Date: 07 May 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
My favorite part of this chapter was the sweet conversation that Edward had with Irinia. I really liked this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW, that was profound. I am shocked he only see Ang as being young and not Bella. He has such a twisted way of seeing things but it works for him. I loved this chapter.
Date: 06 May 2011 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
Another great chapter !
Date: 06 May 2011 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 27
He reacted alot different than I thought he would I am happy
Date: 06 May 2011 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved this chapter. You rock as usual. Thanks for the update
Date: 06 May 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
hmm wonderwhat edward will do with hisknowledge of the wedding colors great update
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 27
That was awesome.. chapter.. I can see why she wanted a spanking it is who they are. She would have never got over it until he did do that. Ppl migt think it wrong but everone lives different lives. it what makes us all human. If we were all the same it would be boring..
I can't wait to see what Edward does about the wedding!. she should have what she wants. it their wedding not the moms.. Bella is to passive sometimes.. Have a great day :)Leona
Date: 06 May 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it loved it loved it.
Keep it coming
Hugs
Date: 03 May 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope you'll post soon. Why would Bella choose to be so deceitful & irresponsible. I get that she's young & sucking up to peer pressure, but if she's had the opportunity to be around people her own age before & felt that she didn't have that much in common with them why now?
I think if it was Edward that was going out doing what she did she would be through the roof.
Interested to see where this goes, thanks for writing
Date: 02 May 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was rather immature of her at the door with Jane but I have to agree with her, & I've thought this a few times with his behavior, that this was going to be the limit & I'd have to walk. Although, if she hadn't acted like a fool he wouldn't of treated her like one, I'm guessing. Usually it's best to go the the old standard, the golden rule.
Date: 01 May 2011 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hello clueless. So is she suppose to be above average intelligence? Not showing there, but I guess if she just assumed this father didn't want anything to do with her she wouldn't bother trying to figure out who he was.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
lets read that contract!
Great chapter:D)
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
I somehow believe there will be Carlisle problems to come
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
she will probably get spanked for the wine
Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
I guess if this is how she wants a relationship to be?! I think she seems too independent of a spirit to put up with being subservient too long!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow did bella screw up on so many levels. no drinking no boys and she didn't tell him where she was. she does deserve to get in to trouble. i know we have all been there at some point but she is getting married and she knew what she took on when she was with edward. she does need to grow up or be a kid. she can not be both. she better be careful before she loses everything. she promised him something and she didn't keep her promise to edward. she can not hold him to his promises if she doesn't keep hers. i guess it is all part of her immaturity but i hope edward points that out to her. there can not be two rules for them their has to be one set that they follow.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
SO OBVIOUSLY HE HAS SOME ISSUES BEYOND BEING A DOM, NOT SURE I AM REALLY LIKING HIM, NO FRIENDS OTHER THAN HIS BROTHERS GIRLS AND HIS MOTHER. I THOUGHT HE SAD SHE COULD GO TO COLLEGE
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
in this case incest is best when Edward is the Daddy
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
fun interesting start
Date: 26 Apr 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bella is not going to be able to walk after her ass beating. Jasper was going to tell Carlisle??? Cant wait to find out what happens.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
LOL! Seriously, poor Bella is a stupid little bitch isn't she...
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the chapter... update when you can. I hope this doesn't blow up in Bella's face but I'm worried that Carlisle will find out and then there will be a stand off. Can Edward really stand up to his father? I hate that Jasper is so ... gee ... what do you call it? Dick whipped? Since it's his 'father figure' that is holding all the control???
Gah... XoXo ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
Uh oh.....someone is in trouble! Sorry, but Bella was wrong and now here are consequences. She's darn lucky Carlisle wasn't called!
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
thankd good chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG, please update soon!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
Uh oh. If only Bella could follow the rules...
