[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love your story
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot! That makes my day! :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
Phew... I´m glad that Edward was okay. That was really smooth of Bella to just agree to move in on the sly, so when he asked her to it was pretty much done. Lol! I´m so glad she Tanya in her place. That broad can never take a hint. OMG! That proposal was the bomb! It was so sweet of him to propose right at midnight! What a way to bring in the new year. I´m really going to miss this story. Two more chapters! Awe man, but I guess all good things must come to an end! :( Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind words! I'm going to miss it, too. Thanks for reading!!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Best Parts:
“Say what you came to say then get the fuck out. DO NOT disrespect her again or you’ll be dealing with me. You‘ll be lucky if I don‘t kick your ass anyway,” Edward warned. I watched as James actually paled from Edward’s words.
“Well James, I neither want or need your apology, so I won‘t be accepting it. I have already moved on from you. You didn‘t do anything that Edward couldn‘t fix. I wish you nothing but the best but, after today? I‘ll never think of you again” He and Edward both looked at me in surprise. “Goodbye.” I opened the door and watched him walk out.
Bella also gave in to a combined bachelor/bachelorette party. It was more like a dinner party with gag gifts and lingerie. It was fun, though. We weren’t going to be spending our last single night apart, either. Nothing with us had been conventional, so why start now?
“Jake! Let’s go get married, buddy.” I had to put my foot down about Jake being in the wedding. Alice wanted to tie the rings to a ribbon and hang them around his neck. I don’t think so.
Our house will always have a stash of Ring Pops. Hidden, of course.
Author's Response:
LOL! thanks so much! I really appreciate you sticking around for the whole thing!! My PC crashed last night with my Epi on it, so I have to rewrite it. It should be out next week.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was sweet. loved the story a lot. thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well it was all over really fast just like Bella said. I am happy they got engaged and it was the best way to do it too. I am very sad that they story ended so soon.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for the support!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was beautiful! I loved how they came together when neither believed in love. They each had to have the hard before the perfect so they knew wha it was!
Great job!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm happy you liked it.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww they're married now. Glad eddie was there when James showed up. Wonder how he got the address
Author's Response:
Thanks for supporting ATH. I appreciate you taking the time to review.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
James is still scum he was only trying to make himself feel better I sont think he ment what he said he was sorry he got caught. I wonder what made him go into therapy??? Loved the wedding I like different.
Author's Response:
Thanks for following ATH. I appreciate your reviews.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
Execellent job on your first FF. Keep writing and honing your skills!
I really appreciated the way you stayed away from a lot of the typical FF cliches (Adonis, chocolate eyes, really clumsy B). B/E's relationship grew realistically but you still kept characters unique qualities. Good job with the lemons too, I'm sure they can be tough to put to paper.
Though the plot flowed nicely, thing got a little out of control with Mike/Marcus. Parts seemed contrived or not really explained enough. Why would Mike go sooo wacko over Bella. (no real reason given other that he wanted her and did drugs) As for Marcus, why would some major drug lord risk it all just because his drug runner wigged out? He's hiding from the law in 5 states so he would be laying low and not messing with B. It's just not believeable.
That said, you're a terrific author and I wnat to encourage you to keep at it. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Best wishes, Mz Ded
Author's Response:
I actually agree with you wholeheartedly. The lemons were tough, not so much to write, but to know someone is reading them? Mortifying. As for the rest, you are 100% correct. As I've never written anything before discovering FF, I am completely inexperienced. I appreciate your honesty and the advice! Thanks for reading!!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Mike, how'd a thunk? Thought for sure it was James. Nice twist, but Mike must be off his rocker. Pretty twisted for a HS kid. Mwwwwaaaaahhh
Author's Response:
Yes, I can always fall back on inexperience. First fic and all lol. In retrospect, I may have changed that. Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Luv commando E going all commando!
