Date: 22 Sep 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I cannot believe how much I am loving this story!!! At first I thought that I wouldn't because I have always preferred bella/edward but I am loving peter...and I love how you are able to tie everyone else in as your story progresses...and I absolutely love all of the Wal-Mart interactions!!! Plus it has been awhile since I laughed out loud while reading facfiction but you are just great at bringing out the humor!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
in all the months that i have been waiting for you to start updating this story i did not see you going this way with the story please tell me that bella and peter find there way back to each and they find the rest of there vampire family i think bella is thinking of everyone else and is going to regret making peter forget about her looing forward to seeing where you go from hear with this story so please update soon
Date: 19 Sep 2017 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
OMG.....I am bawling now. Why can't Peter and Bella just live as vamps together for eternity? My HEA is definitely ruined now. I am so sad. Peter forgets Bella even existed??? I hate that.
You better duck. Here comes a tomato. Big meanie.... :( LOL
Don't worry. This is not the last chapter (far from it) and I'm a firm believer in HEA's.
Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
Hmmmm....... I'm glad Peter got to Bella and that stuff is still up in the air. I think if someone needs a sacrifice, it should be Carlisle. LOL
Oh, I agree completely that Carlisle needs to sacrifice himself--whether willingly or unwillingly. Thanks for reading and chiming in.
Date: 25 Aug 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella! What will she chose?
What will she choose? That's an excellent question. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 23 Aug 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
I hope you update soon all your stories. So good. I enjoy them. Please update more often. The stories keep you on the edge of your seat.
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Aug 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
That is aweful. Everyone is getting along just fine as supernaturals. She can't leave Peter. She should stay a vampire.
Are they truly happy as supernaturals, though? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
NOOOO WTF that was so not cool woman. It was a great chapter but I want to bitch slap Taha Aki and Didi to Bangkok.
Aw...Taha Aki and Didi aren't that bad. Besides, sending them to Bangkok might be fun for them. I heard the food is absolutely delicious there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
Dun dun dun till the next chapter. How many chapters are left in this one if you don't mind me asking? Thank you for the update and I hope to see another soon.
I'm glad you liked it. The story is complete, but unfortunately, I cannot tell you how many chapters remain--we'll call that author's privilege. ;) I will post regularly until the end--every week or two--because some weeks are just ridiculously busy for me. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 01 Aug 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
Welcome back!!! I can't tell you how excited I was to see this update!!! And what a great chapter to come back with! I absolutely can't WAIT to see what happens next!
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
I know it has been years since you've updated the story, and I hope this review finds you having a good day. I would love to see more of the story, but I understand if that doesn't happen. You are a gifted author and I love reading all of your work :-)
Date: 19 Oct 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just want to let you know that I am loving your story, "You'll
Find What Your Looking for at Walmart". It is so different not to mention funny as all get out. Can never wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Date: 30 Jan 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am rereading this story, and Jane propelling Alice into the tomatoes is just as funny now as it was the first time hahaha. I know you've not updated in a long time on this story, and while I would love more updates, I hope RL is going well for you. Thank you for making me laugh so much!!
Date: 25 Feb 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'd have fried the bratty pervert, too. Yes, it was a mistake to kill Edward before finishing his interrogation, but sometimes you gotta do what you've gotta do.
It's been a while since I've had the chance to do any real reading, and I always come back to check your stories. I can only assume that you and your family have been hit by the insane weather on the east coast over the last few months; it's a lot more immediate than writing stories, that's for damn sure. I sincerely hope that you and your family are all right and we will be waiting until you get back. Take care.
Date: 31 Dec 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
I haven't read this chapter yet, which I'm sure is totes awesome. Since PM is disabled, just wanted to write and say I hope RL is going ok for you, miss you on here, and wishes for a happy 2013! Lots of love, Angelbones76