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Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2018 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This one leaves me unsatisfied.  What about two nights ago with the laughter and strawberry blonde hair.  Is he married?  I feel the need of a couple more lines at least to get a sense of the direction they're headed.

Reviewer: dlpash Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwww, yay.  You ended it THERE?!?!?!?!  Oh man.

GREAT job again.  Seriously, you have 40 some reads for each story....where are your reviews????  JERKS.

Oh well, don't let it discourage you.  You did a great job, both times.  LOVED them both.

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