Author's Response:
Quite yummy, isn't he? Thanks!!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
What a wonderful wedding! It was perfect to have the wedding a year later from when they really met and got to know each other. I love this couple.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I wanted to tie the big party into the whole thing. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
*sniffle* So sad to see these lovebirds apart :(
Thanks for the smexy scene. I be E likes lemon meringue pie too!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO-I'm sure he does! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was beautiful.. You left me crying.. I loved it.
E/k
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice words! I appreciate you reviewing, too!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
That was awesome!! Yayy! (shouts an claps all around) Ha Ha Tanya gets it. that was funny. The proposal was beautiful. Thanks for that.
E/k
Author's Response:
Thank you! Tanya deserved it. I was trying really hard to not take the proposal over the top, so thanks!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
Author's Response:
You make me laugh! I know you like because of your smile, and you always leave one, so thank you for sticking with me and ATH!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Body shot off E is always a good idea! Glad they got the misinformation cleared up. Gotta luv Alice. Even though you didn't name the dog Harley (after E's bike), I like the idea that the typical "Jake drama" is out of play since he's the pup =:o
Author's Response: I don't do angst very well, that's why Jake ended up being the dog. lol Thanks!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hope B keeps the dog. I think Harley is a good name for him.
Nice job on the slow build up for their relationship. Very believable. (Though I wouldn't mind a little lemonade soon ;o)
Author's Response:
Ya know? I almost did name him Harley! I did try to make it a little more realistic. It just would not have worked for them to just jump each other right off the bat. Maybe next time..
Thanks!!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
It was refreshing to read your "first impression" descriptions of B/E. That they found each other mutually attactive is much more realistic than the "green eyed Adonis" and "eyes like pools of chocolate"/soulmate approach which is sooo over used and trite.
Doing a great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I purposely tried to stay away from that stuff. I get sick of reading it myself, so I'm surely not going to write it! Thank you for reading and leaving me your thoughts!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 23
great ending! but i don't want it to be over...*sniff* i'm gonna miss this!
Author's Response:
Wow, what a nice thing to say! Thanks for sticking with me and ATH, I know you've been with me from the start!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Congraulations on taking that first step into putting your work out into Fanfictiondom! From the first chapter, I can tell you are off to a great start. Looking forward to reading more.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you think so. Hope you like it. Thanks for reviewing, too!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
im happy they got their happy endihng!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! The deserved their HEA.
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Tanya will never learn will she?? I really hope that she would have learned her lesson but learning this way was better!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I liked Edward finally telling her to a...well, you know. :) Thanks!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
It is good that Bella got to go home ok well maybe not to her home but to Edward's which is better I think.
Author's Response:
I have to agree with you!! LOL Thanks for reading!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
So I came to this story late in the game, but I loved it!!! Good work!
Author's Response:
Better late than never!! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter. screw Tanya!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I think they've finally gotten through to her!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
im so excited for her! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks. It makes me really happy that some of you have gotten into this story!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved this chapter! So sweet
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. I didn't want it too over the top.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
Best Parts:
Jake pranced back and forth between us all looking for a handout. Seeing I still owed him a steak, I gave him a few pieces of spaghetti.
“You know, I am not surprised to find you here. But, woman to woman? You are making yourself look pathetic. How long have you been throwing yourself at Edward? Has he, even once, showed any interest in you at all?” She looked shocked. “Guess what? HE IS NOT INTERESTED. So, from here on out, I expect you to leave my boyfriend ALONE.” I turned and took Edward’s hand and went to join the party, leaving Tanya looking bewildered.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it, Thanks for leaving a review, too!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ring pops will do that to a man every time! Great story!
Author's Response:
Ha! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, that was a whirlwind! Glad they both finally put Tanya in her place. Would love a description of Bella's ring. Feel a little like this chapter was not as thought out as some of the others...like you were rushing to finish?
