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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 7:17 PM Title: Epilogue: C'est la pomme de terre

thank you so much for sharing this AWESOME story with us on here ;D

Reviewer: PJAustin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:39 PM Title: Epilogue: C'est la pomme de terre

You and your wife are a fuckawesome team!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 24: Closing Verse

I love the lightness of this chapter. Every single one of them needed this.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 23: Opening Night

Hmmm, everytime I think I may have things sorta figured out, the mystery thickens 4 me. I'm super glad the play went well. I am also proud of Emmett.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 22: Voice of Reason

"That's for me cowboy". Morgan you KNOW - am totally interested. Just let me know when & where I can get my hands on one.
I am very glad that things seem to be okay w/Jacob. The trip through his mind was very interesting. I love you creativity with this story! I am not understanding though why Jacob said he was now human?

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 21: Chains of Love

Your Jacob is freakin' awesome. I Love him. I am hoping that he will be ok. I love Carlisle! He is brave, loving, loyal & Funny as hell w/o even really trying. I am very glad Bella is no longer a captive. She is a strong one that girl! Beginning next chapter in the a.m.

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 18: Another Man's Trash

I am so glad to be back here reading this. Had some RL issues myself that kept me away. I hope that your son is okay.
I am concerned deeply for Jacob. Anxious to hit "next" so I can find out whats up!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 17: One Man's Tresaure

Oh you cruel, cruel man you! Talk about a cliffie! Have mercy, if Bella ever planned 2 get outta that chain herself, now would be the time to do so. I have a feeling I'm gonna both love & hate the next chapter.
Is it Saturday yet?
;o)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews, they mean a lot.

I have just posted two new chapters for you today in an effort to appear less cruel.

Morgan

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 16: Right As Rain

Ah-ha! I had a feeling he was in that room the 1st time E was in there. Interesting. That Michael is beginning to really creep me out, seriously.
Beautiful song. You & Betty compliment each other very well.
I love that Carlisle accepted Rosalie's condition out of wedlock so well. Was a tad concerned about that.
Anxious for next Saturday to arrive already!
Another excellent chapter!
Robin :o)

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 14: West of the Moon

Oh, I fear you have spoiled me this week w/ 2 u/d's! I really enjoyed both chapters. I'm sad 2 know things are winding down, but I want you to know I have enjoyed every single word.
I am anxious for Bella to wake up & know that help is on it's way. I'm sad to know Jacob will be caught in the middle & may very well perform his greatest & most selfless act as Bella's protector. I hope that is not the case b/c I do so want him to feel the joy of being a daddy. And poor Emmett when he finds out.
I'll be right here next week waiting for you, just as, I presume, you know I will be.
Ya'll have a wonderful week!
Robin

Author's Response:

Thank you for such a touching review.

You are a good sport with the cliffhangers too.

Jacob is my favorite character in this story and I see that you too have grown fond of him.

Just posted chapter 15 moments ago so I hope you like it.

Morgan

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Fairweather Friend

"So you can literally spot vampires from across the street," Alice stated.
"That's right." He turned his head to follow a man walking a dog. "And I just did."
--- OMG Can I just say that I absolutely LOVE the special ability you have bestowed upon Jasper. I wonder of he has been able to keep this information from Edward.

When they returned to the theatre, they were saddened by how easy it was to find wickedness on the streets and it was noted by Bella that the convenience was not worth that knowledge. --- Sad thing about this is that some things never change. I am glad that I cannot see into the minds of people. I have a strange feeling that many people are definitely not as they seem.

...discovered that nearly all politicians were, in fact, vampires. --- Aha ha ha!!!

They met many vampires that day. Some of them eyed Carlisle like he was a turkey leg. --- I have a feeling though, that had they decided to knaw on said leg, they might have discovered that Jasper & Alice would be the ones giving them a deadly dose of thier own personal Tryptophan.

Nekked = wearing nothing but the breeze :o)  I think I will borrow this one.

I had a feeling that Michael was after Bella so that she could read from the book. This places her in peril & I have a sneaking suspicion that Edward will be the death of Michael. Although . . . I am very much intrigued by the story in the book. I haven't liked him since the first time I read of him. I felt sympathy for him for a while, but that time has passed.

I am loving this & I am looking forward to next Saturday. Hope ya'll have a good week.

Robin :o)



Author's Response:

Hi Robin,

Thanks so much for your reviews, I am getting a lot out of them and feel like I understand what moves you now.

Your kind words mean the world to me.

Morgan

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Fond Farewell

I really enjoyed this week's chapter. I wouldn't say it is "filler" because none of them are ever just filler. I learned a lot, yet still feel like I have missed something. I know I will find out what that is in due time. 
As far as the Egyptions claim on the book, I guess the "sand" references make sense, so it is entirely plausible that is where the book originated. I am anxious to see when Michael discovers his "special" talent. That should be interesting.


If I didn't already know better...after reading this one line..."Carlisle hopped up onto the whip's bench and grabbed the crop."... I might have thought I was reading a BSDM story. Well not really, but you get my point. I know, Robin & her wierd ass humor. :o)


"Just don't shoot any vampires with it." Emmett smiled sheepishly as Carlisle reached down to accept the gift. "It just makes them angry." - What can I say, I simply love Emmett.

"On that note," Jacob interjected. "Why don't we get going before things here become indulgent and overly emotional." - Ah Jacob.... Morgan, let me just say your Jacob is my favorite. I'm still Team Edward ALL THE WAY, but this Jacob, I love him.

