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Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 4:03 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

That I would like to find out..   MMMM..  bad Alex... 

Love your story.  Smiles Leona

Ps.  have a great night. 



Author's Response:

next chapt just posted.  Glad you liked this one.  Thanks!

Reviewer: hautefoodie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:12 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

Ew - I think I need to take a shower after Alec's little scene!  And the "disco stick" comment...double ew!  Poor Edward having to deal with that.  Too bad Alec's lesson didn't take, as Bella caught him in the main room too!  I hope Edward has lots of hand sanitizer!

I loved seeing the backstory behind buying Tolkien's house.  Edward is so romantic!!



Author's Response:

glad you liked it.  I think the most disgusting part was the Lady Gaga line...but that's my opinion..lol  Alec is gross...maybe he will learn eventually.  Maybe Edward needs that hazmat suit...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 2:42 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

Oh, the timing is perfect!!! While Bella was freaking out about the skype dance, Edward was planning a purposal =)

Great, great update!

LOL...loved seeing Edward trip over himself to get to Drunkella.



Author's Response:

glad you enjoyed that..just posted the next one.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 2:41 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

bella get brave when she is drunk



Author's Response:

that she does.  I think she's starting to get more self-confidence when sober too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 12:52 AM Title: A Perfect Plan Comes Together

love the story  :)   my favorite part !!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it.  more to come...  thanks!

Reviewer: Mrs M Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:49 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

I'm loving the EPV of V&V, keep it up!!!



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you like it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 5:58 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

I think it is funny all of the precations Edward takes to make sure none of Alec's girls get near his bedroom. He is such a good guy. I also love the Tiffany's scene. That was sweet.



Author's Response:

he won't fire Alec though...i think he believes that there's hope for him...some day.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:59 AM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

I just love him because his is so in love.



Author's Response:

that is very true.  They're both sappy.  Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:58 AM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

Well when he and Bella finally do the DEED. It will take  you a chapter to tell that one! I have another story I have read that was slow building, when they got to that part it was so beautiful. You almost cried with them.

 

 



Author's Response:

as i have said before...we need to make sure Emmett is very far away when it happens...God only knows what he's capable of.  lol.  THanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:25 AM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

hurry back



Author's Response:

i'm here!  lol  just posted another V&V for your enjoyment.  back to LRM...still trying to catch them up.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 10:28 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

Wow.  Like I said it nice to have Ed pov.  He couldn't even enjoy himself without her.  Except with the other actors.  Because they were in the same vote.   Awww so sweet.  I can't wait to see his reaction on Bella being there.  hahaha.   Have a great day.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

he's kind of pathetic.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:09 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

:)   can't wait for the belly danicing



Author's Response:

coming up next actually!  THanks!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:16 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

Loved it very much and thanks for sharing this with us.....



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:13 PM Title: Symbol Of Eternity For The Anxious Suitor

I actually thought it was sweet that they couldn't bear to disconnect skype!
Good job! Edward is too perfect for words!

Author's Response:

i know...i keep expecting him to do something bad....better not hold my breath for that one.  lol.  thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:28 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

I love Edward!!!!  LOL



Author's Response:

me too!  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 10:43 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

love the talk with Charlie,  I felt you did a geta job.  !!!!   :)  

Enjoy some Fl Sunshine from me !!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I need some warm weather!!  Glad you liked the chap!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:33 AM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Loved the talk with Charlie and cracked up at father Pat's insight.  I LOVE Edward's POV.



Author's Response:

poor edward doesn't realize how obvious he is...although Bella remains oblivious most of the time.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: read522 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:24 AM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

Great chapter!  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks! glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:14 AM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

After getting Edward's POV on the first day he's gone to London I realize that he's got it much worse than Bella...at least she has Em, Rose & her Dad.  Poor Edward has Alec (and Jasper & Alice); hopefully the work will keep him from brooding too much.  I can't wait until his POV for the proposal...*sigh*!!!

On another note...I started Parma High (the rec you gave at the end of V&V last chap).  I love it!!!  I did tell Lady Gwynedd how I stumbled onto her story ;). 



Author's Response:

Edward is in a bad way.  At least back in L.A. Alice keeps him from being too much of a hermit...in London he's just sad.  Parma High is great.  If you have a chance, read some of her other stories....I enjoy her writing.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 1:02 AM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

So cute!! Charlie was cool!
Love nervous, shy, normal, real Edward!!
Great job! Cant wait for more. I see the "blend" soon!

