[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:41 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite
:-)
Author's Response:
thanks. I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:27 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite
Edward really needs to find something else to drink besides Wild Turkey, if he is going to drink. It is his kryptonite.
Author's Response:
Alice and Bella are making sure that Wild Turkey is banned from the bar at the reception. I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:13 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite
Nice hearing from Edward.
Can't wait for the false allegation fallout!
It's gonna be good; I can tell!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! I just posted a sneak peek to chapter 59 of V&V on the blog and Facebook page.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:33 PM Title: Male Bonding for the Contrite
I really appreciate you writing such detailed EPOVs! To some authors it's just an afterthought, but your EPOVs really tell the other side of the story. And I refuse to read stories without it anyway! (Exception - MOTU - but then who doesn't read that?) Looking forward to the next update!
Shannon
Author's Response:
oh but MOTU's epov's are TO DIE For aren't they? I hope she can incorporate those into the books somehow. Thanks very much...now i'm distracted thinking about 50 shades....lol.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 8:10 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
Poor Edward. He just needed tiime to think. He wasn't pushing her away. He was needed to think how to fix this mess. Everyone at some point needs some alone time to think. Bella needs to respect that idea. Not everyone is clingy like she is when they are in trouble. Edward has been a loner. He will gi to her when he is done thinking things through. Then they will talk and plan. It is just a different way to deal with stress.
Author's Response:
In the next LRM he will actually deal with the fact that he doesn't let anyone help with his problems. Bella always has relied on others...Edward is the exact opposite. This is more difficult for him. He's been alone dealing with stuff for 7 years....so we'll see. Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:12 AM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
I really was curious about the phone call and Ess thoughts. I love that we are all caught up.
Author's Response:
we are caught up now...i just posted chap 58 of LRM...now back to V&V. Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:15 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
So he did not run away.. he just need time to think.. But he should of said that to Bella. Awesome has always.. :)Leona
Author's Response:
he'll learn. Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:35 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
Gotta feel bad for Eddie here. He must have felt so cheap being groaped as a form of payment... *shudders*
I have to be honest, I kind of wanted to see Sidney lay the smack down on Granny XD
Author's Response:
LOL...u are so bad. Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:30 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
Thank you! Love hearing Edwards POV. Loony tunes grandma! Classic!
So excited to see the two stories melding!
Great job!
Author's Response:
We are finally caught up! yay! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:25 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
oh crap, i wish you had gone just a little farther and then broke off for the next chapter. oh well love EPOV as always !!!!!
Author's Response:
i broke off at the same point as in V&V...keeps me from getting confused. Believe me, I need all the help I can get! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:51 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
as ever, another good chapter
Author's Response:
thanks much!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:43 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
Wow and by trying to avoid hurting her He hurt her more then if he had just stayed and talk to her bummer Loved it and thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.......
Author's Response:
he is thick skulled sometimes. Thanks!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:36 PM Title: Two Steps Forward, Three Steps Back
oh no - Edward walking away again -- will he nver learn
Author's Response:
it's really bad when you have to read it twice...in V&V then again in LRM. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:51 AM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
Loved it very much FFn is a total fail today so I can only update here but I will when it gets fixed thanks for sharing this with us I have a bad feeling about those dreams....
Author's Response:
ffn is starting to fail on a regular basis....I can't see any traffic on any of my stories again...that's just the latest problem...frustrating! Thanks very much!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 8:49 AM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
That was great and Edward with a semi is a wonderful thing lol
Author's Response:
lol...i don't even know what to say.... Thanks!
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:03 AM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
You are amazing. I had recently found V&V and read it straight through to the current chaper then began on LRM. You have a great way of melding the good, the bad, and the hysterical. I am looking forward to the next chapters of both!
Author's Response:
That was very nice of you to say. I thank you very much! Lots more to come...I can promise that!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:41 PM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
This wedding better get here soon or Edward is not going to make it. He might be a virgin, but it is only because he never found his soulmate. Now that he found Bella he seems to be always be sporting at least a semi. His mind over matter might not continue to work now that he is near Bella on a daily basis.
Author's Response:
you may be right...it's getter more difficult by the minute. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 3:08 PM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
Oh Edward.....***sigh***
Great job!
Author's Response:
the poor boy's a mess. Thanks!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 12:00 AM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
lol poor Edward! I love that shy virgin edward has no problem saying pussy. lol that's great. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye for now
Author's Response:
He'll call himself that out loud...but if he's thinking about Bella's body parts...he'll only think it. lol. He needs to loosen up. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2011 6:56 PM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
Has always I love Edwards pov. that was some interesting bathroom break. luck the boys come down. I would hate to see what would have happened.
