[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:44 AM Title: Reception Part Three
Wow, yeah that was a lot take in but it was really wonderful. I am really liking how you are keeping a lot of the story true to the book, but adding your own unique twist, it is great and I am hoooked I can't seem to stop flipping to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you are still enjoying it. I tried to bring in as many Twilight parallels as I could. Except when circumstances deemed it improbable. For instance, Jacob will only be a friend because he never had the chance to fall in love with Bella. Also, Victoria will see the true character of James and she will be different because of it. Thanks so much for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:05 AM Title: First Taste
Well, I am really liking the mixture of vampirism and alienism and.....well I just like it, there how about that!
Author's Response:
LOL, ok. Glad you are liking it. I needed him to be able to receive enzymes from her and thought that would be a convenient way. She gets to receive his enzymes in a much more fun way. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:11 AM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
What, I can't believe Tanya would stoop so low as to drug and rape him! It kinda sucks that Bella will already have a little girl once she is bonded to Edward and it sucks that Tanya didn't get more punishment for doing what she did to Edward after she had the baby.
Author's Response:
Tanya wanted something and went after it...unfortunately for Edward. Bella won't be too put out with Addy. Having grandparents living next door, makes things easier. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:47 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
I am happy that Rose is coming around, as always her and Emmett make a great couple so it's good to know she is coming around.
Author's Response:
It takes Rose a little while to come around to the Cullen's way of thinking. She doesn't like her choices being taken away. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
OK, I admit it, I like this story, it's nice. I didn't know how I would feel about the whole male dominance thing but, what can I say, I'm a sucker for Edward Cullen, if he wants to dominate, I say let him do what he does so well! :^)
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you are enjoying it. He is dominant, but he is loving and caring as well. Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 Jul 2011 5:35 PM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
i like edward and bellas home more,, i mean they are both beautiful and all but my taste is more theirs,, i mean there bed god i wish i had that bed
Author's Response:
I believed Bella and Edward would have more simplistic tastes than Rosalie or Alice. So I did their house less fru fru....lol. I did the bed to be similar to the one on Isle Esme. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:50 AM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
OK, Charlie and Sue, that was quick!
Author's Response:
Yep, it was instantaneous soul mate recognition and now he has powers bursting to get out. Thanks for all the reviews, I really appreciate them!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:36 AM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
Surprised to hear Rose still in isolation room! Charlie and B. got together, all is well I hope. "... be careful not to catch a mermaid." lol!!! Charlie was hilarious.
Author's Response:
After she tried to escape from Esme, she is stuck there until the binding ceremony. Glad you enjoyed Charlie's arrival. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:18 AM Title: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the smiley face!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:10 AM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
Bella=Danger magnet. Who grabbed her this time? Reading on to find out.
Author's Response:
Yep, she seems to draw danger to her. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:53 PM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the smiley face!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 11:46 PM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
Love the pics in A/N. Each time I look at a step stool I will think of what Edward can do with one.
Author's Response:
LOL, nice thing to come to mind. Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 1:33 AM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
Sweet!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks so much for all the reviews and ratings that you have given me. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 1:03 AM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
Aww, she's pregnant, and aww, she found Edwards sweet spot! That Ewdard does have a way with words. Or should I say, you have a way with words (hahaha). Hell the way they were going at it, she didn't have a choice but be pregnant :) .
Author's Response:
Edward has a lot of pent up sexual frustration that he has to work through; and hey, when you partner is as sexy as those two, you can't help but be turned on all the time....lol. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 12:44 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
So many new folks to meet. And yet some old folks I wish hadn't survive the trip from earth, like Newton :) ! Still up to his same old antics. Fun look at all pics on your blog.
Author's Response:
Well, she has to have the boys swarming after her...lol. She attracts them on Twilight, just like she did on Earth. Glad you are utilizing and enjoying the blog. Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 12:24 AM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon
No wonder Edward was feeling possesive after seeing all those jackasses at the confinement center! Justice needs to move faster in Forkington for those creeps. Bravo for final binding he gave his Angel.
Author's Response:
Yes, he had to deal with the crazies. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2011 12:02 AM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
Rose, Rose, Rose. Damn it, I'll come live with Emmett if you a too offended to be there :) . You know, a well written lemon with get a 10 rating out of me everytime. Add scarves, mounted rings in headboards, and butt sex and I am down right happy. Excellent work. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Well, it is taking Rose a while, but she will eventually catch on. Thanks for all the compliments and encouragement, and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 11:25 PM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
"Go ahead and take a lick, ..." and "Baby, don't worry about trying to get a lot in your mouth...": both should go down as fanfic all-time Classic Lines!!!!!