Author's Response:

it's definitely getting closer.  just posted another LRM..V&V will be next.  THanks!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 12:53 AM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Wow.  it is so nice to have Edward pov.   awesome writing..  Have a great night.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2011 12:19 AM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Awe I forgot what he had said when she was sleeping with his shirt. "I wish I was in it." Awe, sooo sweet. That's a good one :)

I really liked the talk he had with Charlie! I was wondering what was said...

Thanks so much for the update.



Author's Response:

thanks!  LRM is catching up with V&V....yay!   I'll be so glad when I finally get there!  Glad you liked the chapter!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:58 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

Just think about how your chapters help all of us readers with OUR winter blahs!  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

gosh, i hope the stories help...thank you for that!  just updated LRM again...more V&V up next.

Reviewer: hautefoodie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:45 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

I LOVE Charlie!! My favorite line:  "You're a jittery little fucker".  Fucking hilarious!!

I like how Edward's sense of humor is coming out more and more as the story goes on too.  Although I'm sure we're in for some angst with him being so far away from Bella...but that's why we have Alec the man-whore right? :)

And I'm with you on the winter blahs...I'm cuddled up in two throws now after spending 45 freaking minutes chipping ice off of my car this morning.  Spring can't come soon enough!!



Author's Response:

Amen to that!  It's not too bad this weekend..i guess, at least it's not snowing.  Thanks for the great review, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:39 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

This was one of the best behind the scenes chapters. Edward was so nervous. Charlie can be such a bear. It really is a show. Bella would marry Edward no matter what Charlie said.



Author's Response:

very true.  Edward is so old fashioned and in many ways, he's still a bit of a teenager..therefore Charlie can scare the crap out of him. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:35 PM Title: Heart To Heart For The World Traveler

you are awesome and so it your stories, is that motivation enough?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I needed that!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:18 PM Title: The Ugly Truths

That was AWESOME from his point of view.  Such a great ending!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 11:29 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

I loved how Edward and Emmett fought for Bella's honor. Charlie finding out about Edward's sexual experiance is funny every time.

Author's Response:

Thanks.  poor Edward...the his embarassment never seems to end. 

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 12:55 PM Title: The Ugly Truths

Holy shit is right.  That was sad and funny all at the same time.  Your a awesome writer..  I love Edward Pov.  thanks again.  Smiles Leona



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Your reviews always make me feel great!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:02 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

You would never think that Edward was such a little horn dog himself but he is good at keeping himself in check.



Author's Response:

i think he struggles...poor guy has to work through all those years he missed as a horny teenager....lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 4:09 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

Hee hee!  Now I can't wait for the  conversation Edward has with Charlie in the backyard...goodtimes.



Author's Response:

that's coming up next!  THanks very much!

Reviewer: hautefoodie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:38 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

Poor Edward!  Talk about torture...the constant blue balls this guy has, along with 5am fishing, Emmett being Emmett and Charlie being pissed off at him?!  This wasn't an easy weekend for the guy.  

 

I liked how you threw in the little hints of Edward playing with Bella's ring finger and wanting a symbol of their love there...that was too cute!!



Author's Response:

yeah...i don't think Bella ever caught on in the V&V chap.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:33 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

I enjoyed the EPOV for these chapters.  I'm really looking forward to Edward's upcoming chat with Charlie about his situation.



Author's Response:

that will be the next chap...i'm looking forward to it also.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:02 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

poor eddie everyone knows he is a virgin



Author's Response:

hopefully the press won't find out...lol

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 1:00 AM Title: The Ugly Truths

;-}
love it!! Edward is so cute....innocent, worldly, possessive caveman!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I like him too.  a lot.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:47 PM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Maybe the chewy head didnt make him shit him self but Bella finding the paper almost did lol??



Author's Response:

too funny!  poor Edward. lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2011 3:27 PM Title: Give And Take

love it



Author's Response:

thanks so much!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:14 AM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Hi I love Edward pov.  I kind skimmed it a little.  I wan't more of how Edward was thinking.  It pretty funny with some But deffently Sad and frusating.  I love it.  and VV.  Your awesome story writer



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Glad you like the stories.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 11:12 PM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

lol I loved that chewbacca part. lol and him saying there were two things I learned about myself today was hilarious. I loved it. keep up the great work thanks bye



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! i appreciate it.

Reviewer: cedward2417 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2011 1:16 AM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!!! LOL!!! Can't wait for more...Ü



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed that!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 1:32 PM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

I almost forgot about April Fool's day. I am sure Edward would have wanted it that way. It was funnier hearing his thoughts in the bathroom.