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
haha i love it! non-stop laughs the whole time drunk bella is awesome update soon
Date: 25 Apr 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella will never learn will she. She just can't help it, it seems. She is really in deep shit this time. Why was Jasper with Edward? To bring back Bella's car??? Can't wait to see what Edward has planned for Bella as punishment.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
There's going to be so much trouble for Angela and Bella. Yes, they got themselves into this situation. But as Bella told Jasper, they're not the first ones to do it. This is not an excuse, more of an explanation. not the best one, though.
Bella has been feeling suffocates by the entire wedding thing. It's amazing not one of the women have taken the time to really talk to her and ask for her opinion. They have simply taken over it. Bella might not be the most excited bride in history, that doesn't mean she isn't excited, in her own way.
Her bad behavior is just a cry for attention and/or help. At least one person knows how she is feeling and thinking. Will Charlie's knowledge help her at all? We'll have to wait and see.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think somehow Edward needs a lesson on what it is like to really be a 18 yr old, he wants Bella to act his age, but he wants the benefits of having a yoiung girlfriend/wife!! He needs to relax a little and just love Bella or he is going to loose her. Please don't let Carlisle geta hold of her. And her car, she paid for that before Edward, he had no right taking it away, maybe not drive it for a while, but not gone. But hes a lottle weird. GREAT story, I can't wait for more updates!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow.. Bella likes to play with fire. You know prepressure is bad. But it takes you say no!. What was she thinking really. She has to tell Edward about the wedding! it is hers and his. She should have what she wants.
Man she is a spoiled bratt.. hahahah.
Love it. :)Leona
Date: 25 Apr 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
Aww I cant believe you left it there. I vant wait for the next chapter I really hope you can update soon.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella was so stupid. She broke every single rule. She needs a red butt and her car taken away. She was so irresponsible. I have a sixteen year old and she wouldn't dare break my trust on these issues. She wanted some freedom and she proved she couldn't handle it. She can not make good decisions. She just follows the crowd even though she knows it is the wrong actions.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think Bella should be punished for what she did, and I'm glad that she got her car taken away. Edward should have called the police and gotten Mike in trouble for serving alchahol. Edward was being nice, he didn't have to let Bella go out with Angela, but he did. Edward's probably never going to let Bella hang out with anyone but family from now on. Which is her fault. She knew she would be in trouble if she were to get caught but chose to drink. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next. Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
oh my word Bella what the hell were you thinking!!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter look forward to the next.
Hugs
Date: 25 Apr 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love this!!! but i think its time for Bella to break the rules AND put Edward in his place.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
Was that the end? please say no lol I'm really enjoying it :) keep up the good work! xxx
Author's Response:
it was the end of that chapter but not the end of the story
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella keeps going on and on about there has to be something about Edward or with Edward for him to let his father have that much control over him but what is she doing??? She gives Edward control over her. Is something wrong with her?????
I was surprised that Edward asked Bella to marry him. I was not expecting that. Can't wait to see what every one has to say about their engagement.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
If they want to be together forever, they should be married. It is the best way to say you love some one.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
great as always!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
I am happy she said yes and I am even happier that he said they could take there time. He better not let Carlisle touch her. Something is wrong with Carlisle hiting other peoples girlfriends.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow.. You know you can understand Edward a little. it is who he is, when he lost control he was punished. but gain lots from it. That is TUFF LOVE.
