good chapter.

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I am so proud of Bella for sticking to her decision.  I hate that Emmett owns the building that Bella's apartment was located.  I knew that $700 a month for all that room was way too good of a deal, and now I know why it was so cheap. Emmett owned the building.  I can't believe that Charlie would lie to Bella about who owned the apartment, but I am still proud of Bella for getting her own apartment.

Of course well all knew that Edward knew deep down that the baby was his. He has been screwed so many times with lies that I understand his trust issues. Hell, his own family lied to him for years, but that does not excuse how he treated Bella.  He deserves to suffer.

I am so glad that we were able to get the test results in this chapter.  Thank you for that.  We all knew it was going to be Edward's.  Edward better get his ass into gear and find a way to get Bella to forgive him so they can eventually get back together.  I loved how you had Bella walk out of the office when Edward asked if she was going to stay for the results of the test and say that she already knows what the paper says.

I still want her to stand on her own two feet for a while before she gets back together with Edward.

I know that they both still love each other so much, but Edward f**ked up very badly.  

I can handle this kind of angst because Edward deservers to hurt, but I do feel so sorry that Bella has to go through so much pain.  I hope all the stress does not hurt the baby.

Thirteen weeks?  That was around the time of their Christmas vacation right?

no doubt, but not only jump through hoops, but walk on glass and endure the fires of hell. If I was Bella I would make him do all those things before I would even think about forgiving him.  He has been a complete ASSWARD and I like the new Bella

omg!!!!plz update soonpoor bella.... stupid edwardcnt wait for more x x

This chapter really sucked.  So unless they back together soon then I'm finished with this story.

Maybe I should feel sorry for Edward but I don't. He messed up......and now he's got to pay for it. I know they still love each other and they will now have a child together but what Edward did was almost unforgivable. He doubted her.....1% is 1%. There was still a chance buthe chose to accuse her of cheating. I know all about percentages...I've been in the lower ones but miracles happen.
Great chapter....thanks fir not leaving us with a "is he or isn't he" when we knew he was!

Wow Jess!

Indeed I can admit what a rollercoaster ride of a story you have with your "Sugar Daddy Needed" story...

I can honestly say I just began reading this story only two nights ago and I couldn't put it down... I have finally caught up with all the chapters and apologize for not commenting on each one of them.... I just couldn't stop the urge to continue reading to see if my theory of Edward & Bella would have come true?

Jess, you are a Talented Writer who captured my interest with your story with just the title and your simple introduction.  I just knew I needed to read your up to the last chapter...

Edward was brought up in a disturbed atmosphere by Carlisle.... However, I would say that Carlisle just wanted the best for his son all along... He wanted him to be a responsible man who would take care of all his personal actions, business, and love... The only way Carlisle was able to do this was by imposing fear in Edward's life and lie along with the rest of his family...

Yes, it has been a rollercoaster ride along the way seeing the relationship build between Edward & Bella, and watching all the obstacles come between them but helping make their relationship stronger... However, I knew from the moment I read the first chapter where Edward said he had only the 1% chance of getting anyone pregnant... Bella would be the one pregnant and Edward would not believe her... I see my theory from the beginning has been proven right...

Now Edward can truly begin to fear his Father Carlisle for screwing up his opportunity of having his first Grandson... Plus after everything Bella had put up with Edward along their relationship he truly hit her where it would hurt her the most... having a child of her own even if she knew in the beginning she didn't want any, but deep in her heart she knew some day she would be a great mother if she would have had the opportunity and made sure she would be there for the long ride not like her parents who bailed on her....

I was addicted to your story from the moment I read your title "Sugar Daddy Needed".... and knew you had definitely hypnotized my life with your Exquisite Lemons between Edward & Bella, your R&R settings, the confrotations between Edward & Bella, the making up and the fear of Carlisle along the way... You have written a masterpiece that captivates the souls of your readers... You have done an Excellent job by captivating my interest with each chapter... I have lived every moment Edward & Bella experienced for one another, the pain, hurt, fear, lust, and love...

Now at the moment of where they should have come together this is where Edward just simply screwed up... Now what would be Edward's approach to fix things and hope that Bella would want him back in her life...

