Date: 22 Sep 2017 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I cannot believe how much I am loving this story!!! At first I thought that I wouldn't because I have always preferred bella/edward but I am loving peter...and I love how you are able to tie everyone else in as your story progresses...and I absolutely love all of the Wal-Mart interactions!!! Plus it has been awhile since I laughed out loud while reading facfiction but you are just great at bringing out the humor!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
in all the months that i have been waiting for you to start updating this story i did not see you going this way with the story please tell me that bella and peter find there way back to each and they find the rest of there vampire family i think bella is thinking of everyone else and is going to regret making peter forget about her looing forward to seeing where you go from hear with this story so please update soon
Date: 19 Sep 2017 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
OMG.....I am bawling now. Why can't Peter and Bella just live as vamps together for eternity? My HEA is definitely ruined now. I am so sad. Peter forgets Bella even existed??? I hate that.
You better duck. Here comes a tomato. Big meanie.... :( LOL
Don't worry. This is not the last chapter (far from it) and I'm a firm believer in HEA's.
Date: 11 Sep 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
Hmmmm....... I'm glad Peter got to Bella and that stuff is still up in the air. I think if someone needs a sacrifice, it should be Carlisle. LOL
Oh, I agree completely that Carlisle needs to sacrifice himself--whether willingly or unwillingly. Thanks for reading and chiming in.
Date: 25 Aug 2017 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 39
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! Poor Bella! What will she chose?
What will she choose? That's an excellent question. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 23 Aug 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
I hope you update soon all your stories. So good. I enjoy them. Please update more often. The stories keep you on the edge of your seat.
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Aug 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 39
That is aweful. Everyone is getting along just fine as supernaturals. She can't leave Peter. She should stay a vampire.
Are they truly happy as supernaturals, though? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 19 Aug 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
NOOOO WTF that was so not cool woman. It was a great chapter but I want to bitch slap Taha Aki and Didi to Bangkok.
Aw...Taha Aki and Didi aren't that bad. Besides, sending them to Bangkok might be fun for them. I heard the food is absolutely delicious there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 38
Dun dun dun till the next chapter. How many chapters are left in this one if you don't mind me asking? Thank you for the update and I hope to see another soon.
I'm glad you liked it. The story is complete, but unfortunately, I cannot tell you how many chapters remain--we'll call that author's privilege. ;) I will post regularly until the end--every week or two--because some weeks are just ridiculously busy for me. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 01 Aug 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
Welcome back!!! I can't tell you how excited I was to see this update!!! And what a great chapter to come back with! I absolutely can't WAIT to see what happens next!
Glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 11 Jul 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 35
I know it has been years since you've updated the story, and I hope this review finds you having a good day. I would love to see more of the story, but I understand if that doesn't happen. You are a gifted author and I love reading all of your work :-)
Date: 19 Oct 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just want to let you know that I am loving your story, "You'll
Find What Your Looking for at Walmart". It is so different not to mention funny as all get out. Can never wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the excellent work!!
Date: 30 Jan 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am rereading this story, and Jane propelling Alice into the tomatoes is just as funny now as it was the first time hahaha. I know you've not updated in a long time on this story, and while I would love more updates, I hope RL is going well for you. Thank you for making me laugh so much!!
Date: 25 Feb 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'd have fried the bratty pervert, too. Yes, it was a mistake to kill Edward before finishing his interrogation, but sometimes you gotta do what you've gotta do.
It's been a while since I've had the chance to do any real reading, and I always come back to check your stories. I can only assume that you and your family have been hit by the insane weather on the east coast over the last few months; it's a lot more immediate than writing stories, that's for damn sure. I sincerely hope that you and your family are all right and we will be waiting until you get back. Take care.
