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Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 8:40 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

:-)

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Thank you!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 6:41 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

Edward's pov is soo much better when it comes to the hot scenes than Bella's. I love them. I can't wait to read more and Esme's response to the "bunny Ranch" was hilarious. can't wait to read more. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

you are in luck...just posted the newest chapter.  Enjoy!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 4:57 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

As soon as he said Cadillac Ranch, I have to admit, I thought Hoor house too. Cute.

Thanks for the update;D)



Author's Response:

LOL  Thanks!  glad you could identify heehee

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2011 4:50 AM Title: On The Road Part 1

I love getting his side I know I have said this before but it is true it just adds so much to the story and I thank you.  That is just to funny about the Cadillac Ranch



Author's Response:

Thank so much!  just posted the next chap...it's insane.  lol

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:54 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

LOL, this was a great chapter. Nice to get Edward's pov on the last little bit of the adventure.

Yes, the rugburn conspiracy was priceless! ;) Poor Bella! LOL!

Curious though, Edward mentioned Emmett replenishing the supply of Slim Jim's. Wouldn't everyone in the car need a gas mask if Emmett was wolfing down all those? Just a thought. ;) LMAO!

 

Thanks for mentioning Father Monaghan and the tragic natural disaster that happened in Joplin. There is a group that is donating $$ from an auction to the Salvation Army in Joplin. There's a few fanfic authors donating o/s or outtakes to the cause. Here's their link on FB: https://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_213588222009155



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I saved the link.  Emmett is storing up the gas for the next chapter....which i just happened to post. lol.  hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2011 4:06 PM Title: On The Road Part 1

Sometimes the chapters are just sooo much better from EPOV... I'm Just Sayin.

I think Bella better watch out because Edward is one horny fucker and I don't think he's gonna come up for air for weeks after they are married... again, I'm Just Sayin! ;)



Author's Response:

I think you may be correct.  lol.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:03 PM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

I really liked this chapter, it didn't feel like it was rehashing V&V at all. thanks for writing;D)



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Thank you!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 6:56 PM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

I can just imagine how much pent up gas Emmett had since he hasn't exercised for a few days. It must have been deadly for those paps.  I hope it teaches them to stay away form Edward and his family.  Bella and Edward are having a tought time staying "pure" in their dreams. They might not make it to their wedding reception.



Author's Response:

crossing my fingers for that!  lol.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lmlx8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 6:33 PM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

i adore your edward he is soooooo sweet....thanks for the update it was great



Author's Response:

Thank you! for taking the time to review...I'm horrible because I've been reading yours like crazy but owe you a slew of reviews.  I wouldn't be opposed to your Edward punishing me for that.  :D

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:41 AM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

ooh like usual, soo great. :D I liked Edward's dream. totally get seeing your fiancee's dad in the nude. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now



Author's Response:

lol thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 12:55 PM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

great update !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:31 AM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

I love the way you do his side you tell the same story but just the right parts.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I try.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:31 AM Title: Empire Builder to the Windy City

Morning of molesting Edward? Oh yeah!!
Great chapter!!

Author's Response:

:)  Glad you liked it. thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 11:31 AM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

:~D)



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Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 12:37 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

Edward is right you can't say no to Oprah. Who would not want to be on her show? I will miss it. It was on DVR everyday. I have the Twilight show locked so it can't be erased.



Author's Response:

lol.  I have to confess that I rarely watch her show...I did see the Eclipse episode.  I just have a short attention span.  : )

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2011 3:07 AM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

Grrrr.... I want him shut down! I'm going to get a little picket sign that reads 'Down with James Victor!' or possibly something more catchy... something that rhymes... and glitter...can't forget the glitter...

Of course, I'm fully aware this will make me look like a crazy person, but I don't care! He needs to go down! Oh, we need Oprah power!



Author's Response:

lol  and now we've got Oprah....just need to see what magic she works.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 6:07 AM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

I am amazed that they did not lose ther virginity when she gave him the calander lol.  Who would say no to Oprah???



Author's Response:

lol  very true!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 4:15 AM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

Shameless confession, I ended up voting for you in several categories.  Wow Oprah herself.  Cool reveal.



Author's Response:

Thanks much!  I am very far behind responding to these, I apologize.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 11:57 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

Damn....I was hoping James would be sunk.....that's okay....I'm sure his big mouth will get him canned. Throw in a huge lawsuit and ..... Well, let's hope James knows how to flip burgers!
Great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  We'll see what happens..especially now that Oprah is involved.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 8:15 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

That really sucked that James can do that to Bella.  But at least he has to walk a fine tight rope or pay dearly..  F**King asshole.  I hope he gets his in the end..   

