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Reviewer: JenJen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 39

I am guilty, I am not a big reviewer....I just had to say... I love this story.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 39

oh bella always pushing. well you got your daddy back. i hope you are happy. i bet edward didn't see that coming. they are too funny together. i am surprised jasper didn't call edward. i truly expected edward to spank her and while he did her water would break. love it

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 39

great update !!!!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 39

She set him up!  Good thing she pregnant or she would have really been "sorry"!

I'm glad to see them together again... I've missed their interaction.

I guess the baby is coming soon... can't wait.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 39

FINALLY!!!  MAYBE THINGS WILL GET  BACK TO NORMAL. I DON'T REMEMBER SAYING THIS TO YOU BEFORE, BUT I LOVE THIS STORY. IT HAS A LITTLE OF EVERYTHING. I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO SEE THISD CONTINUE HERE OR IN A SEQUEL. SO MUCH FOR YOU TO TELL US READERS....THEIR LIFE, MARRIAGE, HOW THEY RAISE CHARLEIGH, ANY MORE BABIES, EDWARD AND CARLISLE'S RELATIONSHIP, AND JASPER AND ALICES  , DO THEY HAVE KIDS, JUST ON AND ON!!! NOT TO MENTION WE ALL WANT TO KNOW HOW EDWARD AND BELLA'S SEX LIFE GOES AFTER THE BIRTH.   PLEASE   PLEASE CONSIDER IT????

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 39

yes Daddy's back and fully in the house...  Loved this chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 39

I am so glad that E & B are back.  Sugard Daddy is the name.  Love it and update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 39

They are a unique couple, with all their little quirks andall. Even though Bella appreciated Edward's concern she was needing himnbadly. So she took measures into her own hands. It took sometime and effort but it seems they are back to who they love, whichis great.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 39

It is good to see that Edward has woken up to himself, and is giving Bella what she needs.

I cant wait to see how he reacts when she has the baby.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 39

HE IS BACK

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 39

Love it!!!  :)

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 39

Awesome! Love it!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 39

Daddy's back!!! Yaaaaaaayyyyyy!  (sorry, but I love his overbearing ass!)

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 39

I loved this chapter!  It made me have happy tears of laughter.  

I just want to point out to all the ppl that said Bella should not go back to Edward said mean things about him, because of his life style..

But has you see bella can't live with out that side.. . I so happy you showed that..   

Please never stop writing about them.  

<3 Leona :)

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 39

this is great update soon please

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 38

Wonderful chapter, I love how they are connecting all over again.  It is nice to see.

Sorry to hear about your grandfather, I hope he did not suffer and I hope your family come to terms with a loss so great.  I hope you are all able to find the peace you need with in each other.

Take care.

Fiorella

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 38

I'm so glad she's finally letting him back in her life.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 38

Un chapitre superbe comme toujours.

 

Je suis désolée que vous ayez perdu votre grand-père.  Mes grands-parents sont décédés il y a une dizaine d'années... et je pense encore à eux, je ne les oublierai jamais.  Maintenant, je ne pense plus à eux avec tristesse, je me rappelle seulement tous les bons moments.  Je suis désolée que mes enfants ne les ont pas vraiment connu car ils étaient loin de chez moi.

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 38

Sorry to hear about ur grandpa. Hope he is @ peace now. Prayers go out to u & ur family. I love the E&B reunion! Hehe. Update soon!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 38

I am so glad they are back together. They really are meant for each other. They are both stubborn and hard headed. I bet they have one strong willed child.

Reviewer: Vane3131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 38

Oh im so sorry about your grandfather, i thought i said that last time but i wasnt sure. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 38

That was Beautiful.. 

and sorry about your grandfather..  My prayers are with you and your family. 

and see you in a couple of weeks..  Don't you love children.  haha. 

<3 Leona :)

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 38

Great chapter, it's nice to see them making progress and I enjoyed Bella going back to calling Edward daddy.

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 38

I am thrilled to see these two start over! It is time for them to rediscover each other. So much has changed, yet so much is the same. They have grown as individuals but still love each other desperately.

