Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Wow! That was long, but then I was distracted for quite a while by that gorgeous piccy of Rob, lol. Alice has certainly thought this out. How surprised was Bella meeting Rose when she picked her car up, lol, Alice thought that one out too.
Edward really needs to get that restraining order on Tanya, especially now that he gave her false hope of possibly wanting a relationship with her after he's had his time and space and saying that he'd call her about drinks when he had no intention of going. She's already a psycho this is just going to make her worse.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Lol, I forgot about Bella's sleep talking. Well, if she didn't even give it a thought what chance did I stand, lol. I can just imagine Alice's face sitting there watching Bella have an orgasm to a dream fantasy of her oldest brother, bwahahahaha!! I'm glad she's going to help her and that Bella's going to let her, she'll need her friend to help guide her through.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Edward was the responsible Dom and carried on with looking after Tanya even though it was making him physically ill to do so. I'm not sure that I could be so giving. Tanya is a complete psycho bitch! She basically sold herself to escape her home life and then, it sounds like, she either assisted Mr Brandon in committing suicide or she 'helped' him on his way without his knowledge. Now she's sat there hugging the wedding dress she bought to become Mrs Edward Cullen. Edward and his family need to run and run fast from the crazy woman!
I love Edward and Esme's relationship, it's so damn sweet my teeth are rotting, lol. Even though Edward is a total Mummy's boy I love it. In fact I love the relationship they all have with each other. Emmett's so funny and he's hardly said anything, it's just the way he acts and reacts to whatever Rose is putting him through, hahahahaha!! I loved hearing from Esme, all she wants is for her first born to be happy and for Bella to finally be part of the family. It's a good job that Edward wants the whole kit and caboodle now.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Lol, Bella should know that she can't keep anything from the psychic pixie, it didn't take her long to put two and two together. What's Bella going to do with the ten million she gets from Jake? How thick could he be, not only, to think that he wouldn't get caught but also to shag a girl at his wedding reception, obviously he was thinking with his little head instead of his big one, lol.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
So, Alice the psychic pixie does know about Edward's crush on Bella, well it's really a bit more than a crush bless him, lol. Nothing is sacred with that girl around.
Poor Edward, I can't believe that he thought there was something wrong with him when he finished with Claire because of the way he felt. Thank God he had Jasper to talk to and he pointed him in the right direction.
I think Edward safe worded. I don't think his heart is really in punishing Tanya anymore, he can't be bothered. He should just end their contract and be done with her. It sounds like she likes to be punished to to receive nothing at all and have her contract end would be more punishment than anything.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
So Alice does know about Bella's crush. Now the question remains as to whether she knows about Edwards? It sounds to me as though Jacob's just dying to get his grubby mitts on Bella's dosh. I bet, whenever he sees her, his eyes light up with dollar signs. I can't wait to see how she gets her revenge.
Jane x
Date: 25 Jun 2013 2:53 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Oh my God! I wish my dreams were as good as Bella's, lol, I'm surprised her panties didn't just melt away. Well, hasn't Alice been a busy little pixie. Does she know about the crushes these two have for each other? Edward and Bella are going to be in for a big surprise......eventually, gah!
Jane x
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
This is truely a captivating & intriging story. Please tell me if u plan on continuing writting this beautifully well written story!!! It has been since sept. of last year since last update!!! Please update again soooooooon or please at least infor me if ur abandning this story pleasssssssssse!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2013 4:24 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
no false hope here i ove when h gets all cave ward ...we were all wondering if she was the one that got away from him ....oh yea keep going
Date: 19 Apr 2013 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Absolutely glorious story, you writing brings up such vivid pictures. More,more!
Date: 06 Apr 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Krazi, sorry I was MIA, but I love this update and I am so lookign forward to more of this fuck hot story. I cannot wait to see the resolution to this whole situation. xoxo, Kasi~
Date: 17 Mar 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IS ANYONE THERE????? WE MISS YOU HURRY BACK SOOOOOOON !!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Loving this story. Please update soon.