Now that I am caught up with all your chapters.... I am anxiously waiting for your next update..... I hope you post the next one soon? I need to know if Bella & Edward will get back together? Will their wedding finally happen? Now that Carlisle has finally placed fear once again in Edward's heart? Will he have the courage to fight for everything he lost?  Please Jess post the next chapter soon as your new reader who only read this story in just two days...

Mrs. Ildira Peterson, Twi-EmmettCullenBreakingTwilight on The Twilight Saga

I really like your story...but enough angst, cant they just be happy for a little while I hope they do get back together SOON

Its an edward and bella story they should be together!!!

Argh! Damn asshole Carlisle. But Bella is right about Edward; I think I already said in an earlier review that he is a grown man and shouldn't be ruled by his father. My heart is going to break if Bella leaves Edward, but I get it. Maybe if she leaves Edward he will get his shit together as far as his father goes. He'll have to if he wants Bella in his life.  xoxo

Hi Jess!

I know I just joined this site last night but I needed to say your story captivated my soul from the moment I read the title of your story and your introduction.

The Title - Sugar Daddy caused a stir in my stomach and curiosity at the same time. Then when I read the brief introduction of Bella being turning 18 and her Mother was writing her out she needed to find someone quick to help her pay her bills and her lifestyle.

I realized then this was a story I had to read... I began reading the first chapter and couldn't believe how Bella's Mom raised her. Even though I should not judge anyone because we are raised differently.  So I decided as a Mother that I am to have an open mind as always.. Once I read this first chapter I realized I was going to enjoy it very much.

The way Edward introduced his ad about seeking a young person 18 year old in school, who knew how to take good care of themselves and was interested in an older person I was immediately hooked...

I immediately fell in love with your Edward & Bella and wanted to read more... I can see Edward being 35-years-old had some trust issues since he had dated before and most likely got his heart broken previously for dating younger women... So he made sure his next conquest would abide by a contract and his rules...

I can see Bella was desperate to hear that her Mother was cutting her out of her will since she had turned 18 and could begin to support herself... So she was desperately in need of continuing to enjoy the spoiled life her Mother Rene had raised in.. This is what sent Bella directly into Edward's arms not knowing what the future holds for them.

Jess, I can say you have capture my interest with your story last night I read all the way to chapter 11. I can honestly say I am addicted with your story and will continue reading tonight....

I figured out how to add you to my Favorites list and your story.. I will continue to follow your story... It truly has me beggin for more.

I do also have an open-mind as well being a Mother myself of a 12-year-old daughter, and a 19-year-old son. 

However, I was only 16 when I met my matched, got married at 17 and have been with my hubby (19) for 24-years now.... Even though our age is not like Edward & Bella's but my Mom & Dad's were in reverse.  My Mom was 29 when my Dad fell in love with her and he was only 19 years of age and they married... Unfortunately he being a truck driver stood with my Mom for 25-years then cheated on her.  My Mother raised us well and we moved back into the states where I eventually met my hubby and the rest is history...

Jess, your story captivated my soul and I am presently reading the next chapters. I just wanted to let you know I'm a new reader who has fallen in love with your story...

Thank you! Mrs. Ildira Peterson who was referred to this site by Saritadreaming in search of her other works..... and now I have stumbled upon more Twilight addiction to fill my soul... Keep up your Awesome and addicting work with your Sexually intoxicating story Sugar Daddy Edward & A Seductive, Foul Mouth, Spoiled Bella..... Awesome!

LOVED IT!!!!!!! you should do another chatper of Edwards POV i think it would be nice to see him sufer a bit...

OH MY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....I soooooooooo wanted this to happen! I reviewed last chapter and said as much...you just made this one of the best stories ever...I don't know why some in this fandom abhor the baby aspect but I love, love, love it!  It makes Edward so....manly...and his reaction is exactly what I expected...but he has his work cut out for him after being such an asshole...thanks so much and can't WAITTTTTTTTTT for the next update!  BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes. Edward is a total ass! I am glad that Bella has decided to learn how to take care of herself though. There is a blood test they can do right now to find out paternity. They don't have to wait until the baby is born. Update again soon please. Can't wait to see Eddy kissing Bella's ass...lol

Well I did not see that coming, and I really don't see this Edward character being a good father, he realy only wants to be a "Daddy" to women he can spank and control. Glad Bella is showing some back bone and is going to learn to stand on her own two feet. She is with Edward for the wrong reasons and if they are going to be together it should be as equals.