And I do agree bella is strong she can handle it.   I think she should go on opera.  Good news to counter act the Bad.  Doing you think?

Awesome has always..     :)Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Trying to catch up with my review responses.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 5:46 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

a very good chapter even if it was short



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 3:22 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

shoot i was hoping for an insight to what Bella said about oprah



Author's Response:

I am very far behind responding to reviews.  I thank you so much!

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 1:49 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

nice chapter:)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: unicorn_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 1:44 PM Title: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

I think if Edward spoke with the chick's husband about her crossing lines with his privacy and there might be a lawsuit if she doesn't drop the interview. Then her husband would shut it down and give her an ultimatum. He may not know the entertainment intrusdry. But I bet he knows damn well what that kind of lawsuit could to do him and his busness.

I also think more people would be disgusted and pissed about this kind of interview. And probably boycott it for the sake of it all.

It's kind of like that stupid Lifetime Movie the chick from Heros was in. About Amanda Knotts and none of them, who was producing the film. Did any real research. Even the actors didn't do shit real for the movie. It was all embelished and completely untrue. -Also getting promtly sued by both Amanda's perants and the British perants of the girl who was killed.

This kind of interview in real life. Would be slashed and boycotted immedatily. I don't know any company that would actually pick it up. Espeacily, if the person whom they are interviewing is a criminal talking about someone who is still alive. -That's dangerous territory there. And they are looking pretty slimy if they actually go throw with it.

Ever wonder why no one is watching Liftetime anymore? That Amanda Knott's film(which was never aired due to never getting permission from anyone who was involved in the actual case. And also because it's producer is being sued for that very same reason.) was just the tip of the iceburg of many. Which lead to an extreme decrease in audience. But the channel WE is having a blast at Lifetime's idoicy.

Anyways, given how well known Edward's perants are, along with Emmett and Charlie's police status. It's hard to believe this interview will make the light of day. I think the moment they announce the show and what that show would consist of. A lot of people would protest and some even go so far as to stop watching any other shows from that same channel. Just for crossing that line.

Crossing my fingers and hoping that the previews for the show is the only thing that gets out.



Author's Response:

we'll find out soon whether Oprah's influence has been successful.  Thanks so much for the great review, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2011 1:16 PM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

Edward should be thankful he did not have sex with Meghan back in high school. He could have gotten Hiv. It was a mixed blessing. I am glad thay can both close that book forever.



Author's Response:

me too!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2011 5:55 PM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

Wow...

I'm glad she turned her life around and has someone who truly loves her. Major kudos to Edward for letting her say her peace and listening to her. That was very mature of him, and just another example of how he's changed.

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the great review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 8:37 PM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

I am glad that he forgave her it is good for both of them.



Author's Response:

I agree.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 3:55 PM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

Excellent chapter!  Edward did the right thing.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Sorry I'm so late responding to reviews.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 2:50 PM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

He'll feel better, forgiving. This made me remember our train trip from Chicago to Seattle and back last summer. Quite the experience.

 



Author's Response:

i agree.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 11:07 AM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

EPOV better than usual



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 10:59 AM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

Love the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Very sorry I'm behind responding to these reviewing.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 10:45 AM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

I can't wait to see what type of reaction Bella is going to have when Edward tells her about the encounter and what he learned about Meghan.  I am sure that Bella will feel sorry for her and tell Edward that he did the right thing by forgiving her.  After all, He would not be with Bella if everyting worked out with Meghan.  I am upset that James gave her HIV along with I am sure countless others.  I am sure glad that Edward did not do anything sexual with her.  

I can't wait for the next V&V chapter.  Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

me too.  She was young and very stupid...but doesn't deserve this.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 4:40 AM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

I'm glad Edward forgave Meghan. Now he & Bella can go forward with no past horrors unresolved.

Author's Response:

lots of issues are being resolved lately.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 4:11 AM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Awe my gosh poor E. I can't imagine how stressful that would be. 

I'm enjoying reading E's POV



Author's Response:

thanks! I'm glad to hear it.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 4:02 AM Title: Tying Up Loose Ends

Loved it very much and I am excited to see how B takes the news I think that pity was all she deserved Thanks for sharing this and That girl is the reason I support waiting for marriage and drug testing before the marriage see you next update.....



