[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:13 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
OME!!!! this story has me so hooked i screamed when i saw that another chapter was up. Oh My Word i am speechless and thrilled with this chapter, can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 01 Mar 2011 9:11 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
ouch! your sex definitely has a sting in the tail lol.
As a linguist, I'm intrigued to know where you get your ancient language from.
Author's Response:
LOL.
The language is a mix of some Serbian, a little bit of Romanian, Russian and Latin and I mix around/add/ and omit letters to form new words for LOTV. (Language of the Vampire) I may even use some Sweedish next time. lol I really wanted to use a "real" language but since these vamps are from another planet, I decided against it. lol
Thank you for reading and commenting. =) We appreciate it. We'll post more soon.
~Jells
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:23 PM Title: The set-up
eek gruesome lol
Author's Response:
LOL.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:13 PM Title: A New Beginning
intriguing. reminds me of the TV series V. and just as chilling!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:04 PM Title: Hate
chilling but morbidly fascinating!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 01 Mar 2011 7:58 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
wow what an incredible opening chapter! great for tension.
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
yeah if that ever happened it would be hello flame thrower
Author's Response:
LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:51 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Oh boy, this story is getting better and better. I like learning more about this AU. Very different word.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) We're glad that you're enjoying this AU.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
~Jells
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:55 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
What a chapter, and what a story. Much more compelling than your others, this is definitely my favourite.
I hope Edward and his horrible family stay that way for a good while, It's a bore when Edward turns all gooey as soon as the story takes off and I hope it has some interesting twists and turns. Bella is quite strong and mouthy, I have a feeling that is going to get her into trouble!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
We're planning to keep Edward dark. I agree, it's a bore when he turns sweet and gooey.
Thank you for reading and commenting. =)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: Hate
This is so crazy, I love it!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
We'll post more soon.
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:09 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Poor Bella. Can we run over Charlotte with a tank please? And lets not start on Eddie.
Poor Jazz. He better not hurt bella though.
Author's Response:
LMAO! Sure that sounds like fun. Char is such a bitch! And Eddie is one mean mofo. lol Jasper....he's a wicked one. =/
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:26 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow what a chapter. I must admit I was a bit confused at the start of this chapter but it was really good. I loved the rough vampire loving. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much! The conflicting emotions were a pain to write! lol
Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:08 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
this chapter was great..it was long, it had a lot off things going on..and here i was thinking that jasper was the nice one..he's an ass too..hope his mate's a human too. she who laughs then:P
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Yeah, Jasper is an ass. lol He's got something up his sleeve.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:38 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
loved this chap!! oooooo is he feelin love? or anger at the vamps who hurt her??? hmmmmmmmmmmmm pretty plz update soooooooooon XD and is it maybe poss to do the translations in brackets right after theyre said in the story as then we wil know what is actually said in the moment insted of waiting till the end?? :)
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much =)
We'll post more asap. Yeah, I was thinking about the transaltion parts and the brackets. lol
Thnaks for reading and commenting =)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:16 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
yay thank you for updating. yeah edward is defiantly on my hate list right now. i hope your exams went ok
please update again soon i cant wait
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Yeah, Edward is one mean vamp.
We'll post more soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:07 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
well that was so awesome. thanks. wonder how long he will be able to hold out. please update soon. love this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
We'll post asap.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:07 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Love this story & chapter update. I am so hooked on it. I feel for Bella everyone keeps taking advantage of her she never has a choice in the matter. I hope Edward will show her kindness and free her from her current living conditions. I can't wait to see what type of plan Jasper has in mind for his big brother. Is Alice in the story as well? I wonder if she is will she be a human or a vampire?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Alice will be coming up soon. =)
Thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:45 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Damn, I'm sort of in shock. I was drawn into the chapter and I felt all dfferent emotions while reading. That's what made it a good chapter b/c you made me feel: I can't just love/hate or be indifferent about Edward. He's definitely got his sadistic moments-pulling out of the blood whore with his barbs still intact. Blood whores are vampires? He's sexy when he goes all primal and dominant. It wouldn't of fit the story if he was gentle w/ Bella. Of course he's such an ass just plowing throuigh her w/o any foreplay. Hopefully his sex skills will get better or Bella is going to have to join a nunnery. (Do those even exist?) I'm glad he has some need to protect Bella. His conflicted feelings & thoughts about Bella were written really well. Loved how you wrote Bella's feelings.
