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Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 16

well, well, well, eddie you have finally realized it. but what are you gonna do about it now?



Author's Response:

Good question! Thank you for all the reviews!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

aww he finally found a reason to stay just in time for him to go.

i wonder ehat he left for her?



Author's Response:

It figures, right? Thank you for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

so sweet! bella deserved to have her birthday celebrated, and eddie was just the man to help her with that.



Author's Response:

These two are really cute together, aren't they?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

like a couple of horny teenagers. heehee but still sweet. the date sounded perfect



Author's Response:

It does sound like a great date, huh?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

she has the trueth about his job an they seem to really be cute together



Author's Response:

So happy you are enjoying the story-thank you!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 11

oh goodness a stalker? meaybe?

bella and eddie like eachother andare gonna give it a go!



Author's Response:

Yay!! Finally, huh?  Thank you!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

and finally we have the trueth about eddie and the women in his life. heehee.



Author's Response:

Too funny-I kind of felt bad for Ed   Thank you for  R & R!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 9

well eddie you tryed. now bella gets to feel like an asshole when she hears who the girls really were!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!  Yeah-jumping to conclusions will do that!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

and the real problem rears it's head - bella wants more....



Author's Response:

Isn't that usually the case? They need to get on the same page...Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 7

aww they are so cute together! and em is too funny



Author's Response:

Poor Emmett-always the comic relief  LOL  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

well eddie is caving, i wonder how bella is fairing?



Author's Response:

Yeah, he is fallling, isnt he? lol  Bella isnt far behind... Thanks for the reviews!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

both bella and eddie are slowly creeping into the other's head.

wonder who lost the puppy?



Author's Response:

Slowly but surely  lol  Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

well at least em ans alice were truethfull and told bella and eddie the plan



Author's Response:

I thought it was a good idea for them to 'come clean' about it-after what they both went through with their spouses and all. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 3

well eddie is 'fuck-hot' so i guess he made an impression too. and alice is trying to be a matchmaker...



Author's Response:

He is pretty hot...lol Alice is being sneaky. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

well it looks like bella made an impression on eddie i wonder what she thought of him?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

see what happens when you get complacant with your spouse? it turns into one huge cluster fuck! lol but hey when one door closes a window opens, right?



Author's Response:

LOL-so true! Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

So Mike acted on his own. Way to go Jake! Quick thinking Esme and Alice.

Poor Rose and Alice, feeling responsible, hope Edward can understand that it was not their fault.

How will Bella react when she finds out Edward quit his job for her? Lucky girl.



Author's Response:

He did act on his own, but felt empowered to do so by his drug dealing. Jake is a good dog and I agree that Bella is a lucky girl! LOL  The girls will be fine.  Thank you for reading! I love your reviews, too.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

Who is Mike working with or for? I still think James is involved. Someone is orchestrating this plan and distracting the Cullens.

 



Author's Response:

You're close...all will be revealed soon. Thanks for taking the time to read ATH and for the reviews!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 17

Her stalker is getting bold.

Why didn't she tell Edward she loved him so he could respond in kind?

The anxiety is escalating, will he be home before the stalker is caught?



Author's Response:

Perhaps the stalker knows that Edward is gone? Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

The flower thing again............James?

So sad Bella sleeping in his bed, in his shirt. At least she has access to his things for comfort.

He needs to concentrate on his job or he could get himself injured or worse yet his team could be put in jeopardy.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hmmm...could be...  concentrating is a difficult thing to do when you focus is split, he may need to make a decision soon. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 15

That man is beyond hot in bed.

Glad they didn't utter the words good-bye.

Hard to believe how quickly they matched up not just physically but mentally and emotionally as well.

Need to keep reading.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review-I just couldn't let them say 'goodbye'!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

Carlisle and Esme are adorable in their outward display of how happy they are that Bella is a part of Edward's future.

Can you write a more romantic kind of guy...........pure adoration for her, can't keep his hands off her, buying her favorite flowers and jewelery, making b-day dinner. Swoon!

They are going to have difficult time being apart. Hope you make their skype dates as hot as when they are together.



