Date: 20 Mar 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loving Badass Warrior Bella, and the claiming was well-done, too.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Whoa! Our girl has some seriouspower at her disposal. Cool! I loved our first taste of vampire sex. That was fucking hawt!
I can't wait to see if Garrett gives us a little insite into what he saw when Bella went all black eyed. Very creative by the way. I loved it!
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow it looks like Bella is one powerful vamp. It was fun seeing Peter and Bella not have to hold back since she's not human any longer.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
I've been reading this on another site & was quite happy to find it further along here!
I'm absolutely loving your story!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 18
WOW!! That was wonderful!! Hot and sexy as hell!!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
hmm Bella the Warrior. Cant wait to see her take a bite out of Eddie eventually.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
i hope he tortures his body slowly ! cant wiat to see what ahppens next
Date: 19 Mar 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow this one is good for your first.good job! :)
Date: 18 Mar 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, awesome chapter! Great Lemon,loved it! What happen to Bella?
Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved the yummy forest time and I can't wait to see who is going to kick Riley's ass. hehe :)
Date: 18 Mar 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
wow!!! Amazing chapter... so excited to see more and what she plans to do with Riley! :)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved the chapter. That was very thoughtful of Peter to think of Garrett.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love the lemons!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. Peter and Garret are so funny.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
WONDERFUL!!!!!! Ready for MORE!!!!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
Who did she use her power against? I bet that was cool for the guys to see and scary for Bella to do.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this story and vampy bella... can't wait for more
Date: 11 Mar 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm a little disappointed that Bella is such an extraordinarily controlled vampire, seemingly bypassing the normal 'newborn' stage, but I'm hoping there's a particular reason for it that has to do with the plot. I enjoyed her first reactions to Peter and Garrett, and am looking forward to seeing what you do with her ability.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
woo hoo she's awake and has a kewl power.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! New vamp Bella is really interesting. Looking forward to reading more.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
Absolutely love this story. I'm all for the Peter/Bella pairing. I like what you've done with Bella's power. That it slowly started to build the more venom she received from vampires. I really like that Garrett is a main character in this. He is rarely in stories. Hope he finds his mate. Can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Okay, love you, AWESOME chapter, but I want more!
My apologies for being soo greedy. It's my dreaded 40th birthday and all my friends that are turning 40 too left for Vegas today w/o me. Plus, today is the anniversary of my father's death. Sooo, I'm bumming. Poor me. I know, what a fucking pity party am I on.
Just kidding about wanting more. I mean, I do, but whenever another update is ready. I'm not trying to be pushy. I'm just in a weird mood.
Have a great rest of the week!!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG that was awesome!!!!!!!!
I love this chapter! Although your evil cliffy is my enemy -_-
Who did she launch?
I cant wait to find out :)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
wondering who it is cant wait to see what ahppens next and its intresting that you didnt go the route with her and animal blood. cant wiat to see what ahppens next
Date: 10 Mar 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh I freakin love Vampella!!! The hunt was awesome. Loved the whole damn thing!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
“Well hot damn!”...;-)
Date: 10 Mar 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter! Can't wait to see the next one for more details on what happened at the end there! :)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Best line of all time goes to: ". He was foul mouthed and sarcastic, he was purposefully messy, he pushed my buttons, and he ate people." Thanks for updating!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Date: 04 Mar 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Its ok, I loved the chapter anyway, no matter how short.
Oh I am so giddy, I cant wait!! :)
Bells is gonna toast that bastard! *grins wickedly*
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
amazing chapter! Can't wait to see when she wakes up :)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Sad that Peter wasn't able to change Bella the way they planned. But I thought it was a nice little added touch that Peter let Garrett help. :0) Looking forward to seeing what she's like when she wakes. :0)
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh Poor B. She was smart about it though. Glad Garrett helped too.
Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
It sucks that they didn't get to follow through with their plans for Bella's change, but I love that he gave Garrett the chance to be a part of her change. Considering his protective nature over her it says so much about what he thinks of Garrett.
I love that Peter's abilities allowed him to desimate multiple vamps at once, but I wonder why he didn't hear the other one who got Bella? I wonder if he was some kind of shield. Either way, excellent chapter. I can't wait to meet Vampella!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
well in the end its what she wanted but not that way! cant wait to see wha thappens next
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMGosh, yes it is a much shorter chapter than I am use to you writing, but wonderful all the same.
