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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2011 12:51 AM Title: Daily Life, Discussions, M & D Home, Baby Shower/Birthday, and Lil' Lovin'

Wow, that was AMAZING :)  I really loved it so much!  I cannot believe only one chapter remains :(  But, I am happy about the sequel :)  YAY!  I cannot wait to see what they name their daughter as well as what the nursery looks like!  I loved the Winnie the Pooh themed baby shower :)  So amazing!  I cannot wait for the last chapter :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter and pics.  Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2011 4:52 AM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

short but sweet.



Author's Response:

It was 400 words longer than the previous chapter and 500 words longer than the chapter before that and by the rating, I guess you didn't like the chapter.  Sorry to disappoint you.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2011 12:51 AM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

Perfect!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 2:12 PM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

I feel sorry that Alec is always under the shadow of Jane. He basically lives for her and she doesn't care for him. Jane just uses him. If he was loved he might use his gives for good instead of evil. I wonder on Twilight if there is a way to reabilitate him  since he seems to want to leave Jane.



Author's Response:

Alec won't need any rehabilitation.  Once he decides to join Forks Community and cut any ties with the Volturi, I will decide how to deal with him.  Temporary house arrest and finding him a mate would probably do the trick.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 1:37 PM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

This one seemed a little short. I am glad that Edward got information from ALex. What are they going to do about Aro? Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Right now Aro is kind of helples without his talented guard, but now Marcus knows for sure that he is out to get Didyme.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 3:35 AM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

great update, getting a look into alec head and Aro plans.  but why the fascination with bella?   I relaly love the attentive way Edward takes care of her.



Author's Response:

Aro is not interested in Bella yet, he doesn't have a clue about her powers.  Irina wants to get rid of Bella, so that Edward will be available for Tanya.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2011 3:26 AM Title: Interrogations, Lil' Lovin'

Wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it so much!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!  Cannot wait to see what names they come up with :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 2:08 PM Title: Don't Mess with the Faeries!

I am sooooo proud of Bella!!!!!!!!! Charlie was awesome too!!!!!! Bless Edward and Bella's hearts. They always have something going on around them. Never a dual moment in their lives. lol.  As always, this chapter was GREAT!!!! Can't wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: lambykins Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2011 3:46 AM Title: Don't Mess with the Faeries!

great chap!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:47 PM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the smiley face, I hope you enjoy the rest of my story!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:41 PM Title: He Picked Me

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks again!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 6:29 PM Title: The New Age Begins

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the smiley face!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 12:31 PM Title: Don't Mess with the Faeries!

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2011 2:56 AM Title: Don't Mess with the Faeries!

Woo Hoo for Bella and Charlie.  Glad he has some powers of their own.



Author's Response:

He is a full faerie and in my world, they always have a power.......he just hasn't had a need for his powers to show in the past.  Bian isn't mated yet, so her powers aren't at full strength.  But I gave her enough to glue Irina to the floor....lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:44 PM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

It is time for Bella to show what she can do.



Author's Response:

And, she will...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MommyLovesEdward Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:41 PM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

UGH!!! CLIFFIE!!!

who/what is it!!!!?????



Author's Response:

Well, I just uploaded the next chapter, so you don't have to wait anymore.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 10:12 AM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

Aro is the jerk he's always been.  Get him guys and B/B/C!

I love the pictures, their dresses are like quakers with color.  It is thoughtful that you give us this treat with this story.  I love the doctors cake and other decorations.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story and pics.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:39 AM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

wallet looks cool.   Hmmm guessing Bella comes to the rescue with her shield.



Author's Response:

Your guessing would probably be right...lol.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 3:41 AM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

!!!!!!!!!!!!! no fingernails left here!



