Date: 19 Oct 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
I thought her asking for ten was based in guilt. Rose was being awful, and I'm glad Bella told her about it.
Date: 19 Oct 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hmmmm! I'm not sure how I feel about him limiting her contact with people. I am super curious what she did to up her punishment. I think she was feeling guilty about something.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
She would be better off without Renee! The whole family bed time is super strange. I am looking forward to what she will learn on the girls shopping trip.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Renee is a real piece of work! Wow!!! Did he forget her spankings?
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Interesting! That chapter raises lots of questions!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think I was right about the family dynamic. I am quite curious about who her father is. It seems pretty apparent that they all know him.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well he sure took the ILY better than I anticipated. He is a quirky control freak, and I say that in a loving way! I really am interested in the family dynamic. Edward wasn't hatched and I cannot help but wonder how close the apple fell to the tree!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 5
She already blurted out the 'I love you!' how will daddy feel about that! The whole 'daddy' thing is a little squicky, but that is also an expected part for this kind if relationship. In real life -ewww! In fiction - you go girl!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Bella's pigheadedness is going to be fun! Something tells me he will enjoy spanking the toddler behavior right out of her!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
That was just hottt! There is just something about a bit older slightly controlling Edward! Something tells me Bella will give as good as she gets!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
Things are moving along rather quickly! I like that he is not messing around!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my goodness! This has been on my 'to read' list for a while. I'm glad to get started. It looks quite naughty!!! In a good way of course.
Date: 17 Oct 2011 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 43
I can not believe that this is the end of this story. I am going to miss reading about Daddyward and Bella and their spankings. lol I have really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing it with all of us. I loved that Edward was in shock about meeting this young man. lol. I kind of feel sorry for the young man having to meet Edward and go through a 100 questions veofre he can take Charleigh out on a date.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2011 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 43
Awesome ending, BRAVO!
Date: 14 Oct 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 43
I loved this story and I am sad to see it go but as always all good things come to an end eventually, I will definetely be on the lookout for your other stories!
Date: 12 Oct 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 42
OMG!!!!! I love it. Edward is back to spanking Bella. She definately sounds happy in this chapter. I had to laugh at Carlisle and Esme having words over him hogging Charleigh. lol.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 43
wow!
lol for Daddyward!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 43
It's been a great joy reading your story. Thanks for sharing it with us. It was unique and wonderfully done. I'm really looking forward for what will be coming next!!!! :)
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 43
I loved this story and am sad to see it finished, but am looking forward to your next story!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 43
Lovely ending... you reap what you sow. I'm glad Charleigh appears to be very level headed and that Edward can be reasonable. Great story! I will miss the updates.
Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 43
Awesome story sad to see it end.
Hugs
Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 43
great story, thank you so much for sharing !!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 43
I am sorry to see it end maybe you could do a future outtake
of charliegh's wedding or something huh??
pretty please ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 43
great story I really enjoyed it
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 43
I am so sad it is over this is a great story I love me some daddy lol. I cant wait for more from you thanks for a great ride.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 43
at first i wasn't so sure about her calling him daddy but i have to say i have loved this story so much
i am glad things went the way they did. it all came together
love it thanx for writing
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 43
Damn. Hate to see this end. What a great story! Full opf rollercoaster emotions and soooooo well done!
Thank you so much for sharing your talents with all of us!
Catherine
Date: 10 Oct 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 43
thanks for sharing... Congratulation!..xo
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 43
you rock and yes I'm gonna check out the new story too the best girlie!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 43
an end of an era :L
Date: 09 Oct 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 42
so freaking good
Date: 08 Oct 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 42
looking forward to the enxt chapter
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 42
i am glad being a daddy suits edward.
seems that little charleigh was so welcomed in all their lives and has made it better. have had a blast with reading this story. loved it
Date: 07 Oct 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 42
Love it.
Hugs
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 42
wonderful ending!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Life is good, where it was meant to be. It took them longer to get there. Although it wasn't easy, it was the best way. It made them care more for each other, their families and of course their daughter.
It was good to see them get that part of their relationship back, they needed it. It makes themmwho they are.