I listen to may father and is a little scaried of him. But he give me everthing I needed. He love me. and he don't want to see me suffer. So yes I can understand. Thank god my father doesn't believe in spanking. hahah. awesome// :)Leona
Date: 17 Apr 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yes, it was early. Yes, she's young but after all the confessing & divulging Edward did, I'd say yes too. His proposal was so romantic. **sigh**
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
well that was surprising. i sure hope edward can keep to his promise for his father to not interfere. i am afraid he might not be able to . i feel abd for not having so much faith in edward. good luck bella
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow - an epic chapter! I hope these two stay this happy, but with Carlisle waiting back home, who knows!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow, so sweet, glad he answered soem of her questions even if she still does nto have 100% understandig it was alot better than no answers. Love the proposal, and the back and forth before the yes
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 25
WOW, that caught me by surprise. Didn't see that one coming. I know she was stand offish, but I don't blame her. She is young and he still have those daddy issues. I hope he is going to keep his word.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
so i was thinking about it, and i've come to the conclusion that edward would not at all appreciate the song dinosaur by ke$ha
Author's Response:
lmfo!!!!!!!!!!!!! that song is great.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
YES! I am sooo happy she said yes. I loved this chapter and am always waiting for more. Thanks for the update.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow I wasn't expecting a proposal but hey he loves her and he made her promises which I am sure are going to be a problem later. But hopefully he will man up to those promises.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awwwwwwwwwww.... that was awesome!!! I can't wait for more;, however, I have the sinking suspicion that the whole Carlisle and spanking is not over by a LONG SHOT!!!
OH no!!!
Xoxoxox ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
ohh i did not see that one coming!
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am so glad they worked everything out but also bummed that I did not get the chapter update alert :( ... I even double checked. I got chapter 23 and then today, 25... but at least now I got to catch up...
Now... onto the next chappy!
Muah ~ Tracy
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
As much as we would like to understand someone else, I think there are moments we need to just accept we might never will. Bella has reached that moment. It is something that can be overwhelming, or at least, a lot to get. Since she was thinking about that, she never imagined what Edward had planned.
It came as a reallly huge surprise. She wants to say yes and no, she wants it and isn't completely sure. But if she stands back she could loose it alll, it's much better to take the chance. And if Edward is happy, she will be happy.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved it loved it loved it.
Hugs
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 24
I am soooo proud of Edward. I am sooooo loving this story. I am gald that Bella put Edward in his place about the bell hop. Seriously, why would Bella want the bell hop when she has Edward.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh snap she's about to get it now.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
See all she had to do is ask. She didn't have to threaten to end the relationship. Edward is a good guy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
thanks good chapter
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Okay I'm liking Edward a little bit better now, but he had better stand up for her with his father when the time comes because we all know it's coming.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am new to your story and I was planning on waiting until I caught up to leave a review, but after this chapter I just couldn't. Carlisle needs to have the crap beat out of him but good. It is not his place to punish any of the girls but Esme without the boys permission and quite frankly I'm disappointed in Edward. If he loves Bella, then his first priority has to be to protect her, even from his father. Edward is acting as Bella's Dom. Carlisle is acting as a Master, not a Dom. There is a reason why Doms do not typically allow subs near Masters and Edward is failing Bella by continuing to force her to be around him when he knows the score.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Well I am very impressed at how Edward handled that. I thought he was going to leave her there or spank her in the morning. I am glad he handled it so good.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
so happy they worked it out I wonder when Edward will have to stand up to his dad????
Date: 09 Apr 2011 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
ohhhh thank god that edward stepped up and they didn't break up!!!Yeyyyyy!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
WHOA!!!! That was a close one. Glad they got that taken care of. Thanks for the update I was hopeing for.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love that your story is so real. I really love that they found a way to work it out.
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
that was a awesome chapter.. See love does work out1.. she didn't want to leave him or make him choose just protect her from his father. and that what he will do.. He will do anything for her. It is awesome story.. :)Leona
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
i wouldn't have imagined that drinking more than he should and more than he had in fifteen years, would make Edward see things from Bella's POV. It wasn't a regular way of getting there, but it worked. Edward is wiling to but Bella before everything else, including his father. He was angry and upset with her and managed to think things.
Next morning presented a challenge too, having to witness someone flirting with Bella. She didn't pay attention once, to that interest, but saw how it was affecting him. It was really good they were able to later laugh together, see pass that, and move on.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 24
Well thank goodness! I knew Edward had it in him!!
Good job....just hope Edwards promise won't be tested!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, I did not think that it would be resolved that quick and I never, ever thought that Edward would turn around and stand up to his father, after everything he went though. I understand why Bella did it, and it is true, no one should lay a hand on any one with out their permission. That goes for Carlisle as well, it does not matter if it is his sons girlfriend, he does not have the right.
