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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:25 AM Title: Crash And Burn

The sex dream was priceless when Emmett comes in to fart on them LMAO.  I dont like this chapter well the last part but I never like it when Edward does stupid shit for Bella so she can go on with out his shit silly boy. It was good to know what he was going through thanks.



Author's Response:

the dreaming of Emmett farting is a direct result of Edward finding out about Em farting on the paps lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:12 AM Title: Crash And Burn

Reading EPOV on trying to break up with Bella to save her from the media madness is even sadder than reading BPOV regarding E's behavior. Luckily, we know that things work out!

Author's Response:

yes.  He is such a mental case. lol Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 7:42 AM Title: Crash And Burn

Excellent! Typical Edward....martyr at it's best. So glad he has Alice to call him on his shit!
So good....it's a good thing Bella is getting stronger so she an tell Edward how she feels. I think previously, she'd have just let Edward go without saying anything!

Author's Response:

i agree with everything you said.  Happy New Year! and thank you.

Reviewer: read522 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:18 AM Title: Crash And Burn

great story . keep it coming.



Author's Response:

glad you like it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:54 AM Title: Warm Love For The Impatient

excelent



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:29 AM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

sweet Edward has Charlie wrap around his finger lol



Author's Response:

 i think little by little he is winning him over.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 7:53 AM Title: Warm Love For The Impatient

Poor Edward. I'd be frustrated too. 2 months is more than enough time!

Author's Response:

although...they don't know what they are missing...i think that makes it a little different....maybe...probably...oh who the h*ll knows...lol  THanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 3:34 AM Title: Warm Love For The Impatient

I loved knowing I wasn't the only one getting impatient with Tanya's bs.

Great chapter btw...so...SNL, huh? Will that be a chapter we get to read? :)



Author's Response:

SNL would be fun but couldn't happen until sometime btwn sept and dec...i would love to write a chapter on that...it's in the outline if i decide to.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 12:54 AM Title: Warm Love For The Impatient

Tanya needs a kick in the arse... just my opinion. :)

Author's Response:

i agree.  Rose would probably do it if they lived closer....just sayin.  Thanks!

Reviewer: CassieCullen06 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:47 AM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

of course I want it....but what's your screen name? I only follow 107 year old virgin on fb



Author's Response:

the facebook link is on my profile page...or you can search it as:  Virgins & Villains fanfic     on Facebook.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:44 AM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

I do I DOOO!! lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

watch for the sneak peek on the V&V facebook page...the link is on my profile page...or search for it on facebook as Virgins & Villains fanfic.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 12:04 AM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

Very sweet!! I agree...Emmett has a gift!

Author's Response:

the gift of flatulence at will.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 11:04 PM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

So cute to see how utterly in love Edward is with Bella....His first reaction when a situation occurs is always for her, trying to make things easier for her, or to spend as much time as possible near her...It's so romantic and absolutely perfect!!

This guy is just to die for: Endearing, compassionate, crazy in love, attentive, entirely devoted and fiercely protective...He's just...Gah!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter of V&V, so if you can send me a little teaser, you'd make my day....Xoxo



Author's Response:

i'm posting the teaser on V&V's facebook ..probably tonight.  Look for the link on my profile page.  ..I agree with everything you said about Edward.  He's just the perfect man.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 7:25 PM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

I love getting into Edward's head. It is more fascinating than Bella's. He loves Bella so much. It is amazing what he does for her.



Author's Response:

he may be the perfect man...hence he's a character of fiction.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 7:18 PM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

I think 'freak show' is probably the best way to describe Geri!!!

Thanks for another update! I don't know if I'm sorry to here that you're snowed in...I'm digging the updates to this and V&V :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm halfway through the next V&V...

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:12 PM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

love reading both V&V and edwards pov :D great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 5:15 PM Title: Valentines For The Enamored

This is a great chapter! I love Edward's fear that Rose may somehow know that he has Bella's Little Mermaid panties!

Author's Response:

those panties are going to haunt him forever...LOL   Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:07 PM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

Love hearing Edwards thought. Charlie was perfect & I loved how Edward knows the quiet strength that is Charlie!

Author's Response:

i luv Charlie...i actually hate it when some stories have him as a villain...it's hard to take. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 8:29 AM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

I love knowing what he was thinking and about the things that were going on around Bella that she did not know about.  Have a wonderful holiday.  Waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.  more to come...