The nightmares he is having is that due to the threats that Bella are getting? You know what you dream some of it comes true.. That would not be good? Well I can't wait to see his pov for the next chapters.. That going to sting.. okay Have a great day.. :)Leona
Author's Response:
Edward is kind of a mess right now. The next two chaps of his POV are really long too. He had a lot to say I suppose...lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2011 12:09 PM Title: Night Terrors for the Fatigued
great job
Author's Response:
Thanks very much!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Kayso... I have learned my lesson: Always read the updates to LRM when they post! If I had read this before the llast update to V&V, I soooo totally would've understood Edward's behavior in pushing Bella away in the last chapter. Unfortunately, I think Edward's fears have merit... I keep waiting for something with the anon flower douche to happen too. I am very egar to read Edward's perspective of the prom, the time he spent during the obligation to the Katie girls b-day party (with gropin grandma-lmao), and all that went down with the phone call from Jasper that left the last chappie of V&V with some tension.
Author's Response:
thank you very much. I've been getting a little grief over the latest V&V... but that means readers are passionate about the story. it's all good! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:29 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Yay!! Getting closer!
Great job....Edward is perfection! Lucky girl!
Author's Response:
he's not completely perfect...as we found out in the latest V&V...sorry for that btw. Thanks!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 2:32 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
I am with Edward. I could have done without the jock talk about dicks. No wonder guys are clueless about their friends. They don't really talk to them about anything important. I would have hated to be sitting next to them in the restaurant. They were probably very loud.
I love the part with Edward taking care of Bella's creepy guy at work. He did it with a lot of class.
Author's Response:
i agree with everything you said. dudes are just gross sometimes...and i surprise even myself when I'm able to write about it. lol. Glad you like the stories...Thanks!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:57 AM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
He needs to talk about them dreams if not to Bella then to someone else. He is such a sweet guy. Mrs. Hernandez is one lucky women and Eddie is also very lucky to have such a nice person taking care of him.
Author's Response:
i know...i can't wait until Bella meets her. She's a character. Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 7:36 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
I got a bad feeling about the nightmares...
Author's Response:
he will have them for a while.... Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 5:25 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
lol poor Edward. he had to sit and listen to my dick jokes. lol too funny. thanks again bye p.s. Edward is one scary mo fo! lol
Author's Response:
obviously i had fun writing this chapter...i may now know as many dick jokes as the average frat boy. lol. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 4:15 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Were close to being caught up right not close to the end please Loved it very much and update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
the end is far far away....almost another galaxy....many months away in the story. i'll probably do a sequel too so, no worries. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 5:39 AM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
I LOVED it. Edward was funny but protective when he needed to be.. awesome.. :)Leona
Author's Response:
he tries hard not to go overboard. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 5:17 AM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Actually I really enjoyed these chapters from E's POV. Great update. I love these characters.
Author's Response:
wow...even with the peen refs? You're an awesome reader! lol Thanks!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:24 AM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
omg your last lien is about Emmett's dick. rofl
Author's Response:
i know. i apologize. i am so inappropriate. lol Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 11:28 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
where's Bellas post this week doesn't it usually come first
Author's Response:
nope...Edward is still behind Bella. the next chap for V&V is number 57. Epov is completed thru 54 now. Getting closer. Thank God! I hope you liked it...tried to add more stuff in Edward's that wasn't already covered by V&V.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 11:02 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
:)
Author's Response:
thank you somuch! always love the smiley!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:41 PM Title: Some Peace of Mind for the Jet-Lagged
Great chapter. I thought the confrontation with James was well done, but I bet that's not the last we'll see of him.
Author's Response:
hey you! have I told you how much i adore these banners? well i do. i thank you again for them and for reading and reviewing! and you are right...we will see james again. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:14 PM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
OMG... I was totally eating oatmeal when I read that phone call with Esme. Do you know how gross oatmeal is to clean up? lol...
Great chapter. I loved how Edward told that interviewer off. It was kinda hot. You know what else was hot? Johnny Depp. I just spent my Spring Break doing a museum tour, and of course one was a wax museum. I totally took my picture with Johnny Depp. *sigh*
There was also an Edward and Bella set-up. I was sooo disappointed. It looked nothing like them! Not that that stopped me from getting a picture with them too ;)
Author's Response:
sorry about your oatmeal disaster. Emmett is usually the culprit in these situations. I don't know what the heck got into Esme. lol. Glad you enjoyed it. If you liked him telling off the radio dude...you will love when he meet Victor James in the chapter of LRM I just posted. Thanks!