Well P/C are interesting. Charlotte seems to have some unresolved baby issues. A Major part of me wants Jasper to become evil b/c it's too heart breaking reading about Edward kicking his ass and feeling for Jasper.
Excited to read the next update.
Author's Response:
Hi fall up!!!
Thank you so much =) We're happy that you enjoyed it. It was such a pain describing the conflicting emotions. lol Blood whores are humans. Good question, I have no idea if nunneries exist here. lol I do have a vamp religion in mind for LAH and LAV, but I'm not sure if or when i'm going to cover it. Yeah, he's definitely not gentle with Bella. We're trying to keep him dark because we don't want him to go soft and sweet all of a sudden. He definitely has a mean streak, that mofo. lol
Yeah, Jasper will be...interesting. Or at least I hope. lol
Thanks you so much. I enjoy hearing from you!
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 7:50 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
I feel so bad for Bella, I mean the girl can't catch a break. Even the soft/nice one Jasper was a dick around her and I have a feeling it'a gonna get worse. Carlisle is the shit, I love the way he's not all soft and shit. Was the blond vamp at the gas station James? Edward's such a dick, I hope he gets a lil better but not much. I like him all bad ass like he is. Also when you bring Alice into the story please don't make her part all big and important. I really can't stand her know it all ass, she gets on my nerves. I thought Bella was suppose to have something special about her that drew vamps in yet made them want to protect and not harm her. I guess I was wrong about that shit. Also why didn't Jasper and Esme follow Edward when he went after Bella and attacked her? I mean hell they we madd close and nobody heard shit? School starts next week so there should have been peps everywhere. Yet nobody heard shit, nobody came to investigate a strange sound or something. Shit humans were up in that school too and our asses are nosy by nature so they should have went to see what the hell was up with all that noise that was being made. Or do human teenage girls normally leave school naked, crying and bleeding? Cuz he did rip all her clothes if I'm remembering correctly. At this point I'd be surprised if Bella didn't say fuck it and try to taker herself out just to end all the pain and bullshit. Oh don't even get me started on Char. If someone reminds you of your daughter that you love so much, why the fuck would you treat them no better then a nasty ass cat? Sorry I'm a dog person, I can't stand a sneaky ass cat. lol Moving on, Bella better be one bad ass bitch. I want her to be hella strong and powerful as a human and unstoppable as a vamp or half breed or whatever. I mean like Sarah Conner or Resident Evil kick ass. I hate how they made a big deal about her in the book when all she was was a shield that didn't even stop physical attacks. That's some bogus shit I mean at least let her be the only character with multi power?
Author's Response:
Nah, Bella wasn't naked. I would've said it if she was. LOL if she was, Jasper probably would've eye fucked her, hell maybe he would've even approached her and fucked her. Maybe....u never know with Jasper and what he has planned. lol She wore her gym clothes home, and since it was the end of school day, everything was pretty much deserted except the admin office, they ususally stay open a lil while longer before school closes. But yeah, had it been crowed with students, Edward and Bella would've put on a show ;) in front of everyone lmao Jasper and Esme didn't follow too soon after because Edward is extremely dangerous, as all male vamps, in their primal forms are, esp him. He's one mean scary mofo. Could've been extremely deadly for either if they happened to make a wrong move. Yeah, poor Bella. She' s got it quite tough. Bella does draw vamps in, but it doesn't always mean they want to protect her. That would've been awesome if Bella had cool multi powers in BD. It was sad when I found out she only had the shield power. =( Oh well...lol
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 6:13 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
holy shit that was crazy and i loved every bit of it!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you enjoyed that pain of a chapter. lol
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:34 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Totally awesome!! I really REALLY need more!! ASAP Please!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
We'll post more asap.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:01 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
SHUTTHEHELLUP! This is totally jacked up and hot! God I am sick bitch.
Author's Response:
LOL. I love your comments!!
Thanks for reading!!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:31 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
What a chapter
well worth the wait
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked.
Thanks for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:45 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow this chapter had so much going on. I get the feeling that jasper is going to try and provoke Edward by being around Bella when they are in school. Hmm I wonder what is going on at bellas house that Made Edward angry. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yup, lots going on. lol Jasper has something up his sleeve.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:43 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
great story please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
We'll post more soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:36 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow Edward is going to be so confuse he dont like humans but he is in love with one. How did Charlote think Bella would of been able to do stop Edward. Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
IKR? Charlotte is crazy. There's no way in hell Bella would've been able to stop any vampire including the powerful and arrogant Edward.
