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Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

Your ending author's note cracked me up!  Just the way you said you weren't going to sugarcoat it :)

I am definitely drawn into this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Welcome to my little story here.  Thank you so much for the rating and review.  I can't wait to see what you think of it as you go along.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited

I wouldnt want kate there either.  What a biatch.   yummy C/B time.  Glad Jake is doing ok.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Yeah, I wanted to really make the bitches pay, but I like the idea of Bella being a bit more subtle.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited

Merry Christmas, glad for the update !!!!

 



Author's Response:

Merry Christmas to you as well!  Thanks for the review!!!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited

Thanks for he update! Best wishes in the new year



Author's Response:

Maria,

To you too!  Thanks for the review sweetie and thanks for sticking with me!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited

Nice one.  I'm glad to see you up and about with this story.  Missed ya Nickey.  I hope you've a Merry Chistmas and One very sexy New Year.

 

Love Jukie



Author's Response:

Jukie,

Thanks for the lovely review and I am so sorry I left you waiting for sooooo long.  I will do my very best to get the finale for this story out ASAP!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited

I love this story and need more! Please!



Author's Response:

One more!  That is all I have to offer, but I promise it will be enjoyable!  Thanks for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 27- Reunited

Kate really needs to get over herself!



Author's Response:

Yeah, she really thinks she is all that.  Thankfully, C&B show her that her presence is not required. ;)

Thanks for the review and for sticking with the story. <3

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Ebeth18421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

I love what you have writen so far, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the encouragement!  I hope you like the next chapter as it is up right now. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: beccers4469 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

LOVE LOVE this and can't wait to see what happens next:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the LOVE!!!  I hope you enjoy the next chapter.  It is up now!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Angie1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Hello.
I find your story simply great.
Normally I like just Edward / Bella stories but yours is really fantastic.
Because of you I'm also a huge Carlisle / Bella Fan.
Your Carlisle is just hot.
I've probably already read it 7 times and not getting enough.
Every time I get to Chapter 8, I must cry.
I'm looking forward immensely to your next chapter (which will hopefully soon?)

Best regards from Austria
Ina

Author's Response:

Ina,

Thank you for your beautiful compliment!  I love that you have read my story and that it has touched you.  I promise that I will never abandone this story, but writing has evaded me lately.  Not the lack of ideas, but the lack of time.  I hope to get the next chapter finished and to my betas this weekend.  But until then, know that I truly appreciate your love for this story and for Carlisle.  He is hot, isn't he? ;)

All my best,

Nickey

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Lovely ...missed this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.  I am sorry you had to wait so long for this.  Time for writing right now seems to be coming to me less and less as RL is kicking my arse.  But I promise I will never abandone these two!

Thanks again!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Fantastic outfit...and Carlisle tearing through a wall in his ardor, grrr. This was just a very yummy chapter.

Author's Response:

Tee hee hee.  Yeah, I do love an animalistic Carlisle too.  Thanks for the R&R and for sticking with me.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Very enjoyable chapter, bb. I hardly argue with lemons. Especially Carlisle lemons, lol. ;)

I'm looking forward to the wedding and the bitch showdown, though.



Author's Response:

LOL, the 'bitch showdown' is brewing in my brain as we speak.  Hopefully I will find sometime this weekend to put it to paper (or pc in my case).

Thanks for the love and for sticking with me through the dry spell.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: StupidLambTanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Welcome back! I could tell you've about had enough of this story, but thank you for not just dropping it! I'll be with you to the end! Loved the chapter, see you next time! PS, joined your blog!! Does that make me look a bit stalkerish?? :)

Author's Response:

Not stalkerish at all...an invited friend. ;)

Thanks for the review.  As much as I have loved this story, I feel the end is near and I am totally split because as much as I never want to say goodbye to C&B, I REALLY want to move on to the next stories in my head that are screaming for my attention.

Thanks for sticking with me and I'll see you here or on my dirty little blog!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Still here, yes  :)

 

Loved this chapter, love the shared meal thing, so hawt!

Cant wait to see the vindication against the Harpies!  *snickers*



Author's Response:

Harpies are on deck for the next chapter.  I am writing it as we speak and hope to get some time to really dive in this weekend.

