Date: 25 May 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review!
Date: 04 May 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
Glad to see another chapter!
Date: 03 May 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
So far I love this story, great job!!!!!
Date: 02 May 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
OMG that was hot! :) I missed the family, I am glad they are back, especially Em. *giggles*
Date: 29 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
I just loved the way Edward is acting now. As always you just gotta love Em. I also enjoyed Carlisles joking.
Date: 29 Apr 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
Yes we missed you..
I love this!
Date: 29 Apr 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
thanks for another wonderful chapter. no need to apologise for the delayed update - we all have real lives and challenges that sap our energies (my readers have been so kind at the lack of my own updates lol).
I love the mix of totally natural conversation, plus the well observed descriptions of reactions. Everything just moves seamlessly from one emotion/situation to the next. Excellent!
Enjoy your wedding cake and scones x
Date: 28 Apr 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
Wow, did not seem that long but am glad your back...that was so funny, Emmett's comments as he is running out of the room calling for Carlise...I nearly fell off the chair I was laughing so much. I had this image of him skipping as he ran just like a 3 year old going to tell. Great chapter.
Date: 28 Apr 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
that was your BEST chapter yet!!!! I LOVED it!!!!!!!!! I actually cried how Emmet was so elated for his brother and the love he has for him. That was my fav part and trust me, there were so many fav parts of this chapter. You outdid yourself
I so so so eagerly await the next chappie
Date: 28 Apr 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
glad they are getting along so well. Cant wait to see how eddie react to newton and all at school.
Date: 27 Apr 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
I am so glad the family is back. I think the part that I have enjoyed throughout your story is the involvement of the Cullen family in Bella and Edward's relationship. It is obvious that the family loves Edward and want their "little" brother to be happy and find love so it is sweet how they helped him. They love and respect Bella and want the best for her also. I hope that Edward will have a different relationship with his family now especially his brothers. The new Edward is lighter and happier and I hope that he has more fun with his family because they all deserve it.
Date: 27 Apr 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
hehehe awesome and hot chappy
Date: 27 Apr 2011 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!
Well, even though you already know all the parts that I loved about this chapter, I feel the need to repeat some of it here.
I love your Emmett. My favorite Emmett moment was when he started asking all those wildly inappropriate questions about having sex with a human. Too funny!
The talk with Carlisle was great too - especially when Carlisle was teasing him a little!
I'm looking forward to even more sex-crazed Edward. I know you have some fun things planned for the next few chapters and I'm excited that I get to see them first!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
loved it very much thanks for sharing this and update when you can.....
Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
5 times in a long weekend with Edward Cullen is a good start :)
Date: 05 Apr 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
I'm really enjoying your story. It's a fun AU account, well written, and sexy. I look forward to the interactions with the Cullens...
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
It is not the # of reviews it is the quality. LMAO
Well I read along and then forget to do this. I am laughing or crying. Mostly laughing!
Like I said better balance on E & B.. not so.. upside down.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
Someone recommended this story to me. I thought I don't know, well YIPPIE it is great. I love Bella is no pushover. I love that Edward is relaxing. Yep sex will do that for you at least afterward..
I hope you are great at updates..
Thank you,
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your great review!
I try to update every two weeks. Working on chapter 20 now. See you soon!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs
Nope not angry with Bella. That is the way it is when you love someone. You forgive them sometimes when you should NOT. So what she has to do, is be STRONG when he is weak. He is weak!
Faced with her dating others and abandoning him he freaked out. Yeppers.. good job Bella.. That is where Stephanie went wrong.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
Great Chapter! The scene where they are parking and get caught was hilarious and the scene in front of the fire was incredibly hawt. I think my computer started to smoke and it didn't have anything to do with being near a fire . . .
I'm really looking forward to the return of the Cullens. I can imagine that there's going to be some great fun and relentless teasing!
Date: 02 Apr 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
This story is great, I like to differnet aspect that you have taken.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
Golly I can't tell you how awesome it is to have such a nice story to read. So glad you had him come back, I hated him leaving her in the book and couldn't read past that for days. Love the way they are acting together, so real. Looking forward to the next update, Hope things are going well in your life.....Reading this story makes my day just get better.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
I love the way Edward is acting, I find it truly funny. I just knew that the cop would know Bella, I got a good laugh out of that. I love their take on Bellas gift. Bring on Em, I bet he has alot of jokes saved up for them.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
loved the whole chapter, the balance of it, the fun and the erotic parts. your story definitely deserves more reviews but I find that readers on this site don't review as often as on other sites.
will definitely put you on alert for your new story. good luck with it.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
Oh my! I loved that part them getting caught making out! HA!
