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Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 3:36 AM Title: The Flipside of Despair For The Undeserving

lol Edward's parents are too freaking cute. I love V&V so if I have to read this to understand it well so be it. :) don't get me wrong I like this story its just pretty much everything we've already learned but from Epov which some can be a new thing and then some can be repetitive. I'll take the good with the bad. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

yeah...i should put little symbols  --repetition starts here--...I tried to 'trim' the repetitive dialogue...it was difficult in these early chapters...i think later chapters will be easier.  I'm actually looking forward to the times they are apart...we can see what Eddie was really up to all those days he wasn't with Bella.  ; )    Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 6:29 PM Title: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

I love these outtakes,  can't wait for your next update !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:56 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

loved this, so cute he followed her to forks.  !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:26 AM Title: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

It is so funny that Edward is behind some of the  harassing Jasper is getting from Chris. I love all the behind the scenes views. Edward is such a thinker. I love his views.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!  Next V&V will be done in a day or two.  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:24 AM Title: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

Love Edwards POV but I think I have said that LOL. 



Author's Response:

Probably, lol!  But I still like to hear it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

It was fun to read about the make-up woman from EPOV!  Thanks!



Author's Response:

I'm looking forward to a few things for his POV.  Especially when he and Bella are apart.  Thanks so much !

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:12 PM Title: A Glimpse of The Past For The Hopeful

I am nervously waiting for EPOV on his dinner and meeting with Tanya that was shown on television and the resulting circumstances of his confession to Bella.

Author's Response:

i'm anxious for Edward's meltdown afterward...that should be fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 5:16 PM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

love it 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 5:22 PM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

You are one funny lady.  You have me either in stitches or in a pile of goo at my computer.  I refuse to consider this my morning workout routine.  Thanks for doing EPOV I really love it.



Author's Response:

um...maybe I need to incorporate some aerobics in each chapter?  yeah...i'll get back to you about that     ; )   Thanks for reading and reviewing, it keeps me inspired!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 10:24 AM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

I love that he was in the diner with the Swan family. Carlisle and Esme's reaction was priceless.



Author's Response:

they're sweet parents.  I'm glad you liked it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:39 AM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

I loved the "trapped in the diner" scene.  The whole stalking episode is a riot. 



Author's Response:

there's a couple photos of the diner on v&v's facebook.  gotta love the elk head!  Thanks!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:05 AM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

Van Morrison is a great choice for a Bella playlist. And it just squeeved me out that those nasty women throw themselves at Edward....I would never do that...maybe....



Author's Response:

hiding in E's bed?  Well, I wouldn't do it in his parent's house....that would be tacky.  But in his L.A. house?  hmm  with the pool just made for schmexing..... No, I would not do that.  Never.  (Did that sound sincere?)....ah screw it...I'd do it in a heartbeat.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: A Narrow Escape for The Born Skeptic

Great chapter! Halloween not my favorite but if a certain 109 perpetually 17 year old bronze haired, originally from Chicago male vampire happened to trick or treat at my house, I think I'd acquiesce & give him a trick & a treat! ;)

Author's Response:

LOL.  my sentiments exactly!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:46 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

The stalking was unexpected but a lot of fun to read about.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Edward is my favorite stalker.  :)   Thanks!

Reviewer: CanadianMommyX2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:08 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

I love getting this story from EPOV.  I have been enjoying Bella's version of the story, but getting Edward's version seems to help complete it.

CM



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  I'm glad everyone is patiently waiting for the next V&V update!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:27 AM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

I love both V&V as well as LRM AND REALLY how you write and post them. It's nice to hear Edwards thoughts!
Continue what you're doing, it's great!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! makes me happy to hear.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

I love seeing what is going on in his mind it is a pretty interesting place

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:40 AM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

STALKER!!!!

lol...but seriously, it's kind of nice knowing he can't help himself :)



Author's Response:

I enjoy writing this character slowly come apart at the seams...it quite fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:43 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

Edward is still the Edward we know and love. I love that aspect of your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  I try.  When I started dreaming up this story...my first question was what if they were human...trying to keep a lot of their personality traits the same...just changing their circumstances.  Glad you enjoy it.

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: A Stalker's Guide to The Olympic Peninsula

Criminently!!  Dorothy and Stalkerward in the same chapter....You're just too good to me.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

Dorothy was inspired by my aunt (Dot, ofcourse).  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:40 AM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

Thanks for writing EPOV!



Author's Response:

You are very welcome.  Hope you like it!

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:41 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

You really want to know what I think?? I really love this Edward.  Why oh why can't I be Bella?  Thanks!



Author's Response:

Bella thinks he's all calm cool and collected. HA! Thanks for reading and reviewing... I hope you like the next chap...will post soon.

