Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

Reviews For Twilight Twins
You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 Love at First Sight?

wow they can do the mind talking thing! and did they ever hit the ground running! all hands and kisses right out of the gate!



Author's Response: so many teenagers are like that, so I thought I'd run with it

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 Don't Panic

well now looks like these two may have feared the worst and not reality. i wonder how the week wll go for them without seeing eachother all the time? and i wonder if billy knows that this is an imprint?



Author's Response: Billy knows, that's why he never says anything

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 10 Roses and Revelations

well i wonder how the nightly sleepovers are gonna work when there is a wolf in one room and a vamp in the other? BTW when are we gonna see our eddie boy? poor miss b is all alone...



Author's Response: lol very carefully

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 9 Changes

wow she really has it bad. i wonder if jake knows that they have imprinted?



Author's Response: he doesn't realize it until after he phases

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 8 New Car!

well that is one couple down and still we have yet to see eddie again...



Author's Response: he'll be back, promise

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 7 HIM

ohhhh! it looks like someone has imprinted! wonder how long till carlie and bella have a talk about all of this?



Author's Response: with these two, who knows? lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6 High School. Oh, Joy

well it seems that edward reacts to bella in the usual maner. i wonder if the feelings are the same towards carlie?

maybe miss carlie might happen to take a swing by the rez? to see a certain wolf?



Author's Response: But this Edward is a lot different from the books

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5 Not so starcrossed after all?

well carlie and jake huh? that means bella and the vamp. so sad to see the girls trying to deal with the loss of their parents, all while hiding it from eachother and the world around them.

next off to school...



Author's Response: I always felt bad for Jake, and wanted to give him a girl that would love him unconditionally and keep him on his toes

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 Two Teenage Girls, one bathroom? Grab the Camcorder, I'm putting this on YouTube!

well it seems these two have a lot to get through. so much the same but still so different. wonder what they think of jake?



Author's Response: lol you'll see

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 3 No, You Did Not Just Do That

yup 'swan girl guilt' here's to hoping that she will be able to get past it...



Author's Response: Carlie is a hard character for most readers to like and you don't find out until later that she is bipolar, which is why she's crazy all the time

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 Forks aka 7th Level of Hell

wow what could claire have done? or is this just the 'swan girl guilt'?



Author's Response: it's guilt

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 Goodbye Sunshine, Hello Hell.

had to read this oneit sounds like it will be pretty cool. :)



Author's Response: it was my first fic and far from perfect

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 42 The Fork in the Road

that was good like it 



Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 42 The Fork in the Road

Thoroughly enjoyed your story.



Author's Response: thank you! It was my first attempt at writing fanfiction. I learned a lot while doing it

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 26 Carpediemquam minimum credulapostero or Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow

Wow, I wasn't expecting for Carlie to just push Bella out of her life. I mean I know she has things to work through but Bella is still her sister. If I was Bella she would never have to worry about me b/c I wouldn't have anything left to say. It's not Bella's fault that she was turned into a vampire. I've always thought that love should be unconditional, but in the case of Carlie it doesn't seem that way. I am curious about the man that Bella was talking to at the funeral...I was thinking that it might be Charlie.



Author's Response:

You find out at some point that Carlie is bipolar hun

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 12 Love at First Sight?

Yaaaay, Edward finally got his head out of his ass long enough to admit his feelings for Bella, but does Bella love Edward too? And what exactly is the reasoning behind them hiding their relationship right now?



Author's Response:

She does love him and as for the hiding, it's the weird workings of the teenage mind lol

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 10 Roses and Revelations

I'm glad Carlie and Jacob are progressing and moving along towards love, but I want to know when I'll hear more about Bella and Edward or just Bella in general. So far it's more about Carlie.



Author's Response:

at the beginning, I wanted to flesh out Carlie more since so many people already know the general things about Bella

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 HIM

Uggggh no fair...Carlie gets a sports car and Bella is stuck w/the ugly red beast of a truck. Why can't Bella liven up just a little. On another note, I am so glad that Jacob and Carlie are progressing a little, but I really need some Edward/Bella time.



Author's Response:

Bella gets better as the story goes

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 5 Not so starcrossed after all?

So Renee is a witch and passed it on to Bella and Carlie...wow, I'm liking this so far, kinda reminds me of Charmed. Does the twins have the power to move things w/their minds, is this the only power that they have?



Author's Response:

they have other powers, but that's part of the story

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 Not so starcrossed after all?

That's sad...Carlie can lean on Bella but Bella doesn't have anyone to share her grief with b/c she has to be the strong one. I'm surprised that with them being twins that Carlie hasn't picked up on Bella's grief yet. I feel sorry for both of them. So I'm supposing that in this story Carlie is the pretty twin? I'm hoping that Bella has a better sense of style then what she usually has.



Author's Response:

Carlie is picking up on her grief, but unconsciously and Carlie is the more girlie twin in this one

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 3 No, You Did Not Just Do That

I can see why Carlie feels guilty about the accident, but it's not her fault. I think Bella just said that b/c she was so upset...Bella saying that plus what she was already thinking just made it worse for her.



Author's Response:

exactly. I know the story is a bit jumpy, but it was my first crack at writing and I hope it doesn't scare you off

Reviewer: LynnCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 Goodbye Sunshine, Hello Hell.

Are Bella and Carlie identical twins? Which one ends of w/Edward? I'm wondering if Charlie is going to end of the father of one or both twins, lol...I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Yes, they are identical twins..as for the rest, you'll have to wait and see lol

Reviewer: Kimbo ACP Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Goodbye Sunshine, Hello Hell.

This is a good story. I was laughing so much half the time my sides were slpitting and I had happy tears. Love the term Furploding by the way. Carlise and Bella's relationship was good through the whole story. I liked how the wolves and vamps got along as well.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 12 Love at First Sight?

WOW!  So Bella's powers can pretty much kick Edward's ass?  I like it!



Author's Response:

yeah, she can!!! lol

Reviewer: meg0407 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 26 Carpediemquam minimum credulapostero or Seize the day and place no trust in tomorrow

so sad i dont like them apart



Author's Response:

I'm sorry hun, it does get better eventually

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 Furploded?

Love this story, love the fact that Jacob gets his own true love, also like the fact that the girls have their own powers and can look after themselves. My only problem is that I have always cringed at the fact that Jacob is so young, I know that is how SM wrote him but I find it hard to imagine at 15 year old being so mature. Don't understand why Bella and Edward have to hide their relationship at school though.



Author's Response:

I have personally met fourteen, fifteen, and sixteen year olds that acted more mature than most adults right in all honesty. As for Bella and Edward hiding their relationship, it was to fend off the social vultures and such

You must login (register a new account) to review.