White lights flashing, roaring, beds breaking and classic bedroom lines equal Amazing Lemon in my book.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. Since he was displaying such strength, it was only a matter of time that a bed broke....lol. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 11:01 PM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Carlise is a good actor, he looked after B. for 17 years and didn't let on! How special. Creativity of the story is off the charts.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Carlisle is used to being in charge and all business. So he is used to being all cool and collected. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 3:33 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
Wow. Soundproofing the bedroom, cool! I love that your Edward roars, and purrs.
Author's Response:
Got to keep the noise in, but even soudproofing won't keep all the sounds from getting out...lol. I love an animalistic Edward myself. Thanks for all the reviews and ratings. I really appreciate them!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 3:00 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
*** clapping *** Perfection. Worth the build-up. And all thru story, luv when he calls her Angel. Wait, did Carlise hear them from his house? That is some skill Edward is putting on B.
Author's Response:
The houses are close together anyway; but yes, he did hear them. He has sensitive hearing and that helped, he is a full Twilighter. But it was much louder than Carlisle was used to and became worried for Bella. He is attached to Bella and you will see why in the future chapters. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:59 AM Title: Reception Part Three
I need more extreme violence to TANYA and James (like death)! Tonya is a rapist, James is just James. Send Vic to Mercury, or Uranus somewhere. Good call to get Jake and Seth as security at the house. Love. This. Story.
Author's Response:
James will get what is coming to him later in the story and Tanya will be locked up for a while. Thanks so much for the review~
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:23 AM Title: Reception Part Two
That damn James and Victoria!!!! Bastards. Can somebody just shoot them now!!! The wolves seems like loving creatures or "Forest Elves". Its hard to think of Jacob as an elf :) . Your creativity is amazing.
Author's Response:
These elves aren't little green men. These elves are manly large beings. Actually the legend of Forest Elves is that they can change into wolves. So I just took that and intertwined it with Twilight. I did a lot of research for this story. The wolves are good people. James, of course, is evil, but I have Victoria see the real James....so she is not evil in this story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:42 AM Title: Reception Part One
Funny that everyone heard Edward growling and Bella getting tongued up and down behind closed doors! who could have possibly grabbed her now. Talk about danger magnet. Can't wait for them to get home alone and start working on the family.
Author's Response:
Well, most of them have supersensitive hearing and it was inevitable...lol. I don't think most couples take it as far as E and B did....lol. Yes, Bella is a danger magnet.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:23 AM Title: First Taste
:) That was hot as hell. This is why I read TWCS! So in love with Edward right now.
Author's Response:
Thanks, again glad you are enjoying the story and thanks so much for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:07 AM Title: Binding Ceremony
So much info, and so well thought out. ("Forkington" cute.) So that's the binding ceremony... definitely a slave society. I would be Edward's slave, too, anytime, any planet. The enzyme exchange reminded me of Aro gift minus the fangs. Another A+ chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:04 PM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
Drama! Can somebody please kill Tanya now, or lock her away in the loonie bin.
Author's Response:
Tanya will be out of their hair for a while. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:40 PM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
Are you kidding me? No. Damn. Didn't see this whole mess cumming/coming. So creative and unique, excellent job.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:30 PM Title: Edward's Rape
That was mean :) . This tramp had better not be pregnant after raping Edward!!!
Author's Response:
Wellll, you will soon find out! Thanks for the review and rating! I have to get off the computer for now, but I will respond to your reviews when I get back online later today. I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:20 PM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
?. What in the hell? What did Tanya do to sleeping Edward? This is SOOOO good. That tramp! I'm scared, he is crying about it, oh shit.
Author's Response:
He is upset. She took his virtue that was intended for his mate. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:08 PM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
** looking around ** Is it hot in here, or is that just me (and Bella)? Can't wait for the binding ceremony and activities that follow. I love that your Edward is a real man with real needs, ready to handle some business. Great chpt.