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 6:09 AM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

It's amazing to see all the people who care about her jump into action. We saw more of it on EPOV than in Bella's. Great Job!



Author's Response:

glad you liked it.  yeah...Bella was  little out of it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 2:17 AM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

Thanks again so much for sharing your stories !!!! 



Author's Response:

you are welcome... i needed to empty that space in my head where they were living...whew!  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 5:00 PM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

Edward's mental self-flagellation is worse than when he torments Alice with his need to assume guilt for everything that happens to Bella. He exhausts the other characters, himself and even us readers!
That said...I love this story!
:)

Author's Response:

it's like Catholic guilt....lol.  He's definitely in love with the right girl.. Thanks!

Reviewer: westernem Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:52 PM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

love reading edwards pov, really excited about this one :) can't wait to read the next chapter of V&V. 



Author's Response:

it's coming.  i'll post tonight or early tomorrow (my time.. I live on the East coast.)  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2010 4:20 PM Title: Setback To A Full Recovery

Bella needs to stop self medicating with alcohol. I hope as she becomes stronger with the help of Edward she will stop.



Author's Response:

they've both got some adjusting to do.  There are more constructive ways to handle stress...i think she's at a loss at this point in the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:16 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

He is funny trying to keep himself under control not to rip Bellas cloths off lol.  I love his side to hear how bad he really has it for her.



Author's Response:

it's all the pent-up teenage boy in him.  lol Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:50 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

Loved it!!!  Edward is so HIM!



Author's Response:

lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:07 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

Loved finding out what was really going on in Aspen when Bella wasn't there. Edward is so  wrapped. I love it.



Author's Response:

Me too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:38 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

I am curious to read EPOV on how he nearly destroys Bella's trip to Los Angeles! Great chapter, as ALWAYS!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!:)

Author's Response:

You can kind of see how he will talk himself into that. oh well.  Thanks!  Merry Christmas to you too!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:38 PM Title: A Long Awaited Reunion

Edward's reaction to Bella's nightgown was priceless! Cavemanese...LOL!

Oh, and Truly Madly Deeply was one of my favs in the '90s... it made me want to be in love *sigh*

Thanks for the sweet update.



Author's Response:

I love Caveward.  THanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 10:52 PM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

I love his pov it is nice to see his side to what is going on.  I loved the way he put a stop to the ho that would not take a hint.



Author's Response:

Edward's a little mean when B isn't around, but some people deserve it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 10:27 AM Title: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

So sad for them to be apart



Author's Response:

time will move quickly.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 8:51 PM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

I can't read those crazy magazines anymore. The headlines make me so mad because you know that they are all lies or half truths.



Author's Response:

Yes, I agree.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:26 AM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

I simply love their skype banter! Thanks for another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:15 AM Title: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

I really like hearing Edward's thoughts.

I use to work the projection booth at a theater that did TRHPS. Loved watching the fun those guys had. Their initiation ritual was different. They made the 'virgin' get dry humped from behind by the friend that brought them, while they sang the Oscar Mayer wiener song. Hilarious.

Your story takes me back.



Author's Response:

that would have been freaking hilarious too....the one here does the paddling.  If I'd been really thorough I would have contacted someone in Seattle and had them investigate. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: cateyes38372 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:43 AM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

Edward could have been nicer but then again she was coming on strong even after he started being a dick so way to go Edward. :D I can't wait for more V&V keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Edward is still kind of battling with the jerk he used to be before Bella.  He still has difficulty being nice when she's not around.  Thanks!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 12:28 AM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

Aaaaaa...He's such a hopeless romantic...That's very endearing and hot as hell...At least in my book...He's just my perfect guy!!

As I told you before, I really love seeing the world through his beautiful eyes ;)

These chapters (thanks for the extended gift btw!) were great and I can't wait for the new update of V&V....

Take care :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  i like writing from his pov also.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:02 PM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

Love hearing Edward's thoughts and his slam down of Nicole was perfect.  I can see the "nice guy" trying to be polite, etc., but some girls just don't get the hint.  I think there are nice people out there who would really, just want to be friends with someone because they may feel a connection but I feel bad for celebrities....they probably could use a friend but with the business they're in, how will they know or get the chance to see if someone wants to know them or use them?

Great job on clearing Edward's head!!  He's a keeper!!   