Edward has father issues because of the example Carlisle has set and although not all bad there was enough bad to overshadow the good.

putaragis nmn oo, bat ka naman ganyan gumawa ng kwento. hay naku buti na lang solid bella me.

Edward better get his butt to a doctor and get his stuff checked. He is not shooting blanks and he needs to know. He then needs to crawl back to Bella.

Wow....intense.  I kind of feel bad for Edward, he has to be in shock over the baby but Bella deserves better.

I haveto also add wow Carlisile, didn't see that one coming!

Is Bella fucking nuts? This can't be good, at all. What's with one of his exs' showing up at his doorstep? I know Bella was pissed, but she went too far this time. I know she's just eighteen, but come on, when you've always been around older men you would think that some of their maturity would have rubbed off on her.  I'm just waiting for one of them to break their contract. And if that happens it will break them both. I'm dying for Edward to tell Bella what the deal is with Carlisle. I know that is going to be big.  xoxo

All I can say is, wow. I can't help but be a bit suspicious about Renee though. I hope she is being honest for Bellas' sake. I guess time will tell. I wonder if Edward smelled the wine on Bella. She's such a little shit, always pushing the envelope with Edward, but I love that about her.  xoxo

I am so glad it was his father that punched him ok now I like Carlisle lol.  Bella needs to cut Edward some slack after all he is a man so his brain doesnt work right I know she is hurt but he is the one she loves.

OH GOD!!*shakes head* Edward is such a dick. Bella should make him suffer for that stunt.

Speechless!

After his reaction, he deserved to have her walk out.  Son better start some SERIOUS ass kissing!

this is great please update soon....I can't wait to see what happens next

I love this little twist!

I LOVED LOVED LOVED the chapter! Love the angst and Edward getting knocked down a peg or two.  Honestly, Bella should tell Edward to fuck off about the job too.  She shouldn't have to go in and see him everyday.  He can easily call in a temp.  He just wants and excuse to see her.  I'm glad Carlisle punched him in the face, it was most satisfying.  Bella is right, she really needs to learn to live on her own and who she is before she should get married.  Edward also has some issues of his own to work over.  Like his jealousy and only allowing her to see family.  He can have a Dominant relationship and still control things, just in a way that is healthy and not driven out of insecurity.  I love that this is going this direction, it's so different than most fics when Bella gets pregnant.  Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Well, I hope you make Edward grovel quite a bit to get Bella back. After all that controlling and constant checking he shouldn't even dare to mistrust her. He will have to make some serious apologies.

Aaaargggh!! Stupid, stupid man! TRUST YOUR WOMAN! The danger now is, will she consent to being your woman ever again? Idiot.

Edward made his bed, and now he is just going to have to lie in it.  He just made the biggest mistake of his life.

You are right.  He is the biggest dick.  How could he ever think that Bella would cheat on him?  He is an idiot.  I mean come on!!!  With the amount of sex that they have had, how can he not think that the 1% is possible?  They couldn't keep their hands off of one another!!  If she is over two months along, I know for a fact that they were having sex all the time..like every day if not more than once a day.  

I want Edward to suffer.  I want Bella to actually stand on her own two feet for a change and not have a man take care of her.  She needs to prove to herself that she does not need a man.  Edward can suffer and grovel for a couple of chapters.  When Bella does let him back in her life, could you keep her on her own for a little while before she moves back in with Edward? Please?

I was shocked that it was Carlisle who decked his son at the door.  I am starting to like Carlisle in this story.

If Bella is calling off the wedding because of the way he treated her about the baby, is he still stupid enough to think that it is not his????

