Date: 01 Mar 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
so what is eddie's other reason for the contract? and i agree with bella he kinda bounces around on what is ok today but not ok next week, not good for a parent or a dom.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
eddie made her bad day happy again!
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, what a story, at first I thought... okayyyy, when he wanted her to call him daddy, and then the whole spanking thing I get, but really, some of the crap he spanks her for is a little double standard, especially when she was still asleep... really Edward like Bella really meant to let you sleep.
I think the only peeve I have is that he talks over her sometimes. If someone is kind enough to let you talk, at least do the courteous thing and let them finish their sentence.
Why are all men so whinny when they are sick, it is like the world is going to come to an end, but when you are, you still have to get up and run the house or it falls apart. Men are worse than babies.
Loving the story and I can not wait till you update, I started it last night and finished it this afternoon, I think all up, i spent 3 hours reading it.
LOVE IT!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
renee is a bitch! my mommy senses are going haywire right now. ugh!!!!
bella is in for a nice little chat with eddie. i wonder what he will think of why she is upset?
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
dun dun dah! how long until bella and charlie meet as father and daughter? what other tidbits of info does angela have?
Date: 01 Mar 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
there is something fishy with this family. all of the men have thier own baby, and all of them are suga' daddies
Date: 01 Mar 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
poor bella is learning to follow the rules, if not it means a sore bottom.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh sweety I love you already!?! I wonder what eddie is gonna do?
Date: 28 Feb 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Seriously, dude can't make himself a coffee? Bella is gonna have to teach this boy some manners and independance! But on the flip side bella needs to not be so tempermental. Just talk to him!!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit I just read fetishfanfic's story about baby and her daddy, I don't know if I can do another one so soon! Here's hoping that things get kinky and fun but not that kinky and fun, if ya know what I mean.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
The mom in me is lecturing bella on going home with a stranger! But I am sure she will have a fun weekend
Date: 28 Feb 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well it looks like we are heading for the big date!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
The boys fear Carlisle that is why they allow it. He has been bullying them their whole lives. Bella needs answers, but she has to know that Edward loves her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww... poor illward! I hope he gets to feeling better soon... and I'm with Bella... what is up with Carlisle?! That shit is mucked up for sure!!!
I can't wait till the next update! Woo hoo! Counting down the days!
~Muah~
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Go Bella!! I am so glad she is getting to the bottom of this Carlisle thing. It's one thing for Edward to punish her but Carlisle.....not so much. I am really curious as to what the story is with him any how. I can't wait. Thanks for the update. I loved the chapter.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 19
Men tend to be complicated and difficult when they are sick. They need lots of attention, love, cuddling and anything else that crosses their mind. Bella isn't doing badly. She is a good caretaker and has Kate and irina to assist her. That makes things less complicated.
The thing with Carlisle is making Bella worry a lot. She isn't liking this at all. She needs to talk to Edward ASAP, sadly it is taking longer.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
He is such a big baby for real real! I guess Mr. C. is something as well. What gives?
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
poor edward he is truly sick. i am glad bella took care of him
i also understand why she will not marry him. she would be marrying him and not carlisle but it seems carlisle has something over his boys will he be honest and let bella in. if he does i know he will not forget it. she does love him. i think it is great that her parents are trying to come together. it seems their communication got lost a long time ago. love it
Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
poor sick baby i think he sounds like my husband the only difference is if i get sick he would say he was sicker and i could take care of myself. I cant wait to find out what the deal is with Carlisle.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wow. I would love to do what Carlisle has a hold on his boys. I know that some Father run the head of the family. But this is wrong. It will be interesting and wonderful for Edward and Bella make it. I hope all works out. awesome chapter. Smiles Leona
Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh our sickly edward..men are such babies when they are sick.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
aww poor edward has a cold. typical man behavior thou !!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! Maybe I'm just sick and twisted, but it would be kind of interesting (or sick and twisted) if Carlisle did spank Bella... or almost spank Bella.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can't wait for that talk! and poor Edward : (
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella and Sickward. I liked the lemon - i've missed the citrus from previous chapters.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 19
great as always i hope bella doesnt get the cold edward has!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow that was a mind fuck up. Bella is always forgiving. too sweet in some cases.. It will be interesting to see what happen with them now. Will Bella is get n trouble for drink? hmmm. Smiles Leona
Date: 21 Feb 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was an interesting predinner. Did they eat? I hope Bella gets a relationship with both of her parents, but I hope she gets a stronger one with Edward. I hope she will be more open and less scared to love.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow that was not what I was expecting. That explains a little about why Renee was such a bitch but she is screwed up. Is Bella going to be busted for the wine???
Date: 21 Feb 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Renee sure did surprise us. WOW!!!!!!!!! GREAT job writing this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
alot i was not expecting. wow to hear that renee still loves charlie and she saved the cards and not spent the money that was a shocker. i like the way charlie asked her out and let her know they had alot to talk about.i am glad bella is getting a second chance to have her parents. maybe she will make some changes in what she wants out of her life. love it
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
GREAT chapter! I cried!!! I have such hope for what their futures will be. I know it's still going to be challenging but I can imagine that even with the bumps in the road, it'll be ok...