Author's Response:

i love him nervous...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 12:57 PM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

like seeing more into his head insteaD of repeats



Author's Response:

i try not to repeat all the dialogue when they are together.  I like Edward's POV a lot better when they are apart.  Thanks.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 6:06 AM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Just thinking about Edward's girlie scream has me in stiches!

Yes,yes, he stalked her... just say it. It's nothing to be embarassed abo--... well yeah he should be embarassed. :)



Author's Response:

i love the scream too...even if it is only imaginary..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 2:46 AM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

I love this! Can only imagine the look of pure fear on Edwards face when Bella found the motel receipt.
Loved the stuttered question with Esme! Edward was thinking proposal already!
**sigh** oh to be young again....

Author's Response:

i feel your pain...lol.  Glad you liked it...more to come soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: hautefoodie Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 2:17 AM Title: Return To The Scene Of The Crime

Poor Edward is right!  The guy gets a horrible prank played on him, has to fess up about stalking Bella and by this point, probably has the worst case of blue balls in history!

Not complaining though, I love all the UST!  Thanks, as always, for the super fast updates!!



Author's Response:

LOL  Very well put.  thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:20 PM Title: Give And Take

god and Here I thought Angel was nice and actually just wanted to talk. lol boy was I wrong and so apparently was Edward. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

yeah..i told on facebook about where i got Angel's name (not Angela from the books).  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:16 AM Title: Give And Take

It's weird, if Edward was a woman *frowns* we would be disgusted by all the men who hit on her, but because he's a man he only gets a little bit of pity. Maybe it was because it was own fault. Even though I didn't like Angel, she had a point. For years Edward did nothing about his reputation as a man-whore and look what's happening!

Grrr... I don't want to think about it anymore... *pouts*



Author's Response:

cheer up..it will get better...actually it's already a little better a month later in V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:38 AM Title: Give And Take

my pleasure to send in a review, glad for your story.  Angel got some pretty big balls there.  I do love getting Edwards pov on these things, can't wait till we get tot he belly dance.



Author's Response:

you and me both!  he actually falls on the floor during that...should be fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:26 AM Title: Give And Take

See, me? I do want to just talk to Edward cause I'm too old! He's just too pretty!
Love he he shot Angel down!

Author's Response:

i'm too old too...lol.  oh well..one can dream.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:18 AM Title: Give And Take

Edward needed the little talk from Papa C. He should have said it years before and maybe he wouldn't have the reputation and the Tanya situation. Edward has been used by the Hollywood system, but he should have stopped it because it caused nothing but pain for his family. I am glad Papa C gave him his little pep talk. Dads need to do that every so olten.



Author's Response:

yep. now he's got his head on straight and has to 'do his penance' as it were.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 4:08 AM Title: Give And Take

Does that make me a strange one, because I would be one to sit down and have a conversation with him? Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't kick our boy out of bed for the world, but I'm more intrigued by a stimulating mind than a boy who looks good and knows how to make women moan. 

FTW, LOVE your stories



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I could talk to him.. i could be good.  maybe.  Good thing i'll never know! lol

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 12:54 AM Title: Give And Take

Great chapter...It's really always a pleasure to see all these events again but through his eyes.....His mind is such a nice place to be ;)

And He's sooo irresistible when He's all cute and ashamed!!! Gotta love Carlisle for being blunt and getting things straight...He was firm but so fatherly...*Sigh* Those Cullen men are just too much for our overexcited selves ;)

And I think Dorothy's awesome....She's hilarious and sweet.....Wish all the elderly could be that fun and adorable....:D

Can't wait for the update of V&V.....Xxxx



Author's Response:

my favorite part of this chap is the talk with Carlisle.  The next V&V will be soon .  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 12:15 AM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

That was funny Edward wanting to know if Bella would want to join him in the mile high club. That was a cute move blast from the past.

Author's Response:

yeah...love that movie.  Bella was thinking the same thing as Edward..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 10:24 AM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen

Love Edward so cute and sexy as hell



Author's Response:

i agree!  THanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:51 PM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

I loved hearing his conversation with Clint. I also liked "hearing" what he was thinking during the Gloria Powell conversaion.



Author's Response:

glad you liked it.  I like getting in Edward's head.  Thanks!