Author's Response:
I did struggle with this chapter a bit, I guess it shpwed. :( I actually do have a description of the ring-it's coming in the next chapter. Thanks so much!!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
I must say I was happy to find out it was one of the good guys that hit him in the head LOL. Loved the party and the purposal how sweet I think he should of let Bella take care of Tanya the women without a clue LOL. I cant believe it is almost over it has been a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words! I'm happy you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
GREAT CHAPTER!!! Oh, YEAH!! You answered my questions from last chapter! Was NOT expecting the engagement though! NICE WORK.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I knew your question would be answered! Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it so happy he was ok and that they got rid of Tanya lol I really hope that you will do a sequel for this maybe about Edwards new job
Author's Response:
So far no plans for a sequel. I'm bringing something out in a day or two, something I never planned on publishing. It's diferent, but still a romance. :)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
great job hun. thanks for taking the time to write it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Glad you like it!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
I just have a weird feeling that James is really behind all of this. Please don't keep us in suspense long.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and letting me know your thoughts! I'm not giving anything away!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 21
WHAT! Oh no, not again! Why the hell were those bozos on a stake-out without police back-up (and Emmett doesn't count because he wasn't in an official capacity, right)? I know Marcus was going to run, but why didn't they call in a SWAT team? They're all going to end up dead or in jail for going rogue!
Please hurry and update soon! Can't wait to find out what the hell is going on!
Author's Response:
You'd think with all the training and Charlie being Chief...only in ridiculous ff! Yes, Emmett just tagged along. (he left anyway) It's silly. Maybe I should just kill them all off for being stupid! Updating next week. Thanks so much!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well, I guess I was wrong about no sex - that was pretty hot! I always wonder why nobody ever runs out of hot water while having sex in fanfiction! They must all have gigantic water heaters!
So, sounds like maybe Edward has bigger plans than them just living together?! I wonder what he'll do for a living now that he quit his job? Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Yeah, well I had to do something...You're right about the water heaters. They must buy them at a special store! Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah! She's alive and he's back! You're right, that wasn't dragged out too long. So happy that they finally got to tell each other how they feel. However, doesn't sound like there will be any wild sex in their immediate future - that femoral artery is in a bad locale!
I kind of think Charlie was out of line with Edward...it wasn't really his fault and he was only respecting Bella's wishes by not telling him about the stalker. You would think between all of them that she would have been safe, but psychotic teenagers are hard to thwart when they really want something!
Running to the next chatper...
Author's Response:
Maybe I should have? I don't know, first fic and all...You aren't the only one who thought that Charlie was too hard on ole Eddie boy. Charlie is still feeling the sting of what James did, so he's a little overprotective. Mike? what can I say. Needed a villian! Thanks for your thoughts!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
OH my, I kind of had an inkling that it might have been Mike...he's always a creep! Anyway, I hope that Bella isn't too badly hurt and that the dog is OK too!
Author's Response:
lol! I will tell you that Jake is fine. Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
OH, so glad he's OK! I want them to tell each other how they feel, but I want it to be in person so they can celebrate together!
I hope Edward quits and comes home!
Author's Response:
You're almost there! I happy you're liking the story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
I was wondering when one of them was going to realize that they were in love! I really hope the separation doesn't last like 12 chapters because I hate them being apart and I know skype sex is OK once in a while, but I really don't want to read about it 10 times. Not that you would do that, but just saying.
Who is Bella's stalker?!
Author's Response:
I'm not big on angst and drawing things out just for the sake of more chapters, so-not gonna happen! Keep reading, you won't have to wait long! Thanks for reading and leaving me you're thoughts.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
GREAT STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'll be posting again next week. :)
Date: 11 Dec 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 21
wow hopefully Charlie comes to rescue Edward now. It doesn't seem like it will be that easy. But Edward is supposed to have skills so we will see.
Author's Response:
Not all is as it seems...Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
damnit, where the hell is Charlie?? please let him be ok
Author's Response:
Charlie is down by the boat!! lol See you next week! :) Thanks for R&R.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
So, I just happened to stumble upon this lil fic of yours. It has great storyline, but your tense jumping kinda mades me cringe a bit.