BUT... with that said... Is Edward going to beat her butt for drinking? LOL ... you KNOW he knows... gah!
I can't wait for the next chapter. Congrats on the 900+ reviews on FF.net I didn't know you were there too. I usually only read here...
Muah! xoxoxo
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Love makes us do such strange and weird things. Instead of showing off its glow it seems to hide and let other not so nice feelings come around. When there's still time, hope and a will like in this case, something can be done. Sadly, that isn't always the case. Lets hope it does work out.
Date: 21 Feb 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
Is there going to be anymore smut? I hope so. Sorry but kind of tired of the Charlie stuff. You need to put the spice back in the story.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
You would think that Bella would learn not to act as a brat, espeially in Edward's place of work. He is not going to put up with that mess.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh no.. I can't wait haha. at least it only one sec from now. at least tell I'm caught up. me bad, I hate to wait. haha
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow. that is aweful. I know that is not Carlisle charter. it is sad to see him like this. it not the first time. I quess someone has to be the meany. ochy.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
That does not look good!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Yes Bella has to face her fears. But that easy said then doen. I hope Ang and Irena don't get in trouble. Bella need to talk to Edward more ask him questions. He will answear if she asks. But I quess that is the flaws There Charters are awesome.. You got them pretty good.. A*
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
A+ that is Bella she did not know how guys were attacted to her. you have her chacter down pat. aweosme.. I hope Edward does say sorry for calling her a slut. that mean. But someway he will but after her spanking. ochy. Maybe? if your nice in your story ahaha. I will see in a min.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 12
Ochy.. he liked but not to much. hahah
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Your a good writer. I going to have to look to see if you have other storys for later.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. very interesting how the dynamics is going on here.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
You know it don't creep me out. I have lots of friends who are cogars with young men or men with young girls friends. But I have a friend that call her husband daddy all the time and their the same age. I guess its how you look at. If Bella was young I would not like it. but she is of age. and who are we to tell someone not to love someone of their age. it is just wrong. everyone has the right for love or happiness is all I 'm saying. Smiles Leona
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
She is not be looked after but also spoiled bratt. Edward pays people help him. that is there job. i can't wait to see who wins. hahah
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
I 'm between laughing and really enjoying your story. it awesome. Men love when you tell them that they are your daddy. Fantasy. yup.. Love it.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow. awesome writing.. I 'm going to enjoy this story I can see. I know you have up to 17 chap now. So please I will say a simple word and give you a rating. and once I have caught up I will review. Smiles Leona
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
ugh! I cannot wait to see how the evening with Renee and Charlie's goes... God! "Daddy" Edward is one sexy, pervy MoFo... he makes me wish I had my own "Daddy" ... LOL ... pant! pant!
Can't wait for the next update. Congrats on the story nominations!
~xoxoxo~
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
I like EPOV ... he's a interesting dude. LOL.
I can't wait to hear more about the whole Charlie, Renee, Bella thing. I have always had a soft spot for Charlie so I'm glad it's Renee who's the total bitch and not him... even if he didn't try terribly hard for Bella... at least he's not a total dick... I hope.
Boy, Bella is insistent to try and keep a leg up on Edward, huh? Guess next time she will take what he gives and not up the anty!
Great story!!! xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
I check out the site to vote and it is very difficult to execute. I will work with it though. Of course you get my vote. BTW I love this chapter.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Their evening was rather nice, sadly it ended not too nicely. They both fell asleep and Bella had to take the rough part of it. Edward was upset and angry and he took it out on Bella. Not that she didn't do things to upset him more, but it wasn't entirely her fault.
Is she getting used to the spanking? That seems to not be such a good thing in Edward's POV. So he is choosing a different type of punishment. Bella isn't happy with his choice, and she is planning on doing something about it. I don't know if that is the best idea, especially after what's coming. Dinner with her parents.... Can't wait for that.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh boy. I liked the lemon and look forward to more
Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
He is not being very nice but that is the best punishment for her the one that will work. I cant wait for the dinner with Renne and Charlie should be intersting.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
i am excited about the dinner with the children. i have a feeling fireworks are going to happen.
well seems bella pissed someone off big time. thank god carlisle wasn't int he meeting or bella would have been over his knee in a nano second.
she still defentiely acts her age but her edward likes them young. guess you would have to accept or know there might be attitiude or adjustment
love it
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
that's awesome! great news!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
Really looking forward to how the dinner goes!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
: ) and CONGRATULATIONS!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
I like that Bella and Edward are getting to really know eadch other and are falling in love but I LOVE to the Badass Edward take over. Great Job.!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
i am glad bella understands she needs to watch herself around carlisle. he is very scary. well hopefully she can mind her peas and ques and won't be over carlisle knee. i know she was glad to be out of the house. i hope the girls give her some more tips on being careful.
maybe charlie and her might have a chance. i can't wait for her to speak with renee and hopefully she gets the answers she wants. love it
Date: 08 Feb 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
Carlisle has his mind set on how things should be handled and dealt with. He doesn't allow his sons to not follow his lead and example. He won't hesitate to punish if he thinks it's deserved. Thankfully Edward, even though that's what he learned, thinks a bit differently. If he didn't, Bella wouldn't be feeling too good at the moment.