I love this story *swoons*
I look forward to more of your work! Especially the next chapter I miss the Cullens :)
*puts you on author alert*
Date: 31 Mar 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
such a great chapter...I really loved it
Date: 31 Mar 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
ROFL for the cop. Cant wait for the next when the family comes home.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
great chapter, loved Bella and Edwards last night alone together, it was well written and very sweet and romantic. I found the cop scene highly entertaining, not to mention Emmett at the end. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially now the Cullens are Back, and every one has to go back to school. I also look forward to your new story. I am sure it will be just as well written and entertaining as this one.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
LOL I loved when they we're interupted by the cop...thank goodness it wasn't Charlie. It was so sweet that they gave the waitress money to help her and her fiancee. Good Lord the family is back...so so glad. Hopefully they will see the change in both Edward and Bella. I can't wait to see what Emmett has to say.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2011 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
I love this story...so much of it feels canon, but better. Thank you.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
hehehe that was great at the end. loved the chappy!!!!
Date: 30 Mar 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
Awesome chapter!!!!! I love that Edward is so generous with everyone-it makes me love him even more:)
I am EXCITED to see Emmy back though;)
Jo
Date: 30 Mar 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
What another great chapter. I love that you took this story down a different path or "fork" as you put it. I like the stories that go into his past and tell about his human life as a young man and boy. You definately have a wonderful storyline going - I can't wait for more chapters. Thank you.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie
Well, I'm loving it! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
Nah. My husband (of 14 years) and I did just that earlier this month. :)
I'm a new reader and I love your story. I hope you student is doing better!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
I am glad she will not be using Jakers or Mike. I would love to see them announce their engagement later in hte year. To see the reactions fo Forks HS.
I love the mature communication. I love hte angle you take to Twilight. She could have taken that path and done more with nessie sans icky imprint.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I promise that there will be NO jake (unless he goes to the wedding as the son of a family friend). Remember...she KNOWS where her loyalties lie!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
nope definitely not too much! my partner professes to be a 5 times a day kinda guy - when we move in together, I'm looking forward to finding out!
another enjoyable chapter. thank you for sharing.
on a more serious note, I hope your student makes a good recovery.
Author's Response:
Ah to be young! Bella told me to tell you that she shares your sentiments regarding having as much sex as ya can squeeze in a 24 hour day. Along with a bottle of Advil.
Thank you so much for your review and your kind words. Sadly, my student passed away yesterday. Like us, he loved all things Twilight. He was about to play the part of Felix in a Twilight parody movie that we are making as a class. Now it will be dedicated to him!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
I loved that the "official" (with ring) proposal was in the meadow. And really, sore or not, I think they needed to "celebrate" the engagement. Another great chapter! I'll be sorry to see this story end!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
I can;t comment........... Ahhh it was good very good
Author's Response:
Thank You!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
So, are you a cheesehead? I Am... love your story line.
Author's Response:
Nope...But my mother in law was (from Beliot). Plus I love cheese, both the kind that comes from Wisconsin AND the heart!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
What a wonderful chapter. I cant wait to see how everything turns out.
Author's Response:
Thanks Debs2crazy! I can't wait to see how it turns out either. I swear this story is writing itself...but fear not...there will be an HEA!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
Horny toad indeed. Great chapter. Love the charlie talk. Woo Hoo family coming home.
Author's Response:
Yep...and I can already see the future and he is going to have a lot of splainin to do in the coming months (pun not exactly intended but I'll roll with it)
Must say I enjoyed writing the Charlie talk, though it was hard to bust out of the E&B bubble, albeit briefly.
Thank you for your review!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
good chapter as always
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
awwwe a sweet chappy. I hope your student is doing better.
Erin Go Bragh!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your sweet review!
Sadly my student passed away yesterday. He was a total Twilight buff just like us. He will be greatly missed! Thank you so much for your kind thoughts.