Date: 20 Feb 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Loved it!
Date: 19 Feb 2013 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Loved it!
Date: 19 Feb 2013 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
Loved it!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Loved it!
Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:11 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Loved it!
Date: 06 Feb 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
Finally! :)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for the next update... Please hurry :)
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
It was hot, but I did't really like that he switched to Dom mode on her so suddenly in the sub bedroom after he had made a big point of telling her earlier that it was her room.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I just love it when that happens! Virgins always freak men out.
Date: 05 Feb 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Wow, freaking awesome chapter. Well worht the build up.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 7:53 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Just started reading this story and I am hooked.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Read the teaser. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Jan 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Can't wait for more!! :)
Date: 27 Jan 2013 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
I really, REALLY like this story... Hope it will be continued soon... :-)
Date: 12 Jan 2013 7:14 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I really hope you update soon. Don't leave this story undone. II recently found it and am at chapter 17 so hopefully by the time I get to the last one posted you will have a new one up. LOL!! Please.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
How I have enjoyed this story! I am just really hoping and begging you will get back to us with another chapter, very, very soon. It is so good and I want more. Please, pretty please give it to me?
Date: 17 Dec 2012 10:49 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Ready for an update soon please
Date: 09 Dec 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Wait a second here! Is this a dream sequence or what? What happened to the club visit? I am confused.
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2
mojo is adorable then you show me brownie cuddling with a teddy bear but now youve done it marley is just to cute for wordsyou dont play fair
Date: 18 Oct 2012 4:39 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Recently found this story wow is all that can be said it's fantastic.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Bella has had a rough week, and as hurt as Edward is (with good reason), I hope he is not too hard on her. It sounds like they both need some major reconnection time. I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see how this plays out.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
I love this story but I don't understand why Edward keeps telling her "we can end this anytime" any time Bella struggles a little. It kind of seems like he's telling her their relationship will be over if she can't handle the BDSM part of the relationship. Why not remind her she can red any time but not say suggest ending their relationship. If he loves her, he should make sure she knows their personal relationship wont change in the event their BDSM agreement ends. She should be able to "red" or "yellow" without it ending either their romantic relationship or their BDSM contract. Hope what I'm saying makes sense. Also, I don't understand why he wants Bella to suffer without release for so long. Why doesn't he want her to have any pleasure in their sexual relationship? How does the subs denial of pleasure make the Dom so happy? Most men enjoy giving pleasure to women so this something I don't understand with a Dominent. I can understand him wanting to control the orgasm and to build up the need for release, but not to the extent of torture or to deny release indefinitely just out of meanness or to make her suffer. What is the lesson or purpose of doing this?
Date: 02 Oct 2012 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
I would have been a massive fail at not cuming during the play time. However I would have never masturbated either. I think she hurt him a lot. I know how much it hurts when you have a partner living with you and they masturbate instead of telling you what they need. Its very hurtful and degrading. Because one feels like they are not good enough and therefore you had to do it yourself.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Loved this chapter:)
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Bella is not perfect. Edward has been so busy and has not had time for Bella. When he has had time he hasn't let her have any releif. It is easy for him because he can jerk off in the shower whenever he wants to when he gets frustrated. Doms have to realize that they can only restrict cumming for so long. Cumming is a big stress relieaver. If you use sex to control stress, you need it on a regular basis or your whole life is affected. Edward went to far by forcing Bella to go too long. She was wrong to take in her own hands. She should have talked to Edward, but as her Dom, he should have known she was at her breaking point. He wasn't taking care of his sub or his girlfriend. This one was a draw.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
So sweet of Alice
Date: 30 Sep 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Loved it can't wait for more:)
Date: 30 Sep 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
OMGosh!!!!! I can not believe that she did that. Poor Edward. I could feel the hurt that Edward felt in your words. You did an amazing job writing that. AMAZING!!! He was soooo hurt that she would do that without his permission. I could also feel how upset and bad that Bella felt after she realized what she had done. I could feel her remorse but she also knew what she was doing was wrong. She needed to have stopped. She should have went to the hospital or something and at some point during the week and told her Master what she needed. I feel so sorry for both of them. But I guess that is also part of growing in an relationship.