Date: 16 Mar 2011 10:31 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
The press can be so cruel to people. Edward did not deserve to be treated like bad. I never understood the presses need to out people. Who cares if people are gay or not and if they are it is their news to tell when they are ready. Edward made some mistakes in his youth, but who doesn't.
Author's Response:
precisely my point. Just because they're celebrities...people think they own a piece of them. it's not fair. Thanks very much! check out the sneak peek of the next V&V now posted onthe blog.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:31 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
love love love it............ and yes parents do love to embasse you. haha. it was very cute.. we all need someone to depend on a little.. to keep us grounded.. Jonny Depp. yummy. but Edward is yummier. hahah
Author's Response:
i agree with you on ...everything. lol. Thanks very much! check out the sneak peek of the next V&V now posted on the blog.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:24 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can Boy did he go off in that interviewBut the guy was a jerk have a good week end....
Author's Response:
thanks very much! the next chap of V&V is almost finished. I've posted a sneak peek on the blog
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:13 PM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
catching up
Author's Response:
i know, i'm thrilled. There's a sneak peek of the next V&V now posted on the blog. Thanks!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:28 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
That pissed Edward off that guy thinking that what Edward has with Bella is anything but pure love Simon is lucky he didnt get punched in the nose. Esme love her she is one sexy momma bear.
Author's Response:
i love her too. i think Bella may have her hands full with both Esme and Alice now in her family! Thanks so much! sneak peek of the next V&V is now posted on the blog.
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:23 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
I really enjoyed this one. The skyping, JD interaction, etc.
Really well done!
Author's Response:
thankx very much! there's a sneak peek of next V&V on the blog. Take care.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:35 AM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
As always I love EPOV. Esme cracks my shit up! Although I have to agree with Edward. It is a little disturbing to share sex tidbits with the folks. It's like committing verbal incest. I loved how he blew up at Simon, but that may have fueled him to seek out his real reason for privacy. I hope that doesn't happen.
Author's Response:
Esme...lol. I agree completely about Simon. These things do have a way of backfiring. Glad you like it. sneak peek for the next V&V is now on the blog. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2011 11:24 PM Title: Sage Advice For The Overworked
once again , ilove getting edwards pov. Love having johnny in there.
Author's Response:
me too. I just posted a sneak peek of the next V&V on the blog. new chap soon!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:21 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula
Human stalker moments are good.
Author's Response:
Edward can stalk me any time. Emmett is forbidden...although he wakes me up from time to time with something silly he wants me to write about. annoying. Thanks!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 7:02 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son
Love getting to know the family better. The biggest thing that shocked me about Seattle was the homeless people. Even in Chicago it didn't seem so bad. My son said it was because the weather in Seattle was much more bearable. Granted Illinois winters can be brutal. Seattle shuts down if it snows, of course they have so little no one needs to know how to drive. It's an instand shut down the city.
Author's Response:
sounds like the south....one snowflake and everyone starts wigging out. lol. I'm the child of yankee parents living in the south with a very southern husband. (yeah..he had ancestors in Jamestown and is a descendant of Pocahontas...what am I supposed to do with that? lol ) reason 57 of why i drink (on occassion)...
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:30 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart
I agree don't like overkill but it's always enoyable getting into his head.
Author's Response:
he definitely has his moments... i love a nervous edward.lol
Date: 09 Mar 2011 2:15 PM Title: A Breath Of Fresh Air For The Punk'd
That reporter must have had a big problem for it to take out a room full of men. I wonder if he did know Emmett. Edward might be on to something. Who set up these appointments? They sounded like crazy people. I am glad he found a nice couple to take care of his cottage.
Author's Response:
lol.. Emmett actually had nothing to do with it...the 'crazy' just followed poor Edward to England. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:55 AM Title: A Breath Of Fresh Air For The Punk'd
loved it like always and I am so excited for more thanks for sharing this with us....
Author's Response:
thank you for your wonderful reviews!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:04 PM Title: A Breath Of Fresh Air For The Punk'd
aww that old couple was perfect for the job. can't wait for another chapter of V&V. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
it's nice to introduce some 'normal' people into the story once in a while..lol. Thanks very much!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 10:23 AM Title: A Breath Of Fresh Air For The Punk'd
That was to funny with the farting and Emmett playing a prank I am sure Emmett would like to take credit for something like that LOL
Author's Response:
he most definitely would. lol Thanks so much!