Love the story.
thank you.
Fiorella
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
I can't see Carlisle agreeing to this. I smell trouble!
On the flip side, I'm glad B and E have settled things!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow wasn't expecting that. i am glad he promised bella he would choose her and not his father. jealous much edward. my goodness he is a moody daddy. man bella you take the prize for dealing with edward. but hey you got enough orgasms for dealing with him so all worth it
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
She handled it all more maturely than he did!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome update.
Hugs
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
hi i love your story and i want to know how this is going to end, because i felt sorry for both of them.
this chapter is realy sad, poor edward, in this moment i hate carlisle how can he do that, but i felt sorry for bella too because her mom is awful with her so maybe the have things in common.
i really really want to read the next chapter.
thank you for writing this story
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
I think anothher chapter needs to come soon :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think she need to high tail it out of there.... And not because of Any of the control issues he has imposed on her.... No because like she said .. He need to grow up! Carlisle might me controlling but it is sick for him to spank the others wife's or girlfriends! Submission is one thing a person does willingly and so Edward willingly submits control to his father, that does not mean his father gets to dictate bellas actions or consequences. If Edward wants Bella he should have to be able to stand on his own. He stand on his own in his career and other aspects of his life but not when it comes to his relationships!?!? I think he should learn to be a man and then maybe if he truly can handle his own issues go back and try for Bella again.... I really hope your Bella don't get all soft and give in and jeopardize her own safety just because she don't want to see Edward hurt. Sometimes the right decision for ourselfs hurt others...this story has been interesting, Can't wait to see where you take this next....
Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think Bella is talking as a teenager who is only thinking of the present. If you truly love someone you don't throw it away. Yes, Carlisle is a little crazy. She just needs to bite her tongue when they are at his house. She likes the rest of her relationship with Edward. We all have some crazy relatives. Bella has to love Edward to stick around and see if with time Edward can get it to change.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome story so far! Bella needs to give Edward a good kick in the pants. She needs to make him beg for her not to leave and she needs to make him wait. I can't wait for what is to come. I'm hooked.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
They cant be over he has to pull his head out of his dads ass now
Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good for Bella! *stands and cheers!* Just because the way Carlisle treated Edward was enough to scare him straight does NOT mean it was the right way or that it was the only way. Bella needs to tell Edward that she is dating him NOT his father. His father doesn't get to say what does or does not happen in their relataionship. If Edward is so worried about losing control yet the minute Carlisle blinks Edward hands over all that control in a second to Carlisle. And yes Edward, you are a man child. If you are 35 years old and still let your father control your life and live your life to his specifications in fear of disappointing him or him punishing you/your girlfriends that's pretty much the definition of a man child. The fact he'd let another man lay his hands on your woman, regardless of if he's your father or not, pretty much revokes your man card. Bella needs to remind him that she's given him her submission, an amazing treasure of a gift, her love and her trust and if Edward even contemplates letting his father lay a hand on her that is the blackest of betrayals and breaking of trust. He needs to pull his head out of his ass and stop being a scared little boy.
Ooooooh update soon, I love this story so much. Do you have a particular day/schedule you update on or just as you finish the chapters?
Author's Response:
i update on sundays or mondays. my beta has the next chapter and i plan on updating as soon as i get it back. thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
OH come on!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooo... what's a little spanking by big Daddy C if you get to keep Edward as the prize?!
OK, I really don't mean that but damn... I'm bummed... and on their romantic holiday :(
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :'(
Hurry and write the next chapter and hopefully put me out of my misery!!!
Muah ~ Love ya babes ... Tracy
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
wow i am shocked that bella is calling it quits. she always said if carlisle came in there relationship she was done. so i wonder if edward will man up or let bella go. it says alot she is giving up 10 grand a month and the great sex. still strange she calls him daddy but hey. it does say alot she is trying to prove a point. will he push her into someone else's arms, time will tell
love it
Date: 05 Apr 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh no! Poor Bella and Edward. Edward just poured his heart to her and can't man up to his father. I agree with Bella though.