Author's Response:

LOL, it will be all right.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 2:30 AM Title: The New Age Begins

It's about to get interesting. That is one very powerful room and i can't wait. Hope you update soon, like now would be pretty good ;-)

Author's Response:

Patience....lol.... and power doesn't do you any good, if you are incapicitated.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 2:29 AM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

They did not think about Bella's shield. Could she have shielded all of the townsfolk??? You have left us with a cliff hanger. This is the first time that I have really had to wait for an update. How often do you update???



Author's Response:

The only thing that Edward is thinking about is that he is going to protect her.  Putting Bella on the front line would never cross his mind.  But that doesn't mean she won't take over once almost everyone is incapacitated.  I usually update every 2 to 3 days.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 1:41 AM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

hmmm   wonder if bella throws up her bubble shield?????



Author's Response:

I don't know and remember she isn't the only faerie now.....that gives you something to think about....lol.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:47 AM Title: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch

Hiya! So I'm back and I had some time to read. RL is crazy.

LOVED the chapter btw!!! =)



Author's Response:

I hope it is crazy good not crazy bad.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:34 PM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

oh know must have next chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL, patience is a virtue.  Hopefully, I won't keep y'all waiting long.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 10:47 PM Title: Edward's Birthday and Trouble

Oh wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  I cannot wait to see who is behind the trouble!  I also hope they get rid of whoever/whatever it is soon!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 9:16 PM Title: Outtake: Felix and Bellona Meet - Read A/N

I am glad that you shared that with us. I was wondering what all went on with those two. I have enjoyed reading your story, chapter after chapter. Now I have to wait like everyone else. PLEASE PLEASE hurry up and update. I am sooooooo loving this story.



Author's Response:

LOL, I am preparing to upload one now.  I am glad you are enjoying it and thanks so much for all the reviews!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 9:16 PM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

I hope Alice is successful in getting pregnant.



Author's Response:

She will be, don't worry.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:33 PM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

I am so glad that Bella went over to talk to Alice and that they worked out a different way for Alice and Jasper to have babies. I would not want to share either.



Author's Response:

It caused such a problem with my readers on FF, that I changed the course of Alice and Jasper.  So you are in the majority when it comes to this subject.  Thanks so much for all the reviews!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:33 PM Title: Family Meeting, Talks, Lil' Lovin'

I thought that is what Cassandra was for. I was hoping not. But I do understand that Alice is very little and that Jasper is very large. Glad that Edward talked to Emmett.



Author's Response:

With Alice being so little, I see that as a common sense problem for her...to be unable to safely carry a Twilighter baby, unless she is carefully watched and cared for in the process.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:33 PM Title: Felix and Bellona

I laughed just reading about the mess that was made outside. I can just imagine. lol.



Author's Response:

If you look at the size of Felix in the pics and I imagine him to be about 8 feet tall, he could do a lot of damage if he wasn't paying attention.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:33 PM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'

Did Alice want to take Cassandra home because they will need a breeder? Please no!!!!!! I am hoping that Alice will need extra help around the house because she is going to be pregnant soon. I am glad that Bella told Edward about her cravings and that Edward is going to talk to Emmett.



Author's Response:

Yes, Alice's purpose for Cassandra was a breeder.....but that is not going to happen, so don't worry.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:55 PM Title: Matching up Mates

I love the picutre of Addy. Boy, alot going on in this chapter. Lots of mating. lol. I am glad that everything is working out for everyone. I am glad that Flex and Demetri have come back to help protect Didyme. Marcus is going to be furious.



Author's Response:

Love is in the air or scent glands...lol.  Yes, Marcus is going to be one ticked off Twilighter!  Thanks again for all the reviews!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

I am glad that Edward and Jasper rescued the girls from that community. I am glald that Jessica and Lauren are being left there. lol. 



Author's Response:

No, you wouldn't want to leave decent girls in a place like that...lol.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

I am so loving this story. I like Edward and Bella interacting with Emmett/Rose and Jasper/Alice and of course ADDY!!!!!!!!! I can't wiat to see how Addy intereacts with the baby. I know she is going to love her (if it is a her). lol.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story and don't let the upcoming chapters scare you, there will be no breeder.  Yes, Addy will be the big protective sister.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chat with Friends and Galleos Jewelry

Jessica really does not know when to keep her mouth shut. Loved that Rose, Alice, Angela and Bella feel comfortable around each other to talk about sex and other things like that.