Date: 08 Mar 2011 10:09 AM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool
I cant believe you are almost caught up. I love Edward POV he has dirty thoughts lol
Author's Response:
lol. well he is male. Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:26 AM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool
So cute!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2011 9:11 PM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool
That was so sweet.. He is always protecting her. even on the other side of the world. He love her so much.
:) Leona
Your story is awesome I love both pov.
Author's Response:
very true. I can't wait until the two stories are caught up...i'm working hard to get there. Thanks very much!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2011 4:13 PM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool
Well I am leaving my review, type an extra word or two for me. I think these two are adorable can't wait for their wedding and night.
Author's Response:
i can't wait either. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 12:56 PM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool
just wanted to say thanks for writing lrm. it is nice to have companion pieces that go together !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It makes the effort worthwhile when I get positive reviews..I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:52 AM Title: Sweet Torture For The Lovesick Fool
Loved it very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next were very close together which means were getting close to the action thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can.....
Author's Response:
getting very close. I personally can't wait! Thanks so much!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 5:49 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
I'm loving this story and am very glad you've included EPOV. It's always my favorite- but especially in this story. I know why Bella is so hesitant for a physical relationship, but I'm hoping (along w/Edward!) that she will want to broaden her horizons now that they clearly have a permanent commitment. If she's not ready now, what could possibly make her ready once they're married?? And although I understand that everyone in Bella's life is very protective of her, it bothered me just a bit how "afraid" Bella seemed to be of Charlie's reaction to Edward asking for her hand. Would she not marry him if Charlie didn't agree?? She is an adult, and really should start acting that way. I guess that's why I like EPOV better- even though he's been through hell as well, he just seems to think more like I would expect someone in their situation should, and she seems so immature. I do love this story though, and I hope you don't think I'm trying to knock the characters. I just figured you might appreciate how they seem to others. You're a GREAT writer, and it's fun to read a plot with so many twists and turns. I'll be looking forward to more! Thanks :)
Author's Response:
we'll have to see what happens with the physical aspect of their relationship...they will eventually 'do the deed'. I believe I would insist that Emmett be at least a thousand miles away. lol. She's not really afraid of Charlie, but he's the only parent she has left, and she desperately wants his approval. She would still have married Edward, but it would have broken her heart if Charlie hadn't approved. Little by little she is coming out from under her family's over-protectiveness. she's trying. Edward's not perfect, he's just worked a lot of thinks out in his head. He's quite an isolated soul. Thanks very much!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:00 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
Edward is so patient with Bella. He chastizes himself when he gets aroused, but he is so amazing. I hope Bella gets over her inhibitions soon. She has to know Edward loves her and would never hurt her. She has to trust him. It is time to get over her past if she wants to grow and have a normal adult future.
Author's Response:
getting there, little by little. Here's the sneak peek for the next V&V just in case you missed it, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:00 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
So, the end of this chapter...much more intimate in EPOV. I don't know why that is, it's not like he's any more experienced than she is. Hmm... ;)
Author's Response:
horndogs rule! lol. Thanks! Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2011 10:56 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
I liked this version of the intimate scene as it still showed Edward as the gentleman he is, but still pushing towards a more intimate giving of themselves. Very nicely done.
Author's Response:
thanks very much ! Here's the link for the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:47 PM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together
This was an awesome chapter. I actually cried when I read the part when Alice and Edward watched Bella sleep. Very touching.
Author's Response:
that was very sweet. Thanks very much!
Date: 27 Feb 2011 7:48 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
I almost forgot about their little experiment in the sack. They sre deifuntalu cuute.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Here's the link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2011 6:27 AM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
Oh Lover boy you diid great Like she will say No ya right thanks for sharing this moment with us.....
Author's Response:
glad you enjoyed that!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2011 5:12 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
glad you liked it. Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:07 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
great stories are almost caght up to each other
Author's Response:
yes, i can't wait. Here's the link to the sneak peek again, in case you missed it: http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:49 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
so well written, love your story and style of writing!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! just in case you didn't get the link for the sneak peek of the next V&V here it is again: http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:03 AM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
He is such the romantic with blue balls LOL
Author's Response:
lol..too true! Here's a sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:24 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
That was beauitful. Can't wait for the next chapter and for the next chapter of V&V.. have a great weekend. Smiles Leona
Author's Response:
thanks! just in case you didn't get the link for the sneak peek..here it is again: http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:21 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
I loved seeing the proposal through Edward's eyes! He's such a romantic. Poor guy's really getting the blue balls now...I wouldn't have blamed him for embarrassing himself just getting to second base!
