Date: 07 May 2014 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hot dawn didn't see rhat one comming
Date: 07 May 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh shit!!!!! Dun dun dun!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
You continue to shock me with all these twists and turns & now you have me rooting for Bella & Carlisle. That was also a funny little jab with Edward saying how he was madly in love with her. :)
Date: 28 Apr 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 23
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
oh snap!! whaaaa??
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ho . . .my. . . CRAP! This is getting good!
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
oh hell no... Will Edward be a problem.
Date: 21 Apr 2014 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2014 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yay I got a kindle for Easter so I can finally review again!! Love this chapter!! I can't wait to see what Charlie does. :)
Love it BB!
*hugs*
Date: 14 Apr 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter!!! I'm loving this story!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well Carlisle & Bella might finally have a little peace? I can actually see him in a better light.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow what a heavy chapter. Great job.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 09 Apr 2014 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
Ok, well maybe others don't like it, but I do see what your doing. I do like this story, it's different. So, go for it! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2014 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
i still think esme is cheating with charlie
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
is it wrong for me to dislike charlie for a maybe affair?
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Date: 03 Apr 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
i know esme is mean and this is a painful story but i cant help to be amazed to show the man side of an abusive relationship. it does open others eyes to see it is not a joke nor is it funny it is a serious situation
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sometimes I can see it, but with this Charlie and Esme, together *shiverws*
Fantastic chapter.
Date: 02 Apr 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
You know I feel bad for her that her lover is afraid to leave his abusive wife but her attitude just makes me hate her and makes her just seem like a whiny bitch
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ok that makes me think esme is sleeping with charlie... yep bitch alright
Date: 02 Apr 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forwards to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think she's acting like a little bratty bitch and she needs to stop. She makes the fucked up decision to be with Carlisle and suddenly it everyone's fault? She decides to keep seeing him and that's her dad's fault? She needs serious help and clearly she's not ready for any kind of relationship, she's way too young acting and I'm so sick of her freaking crying act
Date: 27 Mar 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forwards to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my God! This is such a great story. I can't wait to see what happens in Forks.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this story! Can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2014 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
So is the blow out about to happen
Date: 24 Mar 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
aaaawww i wonder how everything will go with Rose at the house
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm sick of all her crying does she ever toughen up a little
Date: 24 Mar 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Im so glad rose is going with her. bella needs all of the support she can get. Im torn, i want her to work out her issues with charlie but avoid carilisle.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2014 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
i know we will find this out next chapter..but why the hell is charlie so insistent of her coming home now.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it!!!! So it seems it's going to really get interesting!! Love all your stories! Have read everything you have out there! Can't wait for the next chPter!!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
I feel for bella. maybe she should move on
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yeah she should have saw that one coming. She basically had to make him stay. Any time someone doesn't do something of their own will it doesn't usuallyy last
Date: 19 Mar 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Couldn't stay to say good by what a douche
Date: 19 Mar 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
I knew he was going to leave her again. He likes keeping her on this roller coaster. Hopefully, her friends can talk her into getting away from him.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
This is an awesome story bb! Can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh he's so not telling the truth, he just doesn't want to lose her. She has school and she'll never know if she flies back to take care of business or not. Happy to see she's making some rules this time
Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think it is hard to believe Carlisle is sincere. I still don't believe he is but with Esme being an abuser so he says, it does make him a little more likable.
Date: 15 Mar 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Mar 2014 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh the drama is just beginning....Esme won't make anything easy
Date: 11 Mar 2014 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
I guess at least she has someone but really....All he has to do is plow her with sweet words and she does whatever he wants. Stay with him or don't either way she needs to get herself a backbone. Sorry but I don't like weak females and that seems to be what she is
Date: 04 Mar 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
Please tell me she gets some sense soon and stops letting him call all the shots
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2014 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
I get there's a lot more to this story but could we please move it along because I'm so sick of her feeling sorry for herself. I mean the girl is in college....it's not that hard. She's making shit harder then it has to be
Date: 25 Feb 2014 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ah, man! You are scaring me! But I will be brave, BRING IT ON! Love this story! Thank you for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Really good! Thanks!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Really loving this B and C pairing!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really great story you've got here! Thank sfo rsharing!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
They are to cute when theynare together!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yes, what a mess they are in! Oh but what fun it is!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Truly forbidden affair!
Date: 18 Feb 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was amazingly hot! But also sweet and tender too! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 17 Feb 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Just read through the story. It's interesting and I can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Feb 2014 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Girl needs to talk to someone before she goes crazy....Besides I think Mr. Carlisle is having his cake and eating it too as in he's a liar and a piece of shit
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
The chapter cut off?
Man I feel for her so much! Poor girl!