Author's Response:
Edward could definitely heat up a room or a garden or whereever he is...lol. Thanks for the reviews and the rating on the previous chapter.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:52 PM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
That damn Royce King! Great story, I can see I'm hooked already. No productive work for me today. I hope Rose is ready to give Em a chance, ASAP, before she starves to death and is kick out. Nice each girl shared their backgrounds. I'm so impressed with Edward, hearing Alice's request and getting the article quickly so they could read about that creep Royce.
Author's Response:
I just modernized their stories and brought them into the present. I tried to keep as many elements of the original Twilight story intact where it was possible. It will take a while for Rose to come around. I don't see her as one to give up easily. Heck, it took her 4 books to get her to finally like Bella...lol.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:40 PM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
A Cullen crest tat, really? Really? Talk about being property. I could see if the girls wanted a tat later... but, OK, I'll trust you. The Rose drama is a nice touch. Poor Rose.
Author's Response:
It is common practice and the girls knew that they were going to get one. Some things that happen may be a little barbaric, but the girls will be will loved and well taken care of.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:15 PM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
Look at you, putting access to pic's of Ocicats and centas in the end notes! I was just about to google both. Love your story.
Author's Response:
Ocicats are real, but centas...I made up. I have made up several things in this story. There is a glossary that I have posted as an outtake that can be used later. When I first bring up a new word or concept, I will describe it at the bottom of the chapter.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 5:06 PM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
Thks for access to your blog for pic's right in your A/N. I'd be scared to, but what is up with Rose? Great chpt.
Author's Response:
Rose is being stubborn. Can't you just imagine how she would really act if someone kidnapped her and was making choices for her. That was one of the things she complained about in the books. Her choices were taken from her. So this is how I imagine her acting if she was kidnapped and chosen as a mate. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:53 PM Title: He Picked Me
The girls were taken from earth and trained 4 years. But nice their personalities appear to be the ones we know and love. Gotta love Rose! This should be good.
Author's Response:
I kept everyone's personalities basically the same with a few exceptions. Edward is more dominate and less brooding. I tried to pull in Twilight elements when possible. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:43 PM Title: The New Age Begins
Sounds like a unique story plot. Cullen men get their wives from Earth.... ! Can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy it and thanks for the review!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 12:03 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
What a pretty baby and a great story I have loved all the photos they have made this story even better Thanks.
Author's Response:
That was a very cute picture of a baby. I am glad you enjoyed the story and pictures. Thanks for all the reviews! I really appreciate it!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 11:00 PM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
What a wonderful party. I cant believe it is almost over
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought that having the baby would be a good stopping point. Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:10 PM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'
Jane is on her own about time Alex figured out she doesnt care about him.
Author's Response:
I see Jane as a spoiled brat and Alex having to live in her shadow. He just needed the opportunity to break free of her. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:39 PM Title: Don't Mess with the Faeries!
Go Kate poor girl to have sisters like that it is good that everyone knows she is different from them. Irina is lucky to be alive. Aro is going to be sorry.
Author's Response:
Kate was the only one in the original story that didn't pose any kind of problem for Bella. She even helped her out with her power. Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 8:16 PM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble
Someone has to ruin a perfectly good day they will be sorry.
Author's Response:
Folks were wanting a little drama, so I put some in there. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:04 AM Title: Outtake: Felix and Bellona Meet - Read A/N
It was very interesitng and wild that is what you call getting into what you are doing lol
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the review!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:53 AM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks
As long as the baby is happy and health that is what maters. I am glad that Alice is not going to share Jasper that would just be to weird.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:46 PM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes
What a wonderful place to live. I hope Aro never gets into forks.
Author's Response:
Aro never makes it to Forks in this section of the story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:30 PM Title: Family Meeting, Talks, Lil' Lovin'
Alice is going to share Jasper with another women??? I think Rose will be happy now that Edward talked with Emmett ;)
Author's Response:
Alice sharing was the original plan, I had hinted throughout the story about a breeder. But I got such a negative response from the readers, that I changed course. Whether that was right of me, I dont' know. This was my first story and I didn't want to upset anyone. As for Rose and Emmett, hopefully they will have as much fun as Edward and Bella. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:55 PM Title: Felix and Bellona
This is the best planet.