I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love this chapter, I want Bella to stand up for herself
Date: 05 Apr 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
NO!!!!!!!!!!! OMG....please dont let them break up....
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 23
omg need more please :D
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
Actually I 'm total confused. I have to admit it don't make sense about why he still lets his dad control him in a way. But I dont understand Bella. She went into this agreeing to it all. Love him. It seems now she don't have to worry about money she drops him. I really hate this is really sad.. I guess I will find out sooner or later what happens nexts. Hopfully not to long. I just hope Edward don't lost it. Very sad................. But I quess I am reading to many stories that Bella way or the highway. She knows it but to bad.. She know what his dad is like so just be herself and don't do anything that will get him mad when their at his house. Inlaws suck. I should know. mind are died know. I never wished anyone gone until I met my mother inlaw. but I 'm single because of my husband not her. I just hope all works out for them in the long run.. Have a great night :)
Ps. chapter is awesome thou. just to sad for me. Love hurts even when you read it..
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
OOOOOOO drama, please don't make me wait too long for the update.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved how you told his past, I agree with Bella wanting to leave not being able to handle Carlisle, but you have to fix them... I have seen Edward change because of Bella they are perfect together... Hurry and fix it.
Just so you know my husband is 17 years older than me...
Hugs
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Holly Cliffy, Batman!!!
I am proud of Bella. She does not want Carlisle to control her life with Edward...which he totally is. Edward it seems has never grown up. I understand the lesson that Carlisle was trying to teach Edward, but it was a bit harsh. Then again, it was the swift kick in the ass to get a 16 year old Edward back on track. Edward is a 35 year old man, and he is still letting Carlisle control his life. What kind of pussy is Edward if he did not have the nerve to punish his girlfriends and let his repulsive, domineering father do his dirty work.
Edward new she would not understand, but she did in some ways. The whole story was about a 16 year old Edward who never grew up and took control of his life instead leaving his daddy in control. I am proud that Bella would give up her "sugar daddy" and love of her life because she didn't want to live under the thumb of Carlilse. Besides, Bella has her father now. He would give her anything she wanted. All she has to do is ask.
This is another swift kick in the ass for Edward. He either takes control of his own life, or he loses the love of his life. Carlisle or Bella? Which choice will he make? I think he will chose Carlisle, and Bella will leave him. He will have an ephiany at some point and stand up to Carlisle.
Bella could take what Edward did to her, but she would not live in fear every day waiting to see what Carlisle might do to her.
Please update soon. This is the type of cliffy that everyone is going to be upset about, but hey it keeps us coming back for more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
O.M.G., I am speechless!!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
NNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!!!!! You did not leave us there. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again SOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!! I am like Bella....What hold does Carlisle still have on Edward. Edward has his own money, does he not. I hope Edward fights for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
nooooo!!! UPDATE NOW WOMAN!!!...please? *puppy dpg eyes* *pout*
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love, love, love this story. I'm glad that Bella has finally stood up to Edward concerning his father. This may be the kick in the ass he needs to grow some balls. Great chapter!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm a little confused.....maybe I have to start at the beginning.
Why would Bella move out of Edwards home & into Carlisle's? I thought she was living with Edward.
So....because Bella is afraid of being herself & if she gets "out of line" around Carlisle, he will spank her.....she's breaking up with Edward?
Edward, at 35, is still afraid of Carlisle and his so called power/control that he's willing to give Bella up?
Guess, for me, it's a bit farfetched. However, it's fiction so I'll go with it.
Hope Edward grows some....it would be sad to have your parent control you for so long. I could understand I'd Edward was financially dependent on Carlisle,but he's not, right?
Hmmm...guess time will tell the measure of a man!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
*tear* I'm so sad now :(