 

I think I am amazed you are writing now given your loss. That is a difficult thing, I feel for you. Take time to mourn and return when it is time.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 38

so sorry to here about your loss.  Loved the update !!!  god that was a very hot lemon !!!!!!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 38

Things are going much better than either one thought they could. They have missed each other tremendously but they needed all of this. They needed to see things from different perpectives, especially each other's. Edward even more so. As much as Bella likes the principles of their dynamics, there are things that must be adapted and changed. It doesn't exactly mean all is fixed but they are getting there.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 38

I love that they are talking things out and I cant wait till she moves back in with him. sunday dinner will be interesting if she goes.  I am glad she asked him to stay they both needed release and show of love.  Cant wait for more.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 38

FIRST, SORRY FOR YOUR LOSS, THAT'S MOST IMPORTANT. SECOND, I LOVE THIS STORY, IT HAS DRAMA SORROW, LAUGHS, ITS VERY INTENSE AT TIMES AND LEMONY GOODNESS!! THIRD, THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT, IM A MOTHER AND I APPRECIATE YOUR PUTTING YOUR CHILDREN BEFORE WRITING, EVEN THOUGH IM SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR WANTING MORE!!  I DO HOPE YOU CONTINUE THIS TO NOT ONLY THIS BIRTH, BUT THIER MARRIAGE AND LIFESTYLE AND MAYBE MORE BABIES?? THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!!!  PLEASE CONSIDER THIS. MAYBE MORE ABOUT JASPER AND ALICES RELATIONSHIP AS WELL AS EM AND ROSES.   THANK YOU AND AGAIN, MY CONDOLENCES.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 38

well i love that they are talking and being honest with each other. i sure do hope bella goes to dinner even though he doesn't. i sure hope their relationship is able to get the kinks out of it. they do love each other . well the two hot and horny people got to please each other once again. love it

Reviewer: atina10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

Finally! I loved it ;) ..x

Reviewer: jd2383 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

Loved that she stood her ground good for her. loved the make up sex. can't wait for upcoming events. 

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 38

this is great please update soon

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

I'm so glad they they finally had a talk!  His family is still a problem, but I think they will work it out.

Great job!

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 38

I am sorry for your loss, it must have been difficult to write a happy scene.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 38

Sweet Jesus!  So Happy they finally had some relief!!!!  Boy did they ever neeeeed it too!   Great chapter!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 38

'bout time these two got back together!!  Love this story!

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 38

awesome update and sorry to hear about your gradfather passing. Keep the faith. Write and update when time allows you know I'll be right here waiting.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 38

My prayers goes out to you and your family.  

This was an amazing chapter.  I am glad she understood where he was coming from not thinking he could have kids.  I am also glad he understood that hurt her terribly.  All-in-all good info and great chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 38

I am sorry to hear about your grandfather.

Awesome job with this chapter. I am glad that they are back together BUT I am also glad that Bella is not letting Edward walk all over her. Glad she told him about Sunday dinner and that she stood up to him about her and that baby going when she wanted to go. LOVING IT!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 38

I liked this chapter a lot.  There was some talking and a bit of arguement and a little bit of loving going on.  It was a good chapter.  can't wait for the next one!

PS-I'm sorry to hear about your grandfarther's passing :(  My thougths are with you.

Reviewer: Where Who Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 37

Phew, just caught up with the story and am loving everything I'm reading so far.  Just wanted to let you know, how much I loved reading all the chapters so far (and how happy I was, when I didn't have to wait after a cliffy chapter). 

You have a way of making this story work, and read really well. 

As for Bella going to Sunday dinner, I'm not sure if she would go or not, but I would think she would consider it for a bit, I mean lasagna sounds pretty tempting...

Reviewer: beaandmarco Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 37

I think she should go! Update soon!

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 37

I think Bella should be the bigger person and go to dinner.  It isn't like Carlisle is going to be the only preson there.  Also, I think she should tell Edward but not force him to go and should obey Carlisle's wishes.  I'm glad Bella and Edward seem to be getting closer!