Thanks for sticking with me and the R&R.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

if you pick the compatability mode where the address is you won't have trouble logging in or leaving reviews.  I push that button and save the link so everytime you pull up TWCS it will load with compatability mode and everything will work fine.  it is the same for the other sites too.

thanks for the update!  can't wait for more.  they are sooo hot together!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the advice on managing the sites.  That little speed bump was the boil on the butt of my existance for several months.  Grrrr. (yes I growl when I am angry)

Thanks for the review and for sticking with me since the beginning. :)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Glad your are back.  Miss your story.

 

Jukie



Author's Response:

Ahhh Jukie, I'm sorry I have been missing.  I seem to hit the slow button when I get near the end of a story.  It happened to me on 'Use Somebody' to.  I will do my best not to make you wait for so long.  Thanks for sticking with me.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

I had IE9 issues with these sites too until I turned on compatability view.

 

Great Yummy Lemony Chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R and for sticking with me. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

I want some of that too...



Author's Response:

No kidding, right?  LOL.  Thanks for hanging in there with me. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

I have to say I am enjoying your little story a lot!  It's emotional and entertaining....it's a great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reviews!  I am trying to write the next chapter, but as I get near the end of this, they seem to be getting harder to write.  Never fear...I will NEVER abandon my story.  They are my literary children and I hold them all close to my hert. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

You just about killd me with the Edward scene! I thougth she was dead, well, she is, but dead like Edward adn not coming back dead...you get what I mean right?  Excellent chapter....i'm gong to read on!



Author's Response:

Yes, I know what you mean and yes that was my intention all along.  I wanted Bella to choose to be with Carlisle; not as a concelation, but as her actual choice.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

OMG-I just foudn yoru story and have been reading it for a few days.  i literally burst into tears with the begining of this chapter.  I normally don't cry when reading, but it was written so well. I could envision everything happeneing.  Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Sorry for the tears but thank you so much for the review.  I love that it moved you.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

I can be petient. Lol, seriously. Loved the chapter. And it was really cool what Bella was able to do with her shield.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

max oh yeah he is one that i would pick!!  damn bella you are sooo lucky!!  can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks so much for the review.

Till next time.

Nickey

Reviewer: Sazzledazzled Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

Whooo!!!!! Love the JxBxE interaction they are so much fun X



Author's Response:

They are siblings in the truest form when they are like that.  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

Hell yea he is!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Tee hee.  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

fun game.   Glad Bella got some fun time with brothers too.



Author's Response:

Thansk for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

Omg what a great idea...truth or dare Cullen style! I also love the idea of Jasper teaching her Shibari way more than I should! /grin

Author's Response:

LMAO!  Yeah, the idea of Jasper and a little knot tying is hot!!!  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

loved the update !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Glad you liked it!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Hot! Loved the dominant scene as it fit in so perfectly. Eager for next chapte.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you enjoyed Domisle.  I am working on the next chapter as we speak!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

Fabu Chapter!! What a great moment for Bella and Jasper! So sweet of Bella to have Emmett walk her down the isle!
Love the toys and Alice's gift to Bella!

“Oh my God!  My ears!  It’s Jesus’ birthday for Christ’s sake!  None of that talk in front of the baby Jesus!” - - Laughed out loud and woke my child LOL.

Can't wait for SPRING!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Sorry about your little one's interrupted sleep, but that is one of my favorite lines too.

Thanks for the review sweetie!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

MERRY CHRISTMAS !!!
Wowzers, do we get some panties as a gift?



Author's Response:

No, but you can go comando for the holidays...just a suggestion. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 16- Yes

*TEAR*
And not for the proposal (although it was very romantic!)

When I was young my Grandparents always had a tree trimming weekend. It was a bigger production then any other holiday (except Christmas). We would all go out (30 of us!) and chop down a tree. They too had very high ceilings, and I always remember my favourite uncle getting up on the ladder to hang the lights. The staircase was also next to the tree and us grandkids would line ourselves on the steps and decorate that way. It was tradition for me, being the eldest grandchild, to hang the star on the top. And with our changing family, we do not do that anymore. I just lost that favourite uncle last month and that is one of my greatest memories of him!
Thank you for the memory!!

 

Now for my one complaint.... ABBA??? REALLY?!?!?

LOL great chapter Nickey, love that Carlisle and Bella are taking it slow.
Cheers,
April



Author's Response:

April,

Hey!  Don't diss on the Abba!  I love to listen to them when I am cooking. ;)

Thanks for sharing your wonderful memories with me.  I'm sorry to hear about your uncle too.  It is never easy to lose someone who is such a permanant part of our hearts.  When I was younger my mom and I did the lion share of Christmas tree decorating.  She died when I was 10 and now 24 years later, they are still some of my most treasured memories.