Author's Response:
Glad you like it. This is sort of an ideal world. Working outside the home is not all it is cracked up to be, I learned that the hard way. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 6:02 PM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
what man in his right mind would turn down a daily blow job lol
Author's Response:
Not a sane one...lol. Thanks so much for the review and rating!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:33 PM Title: Matching up Mates
Wow alot going on in that Chapter. It is a good thing Bella has the power to protect not only the people she loves but the house they live :)
Author's Response:
LOL, I could just imagine those 2 going at it inside a normal house. There wouldn't be much left...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:34 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
is this story complete or do you plan to continue it??? i absolutely love this story and i hope you do so!!!!
Author's Response:
I plan on doing a sequel, but I am writing some one shots for contests to give me a break from Planet for a while. I was running out of unique ideas. You can go to my fanfiction account and read the 2 E/B one-shots that I have over there. My username is the same as here at TWCS. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:06 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
The town just keeps getting biger. Its a good thing they recued them
Author's Response:
There is room for plenty of growth, they can always expand the territory if need be, now that they have Marcus and his money. As for the girls, yes it is good they were rescued. Not all communities are like Forks. Thanks again!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 9:47 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
Good riddins to Jessica, Lauran, and Tyler I wonder who they will get??? I would like to go there.
Author's Response:
LOL, they get some good gals. I made these up, so I could give them the personalities that I wanted them to have...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chat with Friends and Galleos Jewelry
Edward means what he says Jessica better watch out . Poor hormonal Bella.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, Jessica pulled the last straw that broke the proverbial camel's back. She is outa there...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 9:05 AM Title: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town
I would love to live there. Emmett is to funny is Edward the only one that is that loud???
Author's Response:
Yes, because Bella is a faen, she transferred some of her powers to him when she changed. He is now as durable as a full Twilighter and more animalistic and he is quite noisy...lol. Thanks for all the reviews!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:37 AM Title: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'
Good for Rose but should we be worried about Alice??? What a massage can I request one lol
Author's Response:
Don't get alarmed by Alice. I had to change the direction I was taking the story and I haven't redone that part. I am going back through the story and fixing all my mistakes and I am only on chapter 14.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:21 AM Title: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower
They have the perfect world and they want to take care of it. I love all the recycling.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I figured if they were trying to save their world, then they might as well do it in every they can.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:55 AM Title: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past
Life is good and happy they except it
Author's Response:
Yes, they may be slaves...but they are treated extremely well and their life is happy and fulfilling. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 10:06 AM Title: Imprints, Ultrasound, Night Out on the Town
Those bitches will never learn send them back.
Author's Response:
LOL, they will get what is coming to them. Thanks for the review!
Date: 31 May 2011 8:31 AM Title: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire
life is going right along. Charlie seams very happy :)
Author's Response:
Yep, Charlie fits into the life on Twilight. He got his daughter back, gained a grand-daughter...with another one on the way, got a mate, friends, and a good job. There is a lot for him to be happy about. Thanks for the review!
Date: 29 May 2011 8:50 AM Title: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting
growing can be tough and not every one can be happy
Author's Response:
This is their first real growth spirt and they are getting along pretty well. Thanks for the review!
Date: 25 May 2011 12:41 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
I am glad that the baby is here. It seemed pretty easy for a big baby.
Author's Response:
Well, since is part faerie, we could say a little magic was involved...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 May 2011 5:41 PM Title: The New Age Begins
I just found this story a couple days ago and finished it this morning. I just had a hysterecemy so I'm out of work for 6 weeks and will have lots of opportunity to read. I'm sorry to see this story end. There is so much I still want to know. It seems that Bella, Alice and Rosalie were the only females bought to be mates and therefore technically they are slaves. It seems like all the other girls were set free and had chioces. I also wondered about punishments. Bella and Alice were so accomodating and quickly did everything they were asked so you never touched on what men did to control their wives. In fact, except for Rosalie in the beginning, all the women in Forkington seemed to be very stepfordish. This is not a criticism, just an observation. I enjoyed the story very much Perhaps you may think in the future of making a quick reference guide to post pics, species and descriptions of each citizen of Forkington.
Author's Response:
Did you see my picture blog, it has most of the pictures of the characters as they were introduced to the story and I have a story with 2 outtakes that contains a glossary and a character list with species. But a character list with pics would probably be even more helpful. The other human girls are slaves too....Bree, Angela, Ms. Cope, and Gianna. Makenna Witness, Bian, Anna English, Cassandra, and Grace are all slaves. I don't think anyone could make Bellona a slave....lol. As far as punishment, I would think that a spanking or time in isolation would be the punishment, if they did something wrong. Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks so much for the review!