Author's Response:

very true.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: twifanpixie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 6:33 AM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

love the rap. ;)



Author's Response:

lol.  THanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 3:39 AM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

great update !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2011 3:11 AM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

YOu always make E's POV so intriging.  Great chapter.  Love these characters.  Enjoyed the E and Father Pat chat.  I think he needed it.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! next V&V just posted.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 9:42 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

That was Beautiful as always..  :)Leona



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thank you so much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

Emmett just has to tease Edward. But you know Emmett would have done the same or worse if he was there and Edward was in the airplane trying to get there. Emmett might have even hit a few cops. He would not stand there calmly.



Author's Response:

i agree.  he was a mess....probably would have been worse on the scene.  THanks!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 5:44 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

OK I CRIED AND THEN CRIED SOME MORE AND THEN LAUGHED AND THEN LAUGHED MY ASS OF AT EMMETT!!!!  OMG SO FUCKING FUNNY!!!  AND THEY NEEDED THAT MOMENT OF INSANITY!!!!  CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT V&V UPDATE. LOVE YA AND HAVE A GREAT REST OF THE WEEK!!!

SHANNON



Author's Response:

Thank you !  Next V&V posted...hope you like it too.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 3:49 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

**big smiles**
Yay!! So glad for them but honestly.....can't wait for the fluff!

Author's Response:

me too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 1:14 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

loved it and i don't think b will be to happy when she sees the video and finds out he thought she was dead and she may even be pissed when she finds out he was going to end his life thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....



Author's Response:

well..part of that happens in the next V&V...just posted.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 12:56 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

I so hope Emmett shows up in a Grandmaster Edward t-shirt! ;)  I am eager to she Bella's side of things in V&V...I guess I want to see why she feels so guilty about taking the ranger's life, because I wouldn't if I was in her shoes, but it does fit her character.  I also can't wait until Edward gives her the mustang... she does need a new car after all... even if it was just a broken window the reminder of what happened with that car would be too much.



Author's Response:

lol.  she has guilt trips about everything anyway....you touched on an issue (the car) that is addressed in the chapter I just posted.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 12:53 PM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

He'll always be Emo.

 



Author's Response:

that's true...but i'll keep trying. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2011 9:55 AM Title: A Watershed Moment for the Rap Star

What a song WTF I like it LOL.



Author's Response:

i posted a link to the 'bed intruder song' on the facebook...the thing is flipping hilarious.  Thanks so much, glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 6:43 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Poor Edward! This was an excellent chapter. I liked how Charlie got Edward out of trouble with the other cop.  Thank you for writing these two stories. Well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  NExt LRM is now posted.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 1:34 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Wow, just wow!  So much more heart renching reading it from Edward's perspective.  I really LOVE how you had Bella at the hospital and waking up in EPOV...the wait for V&V for this part would have been too long ;). Also, with Bella being unconscious, how would you write all that good stuff?Ü



Author's Response:

he's feeling more emotions than B.  She's just feeling a lot of pain.  Thanks so much! next LRM now posted.

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 3:47 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I love this story & have really enjoyed this little shot of adrenaline to the story. The only thing that confused me- Edward is extremely protective of Bella, even needing to discuss it with his therapist. And after all that happened, he tried to talk EMMETT into going in to see her before him??!! WTF?!

Author's Response:

the only thing i can say is that he remembered emmett's breakdown over the phone and felt he needed to 'see' Bella .  Edward also knew that once he was in that room, he was not leaving...so he was willing to hang back for a few minutes...only a few though.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 8:40 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

;-) !!!
Really great chapter!! Poor Edward - I really felt his fear and pain!

Author's Response:

he's getting better.  next chapter is posted...hope you like it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 6:26 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I am happy that Bella is ok. I was also worried about Edward. He would not have survived without Bella. I hope this help Bella realize that she is a strong person. She needs to emphasize her strengths. She is a survivor and not a victim.



Author's Response:

she's getting there...next LRM is posted.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 7:35 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Loved it and I can't wait to see what will happen next updte when you can Thanks for sharing this with us....



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  next chap is posted.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2011 3:32 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

So exciting to see this from Edward's POV.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing this never ending story....lol.  Next chap is up.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:24 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

No need to beg.  I think you showed E's emotions well.  The cop was just a jerk.  Wow.  I love how everyone rallied.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

next chap is up..i digress into silliness for a bit of it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 10:14 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

Oh, and maybe next time could you add in a little of the fallout from the photos and video of his breakdown?  I find your take on the paps interesting.



Author's Response:

oh my...i think you may like the next chap...it's posted.  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 10:11 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I think that I died a little along with him.  Even knowing what has happened, your writting has made me relive his pain with him.  Although I am sooooooo against suicide, the romance behind this thought made my heart melt to pieces.



Author's Response:

things get easier from here.  next chap is up.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 7:19 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Dammit, you made me cry!