Thanks for the lovely review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

Perfect!

I assumed Carlisle wouldn't have any issues with his bloodlust (any story I have read with a B/C pairing he hasn't, and the thought never crossed my mind that he would in yours), but I really like that he did. Jasper was spot on, and I love that he was the reasoning voice to Carlisle, usually it is the other way around!!

Fantastic writing Lady!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much April!  See, I have to disagree with the other fics.  Carlisle may have amazing control, but he is still a vampire and a man.  His cravings can sometimes get the best of him. ;)  And don't tell me that you don't love a Carlisle that let's his beast out to play now and again...

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

SOoooo worth the wait!! 

Love, love, LOVE that Carlisle doesn't coddle her. Edward would never have taken her skiing.  Maybe it is the fact that he is more comfortable with his nature, I don't know but what ever it is, I think that Carlisle is better for Bella in a way. Loce his reaction to Kate, and that he wouldn't let Bella shrink away.

Guessing we are going to see more of the three sparkly bitches, and I hope that Bella is turned by the time they return, that way not only can she shield herself from Kate's zappy hands but she can kick her ass too!!

Cheers,
April



Author's Response:

Oh, Bella and I have big plans for those three sparkly bitches.  Don't you worry. ;)

You hit the nail on the head.  Edward was never comfortable with Bella.  He did not trust himself much more than he trusted Jasper with a cup of O-.  Carlisle has been amongst humans for 3x as long as Edward had.  Being in a hospital setting, he also had daily practice at keeping his touch the perfect pressure.  Not only that, but he has been exposed to Bella's blood and knows he can treat her if she is injured without losing control.

Thanks for all the reviews hon!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Hey Nickey!
Damn you and your cockblocking ways!!! We need some action!!!
Kate is going to make a complete fool of herself, I CAN"t WAIT!!!!
Great chapter!!!
April



Author's Response:

April,

I know, I know, I am an evil cockblocker...but not forever.  I promise.  Just keep reading.  I do not think you will be disappointed.

Thanks for the review!

Till next  time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, FINALLY!!
Bring on Bella's reaction!!

Loved the Karaoke! Jasper singing Achy Breaky was amazing! Sooo much hotter than mullet-toting-hightop-sporting Billy Rae!!!

Till next time!



Author's Response:

LOL.  I loved the karaoke part too.  Thanks for the rating and review.

 

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

Oh those bitches!!!
I completely forgot about Irina and Laurent. Rose rocks the sox, and I hope this doesn't set Bella back too far.

Oh course.  You know, you are not the only one who loves her.” - - love it!!

Great chapter, can't wait for Kate to try her action and get shut down!!!



Author's Response:

I love, love, LOVE writing Rose the protector.  But I also love the three Cullen men standing as a united front against the bitches!  I just love that visual.  Granted it would be better if they were all standing there shirtless with well worn 501's on...but that would have been out of character for THAT particular scene.  ;)

Thanks for the review my friend.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

Hey Nickey,

Fabu chapter! Ohhh Kate, kate, Kate! So this will be what tests their relationship. Can't wait to see what Bella choses to do!!



Author's Response:

April,

Ok, so don't shoot me when you see Bella's reaction. {Hides behind laptop with bottle of wine}.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

Hey Nickey,

What a great reunion!! Love Emmett! So happy that Rose and Bella are in track!

Carlisle is one great guy! Glad that Charlie is doing well, and that time has helped him heal.

Great chapter all around!
Cheers,
April



Author's Response:

April,

Thanks so much for the review.  I hated sending Emmett away, but I loved bringing him back!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MistressWhitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

Hey Nickey,

Sorry this is the first time you are hearing from me, but I just read and read!
Love this story so far! You are an amazing writer, and pull me right in to the story. I can picture them in the meadow. And speaking of the meadow, I may not have cried, but I definately felt all of the emotion.

Waiting eagerly for Bella to heal, so they can get to living! I am hoping that Emmett and Rose return soon to see their sister and the others!