Thank you for reading and commenting.=)
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:24 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
OMG!!!!! Baby you came back with a bang. Hot damn, he wasted no time. Those barbs scare the shit out of me. Not sure to be turned on or clenching my thighs out of sheer terror. Tracy said this chapter was the shit. She wasn't lying. Tygs said I was gonna fall out of my chair, she was most def not lyin. I'm go gonna go bother Tygs. cant wait to see if she lets me pre-read soon. Can't wait. Poor Bella, how scary to being taken like that your first time. I thought my first time story was bad, I don't feel bad now.And for the blood whores how sad of an existance. I see the True Blood bar in that part. Very vivid. I could see it. I am so hooked I cannot turn away...Jels Darling You scare me but I still want to be you and in that fabulous brain. LOVED!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked. Tracy and Tygs could tell you how frustrated I was. It was HELL writing it. lol Yeah, hahah the barbs are freaky especially here I tried to kick it up a notch when Edward tore the blood whore's skin inside. Ouch! =/ He's so cruel. Oooooo True Blood. I love that show. I love vamps with with fANGS!! FANGBANGER!!! lol
Thanks again,
xxoo
Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:19 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Oh poor Bella! I wonder what Edwards going to do? Can't wait for more:)
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We'll post more asap.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:53 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Coleen. =)
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:36 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow. That was definately worth the wait. Your Edward's the self-loathing has got to be one of the most original one's out there. I loved it. I almost want to say that I prefer an EPOV than a BPOV. Don't keep us wating too long ... I want to know if tying up and starving his bloodbag will make Edward flip.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) We're happy you liked.
We'll post more asap.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:35 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Since it was a pain in the ass to write then you deserve and even bigger Thank You for updating. It turned out awesome as always! : )
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Mayi! =) I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter.
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:21 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
you did an AMAZING job with this chap, and it was such an important one, thir first real meeting!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much=) I'm happy and relieved that you enjoyed the chapter. I can't say enough of what a pain it was. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:19 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
oooohhhh super bad ass arrogant Edward (I will admit still hot! lol). Poor Bella things are not going to be easy for her for awhile are they?
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah as bad ass and arrogant he is, I do find him hot still. lol Poor Bella. She's in for some tough times =(
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:18 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
I wonder how Jasper will use Bella against Edward. I'm really enjoying this version of your story, but I still like LA Vampires also. Hope we see an update for that one soon too.
Author's Response:
Hiya!
Thank you so much =) Yeah, I'm working on LAV some more today. Crazy short month! Time is flying by! lol
Jasper has something up his sleeve.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:08 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
OMG! i loved this chapter and was so glad that you updated! but what exactly did you mean when Edward was having sex with the blood whore and soemthing...tore her?
other than that the chapter was great and i cant wait until you do another one!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
When Edward was having sex with the blood whore, he withdrew while the barbs of his peen were hooked into the walls of her vagina and caused her to bleed out from tearing her skin.
Thank you for reading and commenting. We'll post more soon.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:41 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
i must say i thouroughly enjoyed this to a T. It was soooo goood. This was incredible and i can't wait for more. *giggles*
Author's Response:
Hahhahaha Tyggy!
Awwww I'm soooooooooooooo happy and effin relieved you enjoyed the final product. Shit! This was some torture!! I couldn't think, at all.
You can't wait for more, huh? LMAO!
This is like Christmas all over again when I get to read your chapters. I never know what you'll do. lol
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:38 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Now an evil Carlisle and Emmette...this just keeps on getting better and better!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Yeah, Emmett and Carlisle are going to be extremely cruel. You'll never know what they may do.
Thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:23 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow that was some chapter! Edward is very Nasty is'nt he? Poor Bella does not look to good for her right now.. Can't wait to see where you are going to take Edward and Bella it seems odds are against them with everyone hating "blood bags"
Thank you for the new chapter!
Waiting for new LAV chapter... *pouty face* I know you're busy with school just saying... Has Mike killed Bella? I need to know?.....
See ya, Wendy
Author's Response:
Hiya Wendy!
Thank you so much =)
Yeah, Edward is one nasty vamp. Very cruel and heartless.