Author's Response:

They have been around each other in the training center, so they have had time to build up their trust in each other. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:53 PM Title: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town

Loved how Emmett and Rose were. Loved all the teasing going on. Is Bella going to tell Edward that she is craving his cum?????



Author's Response:

Yes, they will have a discussion about it later, in a few more chapters.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:53 PM Title: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'

I am soooo happy for Rose and Emmett. I really hope there is nothing wrong with Alice. I hope she gets her family too. I really don't want Jasper to get a breeder.



Author's Response:

That is where this story was going, but don't worry it changed course.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:53 PM Title: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower

The cakes above are so cute. Loved this chapter. I wished I could have had a milk shake everyday during my pregancy. But I did not have any problem gaining weight. lol.



Author's Response:

I love looking for pictures to match what I am thinking.  I actually got the idea from my first pregnancy, I hadn't gained a pound the first five months and the doctor told me to drink a shake everyday.  Those were the good ole days when I could eat what I wanted and not gain a pound.....those days are long gone....lol. Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 5:52 PM Title: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past

Thanks for updating us on Tanya. I was wondering how she was. Glad the twins got here ok.



Author's Response:

Your welcome and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:04 PM Title: Imprints, Ultrasound, Night Out on the Town

I am glad that Rose acted good. I had to laugh at her about what she told Jessica. I wonder what Emmett thought about that. It probably made his ego swell. lol.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, he was proud of Rosalie...just like Edward had been of Bella.  Thanks again for all the reviews!  I really appreciate them!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:04 PM Title: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire

Love seeing everyone getting along. Hopefully, Lauren and Jessica will be happy with their chosen men.



Author's Response:

Don't count on Lauren and Jessica behaving, I don't think it is in their blood....lol  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:04 PM Title: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting

WOW!!!!! LOTS of changes coming to Forkington. Hope the small town community stays in contact and it doesn't get to big.



Author's Response:

It will still continue to have a small town atmosphere, but they need the businesses.  They will be able to depend less and less on outside resources and will have less of a reason to interact with the outside world.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:03 PM Title: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'

I am glad that Bella threated Lauren and Jessica. I hope those girl learned their lesson, but something tells me they did not. lol. What about Emmett and Rose, were they at this bonding ceremony? How are they getting around?  I just have to tell you...You write the best lemons!!!!!!!!!! GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!! I am glad that Addy has someone her age to play with now.



Author's Response:

Emmett and Rose were not at the ceremony, he doesn't trust her out in public yet.  Thanks for the compliments and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:03 PM Title: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center

Jessica and Lauren, I have a feeling are going to cause alot of trouble. lol. Let the fun times begin. What is Bella going to say about Jessica touching Edward and trying to get him to take her home. Jealous?????



Author's Response:

Yes, they do cause trouble.  Well, Bella won't find out about it.....but if she did, she would be jealous.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:03 PM Title: Family Time and Emmett's POV

What did Peter mean that the girls would be a handful? I am glad to see that Rose is accepting her life now. I am glad that she got to see how much she hurt Emmett. I also am glad that Emmett got to see how scared Rose was during all of this.



Author's Response:

Lauren and Jessica will be their usual selves and Peter 'sees' this.  Yes, now Emmett and Rosalie understand each other better.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:03 PM Title: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch

FINALLY!!!!!!! Emmett and Rose are together. I hope we get to see inside Rose and Emmett's heads.  It was nice to hear from Alice and Jasper in this chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks and you will read from inside Emmett's head.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:02 PM Title: The Hunt is On!