Author's Response:

Edward still has a problem not being a jerk when Bella's not around.  He did it for so long.  He may have been a little harsh...but that's who he is/was.  I like him too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kittyisme0341 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:47 PM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

I seriously love your story! You give the characters such a depth that many other writers don't. LOVE it! Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:55 PM Title: A Prelude To Aspen

The Brangelina brood is like the Kate plus 8 brood ... I can only imagine the chaos of herding those kids plus the paps through the airport!:)

Author's Response:

you got that right.  i personally think BOTH families like the attention...media whores...lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:35 PM Title: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

Excellent!!!  The Rocky Horror "Virgin" comment by Emmett was pure Emmett!

Good job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! next one is posted....next up more V&V.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 3:41 PM Title: Perfect Dates For The Redeemed

I loved reading Edward's reaction to Emmett calling him a "virgin" at the Rocky Horror Picture Show! :)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Just posted 18...now off to more V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:32 PM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

Sweet Baby Jeebus....I'm having such a good time reading this story!!!! As usual I'm partial to the EPOV....I love being in his mind too much, I can't help it...It's an addiction ;)

I think things so far are really brilliant; I love ALL your characters : Emmett's an adorable doofus, Rose's a fierce goddess, Alice's just exceptional, Jasper's naturally charming and effectively subdued, Esme & Carlisle are as sweet and caring as ever, Charlie's absolutely amazing, Edward's a completely smitten SexyMovieStar and Bella's one hell of a kitten Tiger!! And all the others are either fun, nice, protective or completely crazy.....I love all this variety ;)

You did a really great job with all the drama.....I like a bit of angst to keep things interesting and make them more 'real' but you didn't go overboard with it and it wasn't too painful to read, which I appreciate....

Can't wait to read your next update of V&V :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I like writing from his pov...it's very diff from Bella's.  I appreciate your review very much, glad you like the stories.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:08 PM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

I loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:19 PM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

Emmett is such a nut. I love reading both sides.



Author's Response:

he is that!  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:31 PM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

I loved this chapter. I was wondering how tough Rose was on poor Edward.



Author's Response:

Alice calmed her enought to listen, thankfully.  i appreciate the review very much!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:59 AM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

Love EPOV's. Emmett is hysterical!
Still hard to believe Edward is a virgin but then again, I love how they'll both be each others first and last!

Author's Response:

Just posted 17...will post 18 later today.  my powere cord died on my laptop...and i had to borrow the hubs' or one of my dauthers' computers for the last few days...it was not pleasant.lol..Now i've got a new cord so i'm finally back!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Edward has to be a virgin ...i know it's hard to believe...hopefully at some point i'll do an outtake of his drunken 'close calls'....it will be later though.  Thanks again!!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:34 PM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

Great job ONCE AGAIN lol keep it up and I can't wait for the next V&V update. :D thanks bye



Author's Response:

Thanks!  posting chaps 17 and 18 today....then back to V&V.

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:42 AM Title: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

I enjoyed the chapter.  I don't think it's a problem to have two separate stories.  Are you getting complaints?  It will be fun wihen you're caught up and the chapters are more in sync (time-wise)



Author's Response:

no complaints..i think one person said they wished it was all in one.  I do want them caught up with each other though...makes Edward's a little more exciting!  That's why i'm doing two chaps LRM then 1 V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:50 AM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

And I thought it was sad from BPOV! God, you are so good at pulling at those heartstrings.

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

In a way, I think it's probably sadder from Edward's perspective.  After all, he knows the truth, and just can't get her to listen to him.  So he thrashes around while quickly losing his mind.  poor boy.   Thanks! 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

poor Edward. I know  exactly how he feels and then they all make fun of him for being a virgin. poor guy. Thanks again bye



Author's Response:

good natured fun...and only from Emmett.  He really needs his butt kicked doesn't he?  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:08 PM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

Excellent!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

Thanks I have been waiting for this one always wanted to know what went on between him and Rose.



Author's Response:

I like Edward nervous...it's quite enjoyable.....  Right now, I think he's in need of a shower, after all that sweating.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 10:06 PM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

Genuis!!!  you did a great job  on this chapter !!  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 8:40 PM Title: A Life Preserver For The Drowning Man

If anyone doubts Edward's sincere feelings for Bella before his disclosure to Rose, all is clear now! How embarassing for Rose to know Edward is a virgin! No wonder, Emmett and Charlie's discovery of this information caused so much disturbance on Easter weekend! Holidays with the Swans may destroy Edward's nerves! I can't imagine how Edward will handle Father's Day! :)

Author's Response:

Emmett and Rose have known since chapter 14/15 of both stories...and Charlie knows now...so ..yeah, poor Edward.  I think he's just resigned to the fact in V&V that everyone in both their families know.  It shouldn't be a big deal...but where would be the fun in that?   lol   .  THanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:13 PM Title: Destiny Interrupted

Good!