Date: 29 Sep 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Ok I am dissapointed that the pictures are not included in the chapters. The chapter itself was wonderful. I would have thought there would have been additional oil/lube added while trying to get in the backdoor.
Date: 28 Sep 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
That was worth the wait!
Unfortunately for Bella the lack of boyfriend and girlfriend time plus too much alcohol and stress at work made a bad combination. The decision to act on her physical desires over ruled her trust in her master. She will be even more devastated now that she has failed the agreement she promised to uphold.
Yet another steep learning curve in this lifestyle that Bella and Edward will use to strengthen their relationship.
Date: 28 Sep 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
I'm glad you are back. I've missed this Edward and Bella.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Une visite !
Bon chapitre
Date: 27 Sep 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
:)
Date: 27 Sep 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Merci pour ce bon chapitre !
Pauvre Sue et Seth !
Encore ce Jacob ! quel sale type.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Merci pour ce bon chapitre !
J'aime aussi le café leche !
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
Merci pour le chapitre !
Bella a découvert le mode de vie de Jsper et d'Alice.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
I'm so glad that you decided not to give up on this story and are determined to finish it. It is absolutely one of my favorites. This chapter was very good and I can't wait for the next one to see the consequences. I also want to let you know that I love the pictures you have on your blog site that correspond to your chapters. I really like the visual. Keep up the good work and I'm anticipating the next chapter.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
J'aime ce chapitre !
Pauvre Edward, obligé de jouer avec Tanya.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Mon Dieu j'ai aimé ce qui s'est passé avec Jacob !
Bien fait pour lui !
Date: 27 Sep 2012 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Finally. And that was sooo hot and painful. I felt her pain. Loved it.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
Boy she sure knows how to cut off her nose to spite her face! I can't wait to see how this goes.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...
I love this story so much I just wished you would update more often!
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
Donc ça va être le départ de Tanya !
Tant mieux, elle m'ennerve toujours.
Date: 26 Sep 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Bon chapitre !
Date: 26 Sep 2012 7:48 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
J'aime beaucoup !
Date: 23 Sep 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Just found this story again. Is this story complete?
Date: 07 Sep 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
I totally LOVE this story!!! I just started reading yesterday and could fucking stop!!! My whole house is a mess but I didn't care!!! This story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I'm in love with this Edward! They are so perfect for each other!!! So sorry that I didn't review every chapter but I couldn't stop reading.... But I'm so going to read it all over again so this time I.ll review!! lol What will Edward ask Charlie??? To marry Bella??? And who is after Bella??? And what about Tanya??? I have so many questions for you right now but I propise to try and be passient!! Can't wait to read more....
Date: 25 Aug 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Im worn out! LOL! Damn, loving your story. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
No, thank you for sticking with my krazi update schedule! Glad to see that people are still into the story! Starting on the next chapter, so the wait won't be so long for the next one! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Aug 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
I love the pics. I cant go to you blog on my phone! *sigh* I'll miss the visuals. LOL!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Im so excited..they will finally get to meet.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
Oh i like this Bella
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:17 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
Damn it going to be a good ride on
Date: 03 Jul 2012 7:14 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
I'm a bit weirded out by this sister/friendship/sex guide relationship between Alice and Bella :S
Date: 10 Jun 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
Bummer, I liked the pics ;(
Date: 31 May 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
wow!
Date: 14 May 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Loved the chapter. Edward has crushed on Bella for years and now that he has her in his life he realizes that she is even better than any dream he ever had. I am so happy for them. They both wanted the other and didn't know how to get to this point. I don't agree with the trickery that occurred, but I am glad that they are together. They really need to thank Alice for being so sneaky. She is the one that made their dreams come true.