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 37

Edward and Bella need to go together. They are still a family unit and all things about their child should be handled as a solid unit. Each should decide what and how Carlisle has treated them should affect the future.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 37

i love it that bella is taking responsiblity for what she can and accepting she may need help. that is great. edward and her dad love her so much and want whats best for her and the baby. wow, carlisle called bella. hell that is great. i love that he is reaching out to her. he wants to be apart of her life and charleigh. 1st grandchild. he knows he messed up and wants to make amends. big step in him coming forward. i am glad that bella is not going to keep the baby that she knows family is important. she may have started out a big princess int he begining but i am sure that bella has grown in alot of ways and she is learning what is important. loving it

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved the update girl keep it coming.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 37

I am impressed with Carlisle. I think that took alot for him to call Bella and admit what he did. Glad to see that Bella is not going to move into a lesser place. Glad Emmett would work with her. I was also impressed that Edward did not agrue with her about going to the appartments. I think Bella and Edward should start going to Sunday dinners. I am also thinking that when Edwawrd comes over for dinner that maybe he is not leaving. I am thinking that he will be spending the night. At least I hope that Bella finally has some sexing. lol.

Reviewer: helluvabell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 37

Such a great story! I'll have you know you had me in tears a few times. I can't wait to see how things smooth over for Bella. I'm glad she told them how much she wanted to do this on her own. She's grown a lot from the first chapter.

Reviewer: fprm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 37

of course not...
she could go to lunch with Esme during the next, but not The family dinner...

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 37

She should stand her grounds, that baby is coming and they are still the babies family.  She has all the say so!!!!!

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 37

I don't think Bella should go to Sunday dinner to the Cullens.  THEY are the reason why Edward acts the way he does.  I don't think they should be forgivin that easily.  What kind of parents will do what they did to Edward when he was growing up.  Bad parents, and the rest of them were in on it too.   I'm glad that Bella is going to tell Edward about the Sunday dinner.  If I was in Edward's position I don't think I could ever forgive my family.  What they did was horrible, and wouldn't let my baby anywhere near Carlisle.  I don't see how Bella can even be friends with Alice, Rose, and Esme.  Bella knows she wants Edward, she's just being stubborn.  Edward's changed.  I think she should move back in with him before the baby is born.  If she doesn't I'm not sure how much more of this story I can read. 

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 37

I think she should go to Sunday dinner, good chapter!!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 37

J'adore!

Reviewer: Vane3131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 37

BElla should go to Sunday dinner, Carlise called out of his own free will. I love this Edward sometimes like in this chapter! I missed this story....goodness i love it.

Reviewer: farsidelady Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 37

Of course she should go to Sunday dinner, and then Edward will show up late and she will be there enjoying everyone's company.  It would be very good.

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 37

Should she go to Sunday dinner?  Hell no.  I think I'm going to have to take the exit ramp from this story. I find Bella disappointing and offensive. I hope Charliegh grows up to be a stronger woman than her mother.

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 37

I think it best for Bella to continue to mend things with Edward before stepping over him to be with his family. I wonder if Carlisle hadn't been the way he was with Edward all this time, would Edward have been nearly as suspicious? Maybe he would, I obviously cannot say.

Bella is struggling so over being independent. It is hard for me to agree with her choice when I want to see her back in Edward's home, for them to make it theirs together before the baby arrives.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 37

I have mixed feels of that.   But it truly up to her how she feels.   I know if the other shoe was on his foot.  Would she like him to have dinner with her family,  knowing the Issius..    To have lunch or somthing with Emse yes. 

They got to come together.   Be one unnite.   or it will just crash again..  I so happy Bella is starting to understand.    They both have lots to grow and the a relationship....<3 Leona :)

Ps.  I a little up set with some of the comments..   they both were in the wrong..    and some say that it okay for the way Bella acts and hurts Edward.    So to me it takes 2 to tango.   No one is better then the other.   I'm happy they are working out their problems.. 

Reviewer: jd2383 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 37

yes I want her to go to sunday dinner i aslo want edward to go and be all surprised that she was there. yeah I love the drama. thanks enjoy writing. 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 37

YES, DEFINETLY SUNDAY DINNER, DEFINETLY DISCUSS IT WITH EDWARD.  ITS TIME FOR BELLA TO GROW UP AND MOVE FORWARD WITH EDWARD.