I am glad that they found Rose so soon. I am assuming that this new drug that Carlisle has was not available when Tanya raped Edward. If Tanya is still have withdrawal systoms from Edward, could this drug be given to her and maybe she would not obess over Edward so much.



Author's Response:

That drug is going to be part of her treatment, but she was obsessed with Edward before she ever raped him.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:29 AM Title: Rosalie, What are You Doing?

I can not believe that Rose left. I hope she really learns her lesson now. I just hope that Emmett forgives her. If he does, he must really love her. Can't wait to read more and more. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

This was Rose's last ditch effort to escape and she will learn her lesson.  Emmett loves her and will forgive her, but it will take a while for him to trust her again.  Thanks so much for all of your reviews, I really appreciate them!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:28 AM Title: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'

I liked reading the different POV's. I am ready to read about Rose and Emmett's binding. I have missed hearing about them. Has Rose been behaving? Has she finally given Emmet a chance and has she fell in love with him yet? I am sure that all of mmy questions will be answered in the following chapters.



Author's Response:

Yes, Rose and Emmett are coming up in the following chapters.  Rose tried to escape once when Esme took her to have a shower, so Esme won't do that again.  I don't think she has fully fell in love with him yet, she is fighting it.  If she would just let her natural feelings for him come to the surface, she would be smitten.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:27 AM Title: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting

Love the pictures. They sure went over alot of business at the meeting. Lots of changes coming.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the pics and story.  Yes, the community is growing.  Thanks again for the review! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:27 AM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy

I am so glad that Charlie took everything in stride. I loved the enteraction with Addy. I just love reading her talk.



Author's Response:

Well, he has the 'can't beat 'em, so join 'em' attitude.  Plus, he has his daughter back and a granddaughter too.  So with all that he stands to gain by cooperating, it wasn't a hard choice for him to make.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:26 AM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here

Poor Charlie, will he ever learn all there is to know about Forkington and Twilight. He is going to be confused for a long time. lol.



Author's Response:

He is a sharp man(well faerie), so with help, it won't take him long.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:26 AM Title: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid

I am glad that the girls did not encounter any more problems while they were in town.



Author's Response:

Not many folks would be stupid enough to bother them with 2 wolves guarding them.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:25 AM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males

Poor Bella, she is still attracting trouble. I am with her, Edward is going to lock her up. Which human was this?



Author's Response:

The only one left, Tyler.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:25 AM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores

I laughed at Eric wetting his pants. I am surprised that Edward was so calm when he got home. I am surprised that he did not order her to bed and to not get up till the baby gets here. lol. He is so possessive. lol. I have a question....Bella looks human since she has just found out that she is not human. I am assuming that Edward looks human too. So their baby will look human too, right.  How is Addy going to feel about looking different???



Author's Response:

Since he is a doctor and has seen pregnant women overdo it before, he takes it in stride and just warns her to slow down.  If she makes a habit of overdoing it, then his foot will come down and restrict her activity.  Bella glows, but that is the only outward change that someone just seeing her would notice.  During the story, I make sure to include Addy.  I will also make sure that she feels included after the baby comes and Bella and Edward may have to have a talk with her to explain that it is ok to be different.  Plus there are other felinases in the community.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2011 3:36 PM Title: Outtake: Felix and Bellona Meet - Read A/N

You have to love, love at first smell.



Author's Response:

Once their scent hits their olfactory system, it triggers the mating response.  They have no choice but to respond.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:39 PM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries

I am surprised that Edward did not come straight home. Let me guess, that was Jasper busting through the door. I felt something was wrong or maybe Alice had a vesion.



Author's Response:

Edward saw that everything was under control and it wouldn't be long till he was home anyway.  Yep, Jasper to the rescue.  He could feel the lust coming off of Eric.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:39 PM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime

What was with Bella raising her hand??? Was that a signal that Edward told her to use or something.?



