Them writing their "I Love You's" in that notebook was so sweet! Yes I would definitely play naked scrable with Jasper. :0) Can't wait for the next chapter. What's up with the Volturi???

I wonder who is about to visit?

Author's Response:

Stay tuned for more! LOL

OMG girl, that chap was hotter than the last!!!!

*raises and waves hand frantically*

Oh I am SO DOWN for some naked Scrabble with Jazz!

I love this chapter! 

Except for the cliffie at the end...

But I am never a big fan of those ;)

I cant wait to see what happens!

Uh oh! Jasper shouldn't have thought that last line! Murphy is just waiting to pounce, I'm sure! I love that Jasper made a nest under the stars with a fire and s'mores. Chocolate, the night sky in the counrty, and Jasper? Yes, please! Great chapter! <3

A perfect Valentine's Day chapter!

Author's Response:

I wish I had a naked Jasper to look at the stars with! lOl

I loved it!  Amazing lemony goodness....  I am so excited for what you have in store for those two!

Awww! What a cute older couple! And now I know what a yurt is! I had no idea! And if you don't let Bella eat she's gonna starve to death! ;p

Great chapter! Of course I always love when Jasper and Bella get to spend some alone time. :0) looking forward to seeing how they get through this battle that may be taking place. Bella's talents are already really cool I can't imagine how she'll be as a vamp.

This chapter was really good, but i wish we could have gotten the full cirtus.  But I guess it'll make the wait for the next chapter worth waiting for.

I loved this chapter. I meant to review, but I was reading on my phone and I did not have a chance to comment. I think Jasper's restoration of Bella's truck spoke volumes of how important Bella is to him. Actions scream so much louder than mere words! Edward is such an ass!

Author's Response:

Thanks for coming back to review hun.

anything for naked jasper.

great chapter.  Love the yurt idea.

Dun dun duuuuunnnnn! Crap! They're in trouble! I love that Bella got her truck back! And Nos tanks?! lol Peter needs his ass kicked! Wet Willie's? I'd soooo kick his ass! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^

I loved this chapter.  I couldn't tell you a favorite part because i had a couple like bossy Bella in the bedroom and feisty Bella in the garage.  You're doing a great job. 

Excited for more!

yummy but would have been bettter with shower time.   lol

Oh no! Edward and the little rat fink need to be taken DOWN! And not in a good way! lol I loved Protective!Jasper and BadAss!Charlotte. I wanted to hear more about how the family is dealing with the betrayal, now that they know for sure. Like, would Carlise apologize to Bella and Jasper for not listening to them sooner? etc Some Rose/Bella/Esme bonding time over simmilar past traumas woulb be great too! I eagerly await the next update!

Wow! This is getting intense I love it.

Oh MY GAWD!!!!!!!

Bells is so damned smart!  She came up with that answer all by her lonesome.

Yeah, they're fucked.

C'mon Petey, my man.  Get your all knowing mojo shit in gear, we have a family to save!

Love this, cant wait to read more :)

hmmm     he is out a few fingers 

ok time for eddie and brian and his friends to die horrible deaths.

Author's Response:

The Major is about to come out and play!

glad I found you over here.

omg holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

No Edward, DONT!

Oh god, you have to hurry with the next chapter!  I hope they make it before they touch her!

*shivers*

Oh I could just kill Edward and his minions!!  Jasper go get your mate babe and kill that assward for me.

Bye Bye Alice! She's C . R . A . Z . Y! :0)

Enjoyed the girl talk and the mud fight and especially the fact that Carlisle couldn't stay mad at them when he was giving his lecture. ha ha 

I'm sad now. I've reached the end of the posted chapters. Now I have to wait for updates along with everyone else. :0) I can't wait to read more of this story. You've done a really great job.

So Jane's not totally evil. I actually feel a little sorry for her. I'm so glad Bella's back with the family and I'm so so glad that she and Jasper had their talk. I really wanted them all to find out just how rotten Edward really is. :0)

I love that he has pictures on his phone. He likes her more than he even realizes :0)

“But, I don’t want to hurt anybody,” she said.

 “You don’t have to worry about that, ‘cause ain’t nobody out here gonna even let you get close enough for you to touch them,” I said.

I was laughing out loud with this! Poor Jasper is just clueless. This was great!

“That was really low Jasper,” Emmett said. “You’re a fuckin’ empath. Aren’t you supposed to be all like, I-feel-your-pain, and not let-me-kick-you-when-you’re-down?”

Ya gotta love Emmett! ha ha

This was such a great chapter! I didn't want it to end. I hope you are having as much writing this story as I'm having reading it. Do you laugh while you write thes funny lines?

I knew he wouldn't be able to handle Bella dancing with another guy. I'm glad he and Bella got a chance to dance together even if they were interupted by that Brian guy. Emmett drinking all that beer is funny. He's not going to have much fun when the night is over is he? :0) Wonder what will happen with Jasper and Brian. Jasper can't bite the guy 1. they're in public 2. that would totally freak Bella out. Going to go read the next chapter to find out what happens.