As much as I love LRM, I can't wait until the next chapter of V&V to see the reunion!!
Author's Response:
wish granted...here's the link for a sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 26 Feb 2011 8:30 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
update update update!!!!!.....I am sick and instead of sleeping saw the update and had to read!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. here's a link for the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:41 PM Title: A Sigh Of Relief For The Betrothed
Damn.....that was so unbelievably sweet & sexy!!
Again....pure perfection...he's ruin it for all other men! ;)
Author's Response:
thanks again! see the link for the sneak peek: http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:19 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
Again....he's perfect! Completely agree with Gordon.....he makes all men look likes asses!
Great job....so glad the two stories are getting closer together!
Author's Response:
Thanks! here's the link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:49 PM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen
Before you get the wrong idea from the following review, I want you to know that I am really loving this story. Especially this chapter because Edward's comments are priceless (especially the ones in his head). Here is just one point of criticism that you could take or leave. If you are going to write out full verses of the songs, at least write some actions to go with them (such as the Prince song). I know you through in some here and there, but I don't see it necessary to pretty much write the whole song into the chapter of songs we almost all know.
My second is more of a question than a criticism. It seems weird that Bella, Rose, and Alice would go out drinking the night before a photoshoot. Especially with how Rose is so "appearance conscious" and Alice would want them to look the best. I don't think they would have somehow went to bed early, not stay out singing.
Author's Response:
the song verses...eh sometimes I just get carried away. I'm seeing Prince's video in my head during Kiss..lol. As for the drinking..i think I was channeling my 21 year old self ..those were the days when i could go out and drink and wake up looking like a million bucks ...not letting on to anyone how crappy i felt. lol. My hangovers were always worse on the second day for some reason. Now it only takes 2 drinks, or none at all, for me to embarrass the family! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:06 AM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
hi
I would love to pimp you out. But niece and her friends are to young to read from hear. haha. but she does read fanfiction but only the ones she is allowed. to bad she would love your story. soon thou. I love Edward pov on this. your fantastic writer. Thanks. I can't wait for the next chapter.
have a great weekend Smiles Leona..
Author's Response:
Thanks! Here's a link to the sneak peek for the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:28 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
As i have said before, I LOVE EPOV... He is such a romantic. I love hearing his take on B's thoughts and actions. I wish he was a little more strict with Alec. It is disrespectful what he has done and Lady Gigi could have been out for a story or goods even. Just because she doesn't talk about it doesn't mean that she is not after it. I also kinda wish you would have finished the proposal scene in this chappie.
Author's Response:
i don't want to give anything away, but he's not through with Alec yet. Here's a link to the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:01 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
ohhh evil woman........... lea ving us as he drops down on one knee. :)
Author's Response:
lol. Thanks! Here's the link for the sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 25 Feb 2011 7:42 AM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
so beautiful
Author's Response:
thank you! Here's a sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:53 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
I am enjoying both of them
Author's Response:
Glad to hear that. thanks! Here's a sneak peek of the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 24 Feb 2011 8:36 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
give me give me give me!!!!! I literally dropped everything I was doing to read your update!
Author's Response:
lol. glad you like the stories. Here's a sneak peek to the next V&V enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 24 Feb 2011 8:17 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
I really enjoy this story and Virgins and Villains!! You make it so easy to fall in love with this Bella and Edward! Thank you!!
Author's Response:
Thank you also for reading and reviewing! here's a link to the 'sneak peek' of the next V&V, enjoy. http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:13 PM Title: Prelude To A Proposal
I love reading Edward's view. It fills in the blanks and is sometimes better the second time around. I think I liked this chapter best in his view. You could just feel all of his love and his anxiety waiting for the big moment.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Here's a link to the sneak peek for the next V&V, enjoy! http://virginsandvillains.blogspot.com/2011/02/teaser-for-chapter-54.html
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:05 PM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
Great Chapter, I was glad Bella was able to surprise Edward. And that is too funny how Edward threatened about Alec about bringing skanks into the hotel [given that we know what happens in BPOV of the other story].