Author's Response:

Yes, he told to raise her hand if she was getting close to climaxing, he wanted her to hold off her climax as long as possible.  He was afraid she would be too far into it to speak, so he told her to raise her hand and he would back off the vibrator, so she could collect herself and then they would continue.  That way her climax would be even stronger when he finally allowed it to happen.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:39 PM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited

Love Addy. I am glad that Addy is excited about being a big sister. She has been the only one for so long and now Edward is going to have to divide his attention between Addy, Bella and now the baby. I hope Addy does not get jealous.   



Author's Response:

I don't plan on writing her as being jealous, her personality doesn't seem the type to get jealous anyway.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:38 PM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby

I loved loved loved this chapter. I think you write the best lemons.



Author's Response:

Glad you loved it and thanks for your compliments.  I just try to make them realistic with a little bit of animalistic behavior added to it.  Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:38 PM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington

Again, I love how you write Edward, Bella and Addy. Love picture of Seth.



Author's Response:

I won't to make sure that Addy does not feel left out.  It is not her fault how she ended up in this world and I want to make sure she feels included.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:38 PM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon

I knew that Edward would have a hard time the first time he left Bella.



Author's Response:

They are quite attached to each other and thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:37 PM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella

I am so loving the pictures. Does Edward always pick out Bella's clothes? And does she always wear dresses? Why do they not wear panties? I am glad to see that Rose got out of the house and got to see where she would live if only she would try to get along with Emmett.



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward always picks out Bella's clothes and yes, they are mostly dresses.  No panties, means easy access.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:10 AM Title: Outtake: Felix and Bellona Meet - Read A/N

awww  they are cute together.



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:44 AM Title: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party

I love when you include Addy with Edward and Bella. I love reading about them being a family. I have been meaning to ask you a question.  Peter has mentioned that Charlie's mate is there in Twilight. How does he know this???????



Author's Response:

When I wrote the story, I pretty much gave everyone their original powers and tried to keep their personalities similar, except for a few people.  If a situation is different on Planet Twilight that would change their personality....then I changed their personality.  For example, Jacob never got a chance to fall in love with Bella, so they are just friends....I have a few more examples of changes as the story progresses.  Remember that Peter has a way of knowing stuff.  His power is similar to Alice's.  But his feelings are more absolute and are not altered by decisions....like Alice's.  So Peter has had one of his 'feelings' that Charlie is different and that his mate is on Twilight.  I hope that clears it up for you.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 2:43 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage

The cabin is very rustic. I am really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is sort of a get-away from most of the modern conveniences.  You can go out there and really be alone.  Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:38 AM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books

Ok, I was not excepting Bella to not be human. This is really getting interesting. Can't wait for more. Off to read. Thanks for sharing this story with us.



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it and thanks so much for all the reviews!  I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:36 AM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

Wow, that was amazing :)  Really loved it so much :)  I hope you are safe now that the storms are over :)  Also, love the baby drecks, so cute!  So happy the baby finally cooperated!  I cannot wait to see what they name her!  Bella is so lucky to be eating ice cream all the time and NOT gain (a lot of) weight...I LOVE ice cream, unfortunately, my body also loves to show its appreciation for the ice cream in the form of weight, boo.  Wonder what Bella will get Edward for his birthday?



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Yes, we are safe and I finally have power, it costs a fortune to run a gas generator.  Glad you like the drecks, I found a breed of ducks that look like a cross between a chicken and a duck.  I need to get to thinking on names, haven't considered one yet.  My body does bad things with ice cream too...lol.  Haven't decided on birthday present....need to put my thinking cap on.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:36 AM Title: Morning Lovin'

Loved the beginning of this chapter. I kind of wish she would have peed on him. It would have taught him a lesson. lol. Very sexy lemon.



Author's Response:

Yea, but then she would have wet bedsheets.....although it isn't like they are not getting wet when they have sex.  But expulsion fluid is different than pee....yuck...lol.  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:34 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion

GREAT LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!! I can not believe that Carlisle came to their homeymoon time. That was funny. VERY VERY interesting chapter.



