few days.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh God

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 26

well i hope that they talk to someone! 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 26

*hugs you tightly*

 

You treat us readers so good BB!!  This was a great chapter!

Its not gonna be any easier for these two for a while.  I hope the rest of them see that!

Love it darlin'!

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 25

well im excited taht they are home but i hope that they will be able to get past it all 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow...

 

That was a high on emotions chapter!  Love it BB!!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 24

OMG I'm just so happy they are safe

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

you are my literary hero

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

well im glad taht they are alright but i hope that they both can get back to where they were at befor all of this ! 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

*hugs you tightly*

I am a bit chocked up, BB, so I will make this short and sweet... well, as short as I can, it is me here...

It did get my pulse racing.  Wow, that was so exciting, and now, to see the aftermath from other views, this is an amazing chapter BB, I love it.

*hugs*

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 24

so glad that part is over..

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG I'm happy that bitch is dead and I hope the bullet hit Demetri.

I'm tearing up, I was so scared and sad for them.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 23

BB.....

*Peter hugs me from behind*

BB, I love your stories, I just really hate anything happening to some of them...

well, actually any of them... *closes eyes and bows head*

*takes in a shuddering breath*

This was a great, action packed chapter, alot happened!  I love that!

*gives a watery smile*

I just really really love Carlisle and Bella...

*tears invade my eyes and I cant see the screen while a lump of emotion blocks my throat*

Peter... *dissolves into violent sobs*

"BB, darlin', she loved your chapter.  She is looking forward to the next, I just know it."  Peter gives you a sexy grin and tips his head as if he were wearing a hat.  "We'll see ya next time, sweets." He winks with the smile still visible on his lips and in a heartbeat we're gone.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 22

How could you? Damn, Double rape...can we get a warning next time.

So, it wasn't just about Bella, it was about Carlisle too...how is killing/hurting Bella (his daughter in law) going to get her Carlisle, exactly. Shouldn't she have went after his spouses. ?????

Wasn't Demetri the body guard, who watched her kids or am I mistaken?

for shock factor you getting a ten



Author's Response:

She felt Bella was the threat seeing as she was the one Kayla always saw CArlisle with. Also, once Demetri saw her, he wanted her.  Yes, he was the one who watched over the girls.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

B.B.

Those are two sick puppies!!!! So looking forward to their demise!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

THank you:)

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 22

wow... just wow



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Thanks

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 22

well i hope that they find them soon! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

Alright evil one, a little warning would have been nice!  Damn girl...you are asking alot for us to have faith.  That was freakin harsh.  I mean it is bad enough for that skanky whore to rape Carlisle, but to have Demitri rape Bella?!?  Really, how much more are you going to put this poor girl through before she eats a bullet?  The human soul can only take so much and I think she has suffered not only her share, but enough for Alice, Jasper AND E,dward.

I am officially putting your instincts in a time-out.  Bad instincts, bad!  I really hope you are writing as we speak to make this right.

But as completely emotionally frazzled as I am by this chapter...it was really good. ;)



Author's Response:

This is one of the hardest things I've ever had to write, and this was the mild verison. I can't promise that it won't get worse, either, and I felel like the biggest scum right now for doing this to them!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

BB...

OMG that must have been very hard for you to write.

I am here, BB, I am here.  I am looking forward to where you are taking this.  This is gonna be the blowout of epic proportions!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie. I'm phsyically sick over this right now. I feel so guilty!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 21

You are killing me with this cliffy!!!  Please tell me that Carlisle saw who took her?



Author's Response:

Of Course Carlisle saw who took her. The better question might have been, did they take him, too???????

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow, and holy shit!

So evil, the perfect opportunity for the evil doer to abduct Bella. Poor Carlisle!

 

Sorry to hear you've got writer's block, hun. Hope it clears soon. This was a fantastic cliffie!

 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

OMG they took Bella and I felt the same as Alice after Katrina happened, my house totally didn't feel like him again.

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

im sensing james...?

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

BB

Oh dear god!!!!!! The only postivie I see from that ending is that maybe in the next chapter we'll learn whom this nutso is and why he/she is doing all of this to Bella!!!!

Even though it was a cliff hanger ending, that was a great chapter BB!!!! That being said, I'll just start pacing until the next chapter comes up.

I'm sorry to read your muse is being stubborn with you but, maybe this chapter will free her to write again!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 21

well i hope for her sake that she can get away from who ever took her 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Wow..  Why  this is unbelievable..   how can someone have so many enemys.  or ppl that stock her..   I 'm totally have no words.  Bring her Back...    :)Leona

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

I love you BB, I always will, no matter what writings can or cannot come to you at the moment. 

This was a phenominal chapter!  Alot came to head, more so than I thought would!!  I am ecstatic at how this panned out!!!