Date: 22 May 2011 9:43 AM Title: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'
I think Jessica and Lauran understand they better keep there hands off the Cullen men. Bella is a bad ass lol
Author's Response:
Well, it takes more than one time to convince them. Those 2 aren't known for their intelligence....lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 21 May 2011 11:26 PM Title: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center
rope is a good thing is he going to tell Bella about Jessica????
Author's Response:
I don't think he mentions what Jessica did, I can't remember. But that won't be the only time Jessica misbehaves and Bella will be there to witness it. It will Bella's turn to take care of her and Lauren. Thanks for the review!
Date: 21 May 2011 10:55 PM Title: Family Time and Emmett's POV
I am happy for Emmett and Rose now they can get on with there life together. What kind of trouble are Edward and Jasper going to have with bring the two skank for the center back to town are the girls going to try to put the moves on the boys???
Author's Response:
Now, how could you think that about the innocent Lauren and Jessica? *cough* *cough*...lol. Just wait and see how Edward handles them. Thanks again!
Date: 21 May 2011 10:03 PM Title: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch
Rose is getting some good stuff she wont want to leave home again
Author's Response:
Once the enzyme trasferral happens, she will settle down. She will be more receptive to Emmett and see that she is not in as bad a position as she believes she has been. It will open up her eyes and mind, but she will still have to earn his trust. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 21 May 2011 9:23 PM Title: The Hunt is On!
good james is dead one evil down. What is Emmett going to do???
Author's Response:
I think Emmett is sort of in shock. It would be hard to know that the one you love tried to run from you. She will have to work at getting him to trust her again.
Date: 21 May 2011 8:55 PM Title: Rosalie, What are You Doing?
Rose is screwed I hope they find her quick
Author's Response:
She is so stubborn, she had to try one last ditch effort to get away.
Date: 21 May 2011 7:49 PM Title: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'
Charlie needs him some Sue lol
Author's Response:
They will have a very quick courtship. So he won't have to wait long.
Date: 21 May 2011 6:16 PM Title: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting
when they grow they grow big
Author's Response:
The community has become established, so it is time for it to expand. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 21 May 2011 5:08 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
Charlie is the man and a good dad to. The way he reacted to Addy he is going to trip out in a good way when he finds out Bella is having a baby.
Author's Response:
I like the Charlie character, he was portrayed as a very good man and dad. So I figured out a way to get him on the Planet. Yes, he will love being a grand-dad and he will treat Addy as if she was his own too.
Date: 21 May 2011 2:25 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
will u be writing a sequel
i really hope u do write it
Author's Response:
I plan on working on another story, so it will give me some time to come up with more ideas for Planet. But yes, I plan on writing a sequel. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 10:42 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
AWWWWWWAH!!! I can just picture Edward purring as she ate...too precious!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for all the reviews and ratings that you have given me. I hope you are enjoying your weekend!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2011 9:35 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
thanks good story
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for all the reviews and ratings that you have given me. I hope you are enjoying your weekend!
Date: 21 May 2011 8:29 AM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
Charlie is handling thing well when are they going to tell him about the baby growing in her Belly??? Sue is Charlies mate???
Author's Response:
They don't have to tell him, he figures it out pretty quickly. Yes, Sue is Charlie's mate. Thanks for the review!
Date: 21 May 2011 12:55 AM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
LOVE LOVE LOVE the picture of the baby. GREAT chapter. Is this really the end. I just want to let you know that I have truly enjoyed reading your story. We are a very good writer. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!! If this is the end, then I am saddened.
Author's Response:
I plan on writing a sequel at a later time. I was running out of unique ideas for Planet. I am going to try my hand at some contests and another story and then come back to Planet. You can keep up with what I am doing by following my home blog page. The picture of the baby is one of the cutest that I have ever seen. Glad you have enjoyed reading my story and thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 9:57 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
Awwww...what a pretty baby
Author's Response:
That is one of the cutest baby pictures I think I have ever seen. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 20 May 2011 8:29 PM Title: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid
I want a man from that planet. Bella should feel very loved by all. Poor Edward is so afraid of lossing her.
