[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Jasper is really stupid. LOL
Author's Response:
Indeed he is.
Thanks for reading hun!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
I finally got to read the update. Oh shit! How's the pack going to handle that Bella has to be turned?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!
Things are not gonna go well with the pack!
T
Date: 09 Oct 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella has been put through a ton in such a short amount of time. Very interested to see how Jacob/the pack reacts to the situation. Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
HOLY CRAP!! Yay for wolves! For now, anyways. Jasper is in denial and he needs a dose of reality, like Bella could be taken from him by the mutts.
Sweeeeet! :) This is a really good story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad that you're liking the story!
T
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
T
Date: 06 Oct 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
Make sure the UHAUL you rent is large enough! If it's too small, it can mean several trips and lots of extra work! (my sister-in-law and her husband messed up with this one) Jasper in this chapter needs to take a deep brewath. I love the push and pull between these two, however. Jake now adds a whole new twist to this all! Nice turn in the road! Great work - especially Bella's emotional "oneness".
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advise hun! I'm moving 13 hours away from where I currently live, so no back and forth trips for me! LOL
Yep, the wovles get thrown into the mix and Jasper is not going to be a happy camper.
Thanks for reading.
T
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Perfect as always. Love the new chapter! The cliffy was a bit cruel but I love your wicked mind.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, and I love writing evil cliffies! Ha ha ha!
T
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
love this story !!! I cant wait to see what happens with Jake the relationship between Jasper and Bella to develop :D
x
Author's Response:
Aww, I'm so glad that you're liking my little fic.
Thanks so much for reading.
T
Date: 05 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying your story so far...and I do not usually like non canon pairings so good job with a different take regarding the plot...look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for giving my little fic a try. I'm glad that you're liking it.
T
Date: 01 Oct 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad that you like it!
T
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Outrageously good chapter. Alice is irritated, Jasper is exasperated and poor Bella is just scared and confused. She has no clue! I love the bartering that when on in this chapter, it's so....Aro! I can't wait to see how Bella and Jasper's relationship works out. something tells me they're in for a rocky start!
Author's Response: Rocky start...you got that right! Thanks for reading hun. T
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much hun, I'm glad that you're enjoying it!
T
Date: 27 Sep 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
I've come to think of teasers as the toy surprise in a box of Cracker Jacks! Love it! I must say, you have me stumped. I assume Bella is still a shield, but for her to be masking Mike and Jassica as well...? And unknowingly? You have me hooked! Something also tells me that Jasper might have a problem with Bella being killed. Justa thought. Great chapter. I especially love the simple world through Bella's eyes and also can't help but wonder how Charlie DID die.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that you are liking it so far. And yup, Bella is a shield, she just doesn't know how powerful yet-- none of them know!
Thanks for reading and here’s another tiny teaser for ya!
“Demetri came at Bella again, and I reacted before I could consciously think about what I was doing. I caught him by the throat and slammed him to the earth, shaking the ground. Bella wobbled with the vibrations, and before she could fall, I had her in my arms, halfway across the meadow and shielding her from further attack.”
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
no fair , you can't leave us hanging like that,it's too good to stop there hope you up date soon, i rreally want to know what happens next,,,,ppppppllllllleeeeaaaasssseeeee!
thanks, great chapter.bye.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad that you like it.
Here's a tiny teaser for ya!
"Demetri came at Bella again, and I reacted before I could consciously think about what I was doing. I caught him by the throat and slammed him to the earth, shaking the ground. Bella wobbled with the vibrations, and before she could fall, I had her in my arms, halfway across the meadow and shielding her from further attack."
Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it!!! You have just the right blend of fear and the intensity that only Jasper can bring. Perfection! I can't wait to see where you bring us. Your other story is one of my all time favorites - needless to say, I'm close to drooling at the very idea of another!
Author's Response:
You are so kind with your words, and you really know how to encourage an writer!
Thanks so much for checking out the new fic, and here's a tiny teaser for the next chapter:
"I ran my hands through my hair and noticed that they oddly smelled of Bella. I had only touched her once, and I already reeked of her. She had an intoxicatingly sweet smell and her scent sparked a physical reaction in me that I wasn’t expecting. I didn’t know how to describe it; it was more than a feeling of hunger, it was a tight tugging feeling in my chest."
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
i want more, this is different,it also sounds cool,please up date soon.thanks:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!
Here's a teaser for the next chapter:
"I ran my hands through my hair and noticed that they oddly smelled of Bella. I had only touched her once, and I already reeked of her. She had an intoxicatingly sweet smell and her scent sparked a physical reaction in me that I wasn’t expecting. I didn’t know how to describe it; it was more than a feeling of hunger, it was a tight tugging feeling in my chest."