Author's Response:

Perfect! I  was going for Swoon-worthy!  He is leaving and it's her birthday-he had to do something nice. Thanks for reading. I love reading your thoughts about each chapter! 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

What a great first date, sexy motorcycle ride, romantic Symphony/picinic in the park and then amazingly hot fully clothed sex; topped off with him asking her to stay the night, Wow.

Lovin it!



Author's Response:

Nice, huh? I'd like to go on a date like that!  LOL  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

What a nice get to know you kind of day.

Secrete Agent Hotness, he is all that and oh so sweet.

Need to keep reading.



Author's Response:

It was nice, wasn't it? Glad you agree. Thank you for reading and for the reviews.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 11

For a moment I thought that maybe Mike, her student, had left the white rose. Then when the second one showed up I thought that maybe James was stalking her; not sure though.  Hmmmmm, will have to think on this more.

Bella is such a tease to Edward letting him know that she wanted to show him her bed time apparel. He has such a vivid imagination even in his dreams.



Author's Response:

Not commenting on the roses...but the imagination is a wonderful thing, eh?   Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 10

Alice and her interfering big mouth........she know how to play with the boys heads....pun intended!

A Screaming Orgasm.......“I would love to give you one.”   Me too please!

Oh Yea, body shots.........six pack abs, tongue, drink, lick salt......Oh my, I'm a little light headed myself.



Author's Response:

You should have been in my head when I was writing it.  On second thought-no. I really liked how this chapter evolved-it ended up being nothing like the original I had planned. Thanks for reading-love the review!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 9

Awe, Puppy has a name....Jake, now that is down right hilarious!

Edward just keeps on provoking the unexpected rath of Bella.  Jealousy sure make us do stupid things.



Author's Response:

I couldn't leave Jake out, could I? I love Jacob...as a dog  LOL  Us women and our emotions-sometimes I feel sorry for the guys-they never know which way is up!   Thank you. For reading, for reviewing-I love reading them.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

Bella is gonna let her emotions and misconceptions run away with her.

Edward has no clue his is officially in the dog house.



Author's Response:

Being deceived the way she was by James, can you blame her? It is a bit silly though.  lol  Poor Eddie-guy just can't catch a break.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

Alice is at it again.

Edward and his sweet torture.....

Glad they got all the bagage out on the table.



Author's Response:

Alice just can't leave it alone, can she? It was time for these two to stop avoiding and just let things start to evolve.  Thank you-I appreciate you reading and leaving me your thoughts!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Leave it to the puppy to put Bella in Edwards path with her nice assets on display.

Oh, they each need a Friend.....with all the benefits!

Will Emmett be in harms way with the new drug dealers?



Author's Response:

Yeah, leave it to the dog!  I wouldn't worry about Emmett...   Thank so much!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

Party, day 2, sweaty quaterback glissening in the afternoon sun. Takes your breath away doesn't it! lol

2 favorite pies found, telling off Tonya, wearing HIS sweat shirt with the intoxicating smell.......priceless!

Jean shorts, tight v-neck t-shirt with hands in back pockets popping out the chest, 2 favorite pies, a beauty wearing his sweatshirt.........he's toast!

Does she keep the puppy?



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward doesn't stand a chance...Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts-I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

Nice to see Bella can hold her own and not let anyone take advantage of her, even Alice know now to back off.

Fun idea to have adults playing kids games for several days of partying.



Author's Response:

Bella isn't going to put up with anyone's crap...LOL  I wanted the party to be fun for all ages. Who wouldn't want to be able to let loose and play for a few days? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Funny.....Bella mentally kicking herself for not taking the oportunity to ogle the shirtless hunk of a mitary man standing in her bathroom in low slung pajama bottoms.

Convining Alice, I think we all know what she is up to!



Author's Response:

Thank you again-I know, right? How could you miss that kind of man standing in your bathroom?? Alice is working subtely behind the scenes...

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

Cute first meeting between neighbors.

Second meeting even better....Bella, unaware, has planted thoughts by being a damsel in distress wearing only a short satin robe. hmmmm, This is getting better as I go!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I wanted thier meeting to be uniquie and just your normal neighborly thing. Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and leaving a review.  :)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

Great start to peak my curiosity.