Great chapter. To see his entire world spiraling out of control because of what might have happened to her is frightening.



Author's Response:

Sorry about the crying.  Edward is getting better now..thank heavens.  next chap is up.  Thanks!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:24 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

great chapter!  good thing the ranger is dead, he would have had worse if he had to face Edward and Charlie!



Author's Response:

you got that right..and emmett.  I think Esme wouldve taken a shot at him too.  lol Thanks!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:23 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

that brought tears to my eyes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry . Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:33 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

crying.. all of us.. grr

 



Author's Response:

sorry...happy times straight ahead.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:46 AM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

:'( soo crying right now. that was excellent. Especially the last part. I loved that line that Bella says. Soo sweet. I can't wait for her to wake up. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye for now. P.S. I about died when Edward went weak over news of the body. poor thing



Author's Response:

i know.  his anguish is hard to take.  New V&V is posted. Thanks!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 11:51 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Beautiful!! Thank goodness we didn't have to wait long. Fantastic chapter. Looking forward to the next.



Author's Response:

thanks! next V&V is posted.

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 10:38 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

Ok you were successful in making me cry!!! UGH! It was GREAT. Can't wait fo the next V & V. Have a great weekend I think I am finally crashing after waking up at 2 to start watching the wedding!
Shannon

Author's Response:

i watched a bit of that wedding...not much though...I figured we'd have it rammed down our throats for the next several months if not years...lol.  Glad you liked the chapter...new V&V is now posted.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:34 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

poor Edward, and yes there are those very few asshole cops out there.  My father was a caop and  I take absolutely no offense.  You wrote a wonderful chapter !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! glad you liked it.  new V&V is posted.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:34 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

That cop needs to be de-nutted.  I had tears in my eyes reading this chapter.  I am so happy she is going to be ok and that the f@#%ing bastard that did this to her is dead.



Author's Response:

next V&V is posted.  Glad you liked this one.  THanks so much!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:30 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I cried for Edward..  But why did the cop have to be so mean..  I do know their out there.  We have a couple in this town thier pricks.  and that saying it lightly. haha.    Very heartranching chapter.  awesomely done..  

:)Leona



Author's Response:

some are absolute jerks....and you're not allowed to say much back to them.  Glad you liked the chap.  New V&V just posted.  THanks!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:58 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I for one am very relieved that Bellas back and awake, yes, I was worried, ok.??!! I wonder after all this happening and Edward and Bella realizing how precious and short likfe is, will they still wait till they are married to make love??? I hope all the crazy times are behind them and the fun can begin!!  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

fluffy times ahead.  the new V&V is now posted.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:54 PM Title: A Journey in the Dark for the Defeated

I have always enjoyed someone begging but in this case you deserve a reward



Author's Response:

thanks much! new V&V is posted.

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 1:34 AM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Please post very, very soon, the wait is agonizing.



Author's Response:

new one is up now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 1:20 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

I love the storyin E's pov!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  the new chap is posted

Reviewer: blb0157 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2011 12:35 AM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Oh PLEASE HURRY WITH the next chapter......I aleady reaqd V&V and know that they find her....but hearing Edward's version is gut wrenching.....get him off the floor and into bella's arms

 

Brenda



Author's Response:

next one is now posted...enjoy.  THanks.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:58 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Oh I cannot imagine his pain.  What must he be thinking?



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next chap is posted... Thanks !

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 5:37 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Why didn't Bella do the smart thing and check the hospital before she left Seatle? You never just leave without all the information. Bella promised Edward she would stay in the apartment. Now everyone is going crazy and she could be hurt because she didn't think things through before she acted. She new there was a crazy person after her.



Author's Response:

she wasn't thinking..that much is clear.  next chap of LRM is now posted. Thanks.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:52 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

poor Edward can't wait for next chapter



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next one is now posted.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:34 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

omg my heart isin my stomach,   or my stomach is in my throat,  my head is pounding and i am googling to get your address to find out what happens!!!!!!  update v & V asap !!!!!



Author's Response:

next chapter of LRM is posted now.  THanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:32 PM Title: The Stuff of Nightmares...

So exciting!  This is the reason I love that you are taking the time to give us EPOV!  I really wanted to see how he found out and his reaction.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

wish granted...next chapter is posted now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 6:05 PM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

;D)



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thanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 12:26 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Loved it very much I got a note from TWCS that reviews were being done but for some reason they were not posting Just to let you know loved it very much I hope i'm caught up I guess we will see.....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm behind with responding to reviews...I've got a ton to do!  I really appreciate you reading and reviewing every time!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:26 AM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Oh dear god, I wondered what happened when he got the photo.  So sweet.