I love reading both of these stories and have no idea how you find the time and energy to write distinctly from 2 different POVs. But I really enjoy seeing these events from Edward's eyes, and I like his more sexual thoughts and emotions, because let's face it, he may be a virgin, but he is still a boy :)
Author's Response:
absolutely true! glad you appreciate that...poor frustrated boy. lol. Thanks very much for your lovely review!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:45 PM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
AWWW!!! Bella's there! I think I like Edward's thoughts almost as much as I love reading Bella's. :D keep up the great work and thanks again!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:52 PM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
ONCE AGAIN LOVED THE CHAPTER. HOPE YOU DON'T MIND, BUT I HAVE PIMPED YOU OUT!!! ON THE FICTIONATORS SITE THEY HAVE A SECTION ON "WHAT IS PWNING YOU" I AND SUBMITTED THIS AND V&V!!! ALL BECAUSE I LOOK SOOOO FORWARD TO UPDATES ON BOTH OF THESE!!! HOPE IT GET'S POSTED THIS WEEK SO YOU HAVE MORE READER'S
HAPPY HEART DAY
SHANNON
Author's Response:
I'm totally stoked that you pimped me out! how exciting..I'm going to watch for it on that website....THanks so much!! hey if you want to pimp me on twific pimps..feel free..lol.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:38 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
Loved it!!! It was great to see how his day was when he couldn't talk to Bella and his reaction to her being there! Keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 9:16 PM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
That was so sweet! No Bella & Edward goes into withdrawals!
Loved it....cannot wait for the merge!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 6:18 PM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
I love Edward's POV. It was interesting to get the skinny on what happens without Bella. Like Alice asking for the ring as soon as she arrived. That is just priceless.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 5:43 PM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
looking foward to this part on lrm !!! Good chapter, love edwards talk with Alec.
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:41 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
I love hearing his point of veiw and how worried he is for Bella. I think it was cool that he called Charlie and then Charlie refured to Bella as there girl. I cant wait to hear more about how the visit went from his POV.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 2:31 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
Wow. we both new that he is pathetic with out Bella. hahah. God it is awesome to see into his mind. it is so fasicnating.. I can't wait until the chap that he proposses to Bella.
They are such cute and sappy couple.
well have a good night. Smiles Leona
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 2:23 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
It's love having Edward's POV after reading in V&V. Now the whole part when Bella arrives to the hotel suite in England and encounters Alec (and um a "friend") is much more interesting...hee hee!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 1:31 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
Lobed it very much thanks for sharing this with us and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks......
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap.
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
any probs, let me know.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:49 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
I am really enjoying hearing both sides of the story. I'm not sure which one I like more. I'm thinking LRM. Thanks so much for writing them both!
Lisa
Author's Response:
thank you for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap:
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
Let me know if you have any probs.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:21 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
Aw, Edward's POV of seeing Bella in England was so cute! I think that made up for the missed Skype session! I can't wait to see his version of the proposal!!
I'm also looking forward to seeing Edward go after Alec for fucking in the sitting room - and what, two days after he told him not to?!
So those NDA's are null and void...how long until people figure out that Edward's still holding his v-card? Seems to be right around the corner...
Keep up the great work...I love both LRM and V&V!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap:
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
Let me know if you have any probs.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:09 AM Title: Distractions For The Homesick Protagonist
you go girl
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing...here's the link to the sneak peek of V&V's next chap:
http://www.facebook.com/#!/notes/virgins-villains-fanfic/sneak-peek-vv-chap-53/141470895917050
If you have any probs...let me know.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:04 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together
Loved his perspective of the belly dancing!! Great chapter!! Can't wait for Bella's visit, even more when he finds her in his trailer!! Keep it up!!!
Author's Response:
next one is posted. Glad you liked this one. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:15 PM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together
So cute! Yes, I see that the two are getting closer & closer!
Author's Response:
very close now. just posted the next one. Thanks!
Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:14 PM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together
lol he was trying to be a gentleman and Bella just wasn't having that. lol I loved that chapter thanks again bye
Author's Response:
poor Edward. Just posted the next one. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2011 8:05 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together
Loved it very much and I was so excited to see the house in his POV update when you can thanks......
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! next one is up now.
Date: 10 Feb 2011 6:59 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together
I thought for sure he would have a one on one with his hand instead of a cold shower. He was rather put out...
Author's Response:
i refuse to write about Edward having sex with anything or anyone before he has it with Bella. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing! just posted the next one.