Just the epi? Daddyward will be missed.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thanks so much for this chapter, I was wondering how both of them were going to be affected by punishment, I see it was just what both of them neeeded... :-) Edward is just the sort of Father I anticipated him being. that was heartwarming!
Seeing the change in Carlilse makes one remember that change CAN BE GOOD!
This has been a wonderful story and journey for these two, sad to see it come to an end soon, but all good things must come to an end eventually. I hope you contiue to write. Your wonderful!
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 42
So sad it is almost over but cant wait for what you do next.
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thanks so much for writing. Glad they could get their groove back on.
Date: 07 Oct 2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
Thanks for sharing this story!! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 41
quel beau chapitre...
Chacun ses choix! Peut-être le prochain bébé sera allaité! lol
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 41
That was so beautiful... I had to cry a little.. it was amazing..
sad it almost done..
I can't wait for your next story.. a funny story would be awesome!
Author's Response:
i have three stories in the work right now! two are going to be colaberation. one is up under the penname jessand tat. the two other stories will be under jess2002. one will have some funniness in it! thanks for the review
Date: 21 Sep 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 41
I love it!!!!!!!!!!! I love that he had Irina go get Bella's ring.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 41
Awwww... The peanut is here! I called my friends baby a bug when I saw him on the sono cus he was just here squrming around & he was sooo tiny! Update soon!
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edward has come a long way. I knew he would make a good father once he realize he could be one. He is a loving man. He just didn't realize he could have this dream.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 41
Well I hadn't expected that it was Bella that was asking the marry me question so you got me there. Now that the baby is here they seem to be well on their way to being a complete family with a wedding in the near future.
Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
Omg! The peanut is here! I called my friends baby a bug when I first saw him on the ultrasound. It was sooooo tiny & he looked like a little bug squirming around. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 41
I am sorry, can you clarify for me, bella is NOT brest feeding, is that correct?
If she is not can you explain why? I know a lot of women cant because they just dont produce enough milk, my mother was one of them, but can you tell me why Bella chose not to.
If I read it wrong and she is, then please ignore the question.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
no bella is not breastfeeding. i only write about things i know. with that said, i didnt breasfeed, so i dont know what it is like or the whole bonding thing. so it is what it is. thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 41
Awwww is so right!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 41
well it seems the family had a very overwhelming welcome for charleigh. she will be one spoiled baby
love it. edward is so happy thye will be great parents
Date: 20 Sep 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 41
such a sweet chapter i loved it.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 40
Ha! Loved the chapter and meeting little Miss Charleigh! But I´m glad I didn´t have to suffer long with the cliffie! Lol! Great chapter bb! I´m still sending readers your way!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
thanks for being such a great pimp for my stories :)
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 41
So sweet!! Beautiful chapter... congratulation! :) ..xo
Date: 20 Sep 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 41
I was shocked that she was the one who asked to cool. I will be sad when the story is over but I cant wait for a new one.
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 41
Yeah, for the proud new family. Makes me want to remind my oldest that he was the beginning of all of us being a family. Very special marker in life indeed.
Thanks for the update & writing that you do.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 41
Awww....little Peanut will be queen of the clan!
I have loved this story from the very beginning and it has just gotten better and better with each chapter. Thank you so much for sharing it!
Catherine
Date: 19 Sep 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 41
Apparently I totally missed that it was BELLA who asked him to marry her. I totally thought it was Edward doing the asking. She totally made his day, month and year. A very sweet thing to do. The family will be over the moon that the wedding is back on.
Date: 19 Sep 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 41
Edward has what he always needed but had no clue about, a family, his family. He is the happiest man alive. not just because of his daughter, Bella asking him to marry her was huge to him. She wants him, all of him and that's to get him over the moon at least twice.
Date: 19 Sep 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 41
update soon please
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 41
Another amazing chapter.....very sad only two more ch. left!!! Edward, Carlisle all changing. Who knew it took the birth of a tiny baby girl to do that. I wonder will Peanut be a only child????
Date: 17 Sep 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 40
I am loving this story! These too are sometimes too stubborn for their own good, but I'm glad things are starting to smooth out for them a little now. I can't wait to see what her reaction is going to be to that impromtu proposal.
Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 40
They need to get married now that baby girl is here. If they made it through the last few months, they can make it through anything.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 40
Marry Me? Has to be Bella!