Jayne
Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 18: Promises
No sex with Edward is too much! hehehe I love the idea of a horny toad Edward. LOL I'm so jealous. I loved this chapter. :)
Author's Response:
I guess waiting over 100 years was so worth the wait! Just hope he can control his sexy lust as well as he did his blood lust.
Pfft...who am I kidding? I hope he's an out of control sex pig who melts our respective laptops.
Better invest in a cooling pad, girl!
Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 In Which I am the Clairvoyant
:)
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
I love this concept. I am not sure where it is going but I have had a similar concept with a little different twist. Love this chapter. So different from where it started at ch 1
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
Wonderful chapter addition :) Its nice to get some 'down-time' before your talk *hehe* Cannot wait to read more. Loving this side of both the characters your creating.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
good chapter. enjoyed it.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
lol loved the last sentence of your author's note haha :D
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. She's right not to let him control her so much, otherwise things would be too claustrophobic. It does Edward good to be challenged. He is not always right. He can be too autocratic at times.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
Great chapter! I didnt mind having the sexy time before the talk, they needed something to help them stay calm, and that was the perfect outlet ;) lol
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
I was shocked at your version of Laurent and his story. I liked it a lot. Loved the sexy desprate needy sexy time... Loved the BJ porn and the sexy banter afterwards. :)
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
it was a great chapter and it's ok to have fun before talking loll
Date: 11 Mar 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
I love their visit to the cottage and LAurent's story. I am glad to see he decided to be a good husband and honor the life he built with irina. Life with Irina is not eating humans.
Loved the chapter. There is plenty of time to talk. They needed to embrace the passion in their love as well as building a future. Great story.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
The Laurent/Victoria back story was interesting and well done.
But the action in the cottage was so "HAWT!" From the dirty talk to the pervy pictures and then the BJ, it was all perfect. You always manage to keep these scenes equal parts sexy, playful, and humorous. It's a talent!
Finally, someone acknowledges that Edward was from the EDWARDIAN era and was not VICTORIAN ! LOVED IT!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
great chapter. Glad laurant found Irina. yummy bedtimes for the kiddies.
hmmm emailed porno perv. yummy.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
Loved it very much and I am excited to see what will happen next update when you can.....
Date: 11 Mar 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
I bet Edward loved the end!!! I am glad in your stroy Laurent was not going to hurt Bella. And marrying Irina!?! Thats cool too.
Jo
Date: 11 Mar 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 17: An Understanding
thanks good chapter
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Now what????? May be its not just mind reading she has tapped into...
Date: 08 Mar 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
ARRRRRRGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Most evil cliffe EVER
Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
I agree that Bella is a teenager so how she acts fits. I hope Edward is as fast as they say so he can get to Bella in time. Good chapter.
Date: 08 Mar 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
great story thanks :)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
ahhh laurent it is both so easy and so hard to hate him sigh
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Actually I think Bella was ebing reasonable with her argurments.
Damn Laurant.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
awsome story.
cant wait for the update.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
im not mad that bella said no i think she did the right thing by saying no if she had said yes edward would of thought that he could dictate to bella when and if she is ever changed but that might be a mute point because she might be changed by laurent before edward can get to he i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
I am mad at and feel so sorry for both bella and edward. i hope alice and the family or edward gets there quick enough.
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
OK now I am worried this story which I love by the way is going to go south very quickly.... Please let them have some happiness, let him find her. Since I can't stand Laurent, hope he dies horribly..... Sorry just want this nice story to end well.
Author's Response:
Aw! Don't worry girl! I believe in HEA...have faith!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
True it would not be. Obviously edward kicks his ass. Please give an out take of Emmett taking on the vickie.
They both acted immaturely. They are both teens afterall. Overall, they have much healthier communication the canon. Sorry using jake not cool.
Author's Response:
With the sweets come the sours. They've been in their bubble all weekend. It was bound to burst eventually. Sigh...they have grown a LOT this weekend! 17 will be up on Thursday!
An Emmett Vickie outake? Hmmm...I'll see what I can do!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
I think Bella was right to react to the proposal the way she did. Yet, I also loved the way she was second-guessing herself at the end of the chapter and worrying about Edward's feelings. It all fit so well with the Bella you've written.
I loved the way Alice left photos for Edward and how that led him to acknowledge both the reality of his loneliness before Bella and the hope that she offers for his future: a future that is no longer lonely and empty.