Esme saying she was slaving away looking over the take-out menu's cracked me up. lol Great chapter. As much as I like when the major takes over I also like when he's sweet. Like when he picked her out up out of the mud and let her cry and actually talked to her. Looking forward to reading more. Great job!

Great chapter! I gotta say I've really gotten used to seeing Alice be the best friend I kind of like how Bella stands up to her. I laughed when she called her a hobbit. lol  I Jasper seems mean at times but I really like when he's "taking charge" I'm really having fun reading this fic. Great job!

I've been wanting to read this story for a while now. I had thought of waiting till it was complete because sometimes I'm impatient and just want to keep reading to find out what happens. Well anyway. I'm glad I didn't wiat. I really like this so far. :0)

so very awesome this here chapter was also GO BELLA!!!!!

I love them too!

*gigglesnorts*

Oh my, for the love 0of all things holy... she let the proverbial cat out of the bag!

LOVE IT!  I am anxious to see what happens next!

I love the idea of Bella taking on Alice here!  Take no prisoners!  I sort of thought maybe Alice was working with Aro when I read she had been in Italy.  Designer or no, it's a great place to visit other interests.  By the way, Bella's revenge?  I love it!  All those designer clothes - destroyed!  Alice's reaction is bound to crack me up!!  I'm lovin' it!

hmmmm  just wait til  she tells them all the psycho bitch was calling aro.

welwome to twcs BTW.   I'll be reading and reviewing over here now as I gotta support my ladies here,.

Ok, first let me just tell you that this is the first time that I am reading a story that parts of it takes place so close to where I live... I live about 30 minutes from Batavia and let me tell you that you are actually pretty accurate about the things that you have said. There isn't really much to do there and the cell service really is that bad!!!! My husband always tells me that Batavia is the town that time forgot. LOL

Ok now, I just wanted to say that I am really loving this story. I like how your Jasper differs from all the other stories that I have read. I like how Bella is actually standing up for herself and I can not wait to find out what the boys did to ole Eddie Boy!! I am also excited to see what is going to happen to Alice when everyone finds out what she has done and that she is in contact with Aro. This best part that I am looking forward to is the "SEX" between Jasper and Bella. I have read your other stories and I really enjoyed them also. Still have to finish "To Keep you Safe". I think that is the name of it. It is the one that Bella and Emmette are brother and sister and Bella is a Scientist that was tied up in a closest and someone is after her. Jasper is Emmette's friend who he hired to protect Bella and find out who is sending the treats to her. I really hope I got that right.

Anyway, I look forward to more updates and the completion of both stories. Thank you for entertaining me with your wonderful writing.

Zelda

Author's Response:

Let me just say that I have never, ever been to Batavia, and that I just literally picked an odd sounding place on the map! I wiki'd the city and found the info about the Muckdogs, Dwyer stadium (how odd is that) and Otka Milk factory. It is so weird that I just picked a place near where you live! And the whole part about nothing being there and bad cell service, I just threw that in for comic relief! I had no idea if any of that was correct! LOL   That is wonderfully strange indeed.

Oh I am SO LOVIN' UFC Bells :)

You Rock Bella Corture!  lol

Gahhhh!!!!   Who would have thought?!  Jane!  Now I want to save her...

*plots taking away Jane and shielding her*

LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!  Its about damn time, Jasper!  Geez!!!

OMG I cannot wait until Eddie and Ali get their just deserts!

*cackles maniacally*

I cannot wait to read more!  I love this story!!!

:)

Uh-oh, that's not good.  I really hope that Jasper gets to her in time.  Update again soon please!

omg

Yikes!

oh, yeah, and Renee needs burned at the stake.

Im just saying...

I think Jasper is officially enrolled in Dummies for Vampire Mates! I hope that vampire Bella gets the opportunity to kick Alice's butt six ways into Sunday! :)

Oh,no! Who are the attackers that are approaching Bella and unconscious Jasper? :)

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Wow... Okay, words forming any minute now to tell you how amazing these two chapters are.  Can't wait to see what happens next.  I love your stories!

LOL  HA!!!   Love it!!  :)

Lay it on thick there Eddie boy!!  :) 

The Major fucked up... majorly  *snorts at bad joke*

Great chapter!  Bringing the wolves in was inspired, as it brought about an even bigger connection between Bella and Jasper!  The man better learn how to sensor himself or she'll kill him when she's a newborn!  I'm so-o-o glad that you're continuing your other story!  It's a favorite guilty pleasure of mine!!

i love the cowboy,i really do ,but , could he be any more of a dumb ass!  how could he not see that one coming,after she helped heal him too,sometimes men can be so stupid ,we all know alice hates her,but even she was laughing at the moron......well played bella,heeeheeehee.

anyway,excellent ch.can't wait for more,until then,cheerio.c.