Awww...I'll work on LAV some more today. It's been a crazy month and time is just flying by. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:17 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
oh come on!!!! you guys left if there??? ugh.. fine. What an awesome chapter. Edward needs to get over his bad barbed self and give into Bella being his mate and TAKE HER!!!! still lovin hotbarbedpeenward :))))
Author's Response:
LOL
Thank you =)
Hahahha! Glad you still love hotbarbedpeenward ;)
We'll post more asap.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
OH NO! I really loved this chapter so much! Please let Bella and Edward be together soon! I cannot wait to see what else happens next ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
We'll post more asap.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:55 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
OH my gosh! I loved it when I beta'd it... but, if possible, I have fallen MORE IN LOVE with it reading it again. I'm so excited! I can't wait to see the reviews. This chapter may have been a pain in the ass but it was definitely worth the labor of love!
Good Job Jellybean. You're the bestest of the best! I can't wait to see what Tygs does next! Woo Hoo!
~Muah~
Author's Response:
Awww thank you Tracy!!! Glad you really liked it. It was torture writing it, but I'm glad it payed off in the end. lol
Hehe, yeah I wonder what Tygs has planned. It's gotta be something evilish I'm sure. lol
Thanks again,
<3
XxOo
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:55 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
loved it very much thanks for sharing this and update when you can thanks.......
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, bammers! =) We're happy you enjoyed the chapter.
We'll post more soon.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:49 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
LAWWWL, LOVE IT!
Omg, this is really dark. I thought Edward was still going to be like... sensitive deep down with a conscious. I was wrong. LOL! Love it! Update soon! :D
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much =)
Yeah, Edward is one dark mofo. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:42 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow!!!!Amazing...intense, bloody, horrrific and excelent
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
And thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it.
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:41 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Oh my!! That was a great chapter in deed!!! I wish you'd update more often!!! I am so ready for another great chapter already!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) We're happy you enjoyed.
We'll do our very best to get the next chapter posted asap.
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:21 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
This story is so freeking HOT!! I love that it is Twilight's Edward & Bella but I get glimpses of the the black dagger brotherhood in it too!! Damn what I wouldn't give for J R Ward to let us write about her characters!!!
Great chapter!! You have me hooked!!!!!!! Anxiously awaiting the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much! =) We're happy you like!
IKR? I would looooooove to write about the BDB bros! Would be so much fun!
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:02 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
Wow so good
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Thanks for reading and commenting.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:00 AM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
wow, like these dark vampires!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
And thanks for reading and reviewing.
~Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:58 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
so good but Edward was cruel to that,i hope hiss attitude will improve when he realises he cannot escape his mate!!!!!!!!!!
I'm confused whether at the end he is angered by the need to be with her or Peter's and Charlotte4s treatment of his mate.
We'ii see next
please update soon!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
You'll see about the anger part. But just remember his protective instincts kicked in over Bella.
Thank you for reading and commenting =)
~Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:51 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
OH MY GOD!!!..............seriously amazing, and I'm not just saying that to say something I really mean it! I fucking love this story(yes I think it was needed to drop the fbomb haha) I have to say its my all time favourite story, I get giddy when a get an email about an update.
I was just wondering, I thought a vampire couldn't be with anyone else after finding their true mate? or is thant only after binding with them?
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much =) We're happy you like. Hahhaha about dropping the fbomb. We don't fucking mind. lol
Once a vampire finds his true mate and claims her, he won't be with anyone else. But Edward hasn't done that yet. And the rules in LAH differ slightly just because it's a dark story.
Thank you for reading and commenting. We appreciate it. =)
~Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 11:31 PM Title: The Forbidden Fruit
I hope he slaughters Char!
thanks for the update! I was hoping things would go a little easier, but this is Twilight, Edward and Bella! Of course something has to go haywire!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you =) Yeah, there's always something that does go haywire. lol
We'll post more soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:48 PM Title: The set-up
What a surprise! How sneaky of you to keep the second child a secret. THis story is so, so good !!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:23 PM Title: Hate
Just finished Chapter 2 and I am hooked! Must keep reading... I think I'm going to love the "darkness". Thanks so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) We're happy you like.
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 11:39 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Nah - I'm not pissed...just wishing you good luck with your tests! I'm in college too for medical and understand all the hard studying and stuff.
Until the next update......
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding =)
I will have an update this week ( between 22- 26)
Thank you again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:50 PM Title: Pull
Holy shit! What an awesome chapter! Hmm long haired Edward is a real turn on! hehehehehe
Thanks so much!
No hate for this chapter <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We're happy that you liked! Tyggy rocked it!