Reviewer: hautefoodie Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:52 AM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

I think I did really well reviewing the first few chapters of V&V, but then the holidays picked up, and work picked up....and no excuse, I'm just an asshole who doesn't review nearly as often as she should:(

That being said, I'm loving seeing everything from Edward's point of view.  I actually like his POV a little more when they're apart because there's so much that happens with him that we'd miss if we were only hearing Bella. I love that he's not quite such a gentleman in his head as he is aloud;)

Great job with the secondary and tertiary characters too.  I love how Gloria helped them gain perspective on their relationship, and the pot smoking priest was pretty funny too!  

I promise I'll do better in reviewing, especially since you've been so speedy in your updates.  Thanks again for sharing!!



Author's Response:

i agree..i like writing Edward's more when they are apart because we get to see what he's been up to.  The stuff together is predictable...but just gives a diff perspective i suppose. Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Amapola026 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 10:06 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

i love this.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:02 PM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

OMG... I would have loved to see Edward telling the priest to fuck off. I don't think Bella would have been too happy, but it would have made my day :)

I miss Father Pat (?)(I think that was his name). LOL.

And Miss Gloria Powell... what a classy lady.

Great update, can't wait for Seattle filming!



Author's Response:

i've met one or two i'd like to say that to also.  Father Pat will be back soon... and we will meet Gloria again.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:30 PM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

ANother good job



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: cateyes38372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:06 PM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

still loving this story



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 4:50 PM Title: A Boisterous Farewell To SoCal

lol aww! I loved that conversation with Clint. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 8:23 PM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen

I loved this Disneyland chapter. It is funny everytime. I am like Emmett and Alice. It is my favoirite place on earth except I go to Disney World.



Author's Response:

i've only been to disneyworld also...one of my daughters just went to disneyland over new year's...lucky girl.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:16 PM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen

lol Edward's dream rocked! from naked Bella (hot hot hot by the way) to naked Hangover guy. too awesome! I cant' wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

that dude jumping out of the trunk in The Hangover was enough to give me nightmares...but it was freakin hilarious. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 11:40 PM Title: Karaoke For Cavemen

Gah, Edward's line about Bella turning a bar full of gay men was hilarious!

Yeah I hear you on the zombie thing. People look at me like I'm nuts when I worry about a zombie apocalypse! It could happen! I have a plan set and everything ;)

"What was that noise?" I don't know; someone else can go check it out :D



Author's Response:

damn zombies.  they freak me out on a regular basis. lol.  i've even discussed with one of my daughters which would be safer to withstand a zombie takeover.  BJ's or Walmart....because of the unlimited supply of food etc.  I lean more towards BJ's because there are less windows to bar....my husband overheard us and threatened to have us both committed.  LOL.  i normally can't stand Walmart..but if it will help me survive zombies...i'm there.  Thanks!  

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

I'd be totally willing to sacrifice Bella's liver if we get to see more from Drunkella :D



Author's Response:

LOL.  I'm sure she'll have more 'episodes'.  We still have Rose's bachelorette party to look forward to....  oops...i'm talking too much.  ; )  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 12:45 PM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

I love reading both views. Thanks for doing both.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 10:30 PM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

I just love to hear how much he thinks about her all the time



Author's Response:

he's too good to be true.  thanks!

Reviewer: cateyes38372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 1:25 PM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: tracylk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:35 AM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

Hiya!  I can't beleive I found you here... how're ya doin' ?  Sorry about the ass kickin' your getting.  I'm right there with you... I get my surgery on 2/4.  Nuttin' like gettin' your throat slit right before Valentine's Day.  Hehehe...

Oh well; I'll have plenty of time to catch up on my fanfic reading.  I am starting to perfer this site more than FF.net; they're just getting tooO freakin' strict and I'm sorry, but I am a woman who is terribly fond of her lemonade (if you know what I mean).

As far as this chappy goes; filler or not, Edward gooooood ;)

Now; get back to V&V cause I'm dying for some more heavy petting... hurry up wedding day... I think I'm hornier than poor Ed and Bella put together!

OH!  Did I just say that out loud?!  ROFLMAO... oh well... you know me by now; I'm hopin' your laughing your head off too... if not; just email me a nice lil' ass-kickin' ...

