Date: 02 Jul 2023 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Of course I'm wondering about her backstory and will she see him again. No matter those answers that was delicious!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
It was extremely erotic... How she felt this pull, which he obviously felt as well. It's going to be quite the night, sadly we algo got to share the first part ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. =)
Date: 26 Jun 2011 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GAWD! This was absolutely freaking off the planet HAWT! The blowjob under the table at the restaurant was my second most fave scene to the bar stool being my most fave! Well shit Bella at least your getting some and getting paid a nice chunk of change for your time as well! Too bad Riley wasn't enough eh? LOL .. Loved this O/S!! Any plans on continuing this in the future?
Author's Response:
Wow, I love your reaction! Thank you. ;D
I'm not sure if I'll continue this...maybe in the future. Got some other stories I'm busy with right now.
But this review just made my day. =)
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was awesome, but it doesn't read like an o/s. I will absolutely love to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Yes, I ended it like that so I can continue this if I wanted to. Glad you liked it. I'll try to find time to continue this. Thanks. =)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was hot! I can't believe you ended it there tho. I want to know what happened the rest of the night. This could definitely be made into at least a short story (with several chapters), delving into what Bella's occupation is and what happens with her relationship with Edward. Then what happens with Riley and what was the connection with Jasper and Alice.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. So many people are requesting me to continue this...Well, I can't promise but I'll find time one of these days. Thanks! =)
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sad it was over. Good quick lemon.
Author's Response:
Thank you. =)
Date: 27 Jan 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would really like to know what happens next. What exactly is her profession, did they end up together, what happens the next morning, Riley? Please continue at least one more chapter.
Author's Response:
I'll see what I can about that other chapter you requested. ;D Thanks!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
i would love to see this turned into a full story! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you. =)
Date: 29 Dec 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you! =) Happy New Year!