Author's Response:

THanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:24 AM Title: Destiny Interrupted

He should of told Bella that he was going to talk with Tanya.  Poor Edward and Bella in love and lost.



Author's Response:

yeah..good thing we know how this part ends!  THanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:20 AM Title: Destiny Interrupted

Those damn paps have to ruin everything!



Author's Response:

always.  That will be a recurring theme unfortunately.  THanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Destiny Interrupted

It was great to be able to read about the meeting with Tanya.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  Just posted the next chap.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:28 PM Title: Destiny Interrupted

Edward should have told Bella about the meeting with Tanya before he went to bed. He knew pictures were taken. Men just don't think sometimes.



Author's Response:

guys are dumb sometimes...but life would be boring if they were perfect. lol..Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Destiny Interrupted

I have been waiting for this chapter, but youmade it a 2 parter .........   please post the rest soon, can't wait to get his pov on the meeting with rose after flying back to talk to Bella.  



Author's Response:

Sorry.  It was so long, I had to break it.  I will post the next LRM in a day or two.  then another V&V.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:20 AM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

It is interesting to really see how protective he is of Bella.  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

he is a worrier.  thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

It was funny seeing Edward view of mass with the crazy old lady. 



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:06 AM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

:)

 

i always love "hearing" edwards thoughts on all this...

booger boy and the groping old woman



Author's Response:

crazy old lady....they do exist.  i'm not making ALL that sh*t up.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:18 AM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

Sometimes it's like reading two different stories...I have to go to V&V to get a reference of what's going on! (LOL)

I read you put that part of the pedophile in....might I make a teeny suggestion? When they finally do step it up...don't give Bella a bald kitty. If he's having problems now, he definately will need to see Dr. Gould!

Thanks for another great chapter from EPOV!



Author's Response:

okay...you just made me laugh my ass off!  That was hysterical.  Bella would do that on her own...but you know that Rose and Alice would try to force her.  It could be very funny....  We'll have to see.  Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:06 AM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

Thanks!

Author's Response:

you're welcome.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:50 AM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

I loved reading Edward's impression of the church service that he attended with Bella. This story is such a fun read! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you like it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: The Calm Before The Storm

as always you do not dissapoint !!!   well written !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I enjoy writing it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 10:42 PM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

Have a great Thanksgiving.  This may not have been the most exciting chapter but I think it was needed.



Author's Response:

THanks!  You have a great THanksgiving too!

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 7:22 PM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

Thanks for feeding my addiction.
Happy Turkey Day!

Author's Response:

You are welcome!  THank you too!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 5:29 PM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

It was nice to learn a little more about Sidney. He is a cool dude.



Author's Response:

i thought so...i like giving little hints of backstories.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:19 PM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

lol and I still laugh at Emmett for putting on that song. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

yes it's a funny song...has to be good for something.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 7:56 AM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:30 AM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

I get drowzy in the car too...not when I'm driving though, 'cause that would be bad. No, when I'm driving I crank up the Black Eyed Peas and pretend Emmett is right next to me, sing off key (because I can't be the only one)!



Author's Response:

the carcalepsy term is something actually made up about me by hubs....i had to use it...how could i not?  Yeah, i miss a lot when hubs is driving me around... lol  Thanks! 

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 3:51 AM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

I still enjoyed the chapter, even if I wasn't "on the edge of my seat."  It's just nice to hear both sides of the story.



Author's Response:

the next chapt of LRM may be a combination of chaps 11 and 12 of V&V...I don't want to repeat Bella's entire story...so that's how it's coming together at the moment.  THanks for everything! glad you like this story too.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Making Plans For A New Start

I would love a Thanksgiving outtake from the past that included Emmett. I loved Emmett's explanation to Edward of Bella's F word slipup in church!:)

Author's Response:

the one i'm working on, unfortunately, doesn't include emmett...well maybe a little.  sorry...BUT if I can get it to work it should be funny.  THanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:39 PM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Edward's inner dialog is so funny.



Author's Response:

i know...he really freaks out when CHarlie is around.lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:50 AM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Isn't enough that you have a sap like me drooling because E is so taken with B?  Then you add Jasper and his love for Alice.  There is just something about hot twitterpated men that just makes me smile.