Charlie made mistakes, but on his defense he wants to make amends now. Yes, just saying sorry doesn't make things okay, but it is a step in the right direction. Will Bella get close to him? Perhaps, she needs time to process all of this, and to talk to Renee. That won't be a pleasant conversation. I think Charlie and Edward there might help.
As for Edward's past, he trusted someone, and that someone lied. Her lies almost cost him plenty. He has been extremely careful since then and it's understandable. Bella's reasoning sounded more than logic and fair. Why should only one be considered a pervert? it's two people to a relationship, so the title should apply to both. Edward had some plans if this conversation went well, will he follow them? How soon? How will Bella react to them?
Date: 08 Feb 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
OMG! YEAH THATS A LOTA INFO TO TAKE IN! BUT IT MADE FOR A REALLY GREAT CHAP!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love the soft, tender Edward too!
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
WOW, info overload! This was probably the most informed chapter. Please keep it coming. I love this story.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG!!!!!! I can not believe that Carlisle still punishes Edward. That would be embrassing to be grown and still have your father punish you. Why does Edward put up with it? Why not just move away? I am glad that Edward did not punish Bella. She was already having a really bad day. I am so glad that they talked. I could not imagine Emmett letting Carlisle punish Rose or Jasper letting him punish Alice. WOW, and Rose was limping, that is just awful. Will we get an outtake of maybe one of Carlisle's punishments?????
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
he spanks the boys???? what the hell?? great chapter by the way
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Phew! I was really nervous about what Carlisle was going to make him do to her, but in the end... Dadward was my hero! I really think she should go over and kick Renee´s ass, she is such a terrible mother. That was worth the wait! I pimped out your story in my last chapter update. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow that is crazy. I love this story. Thanks for the update.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great Chapter!!!!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
I really liked this chapter to. I love that Edward did what he did to protect her from his creep of a father. I love that Charlie opened up to her and was being honest I hope he is there when she confronts Renee. I loved that Edward trust her enough to tell her about his past and his family.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
good chapter, wish carlise woudl like loose his voice that would be great. Glad Edward is as good as we all know he is.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
WOW! Looks like Edward and the boys need to grow some and stand up to daddy C...lol
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay.. I loved this chapter.. and I don't want Carlisle to spank me... he seems to rule his family with an iron fist... poor Esme...
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was sad for them glad they made up
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
I officially hate Carlisle in this story, he probably has trauma from his childhood. Edward better not let him put a hand on Bella and poor Edward isn't he a little old to be spanked and if so who is spanking Carlisle?
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
I feel so bad for Edward. Who wants to be a grown man bullied by his father. Bella chose her situation. Edward did not.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Carlisle really is a bully and an ass I just hope Edward will protect Bella from him.I am glad Edward opened up to Bella more
Date: 07 Feb 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Carlisle is a dick lol I bet he is the reason why Edward is the way he is about rules and other things.This is really good
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 16
So much information on mean Carlisle. Do we ever get to find out what made him so cold?
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love how much of a teenager she is.. great job on that :)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOL people are creeped out by her calling him Daddy? bwahahaha omg that is hillarious.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh this is an interesting idea :) have to keep reading...
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am loving this story so far! I can't wait until he tells her the reason for the contract. I just know it has everything to do with Carlisle! I also want to know what punishment Carlisle has handed down! Squeeee! Can't wait! Great story!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Feb 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
awwwww damm it was gettin good rut roh Bella did a bad thing...........hehe please keep updating thanks :)
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
What the hell??!!! Freaking Carlisle what did he say?
Date: 31 Jan 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Something tells me Carlisle isn't the nicest guy in this story, and that Bella just got in trouble because of him, and yes, her comments. However, this isn't the easiest of situations for her, Edward knew that and was cutting her some slack, it seems Carlisle doesn't share his opinion.
Bella and Charlie have their love for cars in common, it's good to know they share more than the last name. Hopefully they will be able to have an amicable relationship. Bella deserves to have a good relationship with one of her parents.
Edward promised to tell Bella his secret. I honestly hadn't given too much thought to it. It seems we will be finding out soon.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! can't wait to see what Edward has to say to her!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
I don't get why Edward would be upset with Bella. And why does Carlisle act like such as ass?
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
are you kidding me, someone needs balls and a backbone or deos he call carlise daddy????
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
What is the deal with Carlisle? I could not believe that Charlie spoke up and told Edward that Bella did not have to eat if she did not want to. Is Charlie going to say something to Carlsile? I am sure everyone knows that Carlisle got on to Edward for being to soft on Bella and that Carlisle told Edward to get on to Bella for how she was acting. I can not believe that Charlie would just sit there and let that happen. CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!! GREAT JOB writing this story. Loving it!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I really like this story. It reminds me of The Perfect Wife.
Date: 31 Jan 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
very interesting story, so i assuming that it was charlie?