Author's Response:
Thanks? I'm sure there are some inconsistencies, but I've read much worse. I'm happy you like the storyine. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts!
Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
ok WOW great story... I just discoverd it today and could not stop reading.... so love it.. can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! It's nice to hear that so many like this little fic of mine. Updating next week...
Date: 11 Dec 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope Charlie is able to get in there and help out Edward. And Emmett needs to get in there, too. The more guys on their side the better.
Author's Response:
He probably should have had some back up, huh? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
why the fuck would he go there with out back up. and why wouldn't he inform the police about this before he did any thing... this edward is dumb as fuck
lol update soon
Author's Response:
Well, of course he thought he had it under control...Thanks for the review.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Evil to leave us hanging liek that. Hope youupdate very veyr soon. love the story, liek the way Edward talked with charlie !!!
Author's Response:
I know, sorry. Updating next week. I'm happy you're liking the story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
Whaaaaaaaaat! Another cliffie! You sneaky... sneaky... girl! Poor NegotiiatorWard, he´s going to need Bella to kiss that boo-boo and make it all better! Let´s hope Charlie is able to save the day. Bella´s not going to like this news... AGAIN! Poor girl can´t catch a break. I can´t wait to find out what happens... no pressure! *coughs* Lol! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Your reviews crack me up! Thank you. Yes, it's been a rough few months for these two. Updating next week. :)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh shit , hurry hurry (please)
Author's Response:
LMAO. Next week, dear. Thank you!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well ya had to expect there was someone else there silly Edward.
Author's Response:
You'd think so, huh? Thanks!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yummy shower time
Author's Response:
*bowing* Thanks. ;)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome Cliffee!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Edward's gonna kick some bad guy ass!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! updating next week. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
aww man. :) Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you think so!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG No please let him be alright where is Charlie?????
Author's Response:
Charlie is down by the docks...Thanks for R&R!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
showers a good place to cum clean lol
Author's Response:
LOL! Sure is! Thanks.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh man this isn't going well. I hope that Edward is alright because Emmett doesn't know what is going on right now and isn't there.
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving your thoughts! Glad you're enjoying my story!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no who hit Edward? I can't wait to read more .Thank God he has Charlie with him I really hope he will be ok
Author's Response:
Hmm, it was...Nope, not telling. Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really want to have my shower time with Edward lol.I loved that her wants her to move in with him .loved it
Author's Response:
Get in line darlin'! Thanks for R&R.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
well i hope for his sake that he will be ok! and that she will be too! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for the interest and for reviewing!
Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
OH MY---that was mean!! The last two chapters were very good. I am wondering is Marcus still doing this because of Mike, or is there someone else behind it! You are definitely good at keeping us guessing!!
Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the great job--you definitely are a talented writer.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! I appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you thought!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh, GEEZ!! I hope we don't have to wait too long.
Author's Response:
Yeah. Sorry. Next week! Thank you for R&R!
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
LOVED IT!! And thanks for the lemon! YUM!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked the citrus. :)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Best Part:
“Hi Jasper. How’s Jake?” I asked. I couldn’t wait to get home and see that dog. After I heard what he had done to Mike, I figured I owed him a steak or something.
“He’s doing just fine. He likes our backyard.” Jasper and Alice had a fenced in back yard, so he got to run around without his leash on.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like itl. More please.
E/k
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm happy you like it!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
what can I say but awwwwww
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 18
guessing he had a knife since she didnt "hear" a shot.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1-Prologue
Your banner caught my attention, I really like it!
The prologue is great! Bookmarking and can't wait to see where you take this.
Excellently done, my friend, especially for a first fic? Seriously?