~xoxoxoxo~



Author's Response:

Oh my God...that did make me LOL.  You are too funny.  i'm setting up prerequisites for the first time they 'do it'(I think B & E would agree with these).  Firstly:  Emmett must be VERY FAR AWAY.  Secondly:  to get to Edward, Bella must only have to cross smooth surfaces..therefore no chance of falling down hurting herself.  Thirdly:  no gas-producing foods should be ingested by either within 48hrs of encounter.  Fourthy:  Bella can drink a bit...but Drunkella is forbidden access.  i'll add to the list as needed.  lol.  You are killing me.  ;)  

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 3:06 AM Title: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

That's why it's fiction **sigh** Edward is just too perfect!! ;-}

Author's Response:

no kidding ...he borders on being a 'stepford husband' sometimes.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 12:38 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Bella is an embaressing drunk. It is good thing that Johnny was a good sport.  I love Edward's point of view.



Author's Response:

she too often handles her stress with alcohol..hopefully Edward's influence will help her with that.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:50 PM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

This may be a just a "companion" story, but it really rounds out the other story and completes it in some respects.  Thanks for taking the time to right both POVs!



Author's Response:

As usual, thank you for reading and reviewing and making banners!  You are the best!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 1:57 PM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Not sure why this doesn't have more reviews! It's so neat to get another POV, especially Edwards!
Maybe when the two finally mesh, more will read!
Great as always!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate that.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 8:07 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

I think it is sad that you are not getting the reviews for this story it is wonderful.  I love seeing how in love with Bella he truly is.  Lunch with Johnny to funny.  I think you are wrong this story could stand on its own.  Just my opinion.



Author's Response:

i guess so...i'd just have to put back in the superfluous dialogue.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 4:57 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

awww I love this story too, along with v&V.  You rock !!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks! you are very sweet.  The next LRM is almost ready...as well as the next V&V.

Reviewer: IrishArtist25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 2:04 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Love both stories!! Anxiously awaiting updates :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  almost finished another LRM and also V&V. 

Reviewer: Lasharp15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 12:41 AM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

I've really loved hearing Edwards PO almost better than Bella. I love that you are doing both and am really enjoying both stories. Thank you for writing them!

Lisa



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and revieiwing!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:38 PM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Don't worry, I ALWAYS love your EPOV!! It's just really special to be inside his mind and see his realtionship through his eyes!!

For example, I was absolutely not aware that He was that embarrassed about Bella's behaviour during the lunch with Johnny!! One should say that She wasn't very lucid that time so that probably explains why She didn't notice ;)

Anyway, He's still as charming, endearing and heart-stopping romantic as ever!! And totally in love with his Bella....Sigh, He's kind of perfect, even with his faults!

I can't wait for the next update of V&V because things are becoming even more fabulous now....They're engaged and got to 2nd base!!! Guys this is EPIC!!!! So that's why I'm a bit (ok a lot) impatient for your next chapter!! Have a nice weekend Xxx



Author's Response:

you too.  thanks so much, that was a great review!  made me happy!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 10:30 PM Title: Copious Amounts of Alcohol For The Bilingual

Do not stop EPOV!!!!  I love his side.  It is oddly refreshing and also fills in the blanks at times.  Like in here I was glas to have his view on her behavior.  If it was just from the other story I would have never known he was worried about her behavior.  From BPOV I was led to believe that he just found her endearing.  So as I said, keep up this story.  It really makes it whole.



Author's Response:

i'm not stopping it...i want to catch it up to V&V so the two stories will be even.  Definitely not stopping.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 8:05 PM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!!  That is some funny shit.  I love all the background that the Cullens provide.  The underware bit is hysterical!!  This was awesome.



Author's Response:

the underwear plotline continued through many chapters.  Glad you are enjoying this!  Thanks!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:26 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

I am finally happy to now undertand why Alice speaks like a grandmother.  That was so perplexing to me.



Author's Response:

LOL.  You can always tell a person that spent a lot of time around an elderly relative growing up...I've know a few, and was actually one myself, and we tend to use words in every day language that garner some strange looks.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:01 PM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

A+



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: jw89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:40 AM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

no finger - thumbs up instead! Thanks and keep writing. (smiles)



Author's Response:

two thumbs is infinitely better than one finger.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:02 AM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

It is good to know what was going on in his mind when he left Bella with his head up his ass.  Love Alice and Jasper they tell him how stupid he is LOL.



Author's Response:

let's hope he doesn't go back to his overprotective ways...the poor boy is walking a fine line.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 2:59 AM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

lol that part about Grandma moses always gets me lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:14 AM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

omg  too funny, loved Edwards pov on the pool, I woudl love to handle his Benedict Arnold anyday !!!!!



Author's Response:

mind out of the gutter young woman! lol  i have soooo much room to talk..haha  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:10 AM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

How the hell did I forget about that pool scene?!?!?!? It was steamy and I didn't remember it until I was about half-way finished reading it! Gah!