Thanks again =)
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 10:09 PM Title: Taken
ACK!!! Bella and Edward were so close!!!!
Thanks for another fab chapter!
Author's Response:
Hiya Tamara!
Thank you so much =)
I'm still working on the next chapter. One more scene to go. Wooooohoooo! lol
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:55 PM Title: Pull
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I really love a Darkward ;) I wonder if he is a dirty talkingward too when the time comes ;) hehe. I also love his long hair and fangs, although I don't know why. I know you said you don't write fluff but will there be a HEA for Isabella and Edward?
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =) Glad you like his long hair and fangs.
There is supposed to be a HEA for them although....we may make a sequel for that to happen. I guess it depends how many chpaters the story will be. lol
Thanks you so much
Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:48 PM Title: Taken
Wow, that was INCREDIBLE! I really cannot wait for Bella and Edward to officially meet! I wonder how they will be together if it is illegal?
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm actually working on the next chapter right now. I'm almost finished. =) One more scene to go.
Thank you for reading and your comments along the way.
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:40 PM Title: The set-up
Wow, that was amazing! I was NOT expecting that! Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks again! =) We're so happy that you like. Lots more twists coming ;)
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:29 PM Title: A New Beginning
Wow, that was amazing :) I was thinking that is who the vampire parents were ;) Will Edward grow up faster so he appears older than Isabella when they meet again?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) Yes, vamps do age faster until they reach a certain age.
Thanks again. We're happy that you like so far
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: Hate
This is amazing so far! I really love it so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 4:03 AM Title: The set-up
WOW what a chapter! Very sad his parents had to die but I completely understand -
Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
Yeah, this story will be a wild ride.
I'm currently working on the next chapter. Phew! What a pain. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 3:09 AM Title: A New Beginning
*runs screaming* great way to end this chapter!!! I was hoping she was preggo with Edward :)
Thanks so much!
Author's Response:
Hi Tamara!!! *waves*
Thanks for checking this story out. =)
Thanks so much. Love your reviews!
~Jells
Date: 19 Feb 2011 5:54 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
But but but but...
This story is awesome. :(
Author's Response:
No worries, I'm actually working on the chapter right now. =)
Thank you
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 12:48 PM Title: Hate
Frightening and gruesome! Thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks again =)
We're happy you like!
Thank you for reading and commenting.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 12:31 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
Fab beginning! Can't wait to read more~
Thanks so much :D
Author's Response:
Hi Tamara!
Thank you so much =)
Date: 19 Feb 2011 3:02 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
ok
Author's Response:
Thanks for understanding. I'm working on the next chapter right now. The wait won't be too long.
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2011 3:00 AM Title: Pull
Alice?!!
Author's Response:
Hey Fleur!
No, Bella =)
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:51 PM Title: Pull
HOLY SHIT I LOVE IT! No pansy ass vamps here, take and take some more! Brillant, don't let up!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We're glad you like.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:50 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
i'm inpressed that you can do all that... i hope you pass your exams..and i will see the next chapter hopefully soon..but i can wait i love our stories soo i can wait
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding. =) The wait won't be too much longer.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 11:05 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
This story is so freaking cool!
When I read Edward had long hair and FANGS? I about had a heart attack....
so I decided to see if I could do some magic....
AND DAMN IF HE STILL DON'T LOOK MOTHERFUCKING SEXY!!!
love the story love the twists and bloodlust....and I am going to die till you update again!
sigh!!!
AWESOME!!
Author's Response:
OMG! You're so AWESOME!!!!
Thank you =) Love the banner.
Yeah, you'll see what the meaning of his long hair is and why it will get cut in later chapters. lol
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
We'll post more evil vamps soon. RL is crazy =/
XxOo
Jells
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:55 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
good luck on the test! Update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding. The wait won't be too much longer. =)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:27 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
RL sucks sometimes...I promise not to be pissed at no update [even though I was excited to see it pop up] if you promise to continue the story and not leave us hanging too long.
Good luck with your exams and look forward to more evil vampires soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding. The wait won't be too much longer.
Thanks.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:50 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Got to say I was enjoying this and you have left us hanging...but exams come first...hope you do well.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding. We'll post more asap.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:54 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
good luck with your exams hope you do well
cant wait till the next chapter but take your time and again good luck
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding. =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:07 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
*head desk*
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOO!