 

Loving it BB, This has alot of us hooked!  :)

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was BEAUTIFUL..  I can't believe that I've caught up.  read both your other story's and loved them.   and I love this one too..  It was awesome that the voltora let jas take them all out and let loose and no worries for just a litttle while..  To reconnected and come together has one 4 quarter becaming a whole.  Love it..   Your a excellent writer I can't wait for the next chapter! 

I want to believe it is James but somone has been watching her for a long time.  Maybe it it Laurne..  I 'm almost 60% sure it her..  I always thought she would get back at Bella somhow.  and she would problem know her way around the office and stuff.  mmmm.  Maybe?   Am I close? hahah

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh my god..  Bella is lossing it badly..  She is going to throw them away before they throw her away..  She lost and hurt.  I know it is easy to push everyone away.  But it don't help it just makes everything worse..  Poor Bella

 

awesome story so far excellent!!  :)Leona

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow.. I started reading this story last night. it took a bit to read the other 2 stories.. plus keep up my other reading.. I love this story. But can Bella every get a break.. Why? do you do this to her. it is so sad.. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapter. until I catch up. Awesome sad happy all the emotions are here.. and a beautiful family. Hope little why. dreams don't come true. I know she was more like bella.. I off, I will be ranking each chapter tell I catch up. thank you so much.. for continuing this squeal. it awesome.. :)Leona

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Jasper is awesome!!!  What a fantastic idea for them to get away from the stress and madness in their lives if only for an evening.  Excellent chapter!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

they are going to get thru  this ! 

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20

I wish they hurry and find the crazy who is doing this to them.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 20

B.B.

I'm in tears here. (Sniffle, sniffle.)

Don't torture them much longer please!!!!

Great chapter as always!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh dear... who is this sick bastard???

 

This is killin me BB!!  I want to hunt him down and demand answers before I drain him dry!!

 

Love this chapter, especially the bonding at the end.  simply magnificent :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

she needs to step back and take a breather

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

I cant wait to hear from Jasper!  Gawd!

I want this sick fucker caught and fried.

*growls*

Still love it BB!

*hugs*

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

Yeah, she is over dramatic, but she has every right.  I can't imagine I would feel any differently if I were in her shoes.  I thought she kicked ass at the conference.  That took serious balls to go up  in front of everyone like that.

It broke my heart when she was talking to Charlie and I love this last part between her and Alice.  Very well written. ;)

Can someone please kick James' ass very very soon PLEASE.  And don't try and tell me it isn't James.  You and I both know it is that SOB.



Author's Response:

You want to bet on whether or not it's James????

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

B.B.

Ok Bella was a wee bit over dramatic. But IMO she's intitled to it!!!

I know you have the problem already sloved in your fabulous idea filled brain and I soooooooooooooooooo look forward to the rest of the journey!!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 18

What an incredibly emotional chapter.  My heart is breaking for them.  To know that the sick fuck was in their house, near their children, is almost too much for any person.  Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

well i hope she starts to realize that is just not about her self and lets everyone help her ! 

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 18

B.B.

That was a tension filled chapter!!!! Well done!!!!

If this ain't Jacob doing all this, then I haven't a flipping clue who's doing it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Will check out the other story you've mentioned asap!!!

Cory

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

I want to find the crazy person who is doing this to them

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

*drool*  in your basement?!  Uh... well, I...

*gives puppy eyes and pouts perfectly*

Is Peter there?  I know he is technically a Whitlock man, only Cullen by association, but a girl can dream...

*winks*

And the most appealing thing of it all, is you of course!  Did I mention that before?  Well, I did now, so... ;)

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

This chapter was... wow.  Thank the heavens for iron skin Jane!

Bless Carlisle's heart for calling her.

I would be acting like Bella if I were in her shoes too!

Breach by Catastrophia eh?  Hmmm.... I will go check it out :)

And what is this group for?  What do you do in this group?  I read all the time, I dont think I have time for groups :) lol

Love it BB!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I don't know if Breach is over here on TWCS or not. I'm reading it over on FF.net. It's super smutty good! As for the group, you get to hang out with me and talk to me and did I mention me?? No, seriously, I put up lots of teasers, we talk about all the dirty things we would like to do with Edward and the rest of the Cullen boys, who I have locked away in my basement.....

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 18

One question, where were the police?  Is this not a federal violation now?  And video voyeurism is also illegal in almost every state.  I was just wondering why they were not the first to be called in to help with the investigation and see where the cameras are linked to. 

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

ok why do i have a feeling that this has something to do with kates ex-s death why do i have a feeling that this person is someone that he was screwing around with behind kates back and is out for revenge on bella for killing him i cant wait to see if i am right the only other person that it could be is james or it could also be the couple that they had black baled from getting there house built i mean the husband did get physcal with bella and acused her of sleeping her way to the top and commented on her life style i guess there is a lot of people that could have a grudge aganst bella i cant wait to see if i am right or not so please update soon

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 17

well i hope they catch who ever is doing this! but i have a feeling its james! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: EmmettsGirl89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

holy shit!! SO wasn't expecting that lol update soon!! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 17

B.B.

Uggggggggggggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! (thud) I'm on the floor with Bella.

It's gotta get better from here on right??? (Cory smiles as she says this)

Great stuffs. You've got me scared shitless now!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!

Ok, thats creepy!  I am scared to death of this stalker now!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG OMG!!!!!! Who is doing this??????????????



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Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh the plot thickens!  But who would have a naked pic of her?  Does she recognize when or where it was taken or was it an invasion of privacy?  I just hope that this pisses her off enough to stop the self pity act.  It is beginning to grate on my nerves.  Now I sound like the whinny brat, oh gosh darn it!  Oh well.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ok seriously, how much more is she expected to endure?  I don't think I could handle that on top of the sleep deprivation and fear for her children's safety. I really hope they find out who it is soon and nail his ass to the wall.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 15

I want to know who it it.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella.  At least she has the most amazing support system that anyone could ask for.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

B.B.

We've got to catch this stalker STAT!!!! I'm scared for Bella's emotional state.

Great chapter!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow, Bella's insecurities come back like a freakin tsunami!  Holy shit!

 

Jeebus!  Can she GET anymore angsty?!  lol

Love it BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

im glad that hes comming back to help its going to be intresting to see them all work together again! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Well thats a hell of a shocker ending!!  I love the way your mind works BB  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hey Honey!  Thanks for another great update!  Don´t worry about how long it takes, we´ll still be here.... promise!  Missy ya when you´re gone!  Great chapter!  

 

FYI... I think it´s James and he´s doing it because they dropped his account.  Someone else may or may not be in on it too, but James is most definitely involved!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: time for now Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Bella going through the mill again.  Edward steps up great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 15

well i think its a good idea but i hope that hes going back for the right reasons



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

B.B.

Tense start to that chapter!!! So glad that it was only a dream!!!

Don't leave us hanging too long as to whom is doing this to Bella please!!!!

Updte when you can please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I'm going to try to put up more, soon!

Reviewer: MrsMcSparkly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15

i agree with edward



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

I think Jasper is right.  It is James.  I don't know if Edward coming back to work is going to ease Bella's mind.  If the kids are with Edward then at least she knows they are safe.

Excellent chapter my dear.  Smut and drama all wrapped up in a lovely little bow.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie:)

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14

ive been waiting for this cshapter for like ever....job well done



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wow, very intense!!

I'm so sad about her car, cuz I would totally love that car too, but I'm glad she's okay. Physically. I hope she gets the mental therapy help she needs.

More so, I hope they catch who it was. No excuse for both guards to be gone at the same time. I bet it was James!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah that was intense. I just know it´s that fruit loop James. He is such a monster´s ball. I hate him. Poor Bella, it tough when you feel like your mind is playing tricks on you! great chapter bb!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Damn straight that was intense.  I liked the scene in the art studio where Jasper got all angry and protective.  He is really hot like that.  Sorry.  Can't help it.



Author's Response:

lol, it was good for me, too!! Thank you:)

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14

why does the shit always happen to bella??? thats really intense, but i think its time someone else got the shit just once then it can go back to bella



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

That was really intense WOW!!! I know it has to be James because he is a bitter man that didn't get what he wanted .Loved it can't wait to see if they all stay on her side or think she has lost it.



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

B.B.

Intense is the right word girl!!!! Great chapter!!!!

I wonder how long you and your muse are going to make us wait to confirm that it was James in the office that morning????? Any clues BB??? (hee, hee)

Post more when it's ready please!!!!

Cory

 



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 14

it always happens to her i hope for her sake she goes and talks to someone !



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yes, very intense!!!  I will absolutely go into cardiac arrest if something happens to the family, ANY of the family...

I want to post nomads at every corner of each family house and the office.

Love it BB!!  The suspense is a real awesome clencher!!

*hugs*



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

Yes, it was f'ing intense! Omg is it James, who else could it be?



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There are several people it could be :)

Reviewer: MrsMcSparkly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 14

oh just like you promised! yeay!

too short tho :(

and who IS that guy?! it cant be a new one, right?

anyways.. i hope there's an update in the near future..VERY near.. as in tomorrow near..

ok, enough messing around with you.

gluck :D



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13

*high pitch scream* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! My car!!!! My beautiful car!! *sobs loudly*



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lol, thankS:)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well that was unexpected or was iit? Lol! This so has James´ crazy ass written all over it, but I know, I´ll just have to wait and see! Lol! I´m nothing if not patient. Great chapter! 

 

Krazi

xoxo



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lol, you are very patient, my dear!!

Reviewer: time for now Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

wow I love this chapter setting the scene for the up and coming I hope.  xx



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Reviewer: MrsMcSparkly Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 13

shit.. so expected lol. good one tho. :)

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