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lol..poor jasper.  Thanks!

Reviewer: thinkingboutyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:50 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

YESS Jasper! thats my kind of man:)



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he's such a decent guy.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:02 AM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

So sad for him to having his nightmares when he is not with Bella but the dreams he has when with her I would say he is going to have blue ball



Author's Response:

lol...very true.  Maybe he's used to that by now?    nah..  Thanks!

Reviewer: lovetoplay2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:30 AM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Oh how I love EPOV- especially this chapter! Thanks! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 10:49 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

That was a really funny chapter.  even with the Baby case.  awesome has always.  :)Leona



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:57 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

LOL Love how Jasper intercepted the picture lol!!! Keep it up!! I always love hearing Edward's POV!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love to hear that.

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 5:18 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can thanks....



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Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:34 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

The car scene was so funny. I could just picture Edward diving for the phone. It was a good thing it was Jasper. He at least blushed and kept his mouth shut. Alec would have said a whole lot. Jasper just got a little closer to his future sister in law that is all.



Author's Response:

we've seen Rob do that diving move before...when Kristen tried to unbutton his shirt backstage at Oprah.  lol.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:01 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

lol, too funny with leno,  and then the phone with jasper,  thank god it was't alec



Author's Response:

Letterman is in the next chap.  I enjoyed writing that one also.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 4:01 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

Loved it!! I like you intertwine their POV's. Edward's dream & Bella's reality on the boob squeeze & thrusts! Great job!

Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:18 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 2:53 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE STILL LOVING IT!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE HAVE A GREAT DAY!!

MWAH

SHANNON



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 1:44 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

So glad for Edwards take on things.

 



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Thanks very much!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 1:36 PM Title: Getting Closer to a Happily Ever After

The naughty pic to Edward in his POV was priceless!!  Bella would die if she knew Jasper saw it... so the next time Jasper & Bella are together in V&V I am totally going to wonder if Jasper is thinking about seeing it and I sure he would be acting more embarassed than anything...hee hee.  Unless he tells Alice, then it's a matter of time before Bella finds out, ;)  I was also dying at the nighttime "cope a feel" scene from EPOV (or should I say dream),,, I wonder if Bella will ever tell him?  I am so glad you're writing both POV!Ü



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks glad you liked the chapter.  poor Jasper...but then again he knows how to play it cool.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:08 PM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

that was such a funny interchange it was great to read again. This has been nice reading Edward's point of view.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm always glad to hear from folks who are reading both stories...makes all that effort very much worth it!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:37 AM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Wow, you've just about caught up, huh?

Love drunk Edward just as much as I do Drunkella! "I can hold it just fine, right here in my fucking hand, motherfucker." Too freakin' funny!



Author's Response:

haha  i liked that line too.  okay so just posted the next LRM...and I've been working on the next V&V so it won't be long until I post that.  Thanks !

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:26 PM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Ha ha, Team Charlie, my sister told me when she went to see the Eclipse movie @ midnight there were a bunch of fan girls chanting Team Jacob vs others chanting Team Edward, she said she yelled Team Charlie. She was alone in her cheer;-D



Author's Response:

lol.  Well, i'd feel super creepy shouting Team Jacob...Taylor is so freakin young.  I could be team Edward since he's actually really old...but Rob isn't so...Team Charlie works for me!  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 7:54 AM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Yes that song is in my head now to funny.



Author's Response:

LOL.  I really like that song...  always have.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2011 6:41 AM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back

I will say again I love that you did his POV.  I can see that he means well but goes about things the wrong way.



Author's Response:

yes.. he tends to react without thinking when it comes to Bella.  thanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 10:41 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

Hhaha.  that is funny..    and poor Edward at least he is confiding in Bella.   and so glade you have caught up.  wow.   Don't forget to take time for yourself and RL.    Havea great day :)Leona



Author's Response:

don't worry..i have a full life...gets on my nerves how freakin full it is!  You'd be surprised how much 'down time' I can squeeze in when I want to write.  Thanks!  I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

Reviewer: Eric Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 10:38 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

I am thoroughly enjoying both this and V&V's very much. Keep up the fine work and thank you for how much enjoyment you are giving the readers of fan-fiction. I read fan-fic everyday and this is only the second time I have left a review. Elley (Eric {as in Trueblood})

Author's Response:

That's very flattering!  Thanks so much!  I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 7:19 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite

lol and yes you evil woman......   it is on repeat inmy head now as i type



Author's Response:

lol..i admit to being evil.   I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.

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