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:32 PM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

Squee! I loved the Newton conversation in V & V about having Edward's love child and how Bella handled it afterwards.  That was one of the first things that had me coming back for more with your story.  I'm estatic that you incorporated it in LRM.  FUBAR?  I had no idea.  I guess you could say this chapter was educational.  These little tidbits just keep me coming back for more.  Thanks!



Author's Response:

lol.  I've heard FUBAR in a couple movies..but it's mostly a term used by military men.  (my Daddy wouldn't have approved that I even know about it).  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Aether Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:18 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

Can I tell you how much I LOVE that you are doing this.  I think I just wiped drool from my chin!!  You're Edward in V & V is one that meets all my strict standards for an Edward.  I'm hope that makes sense to you, it does to me.  Thank your for the EPOV.



Author's Response:

oh crap..what are your standards?  do u have list?...now i will be afraid that i'm going to screw up...lol.  pressure....ugh.  My Edward rules are...let's see.  self-assured and arrogant and self-contained(basically he thinks he doesn't need anyone or anything)...until he meets B...then all bets are off.  Overprotective of her to a fault.  Jealous...because he is a guy after all.  Obsessive (where B is concerned).  I know there's more...but i can't think.  I'm getting ready to post chap4 soon.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:37 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

I official love EPOV! I myself have a hard time writing it, so I appreciate reading it. Thanks for another chapter.



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!  Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 2:55 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

I loved the pajamas. I wonder if they ever wear them again.



Author's Response:

Alice is a bit bossy.  They probably can't wear them again after this Christmas season....as if they'd want to.  lol.  thanks!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

I love the pj's and the talking bass those Cullens sure have a great sense of humor! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:41 PM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

Aww this was so sweet.  I liked out loud at the PJs and Jasper's new fish.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:48 AM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

The Cullen family are the perfect family.  I love hereing this side of the storie



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:50 AM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

Very cute! What I wouldn't do to have Grinchward under my Christmas tree!!

Author's Response:

hahaha!  too true!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:43 AM Title: Mixed Signals for The Fortunate Son

:)



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 10:21 AM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

Wonderful chapter.  Loved it, loved Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  I was afraid he'd seem a little harsh...but that's on purpose.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:52 AM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

Turn that caffeine drip up because you are on a roll and I am loving it.  I so love hearing the other side of the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I enjoy writing it too.  Edward's view will have some surprises.  I have to keep it interesting! lol

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:10 AM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

I really liked getting a chance to hear Edward's side of the second day lunch meeting.  The texts with Alice were great.  Thanks for writing this!



Author's Response:

You are welcome.  Banner looks really good.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda_Blitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 8:11 PM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

Love it! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

next up will be a chapter for V&V...then proabably two for LRM.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: team rob Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

love to "hear" edwards pov for this story



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:03 PM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

I love seeing Edward flustered and not in control.



Author's Response:

yep, it's quite fun.  Thanks!

Reviewer: kaybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 4:17 PM Title: Egg Drop Soup for The Cynical Soul

I love Edwards POV!! I can't wait to hear what he thinks about the make-up artist from the station!! ( Sorry I blanked on her name but I can see her horable clothes!!!) Looking forward to more.....

 

:)



Author's Response:

LOL.  Ah the infamous Camille!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  Next up is another chapter of V&V...then I'll probably go back to LRM.  Busy weekend!

Reviewer: Coleen561 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 2:59 AM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

This is great!  At first I was surprised at Edward's jaded and darker thoughts, but then I realized that what you're doing with his character makes perfect sense in the bigger picture of the V&V story.  I think it will be wonderful to see his character grow and evolve from this jaded/cynical/unhappy place as his relationship with Bella develops.

I think you're right that repeating all the shared dialogue would be overkill.  But I look forward to seeing his interactions with others when Bella is not there and his thoughts on some of the more important moments that they share.



Author's Response:

My thoughts exactly!  kind of scary..we may be sharing a brain today!  HAHA.  The banner looks fantastic!  I can't thank you enough.  How can I repay you?  Want to be in the story?  lol  Again, thank you , thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: lb8931 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:13 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

I am glad you are posting this. I know some ppl read and don't reply.
I just wanted to let you know keep up the great work with vv and outtakes of vv.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I really appreciate that.  Nice notes like that are so encouraging, they really do inspire me.  Take care.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:25 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

Thanks I do enjoy Edward POV



Author's Response: I do as well. Thank you!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:55 PM Title: CPR for The Dead Heart

I love being in Edward's head. I find it more interesting than Bella's.



Author's Response:

it's weird for me.  Bella's head is too much like my own..she's quite a scatterbrain sometimes...scary huh?  Edward's is very diff...I do like it.  Thanks!

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