Author's Response:
I don't know what happened witht the chapter, but I've fixed it.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
I don't like infidelity but this story rocks.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
Holy cow!! That was hot BB!!!
*pants and fans self*
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Congrats on publishing!!!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
Mmmm, hot times on a road trip!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
looking fowrard to mroe
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am curious as to how this will all turn out. I wonder who the waitress was calling when they left. thanks for writing
Date: 19 Jul 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can't belive Carlisle did that! I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 12 Jul 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Interesting twist at the end! I can't wait to read more about their trip.
Date: 12 Jul 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
excited to see what happens next
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
well im excited to see what happens next
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
YES!!! FINALLY THEY CAN BE TOGETER!!THIS IS THE BEST STORY!! WE LOVE LOVE LOVE BELLISLE!!!!!!! We love your story so much and we cant wait for the next long update! all 46 of us in our reading group love your writings!! your adoring fans, The Fanfic Girls Reading Group here at UTEP university in El Paso texas, Maureen, Gina , Frances , Jackie , Rita , Denise, Larissa , Irene , Opal, Baily and the rest of us :) and me, Teewhy1977
Date: 31 May 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm.....I didn't expect that from Esme. Poor Alice, I feel bad for her. She and Bella used to have a good relationship and now it's so strained. And Bella...poor Bella! She is at so many cross roads adn so confused!
Great chapter...can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
They are messy but great!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, talk about talons on Esme!! Cheese and Rice!
This is getting worse, its going to kill Bella...
Oh, BB, I cant wait to see what happens next, seriously!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks, SWeetie!
Date: 31 May 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
WOW, I can't believe Esme said those things about her.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
I was wondering about the whole BC issue. I kinda thought a little bastard baby would throw a nice kink into the story, but hey I am just the reader. I liked the part where Bella cut off the world for a few days. It shows that this whole situation is really hard on her.
Author's Response:
There might be a little bastard baby, but I'm not sure yet. Yes, this is hard on Bella, but she's in so deep that it's hard for her to find her way out.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sometimes reality sucks. They are incredibly hot together, but there are so many strings attached to their relationship it is nothing but tangled knots.
Oh, and by the way...excellent lemons my dear. Some of your best. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've been working on my samutt ;) Yes, this story will be nothing short of an emotional rollercoaster for all of them.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! That was one hell of a beginning. The title to this fits it like a glove.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sweetie:)
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
the guilt bella is feeling is so well portrayed - will there be any chapters from CPOV? I imagine he must also be suffering from guilt.
Author's Response:
I imagine CArlisle will speak to me at some point.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Who is cursing Carlisle? :) I love this story - keep going with it sweetie!
Can you imagine getting "broke" by Carlisle? Ahhhh what a way to go.....
Thank you again!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
*runs screaming* Carlisle is sooooooooooooo HOT!!!!!!
Thanks for another panty changing chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW - Carlisle can take me and make me his anytime! That was so hot and steamy and sexy! Thank you so much!
Date: 01 May 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hi!!! I just found this story now and like yours other stories is really great !!! I loved Carlisle and read lemons with him, humm is so good!!! hope you can post more it have so much i wanted to see, and to know how Alice and Charlie will react and Esme lol I´m really anxious for more please keep going I see nothing wrong here!!! is one story very good, sorry my bad English
xoxo
Date: 01 May 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know how something like this will work out without someone getting hurt. What is Carlisle going to do?
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, how are they going to continue this affair? Bella is going away to Yale, then what?
Date: 16 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder if carlisle is believable or leading her on??? Only time will tell! Looking forward to more!
Date: 16 Apr 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a surprise by making it Carlisle! Loving the story!
Date: 13 Jan 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Way surprised! I thought you made a typo with blue eyes, and I imagined Edward all along.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. Bella and Carlise together are one of my favorites. I love the part where he tells her to bend over. Reminded me of the movie Secretary. Very sexy. You should totes make this a full story. I would read it for sure. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I will be expanding this one I get a few others taken care of.
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy hell! Damn that was hot!! Totally surprised the shit out of me, LOL, but damn... ;)
Too bad it's a one-shot! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I will more than likely be expanding this one at some point so be on the look out:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG..... I was going back and forth between Jasper, Edward, or Carlisle at first..... Then as it got into it, I didnt think so much of Edward as I did the other two..... But still shocked to see who it was, this would make a great story.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I am strongly leaning towards making it more than a one-shot but I still have some other stories to finish first.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was surprised!! Awesome BB!!
I loved it :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG THAT WAS HOTTT!! THE BLUE EYES GAVE IT AWAY BUT IT WAS SOOOO WORTH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
I kind of saw it coming a bit half way through. But it was awesome.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)