I will do my damnedest to review more often!
Cheers,
April

 



Author's Response:

April,

Thanks so much for the review.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: suzaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop

Grrrowl ! Okay, so your love scenes just got even better (if that was even possible) ! HOT ! Love to see this wilder side of Carlisle... awesome chapter ! Thankyou  =)



Author's Response:

{Giggles}  Everyone seems to like to see Carlisle let his silk scarves down and show his animalistic side.  I have to admit that I like it too. ;) ;)

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: suzaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

Loooooved it ! Too adorable... the scene in the lingerie dressing room. Great chapter !



Author's Response:

LOL!  I loved writing that scene with the girls playing their own version of vampire whack-a-mole.  I'm glad you liked it too.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: suzaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

So sweet ! If only only all family Christmas's were as sweet and endearing as this. Wonderfully written.



Author's Response:

I always seem to struggle with scenes like this, so thank you!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: suzaddiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

Wow ! that was... delectable. *sigh..* You write some gooood lovin' woman ! That was so worth the wait. I know it sounds kind of strange to say this, but... that love scene was beleivable. I've just found that so may times you'll read a scene, and it just doesn't seem to fit the characters (especially where Carlisle is concerned). Well done. Thankyou =)



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thank you so much!  What an awesome compliment!!!!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

welcome back, sorry about the wb.  glad you are feeling better.



Author's Response:

Ahh thanks hon!  It is good to be back.  And thankfully the WB is on moritorium because I am already working on the next chapter.

Thanks for all the love!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TMTwilightGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

I really loved this chapter.  I really enjoy it when Carlisle's calm exterior cracks and the coven leader comes out to play.  I hope that you can include that more.



Author's Response:

I will promise that we will see more of the unrefined Carlisle, but I don't plan to take him to that dark place again.  As much as it was necessary to deal with Bella, it nearly broke him from the inside out.

Thanks so much for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

I loved this chapter sweetheart - you nailed it!  awesome job Darling xoxo



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks bunches babe!  That means alot. ;)

Thanks for the R&R.

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

You go Mr. C, show her who's boss.  Nothing like a sexy dominating Vamp!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review.  I am glad you liked Carlisle's badass side.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: StupidLambTanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Well poor Bella was put through the ringer in that chapter! Glad you're back, look forward to the next one!

Author's Response:

Yeah, this wasn't her best moment, but things are going to turn around from here on out.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Awesome chapter, bb! I've missed this story. I think it's also badass that you got to meet Jackson! *dreamy sigh*

I actually love Carlisle's dominant side, even if it was a bit harder to read their emotions during the punishment/submission stage. They were both hurting emotionally, and Carlisle could do nothing but stick to his guns. It made sense, and you wrote it well. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Rachel



Author's Response:

Rachel,

Thank you so much for the wonderful review.  I know not everyone will see it the same way, but Carlisle was in a difficult place and needed to break her without actually breaking her.

Thanks again!

Nickey

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

okay girl unleash carlisle the dom!!!  didn't expect that!  love the tat!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I have to say that the scene with Domisle snuck up on me too.  Sometimes these things just come to me as I am writing.  And thanks...I love my JR tat too! ;)

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

loved this update - thanks for coming back to us - i have read all the above stories you are reckin except the last one - dont usually do slash but will give it a read - i am up for anything;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Sorry for staying away so long. ;)

As for that final rec, I honestly see it more as a BDSM story more than Slash.  Edward is the Dom and Jasper is the sub and as much as it is a sexual relationship, it is the build-up that really pulls you in.  I hope you give it a try.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Wow just wow bb...I was wondering if he was going to assert dominance with her, and this was one hell of a way to do it.  I love that you allowed Alpha Carlisle to keep his compassion and respect for her during this process.  Him being so worried about crossing a line and truly breaking her kept him your Carlisle.  /Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rating and review.  I felt like I walked a very fine line with Carlisle, but I am glad that you felt he stayed true to who he is.

Thanks again.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: noellelilah Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Love Love Love the new tatt, girlie! You have now met and are marked by my 2 fave twi-guys. So freakin' lucky! Sad that you didn't win for your fic. As I told you in my review, I voted for this in every cat. allowed. This story has made me feel the full scale of emotions. Just love it. Thank you for sharing with us!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the love and support you show this story.  I would write it even if no one read it, but knowing people like you are moved by it is added inspiration to see it through to the end.

