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Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

I hope you are feeling better and good luck with your son.  This was a good chapter!  I'm glad that the whole team won for the day.  Poor Phil he doesn't stand a chance. LOL  Hope all ends up well for your son.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 25

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 2nd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 21 not 24!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!

 

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 24

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

If Tanya IS there... I hope she goes home missing some fucking teeth!  Ugh, what a bitch...

 

Great chapter BB!!! Loved it!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

Maybe there is hope for this family.

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so glad it seems that things are looking up for Bella and Edward.  She need this to get things settled in her mind.  Good job!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Happy New Years BB!!!!  Thank you for my gift *points above*

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

Finally they are getting somewhere 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 20

Those 4 are like roaches. You just can't get rid of them once they find their way into your home.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 20

Looking forward to more

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

Bella needed to tell them what she felt. She can't hold her feelings in anymore. She has to take care of herself and Edward. Her family is on there own. She can't be responsible for their happiness as well.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 19

Merry Christmas BB!!!!  Thank you for this Christmas present, I love it!!

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 18

I think Bella should go find Rosalie and Alice and hit them for no reason. Then tell them to ask Emmett and Jasper why they were hit. Does this make sense, no, but neither does what they boys did. Maybe they would finally understand that you don't beat someone up because they love your sibling. Those boys are pretty dense when it comes to this topic. Maybe their girls can help them see the light. If they don't, they may loose Bella because she is going to choose Edward. It sounds like there is little reason to come home.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

So many families don't realize that the college student needs that place at home. They need to know that they always have a place at home that is safe and always stays the same. Never change your kids bedroom into a home gym or something. They will feel like they are not welcomed anymore.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ugh, not Charlie and Renee... *huffs*

 

Great chapter BB!  I know Alice doesnt mean and ill will to Bella about taking over her room, but it still stung for Bells, I can see that.

I cant wait to see how Bella deals with whats been going on, she can let it go in Forks, it really is a safe place for her to release.

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

The only one putting pressure on Bella is Bella. She needs to give herself some slack and relax. She is her worst enemy.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

Yaaaaaaaay!!  I LOVE this story, BB!!!!!!  *does a jig*

 

Ok, this chapter was great showing us the aftermath.  I feel so bad for Ben and Tia, they didnt deserve that, and poor Bella!  I know how she feels!  Feel like if you dont keep winning, you arent worth anyones time...

 

Edward is doing great though!  I cant wait to see Em, Carlisle and Jas's reaction to what happened  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great Sequel can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

MORE PLEASE!! :-D

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

The connection between Edward and Bella is getting stronger and stronger. It is almost as if their souls have fuzed.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

Wonderful chapter, can't wait for more. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

Those voices can be annoying, eh?  lol

 

Loved the chapter BB!!!  I am excited to see how these matches go..   I have a feeling Tia is gonna get hurt.  I cant wait!!  :)

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 13

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella does not need to let that other coach get in her head. He knows they are the better team. It is a good thing that Edward knows how to take care of Bella. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella and Edward have lead this team by example. They have a strong work ethic. They expect more of themselves than anyone else. There teamates better keep up if they have any pride. It sounds like the team did well so far, so it worked.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

They need to lock the door.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter, looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

*squeals with glee over favorite couple*

Oh these kids are the greatest!  And I totally would have punched Ben too!  ;)

 

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

I happy to see some progress has been made. There was too much tension within the team. I hope they can now start working together to get stronger.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

More please!! :-)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 10

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 10

*breathes a peaceful sigh*  Ahhhh!

 

BB, when I posted on FB today, I had no idea I would get this gift!  My favorite story posted, and I was giggling like a school girl!

Great chapter!  I think the kids are coming around, and as much as it pains me to say, I am gonna miss Carlisle in training! *snorts*

I flove ya hard, BB!! Great chapter!!

*hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10

loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt chatper 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

They have to stop thinking about running away all the time. Running is never the solution. They are too strong to act like weaklings.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2011 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wonderful chapter, I was so excited to see this update. looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm really happy that you finally updated, I been waiting for this. This Bella and Edward are my favs, fighters... love it.

 

looking forward to more when you get it posted.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

*hugs you hard*

Loved the update babe!  Carlisle is gonna kick some lazy asses!!!  :)

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loves it!! I live in Oklahoma, Edward can move here any day..

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good chapter.....