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 37

'bout time those two got their act together!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 37

Talk to Edward, go to dinner, let Edward decide if he wants to go and stop being so stubborn!

Reviewer: bella71 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved this chapter. I think Bella and Edward should both go to Sunday Dinner

Reviewer: jessee03 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 37

I love this story but sometimes it makes me cry lol. I feel so bad for Bella I want to give her a big hug and tell her to kick some ass.

I'm not sure I would be able to go to Carlisle and Esme's for dinner, Carlisle has a lot to make up for in my eyes. I think if he hadn't done what he did to Edward then Edward might not of had such trust issues and hurt bella that way.

I do hope though that by the time she goes into labor her and Edward are in a better place in there relationship.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 37

Bella needs to forget about the baby reaction. Edward was in shock and was told he could not have children. It was a gut reaction. I know she forgives him, but it is time to forget. They love each other and that is all that matters. She needs to talk to Edward about Carlisle invitation, so he knows about it. I think she should go, hopefully with Edward. They need to be a family. She needs to move out of the apartment, but continue to work from home. She needs to feel useful and not totally dependent on Edward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 37

I think she should go to dinner and then have some loving with Edward at her house.  I think things have went on long enough they should be together.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

I hope that she goes and that she and Edward make up soon

Reviewer: twilightlover19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 37

this is great please update soon

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 37

I think she should. It won't be giving in into what the Cullens want. I see it close to what Carlisle said. It would be building a new bridge, one for herself and her daughter. Bella is determined her daughter be part of the Cullens, that means spending time with them. Going to Sunday dinner is the first step, and much needed one.

As for Edward going, as Carlisle said, it has to be because he wants to, not because he feels he has to. When should Bella tell him about it, is what I'm wondering.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 36

wow, j'adore!

 

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Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

wow!

Reviewer: sheepywriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hate it when she calls him daddy, it's just wrong, but otherwise, I really like your story. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 36

Bella says she needs Edward to trust her. Well Bella needs to trust Edward as well.

Reviewer: Vane3131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 36

eeekkk finally she is starting to see reason!! Thank Goodness

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 36

What a dramatic mess for the hormonal one! It is good that she learned how her father had been paying more than she ever thought. While she does need to take things slowly, it seems she is willing to start over with Edward. He deserves another chance with her.

Reviewer: lmw Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 36

I'm kind of bummed that there are only a few chapters left. 

Good fro Bella.  She is trying to prove that she can take care of herself.  i don't blaime her for feeling almost defeated, but at the same time I also don't balme Charlie either.  He was absent for so many years (not his fault) and he is trying to make up for it the only way he knows how to.

I'm also glad that Edward backed down a little bit towards the end.  Can't wait to read what's up next!

 

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 34

My heart is breaking for her...She is right though. This is all his fault. I do like that she is trying to take care of herself and learning to stay on her own feet, but at the same time I hope they can be together again before the baby is born. Now that I think of it Bella is a bit guilty too. She should have never let him control her like that, not trusting her with other boys and stuff. She shut have told him to cut it off. Being jealous is one thing not allowing her to have friends male or female is another.

 

I am a sucker for a HEA ending so I hope they can work things out. *sigh*

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

Irina is right, Bella is his fiance, not his child...No grounding, no taking her car away and no spanking outside the bedroom or playroom ( I know Edward doesn't have a playroom but u get my drift lol) All of that is unacceptable. If my husband tried to ground me I don't know what I would do (laugh my ass off??)

I know I am still stuck on that darn spanking! I like how you made Bella rationalize their relationship. I think you have her mental state down to a T. Great chapter.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 36

It has to be really frustrating when you are working so hard to prove to yourself and those around you that you can do it. Then to find out people weren't being honest, even if it was with the best of intentions, it hurts. We all need to be believed, to know people trust us. Not having the trust of those who love you and you love is really painful. Bella needs time and needs to see them all showing real prove of their trust. Easier said than done...

Reviewer: bball1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 36

I really hate these women in this story.  They are so weak & submissive that it makes me sick.  How dare any man TELL his significant other what to do or punish them.  Weak women are pitiful.  Bella needs to tell Edward to kiss her arse period.  How the hell could she have liked the way they were?  That is just sickening.  Grow up & also grow a pair Bella.

