Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Breaking
love the story
Author's Response:
Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoy it so far!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 - College Bound
Hmmmm Interesting! I cant wait until she meets the gang! And where is Rosalie???
Author's Response:
She met Rosalie and right now she's with Emmett in their apartment getting ready for classes. The gang will show up in future chapters. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Fighting the Demons
Thanks for the insight into Edward's Valentine's Day plans. Helped put things into perspective as to why Tanya's betrayal hit him from left field. He said they hadn't been together since Thanksgiving....but he knew he wanted to marry her at Christmas. Weren't they together then? Could the baby be his? Will she lose the baby and then try to reunite with Edward once his broken heart begins to heal...hopefully with Bella's help? Sorry for the questions...assume some if not all will be answered in the chapters to come.
Love how Edward messed around with Jasper....serves him well!
Author's Response:
School kept him from going home and being with her over the holidays. There will be more in the upcoming chapters. That's for following along. I hope I don't disappoint. :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Fresh Start
Was looking for something to read and saw this rec on the TWCS Library site and decided to give it a try!
Must say, I'm glad I did. I was a little put off on the depth of depression that Edward went/is going through. I understand and can relate to being broken up with but I guess it wasn't "the one" since while I wallowed for a while, I gave myself a kick in the a$$ after a couple of months instead of 6+. I do want to punch Tanya in her fake face for leading Edward on. No one should play with another's feelings. If it's not there, tell them. Bella did that with Jake and while it hurt, it was honest and there weren't any vagueness to it even if Jake thinks it could be more. Bella didn't lead him on like Tanya apparently did.
Like I said, I'm liking this and am intrigued. I hope Edward does allow himself to heal and realize not all women are like Tanya. I hope he doesn't become a manwhore....not worth it and will leave you feeling empty, not to mention hurt the one you're meant to be with.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you gave it a try. Edward will slowly start coming out of his shell a more in future chapters. As for you last comment - I'm in total agreement, I considered it, but after all the FF that I have read, I just couldn't see Edward doing that, not saying that he won't try dating again - and I will leave it there. I hope I don't turn you off down the road. Thank you again for the response and the read!!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 4 - A Fresh Start
great story. can't wait until the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks...I hope you enjoy future chapters too!! :)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Broken Heart
i really liked this. i genuinely feel edward's pain. thanks for being realistc - that this kind of hearbreak doesn't disappear overnight.
Author's Response:
I agree with. I could totally place myself in his shoes which made it easier to right. I hope you enjoy the rest of what's to come!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Broken Heart
I really liked it i just feel so heart broken for edward tanya needs to be bitch slapped for hurting him and i hope james dumps her .i hope he can see not all women are evil cows lol and find love w/bella .can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
I couldn't agree with you more. I am so excited to be writing this story. Be patient with me as this is all new to me. It's a different kind of writing than I am used to.