LOVE!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
OMG!!! I have too much to say, so I'm gonna PM you. THANK YOU. (although, kiwibeme did the banner and has helped me, a lot)
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm so liking this story. I just started reading it today and can't stop.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you. It's really gratifying to hear that! Hope I don't disappoint.. :)
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you Thank you Bella is going to be ok they love each other how sweet.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Thanks for the review!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
Good that she is going to be ok. I am glad that Jake helped her too. I can't wait to see what happens next for them.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you're liking it! Thanks so much for R & R!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh man it was one of her students! How messed up is Mike and I really hope that Bella is going to be ok!
Author's Response:
Mike's a creeper. lol Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts. I really appreciate it.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow that was just a messed up day for them!!! I really hope that they can get a lead on who is doing this to Bella!
Author's Response:
Any ideas on who it is? Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
That is so sad that Bella has been at Edward's house crying her eyes out and now has to deal with the flowers and whoever is leaving them for her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it is a sad thought that she's at his place crying. (sorry) Thanks for R & R!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
That is so sad him leaving. I wonder how much he is considering leaving his job right now.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
It is so sad that Edward is leaving her in just two days for months!!
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree. It would really suck, huh? Thanks for the review!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
so glad bellas ok.......post soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Posting Thursday. :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 19
Whew! That was close! Yay! Eddie´s home for good, I´m so glad that it´s all over. I really thought Bella was going to be preggers, cause the had some hot unprotected sex before he left! Lol! There´s always next time. ;) Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Since this is rated NC-17, I hope we're all adults here. We'll pretend that they are responsible enough to have discussed it at some point. Especially because of James, eew!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yay, Edward's back, and Bella's going to be okay. And they love each other!!! All three in one chapter - woo hoo!!!! It couldn't get any better!!!
Author's Response:
All is right in the world! Thanks for reading and leaving me a review! Glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
You sneaky, sneaky little girl!!! Lol! You tricked me! Of all people, Mike douchbag Newton. Wait until Emmett gets ahold of him, he´s in trouble! Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Yay! Thanks for reading and leaving a review! I appreciate the support.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great, they finally got that out! I think Charlie was out of line, it was Bella's job t tell her parents, not Edward's. He did what he could, Charlie shouldn't have sent him on that guilt trip.
Author's Response:
You're right, she probably should have, but Charlie had to cut loose on someone and overhearing Edward made him a prime target! Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ouch! Cliffy! Thought it was James...really..
Author's Response:
Yes, most readers did. Thanks for reading and leaving me your thoughts!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH my god what did that little fucker do to her????
Author's Response:
*snickers* Thanks for your support!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Aww.... I think that they are both going to be crushed when he has to leave soon!
Author's Response:
It'll be tough. Thanks for reading and leaving a review!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Looking forward to next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you like it!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
they are really cute!! I wonder what is going to happen when Edward has to go back to work.
Author's Response:
It'll be tough, for sure. Thank you so much for your reviews!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well I wonder who is leaving Bella flowers. I really hope it isn't James trying to start stuff.
Author's Response:
Yeah, James is a douche! Maybe he wants her back? (Someone suggested that) Thank you!!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well that cat is out of the bag now!! I wonder what is going to happen now that it is all out in the open..
Author's Response:
Hmm...I wonder... sorry, I had to tease! thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well I wonder if Edward will ever find out what she is mad about??
Author's Response:
Ha! Hopefully he will soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
GREATNESS!!! Thank you for udpating two chapters at a time. You've done that a couple of times now and I truly appreciate it!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks. Have I mentioned that I'm impatient? That makes me believe everyone else is, too. Truthfully, though, most of this story is already done. Thank you for your support and reviews.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well Bella took that wrong didn't she? I really hope that she doesn't let that stop her from spending time with Edward.
Author's Response:
Yes she did. She is having trouble with trusting men right now, so that's all I can say in her defense. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
wow, JAke gets a steak, Esme a big hug, Edward gets Bella , Bella gets Edward !!!!!!! now we need a couple weddings
Author's Response:
Not quite yet...Thank you for reading and leaving me a review!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
WOW!! All I have to say is I'm SUPER glad you posted the next chapter. Yippee!!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it. Thanks for R & R.