Date: 31 Dec 2012 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 35
I haven't read this chapter yet, which I'm sure is totes awesome. Since PM is disabled, just wanted to write and say I hope RL is going ok for you, miss you on here, and wishes for a happy 2013! Lots of love, Angelbones76
Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 35
Yay!! I was so happy to see this chap in my inbox! But because it has been so long I had to reread the story. That is why it took so long for a review otherwise I would have reviewed the day I saw it in my inbox. Is Alice gonna be like Victoria from Eclipse? Is she going to create her own newborn army? Was that Fernando that took out Fatima? Awe, in the end I kinda felt bad for Edward til he went on the rant about the Quileutes. I think they coulda pumped more info out of him then ripped him apart but I understand where Sam was coming from, because my brother is the same way. Very protective over his sisters. I definitely enjoyed the chapter, specially Uncle Quil's rant about James Cameron and Titanic in 3D. Personally I had no problem with the original, a didnt even go see the remake, 3D tends to give me massive headaches.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 35
AMAZING!!! Finally another group of the Evils down. I can understand why they decided to kill him so quickly, but also understand Jasper's frustration at not getting a bit more information before ending him. Can't wait to read more and see what Crazy Alice is up to! :) So glad that RL is getting a bit easier and you have time to write again I have missed your updates!! :)
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
I cant wait till you update this story!!!! Please please update soon. This has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read. Hope all is well at home.
Had some RL issues that needed my attention. WIll update soon. Thank you for your kind words.
Had some RL issues that needed my attention. WIll update soon. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 10
I definitely have to go with Def Leppard on a Trans Am. A pinto is just plain EW. Trans Am's are the bad boy car
Def Leppard on a Trans Am is a good thing. And Charlie used to be a bad boy. *winks*
Date: 29 Jun 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 34
you evil thing.. you cant leave it here. dang it. i am really enjoying this story. i am glad you told me to start with it first :)
More coming soon. I promise. I'm just getting my groove back after dealing with home issues. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 28 Jun 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can't wait for the update! Just re-read everything as I had started reading it months ago on ff.net. Alice has no conscience but she was born and bred that way. Unfortunatly it is the nature vs nurture in effect. There is no way to save her, Edward, or anyone else manipulated by Carlisle and the Romanians. Loved the twister heat fight. And the girls fighting as well. Maria did the right thing in making them use real fighting skills instead of just practice. Positive renforcement....again nature vs nuture. Amun and Kebi are way too brainwashed. Amun is only good for information, but given the right motivation Kebi could be convinced to go on their side. So....how many chapters are you planning on continuing? Just kinda wondering if you don't want to say thats ok.
I'm sorry the update is taking so long. I've had some issues at home that absolutely needed my attention. Alice has absolutely no conscience and it's ironic how close Bella came to becoming like her considering her upbringing, but she was saved by her visits to Forks during the summers. She was loved unconditionally by her father, Sarah Black, Aunt Molly, and Uncle Quil. Kebi really needs to be put out of her misery and Amun is just too brainwashed. He did give good info though. Not too many chapters left in this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 May 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow a really great chapter, alot of action going on, I had to re-read it 2-3 times before i got everything. Can't wait till next chapter.....Anne-Marie
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 May 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 34
I think that Kebi is a sad, brainwashed soul that honestly believes women are inferior to men. This is from "Pretty Woman", but it is absolutely true: "If people put you down enough, you start to believe it."
As for Amun, for some reason I do not feel as bad for him as I do Kebi. I am not exactly sure why either.
I like Aunt Molly and her fierceness!!
LOVED this chapter of course!!
Yes, Kebi is exactly how you described her. You shouldn't feel bad for Kebi because he made Kebi who she is. And Aunt Molly is awesome--she made Bella who she is. Remember that for future chapters, it wasn't Renee who had the most influence on Bella...it was Aunt Molly. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 May 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 34
Embry: lol for embry getting a prom date. lol for ALice holding up customs. WOw Carlisle is really going nuts. Can understand why he is having a hard time accepting Josh. Marcus' vaccine is such a great thing. Wow Poor Kebi being stuck with those slimy sharer boys. ROFL for being process served. Glad Jenks is far away enjoying his life away from the madness. awww poor Carlisle getting upset cause no one is calling him back....ROFL.
Garrett: Hmm hope the twister science works. Wow Amun is a real pussy. Go Ben!!! Go Bella and Picia!!!. LOL for the wolves overheating from Ben. Feel sorry for Kebi being mated to that arsehole. LOL for Aro inserting the Allah reference. OMG for the Lorena B references. LOVE strong Aunt Molly. Wow he really is brainwashed. Dear lord, does Carlisle have some gift no one knows about? Garrett was smart flipping the convo to "joining". lol for Jiffy Lube comment. Ahh time to catch Malice and Pussyward. LOL for kids whining about homework.
CYA next chapter hun