Can't wait for the next chappie!!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
I can see Peter point in letting Garrett inject venom but I didnt expect it. You just know that more vamps are coming, I hope she wakes up first. I cant wait to see her powers.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
You SO CAN NOT leave it at that! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
So how was the snow storm? I live in the DFW area of Texas and the first two weeks of this month we got hit with snow and ice. Don't even mention the Super Bowl to me. Sensitive subject. Fuckers like to diss us b/c of the likes of an ice storm we haven't had in approx 20 years. Geez, everywhere else gets snow but we get ice. I'd like to see those assholes come down here and drive on 2 inches of ice. Should I tell you how I really feel (smirk)? Seriously, hope things aren't too serious for you.
Okay, down to business. When's the next update? I'm chompin at the bit. This could go down one of 3 ways as I see it. #1) It's Victoria or some of her minions. #2) Curious vampires. #3) The Cullens. I'm dieing here. I've been trying to read your a/n's to see if you're just updating when you can or if it's once a week or a month or what.
God, I'd would have never thought I'd get into a Bella/? story. But this is wonderful. I'm trying to get my best friend to read it.
Hope you have a safe and wonderful weekend. Until next time.....hopefully very soon.
Author's Response:
Snow is good- electricity stayed on and thats all I really cared about. I've got about 6 inches on the back deck right now, and more still coming down. I think I'd have to take a pass on driving through the ice like that. No thanks.
You'll have to wait and see what happens. I can't give anything away just yet. Hopefully you'll like it though...
I'm glad you gave Bella a shot with another character outside of Edward. Don't get me wrong, the original is awesome and there are so many great stories out there, but changing up the pairing gives you a whole new world of stories. Peter gives the writer so much freedom to create a new character who isn't really stereotyped into acting a certain way. There are some amazing Peter, Jasper, Emmett and even Carlisle fics out there. And don't be scared of the wold boys either. I've read some incredible Paul and Sam fics as well.
Happy reading!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
GREATNESS, again!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. Loved that Bella is about to be version 2.0, though I'm wondering about these new vamps showing up. I thought at first it might be Jasper, but now I'm not so sure. I hope Bella's change goes as planned, rather than having to be done to save her life after an attack.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Vamped up Bella is coming soon, but I don't want to give anything away just yet. You'll have to read to find out what happens next!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
I wondered when she'd just decide to be changed. I'm dying to know who the 3 vamps that just showed up are and what they want. Hope Bella and Peter still get to do her change the way they had planned.
Author's Response:
You'll have to be patient and wait for the next chapter to find out! :)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 13
Holy shit!! That was uber yummy!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wonderful!!
I do feel for Jasper. What can I say, I love the Cullens. I truly believe that all of them, including Edward thought Bella was his mate. It's hard for me to wrap my mind around that he's not. Not even including that he knowningly lied about it. I just don't see it.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
ugh Another Cliffy ACKKKK. stilll love ya though
Author's Response:
Don't start throwing the rocks just yet, the next chapter is off to my beta, and I'll have it up asap!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Cockblocker (wink).
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonderful!
Also, just so you know what really intrigued me to read this story? Your Banner. The actors you picked for your characters are gorgeous!! Love it!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I'm about to start chapter 8 but I wanted to come back through before I got too far ahead and review every chapter. So from chapter 3 through chapter 7 I will just give you a one word review w/a # rating.
I'm a solid, HUGE Bella/Edward girl. To the core. I've read upteen stories in the last 2 years of reading this webiste and Twilighted and FF and this is my first Bella/someone else other than Edward story.
I'm loving it. It hurts my heart but it's a great alternative story line to what might have happened if Edward never came back. Fantastic story line!!
Hasn't gone un-noticed the Peter/Jasper part of the story that is being brought forth. Very creative and which means maybe in the future Bella and Alice with be brought back together at some point.
It does break my heart totally to think of what Edward is going to go through when he finds out. Sorry, even though he might have been a coward for not changing Bella and leaving her for her own good, you could tell where his heart was and what heartbreak he went through even w/o SM version of Midnight Sun.
I love your Bella. I love how she caught Garrett off guard in the beginning at the bar. That was greatness!! The whole thing has been. It's very intriguing and I hope you get lots of readers and reviews.
I'll be reviewing more.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Excellent chapter. I loved Bella reliving the memories of her parents.
But oh shit! There is no time to change her if the vamps are right there. I am kinda hoping it is Edward and a couple other Cullen's. At least it would be less volitile than Vickie and her followers. Update soon. I am drooling to find out.
Author's Response:
Thank you. You'll have to be patient and wait for the next chapter to find out who it is and what they want! :)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
wonder who it is! cant wait till the next chapter keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
You'll have to be patient and wait for the next chapter to find out! :)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
O no I hope everything goes ok. I think they should have changed Bella right after they got there.
Author's Response:
Yeah, they are procrastinators like that... LOL.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thoroughly intrigued. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow! Great chapter!!! OMG with the cliffy... please don't make us wait too long for the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Sorry about leaving you hanging, you'll have to be patient and wait for the next chapter to find out what happens! :)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
I heard about the freak snow storm for Cali.