Author's Response:

Carlisle was in doctor dad mode.  He was really concerned for Bella.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:32 AM Title: Reception Part Three

I busted out laughing at what Edward had done to James. I am glad that everything worked out. Tanya is one crazy person. I hope they don't let Tanya out anytime soon.



Author's Response:

Yep, desperate times call for deperate measures....lol.  Yes Tanya is crazy and will be locked up....but that doesn't mean she won't escape.  I will always have her in my back pocket when I need some drama.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:30 AM Title: Reception Part Two

OMG!!!! I was a little lost at the beginning of this chapter. WOW!!!! Lots of stuff was going on. I am glad that Edward is friends with the werewolfs. I am glad that Addy was taken out of the room.



Author's Response:

I had to add some drama in there.  The wolves are part of the protection team of Forks Community.  No, Addy doesn't need to see any violence.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:28 AM Title: Reception Part One

Leave it to Emmett to be catty. Jasper and Edward surprised me the way they reacted to Emmett, their own brother. But I guess with everyone else in the room and they were feeling and hearing them too.



Author's Response:

They both just had an overwhelming experience and they are bombarded with new gifts and the room is crowded with males......everyone is considered an enemy when it comes to their mate, at least until they can get a handle on everything.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:26 AM Title: First Taste

That was HOT HOT HOT !!!!!!!!!! You needed a panty warning at the beginning. lol.



Author's Response:

LOL, never given one of those kind of warnings before.  You better heed the lemon warnings when I give them then....lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:25 AM Title: Binding Ceremony

I am loving the way you write Addy. It is soooo sweet. I loved reading about the memories.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2011 1:23 AM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya

I am so glad that Tanya did not hurt Addy. I was afriad that she was going to get to Addy and use Addy against Edward. Bella is taking all of this very well. I have gone to your blog and I love the pictures. I am glad you put the one of Addy's profile on there. I was trying to figure out exactly what she looked like and I was having a hard time getting it into my head. I am loving your story.



Author's Response:

Tanya had only one goal in mind and that was to hurt Bella.  She really isn't concerned with Addy.  She only got pregnant to get Edward and when that did not work, she lost interest in her.  I drew a picture of Addy and it is under the link that says Adanna Esme. The link is located above the chapter listings.  Thanks for the review!  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:43 PM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour

I am so glad that Addy likes Bella. I was afraid that she would not. I am assuming that Addy has Edward's personality and not Tanya's.



Author's Response:

I gave her my son's personality....lol.  She was raised by Esme and Edward, so will have a sweet personality.  Hope you are checking out my blog, have lots of pics that go with the chapters.  Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:43 PM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

WOW!!!!! Edward has a daughter. I can not believe that they still let Tanya near Edward or Addy. Sounds like it is going to be some fireworks at the wedding.



Author's Response:

Tanya's family is the only family that Carlisle has left, plus her father is former Volturi royalty.  So to prevent rifts, they made a deal with Tanya that she was to stay away from Edward and Addy.  If she did this, then she would not be charged with rape or fired.  She had been civil up until this point.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:42 PM Title: Edward's Rape

Welll.....Tanya sure was busy and mischievious. Off to read the net chapter to see if Tanya was/is pregnant.



Author's Response:

Yes, Tanya was very bad.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 9:42 PM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

Let me guess, Tanya was coming in and giving Edward head. But what about marking her with his scent???? Would that not tie them together??/



Author's Response:

That is what Tanya wanted, she wanted to be tied to Edward.  She is delusional.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:41 PM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns

OMG!!!! Poor Bella. How embarrassing.



Author's Response:

Well naive is how they wanted the girls and naive is what they got...lol.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:39 PM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past

I am glad that the girls got to talk to Rose. Now maybe she will give Emmett a chance.



Author's Response:

It is not going to be that easy to convince Rose.  She will be a tough cookie to crack.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:35 PM Title: Tattoos and Gowns

The girls seemed very calm about getting their tattoos. Why is Esme making a dress for herself? Is it the same as on Earth, mother of the groom.