Date: 13 May 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
I had to crack up about Edward and the dogs! Seriously...that was funny stuff right there...all of it! LOL!
Who knew that a little anal sex could get Edward to profess undying love! ROTFLMAO!
Great chapter.
Date: 13 May 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Omg need a cold shower now that was awesome
Date: 13 May 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
More please! ;) I was ecstatic to get an update!
Date: 12 May 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
They are so good for each other. That was a very very HOT chapter.
Date: 12 May 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
OMG that was an amazingly hot chapter. Great job.
Date: 11 May 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Holy Freakin Hell! Krazi what a chapter!!!! welcome back with all the delish!!!
Date: 11 May 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
ok gotta say that was wellworth the wait. I had to wait to read today cause I cannot read without your pics lol and the whole family was home when this popped up last night. Hubs would not of minded but I think the kids would have been freaked out a little lol. It is amazing how much he loves her. He is so patient and so careful, while still being a dominating master. Love this. Ohhh he is going to talk to Charlie (I know what for don't I) Looking forward to party and what creative thing you do with them (and pics of course lol) Does it squick Edward out when he sees his sister and brother being dominated at these get togethers?
Date: 11 May 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
looking forward to mroe
Date: 11 May 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Phew! That was hot
I'm going for a cold shower.
Looking forward to the next chapter. And that talk with Charlie!
Date: 11 May 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
I know a lot happened in this chapter but I can't stop thinking about his call to the chief (which can only mean one thing: proposal!!!)
Date: 11 May 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
yummuy yummy yummy. excellent chapter
Date: 11 May 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Wow, wonderful to see you and this story back. Can't blame you for loving to read all the stories out there, because so do I! Wonderful chapter. Love his detail in aftercare. Charlie better say yes!! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 11 May 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Another great chapter, i cant wait to read more.
Date: 11 May 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Well I'll be Dommed, errr....Damned!! LOL Fan-fuckin'-tastic!!!! ;) Now oh Krazi one, please don't make me come and find you for the next chapter and the talk with Charlie... Cuz you know I will!! *smirks*
XOXOXO
Date: 10 May 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Excellent as usual...
Date: 10 May 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
Gah, that was amazing! Even if I got to beta this, it was still amazing to read it with the pictures you have in the blog ;) I really loved it!
Date: 10 May 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...
awesome chappy, this one can't wait untill Master catches up to this chappy he is almost caught up to the story he is reading so he can start reading this one.
Date: 15 Apr 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
So far I like but there are a few bits that may warrant your attention. Is Isabella going to school? Perhaps she is starting work? Oh and remember ther is a time zone change of a couple of hours. So six in Seattle is like nine or ten in New York.
Thanks for the read.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
those fucking machines are deliciously crafted teasing devices...
Date: 08 Apr 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
who in their riht damn mind complains about rob porn? i love the piczs and its easier for me t read th story here when i'm on my phone like now.to all u haters that don't like pics...thanks for ruining it for the rest of us! jackasses!
Date: 31 Mar 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
i second ya on the vomiting thing.....i can't stand that curdled cunt
Date: 31 Mar 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
are you gunna update soon? i cant wait to hear more!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?
i love her crzy internal banter!
Date: 30 Mar 2012 5:40 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
hot hot hot! since i totally love twilight and am a ff hoor.....i brought my dom along with me to read this story. i hope u don't mind that we will b reading together, but separately under different pen names. my dom is new to the ff wrld.....so this ough to be interesting!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
wow that was hot!can't wait for bella to get back to her master.fab chapter.
Date: 26 Mar 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
I hope there is some romance mixed with the BDSM. They haven't even kissed yet. I like my BDSM mixed with love and HEA endings. Glad to see things moving along but surprised the BJ came before a kiss or embrace of any kind.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
I really love this story!!! Can't wait for updates!