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8

I think Carlisle deserved it. He has been such a jerk to Edward about Bella. Bella would be a bigger basketcase if it wasn't for Edward. I agree with Missy. It is time for Bella to get over her past.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

looking foward to the next one

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

O.K., I'll go vote! But just to remind you this IS TWCS - did you just post the same A/N with all the versions of this Ch. or what?!

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

I personally dont think Edward over reacted. He had every right. Carlisle is wrong, and should have asked Edward as well if Edward's dad suggested it. He was wrong, and now Carlisle needs to leave Edward the fuck alone about it, because Edward clearly would never hurt Bella in anyway.

I'm also glad that Bella and Missy have eachother, maybe they can bond or some sister like shit. They both are the only girls, and both went through something horrible. So they deserve that friendship, and to form another family bond with Phil and Missy while their family is back at home. It will make them feel more comfortable. Maybe Bella and Edward can feel like they can just BE them if they bonded with Phil and Missy. Because Edward and Bella need that.

I hope the team steps up and stops giving them shit too.. but at the same time, even though its hard for Bella to let go, I hope she starts learning to let go soon, and just live her life the best way she can, for herself, and for Edward.

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

*doubles over in hysterics*  Carlisle cracks me up STILL!!

 

I see what I missed being an only child for so long!  I would have loved to pick the shit out of an older brother!!  :)

Love it BB!!  I know you have been working hard, and I just want you to know I appreciate it all

*hugs*

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

They need to leave Edward and Bella alone. How are they going to grow and adjust with interference? No matter where they go people will question.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 7

CAUGHT!!! THE NERVE OF CARLISLE - HE JUMPS EDWARD UPSTAIRS AND LOOK WHAT ESME'S PACKING?! HUH!!

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved the ending!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

They were busted. They just need to room together and Carlisle and Esme just will have to accept it. Bella is such a broken soul and really needs to therapy to heal. There will always be jerks in the world who will Google to find out her past. She always acts angry and until she changes people will stare. She has to want to heal.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 6

*hugglesquishies you*

I know life can be insane, but you can always find escape here, with us, your fans :)

This was a great update!  I cant believe they actually told everyone about what happened.  That shocked the proverbial shit right outta me!

I had to grab onto Peter's arm so I didnt shock myself right out of my chair! *giggles*

Love it, BB!!  I just want them to hug it out!

*hugs*

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella needs to put her roomate in her place. Bella needs to step up and lead. If they don't like it they can leave.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

well im excited to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ok, so you know what to do with bitchy chapters, right BB?

BITCH SLAP THEM!!!  *giggles*

Thats Pete's all-cure -  a bitch slap a day keeps the blockage away :)

Love this one BB :)  FFL  was an all time fav of mine lol

*hugs*

Reviewer: budgie36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

Very good I am pleased you have written a sequel.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella isn't really helping the situation with her closed off attitude. All she needs to say is she esperienced a tragedy in her past that causes her to have nightmares. She should have told her roomate this anyway. It is hard enough living with a strandger in a dorm room. It takes awhile to get used to living with some one new. Maybe since the dorm is coed Edward and Bella sould just share a room and Maggie and Liam can too.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 4

Errm, needless to say, "Oh-oh spaghetti-o!" :-P

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 4

well i think that she just needs to branch out and not stick to her comfort zone! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

poor edward and bella. already going through something, but they will be stronger together, thank god they arent alone. could you imagin if she had to go to school away with out edward, gosh.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

I don't see what is wrong with them sharing a room. They are adults now. Carlisle nows they have a relationship and he knows Bella needs Edward. What is the big deal? This way they disrupt 2 other peoples lifes and Bella looks like a freak again. Bella deserves a fresh start.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

she needs to start to open up with her roomate! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 3

Ugh - poor angstElla!! :-( Nice job with the update!! :-)

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter, I'm looking forward to see how they do on their own. :)

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

i actually cried!

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 2

So no more taking the piss out of Car and Esme?! Damn, I'm gonna miss having a laugh at their expense!! :-(

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2

im excited to see how college will be 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

well im intrested to see how this turns out! 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOOOOH-HOOOOO!! IT'S FINALLY HERE!! *happy shout* MORE PLEASE?!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMFG!!!  This is definitely a surprise sequel that I did NOT see coming!!  :)  I LOVE IT!

 

I effin luv you BB!

*big bear hug*

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