Sorry...
I have been buried in snow for weeks here in Ohio, so I feel for you for sure.
Awesome update, I cant wait to see who these unknowns are.
Author's Response:
Eh, for where I live, it wasn't really a freak snow storm. We get a several snowfalls each winter. This one just came a little later than usual. :)
I've got about 6 inches on my back deck at this point...
Thanks for reviewing! Stay dry and warm!!
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Peter's proposal was perfect for he and Bella, and Garrett's constant interruptions were hilarious. I'm looking forward to Bella kicking his ass (because that will be utterly hilarious) as much as I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
LOVING this story!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
:) I can't wait to see that!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
they are just too cute together! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Holy Hot Hell~!
That was uber sexy! Gawd, sey times with Peter... *swoon*
Garrett is askin' for an ass whoopin'
*snickers* I cant wait till he gets it :)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really like Garrett, he is funny and seems like fun. I am glad she said yes to Peter.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
and now they are engaged :0) I'm wondering if Garrett will ever find his mate. I'm glad he's staying with them but I hope it doesn't bother him to hear them and see them together that way. Wonder how much longer Bella will stay human? looking forward to finding out. :0)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Really sexy funny chapter. Can't wait for more. :)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
yummy. glad she said yes
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG! I loved it!!! The proposal was perfect! I love how Garrett fits in their little family as guard and comic relief. I freakin love this story!!!
Date: 19 Feb 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
The perfect way to break in their new home. I've loved everything so far and can't wait for the next update to see what happens next - hopefully her change.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the chapter. Bella's realization of her love for Peter and wanting to be turned was very well done. Her basic forgiveness of Jasper was really to be expected, considering her nature, and it worked well with her new personality.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Bella really laid it on the line and put Jasper and the Cullens in their place with her lecturing. Loved Garrett's POV, and I love how he's such a protective 'older brother' for her.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Damn, what a way for Peter to find out everything, and what a reunion with Jasper. Loved it!
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Lots of action in this chapter. I can't believe she ran from him, but then again, this is Bella, so yes I can. I'm glad she felt the pain of the pull and that Peter went after her. Maybe now she'll take out those balls she has for everything else and put them to good use in facing up to her feelings for Peter.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
That's a hell of a way to make a declaration of love, but it's perfect for the two of them.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
Garrett is such a sweetheart, and the way he needles the two of them is hilarious.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Liked Peter's story and his home. It's great that he's opening himself up to Bella, sharing even the things about his past that he's not proud of.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it. The venom changes to Bella are interesting, as well as Peter's little slip about when she becomes a vampire rather than if she becomes one. The fact that they both feel the pull is great, and I wonder if she feels it because of the changes from the venom as well.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
I almost feel sorry for Peter in his new situation with Bella, but I'm enjoying the fireworks too much to really find it within me to do so.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
Peter's inner monologue is always a hoot to read, and I love what you did with him here. Poor Bella must be going nuts wondering what compelled her to invite vampires to her house, and Peter's own struggle against the knowledge she's his mate was hilarious.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
The second chapter absolutely lives up to the promise held in the first one. Bella's sassiness is fantastic, and I'm enjoying what you're doing with Peter and Garrett. Fantastic way to have a vamp recognize their mate, too.
Date: 19 Feb 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic first chapter. It moves smoothly, gives a bit of background as to just how crazy Bella's life has been, and grabs the interest of the reader by dropping just enough hints to make you want to read more and find out what the hell is going on. Bella is perfect as the sassy, 'war-weary' bartender.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Holy shit! That was so worth the wait!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Holy hell!
That. Was. Hawt!
Well worth the wait :)
I look forward to the morning after lol ;)
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
The thought of the guys complaining about all the stops on the road trip made me chuckle. Wondering how Bella's change will go...
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
well im glad that shes happy now!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think Bella will agree with that welcome home. Pretty steamy.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh YEAH! Excellent~~
Date: 14 Feb 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 13
yumminess. good thing they moved too before the Cullens found out about her.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 12
I couldnt see her living with Peter and Garrett and being a veggie vamp. Good chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
I cant believe that Jasper would think that they would drink from Bella. The tension in that house has to be thick. At least Bella know that Alice just didnt see and ignore what was happening to her. (By the way I cant believe there are people that dont know what FUBAR means either, lol) Good chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow, I didnt expect him to be so angry with Jasper. The Cullens control him like a puppet.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think they need to tell each other their stories. I cant wait. Good chapter.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can understand why he is not happy about being compared to her other vampire. I am glad he fianlly told her.
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Garrett seems so sweet. I love the relationship they have. Poor jealous Peter.