Well, another wonderful chapter! It's nice reading about the women in Edward's life lay into him. If I was there, I would have chewed his ass out too.

I have to tell you something. I had a total Bella moment while reading this chapter. When Edward was talking with his peen, I actually offered to talk to it for him... out loud. I clapped my hand over my mouth and looked around, completely embarrased.

*sigh* I could only hope, huh?



Author's Response:

hmm.  did anyone hear you?  I'm guilty of speaking out loud while writing my story...i realize I've done it when hubs quirks an eyebrown at me.  so far, I've been able to cover, pretending i'm reading or laughing at something online.  i will outright lie if I have to...hey that's better than being sent to the looney bin. lol   Thanks.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:44 PM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

I loved this chapter from EPOV! He really overthinks every situation. Thank goodness, Bella has such an unusual sense of humor to balance Edward's paranoia.

Author's Response:

glad you liked it ...Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:35 PM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

I am so glad that Edward realized that he was stupid and to never go against Alice.



Author's Response:

hopefully...we shall see.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 3:47 PM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

I love shy, nervous, unsure Edward!!! Just makes me want to wrap him up and hold him tight!!!!
Great chapter ~ as always, love hearing EPOV's!!
So glad Bella told him how it is. Edward wants to protect people; especially those he loves that he goes about it assbackwards!!
Listen to Alice....that Tink knows her stuff!!

Author's Response:

he may finally have learned his lesson...i think....maybe...oh who knows?  Thanks!

Reviewer: tracylk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:43 PM Title: That Which Doesn't Kill Us...

Hey Doll! 

I'm so excited to see you here!  I'm starting to like this website better than FF because there is less restrictions for those of us who are dark and twisted (of course talking about me, not you) ... You know I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE your stories...

xoxox - Tracy



Author's Response:

r u my cyber stalker?  LOL  I lurve you too!  And i AM dark and twisted...just look at my favorite stories list..lol.  Now, since you found me on both sites...i expect twice the reviews...get cracking!  just kidding...XOXO .  Thank you my dear!  Laters..

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 12:33 AM Title: Crash And Burn

Everytime I read about Edward's meltdown I want to cry. He loves her so much and does not want to mess up her life anymore. Grant you he was a little dumb in what he did but he did it out of love. It was not stupider than Bella acting like she did. She should have been angry and not acting like a victim again. If she didn't keep having these weak meltdowns maybe Edward wouldn't think his life was too hard for her to take. The Emmett and Rose need to stop babying her. She needs to grow up and fight for herself.



Author's Response:

Bella is so much stronger by the time be get to where we are in V&V now....but back during this time in LRM, she wasn't quite there yet.  I was also partially trying to convey that Edward has a strong need to be in control of everything touching his life...with Bella he has to learn to let go of that control...at least a little.  Obviously that's the most difficult task he faces.  Thanks!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 6:12 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

I'm so glad you decided to get Edward's POV written.  It's nice to see his side of the story.  Wish more authors would do that!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  it's not everyone's favorite thing, but so many readers requested it, that once i started I had to continue.  I'm a little obsessive.lol

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:43 PM Title: Crash And Burn

GETTING BETTER



Author's Response:

thanks.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 4:24 AM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

was expecting more to justify another story just for EPOV's



Author's Response:

?

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 3:39 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

sex even if self-gratification is not vulgar and not unusual so am I to assume there will be no lemons in this story?



Author's Response:

the lemons are coming.  When they finally do the deed all that pent up sexual energy will probably cause a power outtage.  I know EXACTLY when it will happen...if that helps.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 9:39 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

cute I am wearing Christmas pjs  as I read



Author's Response:

winnie the pooh?  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 8:45 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

from EPOV he seems a little more arrogant



Author's Response:

he is arrogant.  He just doesn't act like that around Bella.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 8:21 PM Title: Crash And Burn

Guess we have to read the bad with the good, huh?  *sigh* Alright.

Oh, the last part of his dream did make me laugh. Emmett could do some serious damage, but what Edward fears most is getting farted on! LOL... man, that must be some powerful stank!



Author's Response:

lol..it's because he knows about Em farting on the paps..it must have freaked out his subconscious. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:27 PM Title: Crash And Burn

it is so great of you writing this, I love have both pov's for a story !!!!



Author's Response:

thanks, I'm glad you like it, especially the depressing parts.  lol

 

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