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 36

Jess it is just getting better I love your stories so much thanx

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

I hate Carlisle and staring not to like Edward much either.

Charlie is almost as shitty a parent as Renee.

I hope Bella grows a bit more self confident and escapes this abusive realtionship. Her lack of self confidence and love while growing up blinds her to the weird ways of these men. A real D/S relationship is based on trust and fully understanding the way of that lifestyle. Bella has no rights and no safe word. 

I am so curious where this is going to lead. Also want to know what Irina has to tell her. I have a feeling she will help Bella come out of her shell. If Edward really loves her he will stop treating her that way.

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 11

I'm still abit confused about the spankings. He wants her to suffer, to be in pain? Those tears are not "I'm so turned on!" kinda tears. It makes me want to call social services.

I need a bit of enlightening please... lol

Reviewer: AlexJade Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

I do not like these spankings. It is only hot when it is consensual. It sounds like he is really out to hurt her when he spanks her and does not give her the proper aftercare. Anyway, I wouldn't really know the first thing about a dom/sub relationship -this kinda reminds me of that- but I wish she wouldn't glaze over it so fast. I understand he is the only one that cares for her right now and she doesn't want to loose that but those spankings are a bit abusive.

 

As usual I really like your writing style. The flow of the dialogue is very easy to follow.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 36

Ok....going to blame it on the hormones. Bella is all over the place. She needs to stop! She's so intent on being independent & not relying on anyone that she's losing sight of the big picture; people help because they love her, not because they think she can't do it alone. Good thing Edward is just as stubborn. A lesser man would have left!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 36

Hmmm, I dont undertand how this can only have a few chapters left... but anyway I shall see where this goes.

Fiorella

Reviewer: candyhof Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 36

Finally...better times ahead?

Reviewer: furiousstrength Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 36

She let them all off to easy with the apartment and bills thing. Way to easy.  They all conspired and went behind her back. That shows deception, a lack of trust and respect. She needed to feel secure that she could survive on her own and they stole that away from her.  They obviously didn't listen to her when she told them all that.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 36

At least she has said she wants to try.  Life is tougher than kids think

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 36

I am glad that the whole apartment deceiving incident was put out in the open.

You are right.  They both need to do some work on themselves.

I am torn because I think that Bella was justified in her actions toward Edward when he accused her of cheating when she told him she was pregnant.  On the other hand, I can see why Edward would react the way he did considering that there was only a 1% chance that he was the father.

They both were wrong in their actions.  I think that it is time for them to start working to reunite and make sure that their new relationship is stronger than the first.  Actually, it should make it stronger statistically.

Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 36

good chapter, I love how Bella wants to be able to take care of herself and is not backing down!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 36

wow i was laughing and then crying, and even got mad at charlie too.  Although I woudl be under the covers with Edward, because i can't resist !!!

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

loved this chapter it was wonderful and the fact is there was nothing wrong with her wanting to make it on her own  but glad she coming around too

Reviewer: beckyd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 36

Awesome chapter.  I can understand why Bella's so fustrated but she needs a balance of doing for herself and letting others help too.  Love the way you tied everything in together.

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 35

My heart actualy goes out to both of them..    You he was wrong!  But I don't know you..  but everone I know has accused their mate or husband or wife of cheat at least once.  Bella is stubborn.  and so he Edward.  but he is trying..  When will you give them a break..    Love your story and this chapter was sad..   I know it a story..  But I just want to hug them both..   Your awesome writer.  :)Leona

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 35

Thanks for updating. Well, I feel Edward has finally redeemed himself. 

I hope Bella decides to make the leap of faith and believe in their relationship, even though Edward had been the original one to show doubt she's now more than made up for his doubt with her own.

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 35

I think she is doing the right thing being 100% sure about going back to him.  It would undermine their relationship eventually if she had hidden doubts.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

Les prochains chapitres, je lirai avec mon Ipad (au lit, dodo, lol). Avec le Ipad, je ne peux pas laisser de review, juste une "note", désolée.

 

J'aime votre histoire.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

J'adore!

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