As for the 'Cullen men', both Jackson and Peter have been amazing!!!  I had such a great time meeting the band that I hated for the night to end.  They are all very humble and super accomidating to their fans.  And to have Peter and Jackson's signatures on me means the world.  Now...to track down Robert and Kellan. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hon!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Fantastic as always darling!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review.  Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

WOW!!  OMGosh!!  I teared up big time in the beginning of this story when Bella was with Edward in the meadow when Bella was catatonic.  That broke my heart when he said goodbye to her there.  I'm an "Edward girl"...all the way.  I was telling my bff about this story and she's like, "God, how can you read that!"  She is saying that to me when she is the one that has a God awful thing for twisted stories.  Geez!

But, for Edward to turn around and walk away from Bella this time, I was disappointed and hurt.  I understand but it still hurt.  I've enjoyed the lovestory between Carlisle and Bella but Edward is my #1.

This is a fantastic story and I can't believe I've had the heart to read it.  I've really enjoyed it!!



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks so much for taking a chance on a C&B pairing.  I am also an Edward girl to the core, but sometimes my mind can't help but wander.  Thanks for the rating and review.  My next chapter should be up later today.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: Snick Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

Ice cold disco stick...I may never be able to get that phrase out of my head. Haha. On the hand, I love this story! Thanks for the wonderful read!



Author's Response:

Hehehe, yeah, that one always makes me giggle too.  Thanks for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

I would definitely like to see a wild sex scene with Carlisle and Bella.  Emmett gets his brain bleached and then some.  Maybe get Kate's ass kicked across the Canadian border.  Or better yet her schocking therapy against Bell'a fire shield.  Who will be the better she vamp.  I wonder if Jakey the mutt from hell will visit or the Italian gang.  I Hope you won those awards.  Awesome story.

Jukie



Author's Response:

Jukie,

Thanks for the review and all the ideas.  I will definately be taping into a few of them as the chapters go on.  Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: vampgirl73 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Just started and read all the chapters in one day. I am an Edward girl at heart but I do try to give non canon a try. This is a really good story. I personally would like to see a C/B hunting trip! And maybe bring the Denali's back so Bella can kick their *****!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for giving my little C&B story a try.  I am also an Edward girl at heart, but sometimes my mind takes me elsewhere. ;) Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

love it you can feel the love between them i thought you were going to have her not remember... i think we should have a wedding!!



Author's Response:

Oh, there will most definately be a wedding...just not quite yet. ;)  Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Beg not, dear one.  The votes have been yours the entire time :)

Love this chapter, I love how she got her memories to flow.

 

I would love to see some shenannigans for Newbie Bells that involve a sneaky Jasper and a Mischevious Emmett.  *cackles*

 

I cant wait to see the extent of her power!  That shield sounds AWESOME!  Now we need to test it out on someone...



Author's Response:

Oh sweetie, thanks so much for the votes.  Though it seems it wasn't meant to be.  Oh well.

Thanks for the R&R and the ideas.  I love the thought of playing around with Jasper, Emmett and Bella.  They seem like a terrible trio when it comes to getting into trouble.

Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: StupidLambTanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

"You took me and laid claim to me" - defo my fave quote! This was a really sweet chapter and despite how you feel it's well written with lots of feeling. I loved it! As to what could happen in the future? Mmmm, let me see - another run-in with the Denalis? Or a social visit from Aro which turns a bit angsty after he notices her gift and wants her to return to Italy with him? He could threaten to take her by force but Bella saves them all! I'll keep thinking!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the ideas.  There will definately be another run in with the witches.  After all...who else could Bella practice her new shield on?!?

Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

I loved it! Okay, I will admit that when I read that she couldn't remember who they were, my fingers were actually twitching!!! I promise you, I was reading and in my head I was thinking, "okay, BI-ACH - ARE YOU EVEN KIDDING ME???? SHE HAS AMNESIA??????" - but I didn't say any of that, I forced myself to read on, and you my sweet friend didn't disapoint.

It was brilliant! You have hit a writing slump? Come on! Never! 

  • I need you to write the Emmett and Bella 'battle' - also, some bonding with Jazz would be great,
  • maybe he can take her 'fishing' (do Vampires eat fish???) -
  • hmmm, what about some hot dominant sex from Carlisle? I mean come on, the poor Vamp has been sweet, gentle and patient for almost two freaking years - I say - LET HIM JUST GET HIS ROCKS OFF for ONCE!!! (Yes, this is pervy me talking!) At least let him show her who's boss...in the bedroom - just once.... * whimpers* come on, you know you want to...
  • Bella learning to do things at 'human' speed and strength again - should be fun - the first time she drives a car and crashes her foot through the floor boards - closing a window - hitting the table in anger and watching it splinter into pieces - maybe this can be a chapter of learning how they teach her to adjust?
  • Are the Volturi coming at all?
  • Bella learning to use her shield? and the other vamps coming - perhaps for the wedding?

