Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love the story! I definetly think you should do a sequel=)
You are a great writer, though you should work on your spelling.... ;)
Anyways, great job!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
This is the end? Why?! I want more!
Write a sequel or epilogue ;33333
Date: 19 Feb 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapters.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh Bella has a tatoo, nice. Sexy time was hot, btw.
Second theory: D is taking car of Bella's (race's) car ;D
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
ok now u really need to keep going!! im really getting into it!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
please hurry. i love this also please tell us soon what Bella has and has not done.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
please hurry. i love this also please tell us soon what Bella has and has not done.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
fuck, this is alewsome
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
what a dream... is it hot here?
and that cliffie. You're evil! xP
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Bella and the races? nice ;3
hahaha the last scene, omg, hahaha
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
When Edward called Bella per Mary I remembered first season of Gilmore girls xD....
Author's Response:
thats where i got the whole 'mary' thing form lol i love the gilmore girls :) thank you for the review. xxx
Date: 16 Feb 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Bella is such a liar ;3
'“Awesome, you had better take care of her. And if you don’t I will murder you.”'
first theory: was she prego and she was talking about her child...?
Date: 15 Feb 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
i think you should keep going. i want to know what happens. Oh, this site is great im sure you'll like it here.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
nice ;)
I'm curious why Charlie wants Bella away from them. Hmm.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter! I'm really excited to see where this story goes... =)