Nice labor - lucky girl!
Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 40
oh god are you kidding me you are leaving me here??? Such a good freaking story
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 40
loved the chapter - hated the cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!
:)
Date: 14 Sep 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 40
Damn u cliffy bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ugh! Update soon!!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 40
LMAO YOU SUUUCK! THE CLIFFIE WAS MEAN!
IF HE ASKED ME TO MARRY HIM, I'D SAY HELL MOTHER EFFIN YEAAAAH!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 40
wow charleigh is here yeah. man her labor seemed very easy. thank god for her. man mine was hours. i wish i was bella. i wonder if after having charleigh will they try for any other kids or are they happy they have one. their miracle baby. i am so excited for them and i cna just imagine the grandparents are estatic
love it
Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
You are evil! Lucky girl to have such a swift labor... she'll be in trouble if she ever has another child!
Thanks for the update.
Date: 14 Sep 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 40
Yaaay! They have a baby! Oh my, he proposed. Wonder how emotional, I just delivered our baby, I must look like hell Bella will react?
Date: 13 Sep 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
ohhh, love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 40
That baby girl will have her Daddy Soooooo wrapped around her little finger!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved it! I wonder if Bella will say, "Yes?"
Thank you for the update.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 40
I must agree, Bella is very lucky. Labor was quick, good thing she hadn't gone to the Flea Market earlier. It would have made things tense, awkward to say the least.
Edward surprised everyone, he was calmed, composed at least on the outside. He knew Bella needed it, so he just did it.
And then he asked her... What will she say after the shock wears down?
Date: 13 Sep 2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 40
The baby is here!!!!!!! I am soooo glad that Bella did not fight with Edward. I loved the whole thing. I was like Bella, a very short delivery. My longest labor from first contraction to delivery was 4 hours. 2 out of 3 pregenacies were natural.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 40
Loved the update girl... with my first I didn't even know I was in labor just had a back ache and needed some rest, so I could go to work the next morning. Got to the hospital and it took them forever to even get me in a room, so they could check me out no sooner than that happened my water broke and I didn't even push and my son was born... Shocked the shit out of all the Doc's at the UW. Yup my first was born at University of Washington Medical Center. Got to love them training hospitals.
HUgs
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow that was a fast delivery thank goodness, not sure if Edward or Bella either one could have survived a lenghty delivery... LOL!!!! You rock! Glad children are back in school so you can breathe for a few hours. **big grins**
Can't wait to learn more about the baby and how they handle being new parents. This can get interesting from here. I love this story! There are a few others like this out there since YOU started this and I must say, YOURS is the one that I read.... I hope you take that as encouragement as that is what I mean for it to be.... You have a great way about telling this story that draws you in and keeps you engrossed.... Take care!!! We all will be waiting.. :-)
Date: 13 Sep 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 40
I'm glad she had the baby. I really hoped Edward was gonna change. I was upset she wanted him the way he was. No man will ever tell me what to do and where to go and punish me. I grin and bared it through the story because its a good story, I just didnt like this Edward.
Date: 13 Sep 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 40
Great chapter!! The finish I liked! :)...xo
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 40
thanks good chapter as aever
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 40
good job my time in delivery was 5 minutes so this is possible
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 39
I like the kink in this relationship. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 39
Awesome story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 39
Way to go Bella, now we see who´s in charge! Lol! Oooo, I can´t wait for Charliegh to get her and see what a raucus she causes!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 26 Aug 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 39
Well there definately getting back on track.
Poor Edward being made to worry and being pushed to his limit, i think he needed it though. And poor Bella, she's now going to have to suffer the consequences of not having him inside her. It seems she's forgotten a few of the old Edward's rules Hehe.
Update soon!
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
Yay! Controlward is back!!!! Can't wait for that baby! Update soon!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 39
I had to laugh at Bella in this chapter. I can understand why she did it but I think Edward got her back by dening her sex. lol. I am glad that she has moved back in with Edward. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 39
I so happy they are back together. She was pushing him hard to get him back to the way they should be.
Date: 25 Aug 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 39
I freaking love that she made him upset! Really genius bella!
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
love this story cant wait for the baby to get here