Okay, I think that's about all I can think of off the top of my head, did I mention the sex? You write good sex, write some good sex, can you believe that I'm jonesing for some Carlisle and Bella sex scenes.....so sad...

Love, hugs and smooches,

Mitchie xoxoxo

 



Author's Response:

You are such a good friend!!!  Thank you for all the ideas.  If it wasn't for you, Chapter 24 would probably still be sitting and collecting dust in the back of my brain.  And I am sorry I made your hand twitchie, but I guess you deserve it for all the times you have done the same to me with PLU.  FYI, I have been reading but am still having issues with my reviews not showing unless I am on my dino-pc, so I am adding them all in today.

CH 24 should be up in a little while thanks to you woman!!!

Love ya!

Nickey

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

LOVE the chapter title.....hmmm I think a reunion with the denali's may be in order.



Author's Response:

Oh there will most definately be another run in with the witches...all in good time.  Thanks for the review and the idea!

Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

i love this story!!! id love to see a hunting trip wit her and carlisle....

or maybe the denalis come down again and bella gets pissed becxause she remembers what happed the last time and she actually attacks them



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the R&R and the ideas.  I definately think a hunting trip is in their future.  As for the Denali'a...I have plans for them.  Don't you worry. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Carlisle is so sweet! I wish I had one...



Author's Response:

Don't we all?  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Love it !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you loved it! ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

I love this story!! More Please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the rating and review.  I can't make any promises how soon the next chapter will be ready.  My writer's ADD is kicking in and I feel the need to write another installment for 'A Family Affair'.  But no worries, I will NEVER abandone this story. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Good chapter. I would love to see her mistakes and then the family helping her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R and the ideas.  I think I need to step back and think this one over a bit.  I hate to force it when it doesn't come naturally.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

I really liked this!

A hunting trip with Carlisle, yes. Bet that would be sexy. Games with newborn Bella vs. Emmett - and one in which Emmett actually bests Bella, for once.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, I like that idea of Emmett having something to be better at than her.  I will have to think on that a while.  Thanks for the ideas!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

I can't believe I missed this chapter when it posted! It was excellent, so I'm off to read the next!



Author's Response:

I can't believe it either!  LOL.  Well, look at it this way...you get a double dose tonight. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

great update,  I think learning to control her sexual appetite woudl be cute. you know emmett saying he needs bleach for his brain after walking in on Bella and Carlise something like that. or even Rose and Emmett accidently catching them.



Author's Response:

{Giggles}  I think that would be hilarious for Emmett to be the one calling for the brain bleach for a change.  Thanks for the ideas and the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Vicky pissed me off, I did want to see C&B have a baby with different powers.  LOL

I hope she gets to kick Irena butt TOO!



Author's Response:

Sorry, no freaky babies in this story.  And don't worry about the Denali bitches...I have plans for them.

Thanks for the ideas and the R&R!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Thank goodness Bella made it threw the change.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I would have felt bad killer her off after they made it this far.  Thanks for the rating and review.

Nickey

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

I knew that they would make it in time. Poor Bella finally caught a break.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review.  Next chapter is on its way.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2011 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

OMGosh!! How creative you are!! What a wonderful idea of the gifts Bella gave everyone for Christmas!! Too cute! Loved it!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the rating and review!  I'm glad you liked the gifts.  That was actually the hardest part of the chapter for me to write.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: LadyGrelka Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

This is definitely being put on my fav list.  I hope to see an update really soon.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks so much!  I am busy with the next chapter and hope to have it ready for you very soon.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: 01katie Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

I can't wait to read the next chapter.Oh and I voted for this story everytime it was on the list.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review and the votes!!!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

i love this story.better than twilight.lol



Author's Response:

LOL!  Too bad SM came up with the idea first, right?  Thanks so much for the rating and glowing review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

i love your rose she is awesome! gald she is finally being changed i know not the way she wanted but it is good!  carlilse is soo loving.  She is one lucky girl to have all that love.  thanks for the update! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I love this Rose too. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: noellelilah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

And this... this right here is what I'm talking about. Perfection.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, you are making me blush like human Bella.  Thanks for the amazing review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: CelticGlamazon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

I cried when rose prayed....fantastic chapter bb...very moving.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: noellelilah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

Voted for this in every category I could, babe! Love it!