Author's Response:

yes they are sweet...but still tough enough to beat the crap out of someone in a bar..lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:48 AM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Edward is the only thing to say swoon



Author's Response:

i agree.  Thanks!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:26 AM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

lol I would really like to see Edward's pov of that old lady groping his ass. lol that would be great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

it's coming soon!  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 12:05 AM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Loved it. Makes us all believe in true love!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like it.

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:59 PM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Well, the sh*t should hit the fan in the next chapter or so! :)

Author's Response:

I can't remember how many...but soon.  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:47 PM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Ah...Tanya...I forgot about the whole avoiding thing. No worries, her secrets will come out ;)

What a sweet New's Year Resolution. Hopefully he's nothing like me and can actually keep it!



Author's Response:

if Ben and Jerry's didn't make Chocolate Fudge Brownie ice cream i could keep my resolutions too.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:48 PM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:45 PM Title: Resolutions For The New Year

Always a delight to get Edwards pov !!!!!



Author's Response:

i think so too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 10:02 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Edward can really get freaked out when it comes to Bella.  Charlie priceless I love the confrontation about the trip to forks Edward planing his funeral LOL.  He stold her panties priceless.



Author's Response:

you know those panties will come back to haunt him.  lol.. thanks!

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 6:22 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Of all the panties to steal, he takes those! That's just too funny...Little Mermaid...the Holy Grail (lol).

And how sweet was Sidney? Worrying over Bella's clumsiness. It actually earned an "aaawwww" from me.

And you're right, I'm loving Team Charlie too. I wonder if they sell any shirts ;)



Author's Response:

glad he didn't come across as some sort of pedophile..lol.  I think I've seen Team Charlie mugs and t-shirts....rocking the 'stache.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:15 PM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

So Charlie is covering for our panty stealing perv.  That's just......brilliant.  This fic has a life of it's own and I would never use the word "vulgar" to describe either stories.  I love the drama and humor you have balanced it with.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Almost finished the next chapter for V&V..posting tonight or tomorrow.

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:57 PM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

I don't think you failed - I think you have magic fingers.  I'm not sure which of your stories I like best.  I'm glad I don't have to choose.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for  reading.  I really appreciate the review!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:03 PM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

That was so funny. Charlie scares Edward. I am so glad he was honest. Charlie is like Emmett. They are both big teddy bears. They like to act tough.



Author's Response:

Charlie is fun to write...oh heck..they all are (except the villains).  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:41 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Feel free to be sophomoric. ;)
Loved this chapter....the dream sequence was hysterical.

Author's Response:

sophomoric is sometimes my middle name....well actually it's Marie.  my hubs tries to pretend to be dignified...i really screw up the illusion.  you can see how things works at our house....LOL.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:39 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Lol, that was funny. 



Author's Response:

i heart charlie.  Thanks!

Reviewer: read522 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:46 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

I just love your style and these outtakes.  !!!!! More edward in the shower please !!!!!



Author's Response:

i would..but the movie studio will give me hell for letting him get all pruney.  lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:46 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

I admire your descriptive restraint and I love reading Edward's POV! Christmas night is going to permanently scar Edward!

I can't believe that Edward dove into Bella's lingerie basket and then stole the Little Mermaid panties! How will he explain possessing this clothing item if Bella finds them? :)

Author's Response:

it was a little pervy.  lol.   The unwritten logic says that Bella has assumed that Rose found those panties and destroyed them.  I want to see how Edward explains his way out of having them in his possession.  lol..  Thanks!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2010 1:35 AM Title: Higher Love For The Marked Man

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:12 AM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

I love the relationship he has with his family they are so respectful just good people.  I dont care if you get him in his unders he is fuck hot no mater what :)



Author's Response:

i understand and agree.  with or without them. lol  THanks!

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:01 AM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

Great chapter! Of course, reading Edward's mind in this chapter makes knowing the "Tanya Publicity Spin" that is about to hit the fan so much more cringe-worthy!:)

Author's Response:

he's kind of an a-hole when Bella's not around.  Thanks!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 6:31 AM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

Loved it!! Edward is so sweet & cute!

Author's Response:

he is a mess though...makes me chuckle.  THanks!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:54 AM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

love it, glad for how did you put it repeat of conversations, no other way to really write it.  It needs to be there.  You are wonderful.



Author's Response:

That was very nice!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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