Look forward to getting to know your Edward and Bella. Nice change of setting for Edward. Am aware of a few good soldiers that have been shafted by wives while in the service of our country, sucks to loose the personal support. Most of the women have been selfserving and emotionally immature, not ready for the responsibility.

Bella seems pretty straight forward and sure of herself even if the rug has been pulled out from under her.

Thanks for sharing your creativity.



Author's Response:

I actually got the idea from a Lifetime movie-but also know of some real-life situations just like it. I agree that it is an awful thing. If you follow my writing, you'll find that I will always write a strong Bella, or at the very least, one that finds her strength. I can't stand weepy, doormat Bellas-LOL. Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts.

Reviewer: kikiharuka13666 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 24

In a way I hate this story but I love it at the same time. I actually have to get out of bed at a decent time tommorrow but because you write so well I have been glued to my computer screen. You should make a sequel. I seriously thought James was involved with the roses. So make a sequel about Bella and Edward's growing family or something.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much and sorry?  LOL   I am very happy that you like ATH. Reviews like yours make me want to write more-so thank you! I don't know about a sequel, but I am working on a new one now and hope to get it out soon. Thanks again!  :)

 

Reviewer: Sophi715 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 24

LOVED IT! definately one of my all time faves.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much-very happy you enjoyed it! thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sophi715 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 17

This fic just gets better and better...I started reading this late last night and I haven't been able to stop...



Author's Response:

That is a great compliment-thank you so much!

Reviewer: Sophi715 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 15

WOW!!! And I mean that in a very good way...



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Happy you liked it  :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 24

Wow this story had everything I look for in a fic...creativity, drama, humor, romance, excitement, loving, loving, and more loving etc etc...and not alot of angst!  I couldn't put it down.  I enjoyed it immensely and hope you continue writing more like it in the future. (having checked your profile to see if you have or not but I will immediately!)  thanks for sharing your story and your talent with us!  Stories like this make our day!

Hugs, Stephanie



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! This is the kind of story I write-very little angst and a lot of everything else! I am really happy that this type of story is appealing to you and others because I wasn't sure anyone would even like it! Thank you again!!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved the story, quick and easy read with a little bit extra. 

Thank you for writing it. 

Fiorella



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading it! I appreciate the review and am happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

great story thank you for sharing it



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts! I'm happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

awwwwwwwwww



Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy you're enjoying the story.  :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

AAAA++++



Author's Response:

Awesome. Thanks!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

;( boohoo



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope the lemon is in the next chapter



Author's Response:

Patience is a virture, dear. (hope it's worth the wait!) Thanks!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 10

a body shot off of Edward, well there's a hot image



Author's Response:

Yeah, I thought it was pretty hot--lol! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

these 2 are always quick to jump to conclusions



Author's Response:

They are, aren't they? lol. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

these 2 are cute



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks! I really like these two.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

great party and I think you are off to a great start



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

An amazing story, excellent job. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I appreciate each review you left and am really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved how fun and light the wedding was. Excellent job. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Me and my pre-reader/friend thought that these two would have something a little more laid back. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!!!!! ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks!! I love that other people actually enjoy this story! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 21

Oh for the love of Pete! I can't wait to see what now. ;)



Author's Response:

LOL. I couldn't help it, I had to throw something else in there!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

I have a feeling that Edward's going to be a bit protective over Bella. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Happy you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 19

I love how you threw the beeping of the monitors in there. I can't wait to see how things go now that Mike is out of the way...maybe. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Sometimes the little details really help set the mood.  Thanks for R & R!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 18

I had a feeling when you said she saw one of her students at the resturant and then right after she got another rose. Can't wait to find out what happened. ;)



Author's Response:

Hope I didn't make it too obvious! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter, I'm starting to think that maybe it's Mike now. Can't wait to find out. ;)



Author's Response:

HMMM you may be right. lol thank you!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Loved this one. I'm dying to see when Edward tells her he's in love with her. ;)



Author's Response: Thanks, I really liked this chapter too!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

You did an excellent job, though my favorite one was the morning after! ;)



Author's Response:

*blushes* Yeah, it was my favorite, too!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 14

I can't believe he's leaving already. Great chapter. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

Very nice! ;)



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

*Sigh* These two are just too dang cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you  :)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

The rose thing is creepy. I don't know if it's James or Mike from school. Can't wait to find out. Love how they're giving this a chance. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm happy that you're getting into this! Thanks for reviewing. 