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks so much for the review and the votes!!!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Love it!!! Need more! PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I am doing the best I can girlfriend!  I am busy writing the next chapter and hope to have it ready for you soon.

Thanks for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: hnwhitlock2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Well done!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!  I'm glad you liked it.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: jukie Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Nice chapter I can't wait to see the new Bella and how her shield will come about.  I like how Rose snaps Bella out of her numbness again.  Cool chapter.  Cannot wait until the next one.

jukie



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Jukie.  Yeah, her shield will be a little tweaked from SM's version.  I wanted to give her a little something extra.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Okay, okay - damn you write a great change chapter! It was amazing, I felt as if I was there! You did good girl and thanks for the pimp!

And I do wear panties - sometimes...

:)

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review!  I'm glad you enjoyed the change drama.  Just wait till Bella gets her vamp on! ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

*holds breath in anticipatoin*

 

Great Chapter, I am without words atm.

wow.



Author's Response:

OMG!  Please breathe!  I can't write that fast.  LOL.  But I am trying to finish the chapter today and get it to my betas and pre-readers tomorrow.  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

glad she'll be ok



Author's Response:

She will, but the drama ain't over yet. ;)  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

wow amazing update !!!!  tissue warning woudl have been nice.  Poor Edward !!!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the tears, but I really wanted to show that Bella has made her own decision in this; in choosing to stay with Carlisle.  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

:)



Author's Response:

TY

Nickey

Reviewer: birdee18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

OK, I had every intention of hauling my butt out of bed early today for my date with the copy machine, but those plans flew out the window when I got this update. OMG! Love the family being all kickass and tearing apart Victoria! Our poor Bella. I know this isn't how she wanted her change to be, but thankfully the family was there so Carlisle could do it. And Rosalie? Damn how I love your Rose! She's amazing! She's probably the most kickass. I got a little nervous when Bella's future disappeared, but I knew you wouldn't let us down. Thank you, Edward, for pushing our Bella out of the darkness. She and Carlisle need their happily ever after! Can't wait to see our girl after her "makeover"!

Thank you darling Nickey for another great chapter. Now I can teach my summer school delinquents, I mean darlings, with a smile on my face. Maybe I'll even work on some of my own fic or bad poetry later. ;-) MWAH!

Author's Response:

LOL,  I am so glad you enjoyed it!  I really liked how this chapter came out and I love to hear when others agree. ;)  I am working hard on Bella's first day as a vamp.  Let's just say my Bella is not as controlled as SM's. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: StupidLambTanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Where do I start? I'm glad Rosalie played her part in saving Bella, it made me like her a little more! I'm also glad Carlisle didn't get to change her his way - but I can actually see him wanting to use his medical knowledge instead of being romantic lol. It was upsetting when Bella met Edward but didn't want to go with him; I did cry a little. Carlisle is so sweet, cleaning her instead of letting Alice do it. I can't wait to see how she comes out of it! See you next time!

Author's Response:

Ahh, thanks for the fantastic review.  I loved using Rosalie for part of the dismantling.  She is one of my favorite characters in this story too.  And I am so glad you liked Carlisle cleaning Bella.  It just seems like his sort of thing to do.

Thanks again!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: Sazzledazzled Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

Eeep!!!!! What a rollercoaster! update soon please :0)



Author's Response:

I am working hard on that.  Thanks for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

Wow!!  Fucking Wow!!  The whole Emmett in a rainbow colored poncho and mathching sombero w/"danglys".  Too freaking cute and just "sooo Emmett".  Perfect!!!  I giggled my hiney off when I read that.  I can just see Emmett bursting into the room in that get up.  Too cute!!

Also, soo glad she told Carlisle about Edward's statement about how he was right in them retaining their souls.  Wonderful!!

 



Author's Response:

I love to write Emmett.  He is such a fun character that doesn't get nearly enough face time in the movies.

Thanks for the rating and review.  And if you are so inclined, A Voice in the Darkness has made it to the 2nd round of voting for the Avant Garde Awards, you can vote at this link.

http://t.co/KYxpXZo

 

Best Makes Me Cry/Saddest FanFiction

Best Non-Graphic Lemon

Best Alice

Best Rosalie

Best Carlisle

 

 

Thanks again,

 

Nickey

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