I knew Bella was pregnant. I figured that Edward would react that why. That did not surprise me. I was so happy that Carlisle hit him. I thought at first it was Charlie, even though he had promised that he wouldn't. Can't wait for the next chapter. Alice and Rose are going to kill Edward.

Glad to see Bella make the effort to meet with Charlie. That was a difficult step for her.

Finally. Edward couldn't say no to Esme. Dinner should be... interesting. Hope it goes well.

Rather curious why Bella is so tired! Hmmmm. I'll keep my suspicions to myself for now.

Great story so far...I just wish that eventually Edward and Bella could have a miracle baby...you know, that 1%...not now but in the future...and what you could do with that...perhaps some angst with a DNA test required! And all hell to break loose! It's sad for them that there could never be any little Edwards!  What a waste! LOL...I just figured Bella could cure his slow swimmers with all that lovin'!!!! BRAVO on a great chapter!

Okay, Edward has redeemed himself in my eyes. I hope Carlisle never finds out how lenient he is with Bella. I seriously don't like Carlisle, this may be the only thing he knows as far as how to treat and what he expects out of women, but I think he goes way too far. It really blows my mind that he hits the guys for not punishing their girls fast enough to suit him. I also pray that Bella never slips up around him. I'm so glad Edward told Bella everything about his past and that he told her about Carlisle. Forewarned is forearmed. I haven't said it in a while, but I love your story so much!   xoxo

I love it; It seems that Bella has him wrapped around her little pinky. I think Carlisle would not be happy with Edward if he knew how lenient he is with Bella sometimes. I can't wait to see how Thanksgiving dinner goes. I keep forgetting to say how much I hate Renee, what a fucking bitch!  xoxo

Edward really loves to spank Bella, doesn't he? ;)  xoxo

Poor Bella...  xoxo

Okay, so it's not just Edward it's the whole damn family!  =)  I can't wait to find out why Jasper nor Emmett spoke to Bella; I suppose that's some kind of rule or something. I hope Bella has a chance to pick Alice's brain about things; I can't wait for that. I found the conversation around the dinner table very odd and what's with Carlisle telling Edward "you've done well"? It's just funny that their family seems to think this is the norm. But hell, what is normal; normal is different for everybody, right? I'm totally in love with your story by the way!  =) xoxo

Holy crap Bella! You haven't even known him for two days and you tell him you love him, what are you thinking!? I can't wait for Edward's reaction.  xoxo

Oh, this is going to be fun!  ;)  xoxo

Your story sounds so cute, and hot. I can't wait to see what's in store for Bella and Edward. xoxo

Excellent!

I'm happy that Bella worked out her problems with Charlie. I think she should be more mad at her mom for keeping her dad away. I can't wait until the Cullen dinner. I bet it is full of tension. I think Bella is pregnant. She has the signs.

Absolutely enjoyed the update.

So will they kiss and make up? How do you get back to where they were? I think the family owes them a huge apology. 

So, is she pregnant? I hope she's not sick.

Looking forward to next update;D)

That was a HOT Lemons.   Is Bella preg?  But she not sick!   I was sad for Esma.. 

Awesome chapter.  excellent filler if I say so my self..   :)Leona

I'm guess Bella is preggers... Never say never studward!!! LOL. Thanks for the awesome chappie. XOXO

Lovely chapter, I am so glad Bella is going to try to have a relationship with her Dad... after all it was mostly Renee that kept them apart. 

I don't blame Edward for being really pissed at his family... I hope they learned a lesson.

Great chapter as all the ones before.

I bet from all that I read in this chapter that soon "daddy" will have a big surprise from his little baby though...

Keep the good work.

Loved it and can't wait for more.

Hugs

It wasn't easy for Bella to make up her mind and meet with Charlie, but it was needed. Charlie was amazing, he didn't just apologize, he told Bella how close to her he had really been. That was a wonderful surprise, and I am sure part of what is letting him into Bella's heart.

Edward was very happy to see things work out between Bella and her father, and it had to get him thinking about his own family. Life works in amazing ways, who could have thought Esme would go visit and try to get things to go back to how they were. It must have been tough for her and for Edward to see her cry, but it was all for good purpose.

Bella is extremely tired, why?

this is great please update soon