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

Glad that's all cleared up! I just hope Bella doesn't get all shy after this. ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I don't do angst much, so it won't get too heavy :) Thank you..!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 9

Bella needs to get her head out of her ass...just sayin'. ;)



Author's Response:

I agree with you!! lol. thanks  :)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh Bella...already jumping to conclusions. Hope things get straightened out fast. ;)



Author's Response:

When you get burned, it's easy to go there! lol  thanks. 

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved their time together. I'm dying to see how things unfold and how they handle him leaving. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

Friends...right... You keep telling yourself that Edward. ;)



Author's Response:

Ha! yeah, let's see how long that lasts...

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm...Edward all sweaty playing football. ;)



Author's Response:

Yummy, isn't it?  lol :)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved the first day. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you  I'd like to go to a party like it!  :)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 3

;) Nice!



Author's Response:

LOL thank you!

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

Lovin it. I might just leave some smileys cause this is something I want to read straight through. Great job. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks-nice of you to say! :)

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

Found this just looking around. Sounds interesting. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks-hope you like it!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thank you for such a great story loved reading it.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! Glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

This was a particularly enjoyable story.  You put in just enough angst and drama to keep it interesting without getting too intense. 

Thank you so much for sharing!

 

Catherine

 



Author's Response:

Aww, Thank you! Happy you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: kmac17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 24

what a great way to end it... loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Happy you liked it.  :}

Reviewer: Breath-of-twilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

You are so right. I have read many much much worse. Tense jumping is a common thing for writers, though. So, sometime ya almost get used to it.

 

Happy writitng, bb and Merry Christmas.

xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, I think? A lot of people forget that this is fanfiction. Something people do to let out their creative side. I suppose some are aspiring writers, or using this forum for practice and honing their skills. However, most are like me-bored housewives having some fun and maybe discovering that they have a knack for storytelling/writing. I don't claim to be a writer, I'm just playing around here and if anything I write is any good and people like it? Well then I think that is wonderful! Thanks so much for reading!! Hope your Christmas was great!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

Finally they both realize.

Author's Response:

Took them long enough, huh? Thanks for reading!  :)

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Yep, thought it was Mike.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow good job excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so glad you thought so!!

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeee CUTE!



Author's Response:

Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

No trust yet.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it takes time. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

This was super fantastic!  well written adn a good read!  Thank you for sharing it with us all.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 24

that was a good  story ji liked it

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, happy you liked it!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Both seem to be letting down there guards pretty easy.



Author's Response:

Is that a good or bad thing? Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Sounds like a good time.



Author's Response:

I thought so! LOL Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

Sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue

Severely messed up



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

That was a great story I loved it.  I look forward to more from you I love the way you write.  Have a wonderful holiday.  Cant wait to hear more from you



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I've been (trying to) working on something. Hopefully, I'll make some headway with it soon! (Keep me on alert) Happy Holidays to you, too!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 24

Been a great story.  Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I appreciate your support of ATH. :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) grate story



Author's Response:

You left words!!!  lol Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate the support. :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 24

Wonderful ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

Very sweet ending...maybe one day you'll let us know what happened and if they got that new baby too!   Great story, thanks so much for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I may write an outtake. Someone on ff.net wanted Lauren to come back. I'll think about it :) Thanks for all the support for me and ATH!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 24

Fantastic story!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for all the support! :)

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Aw, that was a great wedding!   Totally them, and appropriate since the barbeque is where their relationship started.   I hate to see this story end, can't wait for the epi!

 

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

awww, YAY! great ending! Have a wonderful holiday!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for all the support.! Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: clanmoran Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 24

Very good conclusion to a VERY good story!  Thanks for writing this....totally enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Very nice words. Thanks for all the support!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Perfect! Loved the wrap!
Happy holidays!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for all the support! Happy Holidays to you, as well!  :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 23

It is good that they finally got married and it was exactly what they both wanted.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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