Author's Response:
Good women are a rare comodity, so they are treasured. Yeah, Edward is a slightly paranoid. But he is a little justified in his feelings, he has males everywhere wanting to steal her away. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 8:09 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
so nice:)
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review! Have a great weekend!
Date: 20 May 2011 7:53 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
awww, pretty easy labor. beautiful eye on the baby
Author's Response:
Yes, I wanted to make it easy for her. I think that is one of the cutest baby pics that I have ever seen. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 7:50 PM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
Please say there are only 3 human males in town I dont think Bella can take much more lol.
Author's Response:
Well there are 4, but Ben won't bother her. He is in love with Angela. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 7:44 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
I was a little unsure with the Tanya/Bella/Andy secret in the beginning, but you have made a true fan of me. I have truly enjoyed this story above most and look forward to the sequel. You have out done yourself. Thanks for the great entertainment.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks so much for all of your reviews in the past. Thanks for the review and rating and have a great weekend!
Date: 20 May 2011 7:36 PM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
Smores are good no mater what planet you are from. It was a good thing Jasper was close. I love the way Edward told her he would never send her away.
Author's Response:
Yes, I like smores too. Edward loves her and probably couldn't survive without her. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 7:24 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it SO much! Perfect name for her! I really loved it! The nursery is GORGEOUS by the way, jealous of it! There is going to be another chapter before you start the sequel, right? I love this story and am sad to see it go :(
Author's Response:
This was the last chapter. I am not going to do an epilogue because I am going to do a sequel. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 7:16 PM Title: Prisoners' Fates Decided and the Baby is Here!!
Sweet chapter. Glad baby is here. Lovely name.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 5:58 PM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
poor Bella hormonal
Author's Response:
She was just trying to get everything done and make Edward proud of her. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 4:40 PM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
how is he going to go to work he will not do well being away from her
Author's Response:
He is only working short days and he can talk to her any time that he wants by using his computer and her TV. Thanks for the review!
Date: 20 May 2011 4:22 PM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
So exciting baby!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, you like babies, huh? I do too. Thanks for the review!
Date: 19 May 2011 6:05 PM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
she is going to have a baby
Author's Response:
Yes, she is. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 10:47 PM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'
I love his purrs.......*sigh*
Author's Response:
Purring and growling is sexy. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 17 May 2011 9:27 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
Seth is a good protecter and Mike has a death wish.
Author's Response:
Seth and Jacob are very protective of Bella and Addy. Mike is just a horny teenage boy that hasn't gotten to be around any human females....lol. It takes him a while to smarten up. Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 May 2011 8:47 AM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon
Tanya is out of her mind and James is just crazy scary.
Author's Response:
Yes, Tanya is nuts and James is evil, he happens to know what he is doing. Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 May 2011 8:24 AM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
Her body is changing into what she really is???
Author's Response:
Yes, she is half faerie and because her father's faerie traits were hidden, hers were too when she was born. So the mating has unlocked her real species. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 2:22 AM Title: The New Age Begins
Hmmmm....intriguing.
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the story and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2011 8:23 PM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
I have enjoyed this story so much! It was brilliant! I'm sad that its coming to an end but I can't wait for the sequel.
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Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating!
Date: 13 May 2011 7:16 PM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
WHAT????? One more chapter!!!!! NNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!! There is so much more your need to write about. I am soooooo loving this story and I am NOT ready for it to end. I am sad. Love the pictures.
Author's Response:
I just need to take a little time off from it, and I hope during that time that I can dream up some new ideas for the story. I have written 2 one-shots, so check out the contests listed in my chaper and see if you can figure out which ones are mine. Glad that you have enjoyed the story and my picture blog. Thanks for the review!
Date: 12 May 2011 6:57 PM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
I can't believe we are almost to the end. I love this story. It is so original.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 2:35 AM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
I am so sorry to see this end, but I am so excited that you are writing a sequel. I love this story so much.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you have been enjoying the story and I was starting to run out of unique ideas. I am hoping that a little time off will help rejuvinate my imagination when it comes to Planet. Thanks so much for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 2:11 AM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating!
Date: 12 May 2011 1:19 AM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'
I have really enjoyed this story. I will be sad to see it end, but am excited for a sequel. I would love to read anything you write.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you have been enjoying my story. Now I need to decide who or what I want to write on. Check out the 2 contests that I mentioned in my chapter. I wrote a story for each contest; see if you can figure out which ones are mine. Thanks so much for the review!