Author's Response:

Well, that is a common thing to do to the girls, they had learned about that at the training facility.  Since they were previously chosen by the Cullens, the girls were taught or told everything about how the Cullen's live.  So there won't be many suprises that the girls will encounter.  Yes, Esme is making herself a dress so that she will look nice.  It would be similar to being the mother of the groom.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:34 PM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown

This is getting interesting.



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:13 PM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

There seems to be a baby boom going on in this small town. Carlisle and Edward are going to be busy.



Author's Response:

Yes, that was the purpose of the community....repulate the planet.  They will certainly be doing their small part.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:11 PM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day

Thanks for Edward's POV. I like seeing into others POV.



Author's Response:

I switch up POV's as the story progresses.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 7:10 PM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

Leave it to Rose. What is she thinking?? Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Well, Rose seems to want everyone to know how stubborn she is....lol.  She wants them to know she won't go down without a fight.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 3:02 PM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

woo hoo for baby girl



Author's Response:

LOL, glad it excited you.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:26 PM Title: He Picked Me

Leave it to Rose to start trouble.



Author's Response:

Rose is just being Rose, she is extremely stubborn and set in her ways.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:25 PM Title: The New Age Begins

Very interesting. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2011 1:10 AM Title: Movies, Lovin', Ultrasound, Garden Time, & Drecks

Sorry about the weather.  Glad you are ok!  Thanks for the update; it was truly missed.



Author's Response:

We finally got our power back on, but still waiting on the insurance adjuster to check the damage to our house.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2011 10:28 AM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

I like this solution for Alice and Jasper. Alic was never one for sharing.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:21 PM Title: Rosalie, What are You Doing?

OMG! Yeah, Rose made a big mistake. I wonder if they'll get her back. I'm liking all the different humanoid species! Loved the chapter. I'll be back for more =)



Author's Response:

Rose is making one last ditch effort to escape.  Thanks so much for all the reviews and ratings!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:00 PM Title: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'

 I enjoyed Charlie's POV. And I'm s'cited for Angela. She's one of my favorite characters. The arrival of Lauren and Jessica make me nervous. lol Loved the chapter and the pics too.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and I like Angela too.  Lauren and Jessica would make anyone nervous....lol.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:41 PM Title: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting

It's been ages since I watched the Aristocats. I love Disney classics. lol I enjoyed the piano scene when Addy was purring. Too sweet. Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

I love Disney and Pixar.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:02 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy

I'm happy that Charlie and Sue will become mates! I'm glad that Charlie will be staying on Planet Twilight. The Addy and Charlie scene was too cute. Awesome chapter and I like the pics too.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the new developments and pics and thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 3:15 AM Title: The New Age Begins

I was trying so hard to understand it!  MY husband and I watched the final season of Big Love last week and as much as I tried I  don't think I could get past the jealousy.  hmmmm.  I think it would eaat away at you slowly.  I sort of resented Cassandra.



Author's Response:

I have read several poly stories and if written well, the situation didn't bother me, but only if every one was happy with the situation.  This is only fiction.  I mean, I wouldn't want to share my husband or be a slave or get kidnapped when I was 14 to get sent to another planet.  Anyway, it really caused a problem with my readers on FF, so I changed it.  Alice and Jasper are only side characters in my story and it was easier to change the situation, than endure the negative comments.  Writing fan fiction is supposed to be fun, not stressing.  Thanks for the review!  I hope you continue to read my story!

Reviewer: avidreader69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 2:24 AM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

Thank God, I really hated the thought of ALice having to share Jasper!



Author's Response:

Well, now she won't.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:52 AM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

so her daily dose, does thatr mean Edward got a BJ??????



Author's Response:

LOL, yes, it does.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2011 1:19 AM Title: Change of Plans and Tour of Homes

another really good chapter1!!!! loved it!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!

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