The wait won't be too much longer. lol
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:06 AM Title: Pull
Well I like the roughass vamps but someone better start being nice to Jasper or I am gonna get pissed! ;p
Author's Response:
Hahhahah! Wow! You're not gonna likey what we do to Jasper =/
Thanks for reading!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:58 AM Title: Taken
Where was Jasper? This chapter was too freaky. I think I need to reread to make sure I caught everything!
Author's Response:
Jasper wasn't there with Edward. He was at home.
Thanks for reading =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:48 AM Title: The set-up
Jasper isn't a runt...*pouts* He's awesome too!
Author's Response:
LOL. Oh yeah? You think he's awesome. Edward doesn't seem to think so. lol
Thanks for reading!
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:42 AM Title: A New Beginning
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:36 AM Title: Hate
WOW! I love this very messy version!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:29 AM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
OHDAMN!
Author's Response:
LOL. Thanks for reading =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:16 AM Title: Pull
OMG I love this story :) Love how crazy Edward is. Update when you guys are free from real life. Love ya! <3
Izabela
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) We're happy that you like.
Thanks for understanding. The wait won't be too much longer
Xxoo
Jells
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:54 AM Title: Pull
And they meet. At least, I assume it's Bella.
Author's Response:
yes, it's Bella Thank you for reading and commenting. =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 1:45 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Thank you for the note and update. Good luck on your test!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding. The wait won't be too much longer. =)
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:59 AM Title: Pull
I'm hooked! Need more!
Author's Response:
Thank you =) We'll post more soon. The wait shouldn't be too much longer.
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:53 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
I miss you, but I am very proud of how hard you are working in school. That should always come first. We will be here when you get back...we will leave the light on for ya.
Good luck with everything...and keep those rec's coming. I have so enjoyed them all.
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:44 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
thats ok school comes first!!! I will just be here patiently waiting for hotbarbedpeenward :)))
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding =) LOL@ hotbarbedpeenward. Haha I like that ;)
~Jells
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:35 AM Title: The set-up
I thought this story was gone!! I'm glad I found it on this site!
Author's Response:
Thanks for looking for it. Glad you found it again. Thanks for reading =)
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:28 AM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Personally, I would rather know what is going on with an author, than being left hanging on to false hope.
By the way, good luck with classes. Get back to us when you can. No rush.
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding. The wait won't be too long. =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:49 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Best of luck with school. Love your story, love your story, love your story but glad you've got your priorities straight.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for understanding. And thanks. We're happy that you are enjoying our story =) The wait won't be too long.
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:05 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
wow thats really considerate of you to tell us whats going on im really looking forward to the next updates. Good luck on your tests
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:37 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Definitely not pissed off here! RL should always take precedence over FF! (I know, a radical idea to some.) Best of luck with your studies. I'll still be here when the next update is posted.
Author's Response:
Hi Coleen!
Thank you so much for understanding. The wait won't be too long.
Thaks again,
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:22 PM Title: Hate
Oh dark stories are my fav.I loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Dark stories are my fave too.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:16 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
you tease me....wink*;)
Author's Response:
LOLOL
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:12 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
It's okay, you and Jelly Jells do your thing. I told her I'd be happy to come by the school and beat up her teachers for working her to hard and explain to them exactly how important giving her time for fanfic writing is otherwise her legion of fans will show up at the school with pitch forks and torches looking for blood. If you like, I'd happily make the round to your teachers too. :)
Author's Response:
II would love if you can come down here and do that lmao!! I would much rather write for you guys than explain the nerve workings of the forebrain *headddesk* matter of fact, kidnap em while you're at so i can get a could extra days rest lmao!!!
~*TYGS~*
Author's Response:
II would love if you can come down here and do that lmao!! I would much rather write for you guys than explain the nerve workings of the forebrain *headddesk* matter of fact, kidnap em while you're at so i can get a could extra days rest lmao!!!
~*TYGS~*
Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:08 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
You hard working pair. Best of luck with your tests and exams! I'm sure you will do well. Put your careers first and make us beg and wait!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for understanding. The wait won't be too long. I'm itching to finish this chapter. lol
Thanks again
~Jells
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 10:05 PM Title: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
This looks great I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you =)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:14 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
GOOD LUCK ON YOUR TEST! YOU ARE BOTH AWESOME WRITERS!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
And thanks for understanding.
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:07 PM Title: Prepare to be Pissed
Go study
update when you can
Author's Response:
Thank you for understanding =)