Looking forward to next Saturday, as usual. Congrads on the noms. Already voted.

Robin :o)

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 4:The Punishment

I am really enjoying the back story on Michael. It adds a nice dynamic I think. Personally I think a portion of the insanity must come from the taxing act of trying to read that book. "...but he was concerned that the toll it took on his body would have lasting effects." Yeah that's the message I get from that line anyway.

"I haven't had a bath in over a week..." ewww...Stiiiinky.

"Edward kept hearing Jasper's prayer over and over.Please not that, not that, not that." What is "that"? This just gets curiouser & curiouser.

"...Jacob was an infant in his mother's arms. Only, in this moment, his mother was Michael." Okay that is just plain out creepy right there.

"Alice was practically perched on his shoulder, her yellow scarf completing the image of a parrot." That image is freakin' hilarious to me. Even funnier is that I can actually see this image clearly.

'Carlisle answered quicker than he expected to. "Let me go." ' *whoosh* I certainly was not expecting that at all. My guess is Esme may have a little more to say about this. After all, they are life partners & Esme being the kind of wife & mother she is, may just want to do whatever it takes to keep her family together. Honestly, I think if I were faced with this same decision, I would most likely choose the same as Carlisle. I cannot imagine living on this earth for thousands of years. In foresight it shound like it would be exciting, seeing the world change around you, watching the advancement of technology, science & medicine. On the flip side I think that you would get to a point where losing those you care about to aging & death, may just make you withdraw just to protect yourself. I think it would harden you. *shrugs* I dunno really what I would do. Thankfully, that is not a decision I will ever be in a place to face.

As always, i enjoyed this chapter. It was very informative & deep. I am anxious to hear more of Michael & how he got to where he is & especially about his obvious gift. I think that is cool. I am anxiously awaiting next weekend. I must admit I am suprised about the non-cliffie. No worries though, i won't get used to it. Wouldn't want you to spoil me or anyone else.
:o)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and your jokes.  I get the biggest kick out of you.

Morgan

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Priest

"...Edward happily placed his mouth around the cranberry truffle perched at the tip of each creamy rise of flesh. He swirled his tongue around his prize and even flicked it playfully as he continued to use his strength to pull Bella down onto his standing ovation." -- Morgan...ahhh you definitely have a unique way with words. If my husband said something like that to me I would laugh my ass off. At least Edward was only thinking this. I kinda fear what my man is thinking during...nevermind. :o)

Wow, I must admit I am suprised @ Michaels age. Not his immortal age in yrs but his human age...63? wow. We normally here of the change occuring when people are younger...much younger. I like it! You constantly suprise me.

I absolutley love the interaction with Jacob & Rosalie. As much as I normally prefer Rose to be with Em...In your stories, her being with Jacob just feels natural & I forget that the relationship is OOC, because it does not feel foreign to me. I am hoping that Emmett keeps his feelings for Rose to himself. I do not want to see him DO anything to break their harmony with one another & those around them.

So Michael's change...what the hell. It seems to me as if he was picked out by the creeper with the olive tan to be changed. I mean their were no others that appeared to have been changed. Then to leave him alone to wake in a world he does not understand. (Michael kinda reminds me of Marcus in A.R.'s books). I am not quite sure how I feel about Michael. Maybe the insanity is brought on by the book that was blank. I mean it was implied that the "creeper" had an insane look in his eyes. And How in the hell is he standing outside in broad daylight?  I wonder, is that his "special talent" or is it something that can be taught to the others?  Ah, the possibilities. :o)

...And of COURSE you leave yet another cliffie. *sheesh* you are certainly talented in that department. Well @ least being late with the reading & reviewing means I have to wait less time....unless I am late next time...nah.
See ya this weekend. (BTW I will review in both places. I see I am the only one reviewing @ TWCS) hmmmm....

My voting is complete jsyk.

 

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 2: Theatre of the Heart

The Theatre really sounds grand & beautiful. You described it so well that I can actually see it.  Much like you did in BV when Jacob & Rose went on a small vaca.

I do not blame Bella for wanting to try & smooth things first with Michael.  That said, I think that they should all be pre-emptive in their plans.  I think it is an excellent idea to have Jasper & Alice go south.  I do so love the idea of carlisle helping them out, even if I am worried for his well being.  I mean it's not like Jasper & Alice will be able to help him if there is trouble in broad daylight. Either way,  I think it is better if they go ahead & make thier arrangements to leave.

Esme can be a tad scary when she sees that her family is in danger.  A pissed, scared Esme, can be a SCAREY Esme.

How you manage to leave me on the edge of my seat @ the end of every single chapter is beyond me. Excellent chapter.  Looking forward to next week!

Robin :o) 



Author's Response:

Hello Robin,

I look forward to your reviews every week.  Gosh and I thought I was letting you off the hook this chapter! Don't worry you won't get that luxary too often in this story. :D

Morgan

 

 

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Theatre of the Absurd

Ah Geez...I cannot believe I called Jennifer Kim...how embarassing.  In my defense, however I have a customer named Morgan & his wife's name is Kim, so ... yeah.

You already have me on the edge of my seat, one chapter in. Crazy. I am guessing Randall is a message. A very serious message.  Looks like Bella better accept Michael's request for her help. She's a smart girl & she has friends to help watch her back.

I'm holding on tight for this bumpy ride.

Happy New Year!

Robin :o)

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