Great chapter! Love the cliffy with Laurent!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Yes and an A$$ he is thanks for sharing this with us and Please update when you can I am so excited to see what will happen next.......
Date: 07 Mar 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Nope, totally get why she had a fit with him...I mean, after everything he is still being a dipstick! OOOooo, love how you had Laurant come in too and her shield dropping, very cool. Sucks you left us hanging, but that is what keeps us coming back...LOL Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Author's Response:
Yeah, but I really think he GETS it now! I just pray he's not too late! Yikes!!!
Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
Oh wow, holy shit!
Run, Edward, run! *in best Forret Gump imitation*
Author's Response:
To the tune of na,na,na,na, VAMP-MAN! Will he make it in time? You'll find out on Thursday!
Date: 07 Mar 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
she didn't say a firm no either
Author's Response:
No she didn't! In fact I think she was finally coming to terms with everything as was he...and THEN...cue Laurent. Crap!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
she will say yes of course!!!
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon enough! I'll be posting two chapters this week. So stay tuned!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
Wonderful chapter addition :) Cannot wait to read what she says.
Author's Response:
I'll be posting tomorrow! Thanks for your review!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
AWESOME!!! I love how you are doing this story!
Author's Response:
So happy you're enjoying my re-telling of New Moon. I'll be posting tomorrow. Thanks for your wonderful review!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
I am glad Bella told him that he is Teddy all grown up because its true. I hope she will be happy and say yes the his proposal. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm happy too! Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
Remarkable. I love the detailed account of their day.
Of course she says yes. She can get engaged and set a date later in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! We'll see how his proposal goes over tomorrow!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
I liked that the proposal just came busting out of Edward. It means he is loosening up on his controlling tendencies. :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm thinking that pulling the stick out of his ass must have been a success. Wait until Rosalie hears!
Thank you so much for sticking with this story and your reviews!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
wonderful chapter. Poor conflicted eddie.
Author's Response:
Makes ya wanna hug him, right?
Thank you so much for all your reviews!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
eeek I hope she says yes after all Bella and Edward are perfect for each other.
Author's Response:
They are indeed perfect for each other. Let's hope they realize that!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
I love the way they are finally building a real relationship. They are really talking to each other, at last. Beautiful chapter: poignant, touching, a bit of humor, a dash of lemon . . . a great read.
Author's Response:
Couldn't have done it without you!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
wonderful chapter.l it is great to see Edward coming to terms with his past, not to mention the idea that he still has a soul and a little bit of Teddy still inside. Like Bella said, he's Teddy grown up. I also loved how Bella was able to comfort Edward, and how they were able to talk about there future together, and while Bella maynot marry him tomorrow, I have the feeling she will say yes, as long as there is a long engagement attatched.
Author's Response:
I think they have both matured a great deal in the past few days. I am with you all the way...I hope she says YES too!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 15: Teddy
Loved it very much and I like this little twist thanks for sharing thbis with us and update when you can.....
Date: 28 Feb 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 13: Bed Time Stories
I enjoyed the chapter, plus the sexy interlude. It was nice seeing a snippet of Edward's family history.
Author's Response:
As a family historian, I really enjoyed writing his backstory. I never felt Meyes shared much about Edwards human life...
Thanks for your review!
Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 14:Tears for Lottie
a pood edward..and his little sister sounds sooo cute..
Author's Response:
His sister was adorable! Her picture can be seen on the beautiful banner that coleen561 made for me.
Thank so much for your review!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 14:Tears for Lottie
holy crap
Author's Response:
And now you know the rest of the story, Paul Harvey!
Next chapter will be posted on Thursday. See you then!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 13: Bed Time Stories
awwww teddy
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 12: Guilty as Charged
wow sex and a bath.....,theyre moving right along.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 11: Compromised
cause she thinks she's guilty of seducing him I bet.
Author's Response:
You have been the only reviewer to guess this correctly! Kudo to you, and thank you so much for taking the time to review each chapter.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 10: A Simple Man
Woo Hoo Em Killed tricky vicky.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 9: Love Letters
hmmm sandwich (in a homer simpson sort of way) lol Gotta love jazz
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 8: Pick-up truck pick me up
lol for the parking lot sexing up
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs
well its a start. and there will be more yellin g and crying i think
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 6: EPOV In which I find my voice
oh he is going to need a lot of help.