Date: 12 Apr 2011 12:04 AM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
rose will be trouble for awhile I think. Glad emily is there willingly.
Author's Response:
Yes, it takes Rose a little bit to warm up to the situation. There are several in Forks Community that are rescue cases, including Emily. Thanks again!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:58 PM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
ah so carlslise is a head kidnapper. Okey dokey.
Author's Response:
Yes, he is one of the ones responsible for the helping to start the extractions and he started his own community. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:43 PM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
hmmm wonder how much trouble rosie is gonna be.
Author's Response:
She is put in Twilight time-out, gives her time to think about what she has done. Thanks again!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:39 PM Title: He Picked Me
lol em is gonna have fun with rosie.
Author's Response:
Rose is a handful to start out with....but she finally warms up to him. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:36 PM Title: The New Age Begins
naughty kidnapping aliens huh.
Author's Response:
Yep, trying to get their population back up to par. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:19 PM Title: Felix and Bellona
Man, he is a biggin!
Author's Response:
Yep, can't you see them being able to destroy a regular house?......lol. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 8:49 PM Title: Felix and Bellona
Wow, that was GREAT! I love these drawings so much! I wish I could draw :( My roommate can, she is an Art/English major, lucky duck ;) Oh well :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and pics! Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 7:44 PM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
I love how devoted the mates are to each other.
Author's Response:
Glad you like that part and thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 7:40 PM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
I think you would be hard-pressed to find a man who would turn down that offer!
Author's Response:
He wouldn't be a very smart man if he did...lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:07 AM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
Great writing, I am thourghly enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:24 AM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
Wow, amazing job, once again! I wonder what the other thing she wants to talk about is?
Author's Response:
Glad you have enjoyed the story so far. She wants to know what is going on with Cassandra. Thanks so much for all the reviews!!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:15 AM Title: Matching up Mates
That was amazing! I really loved it so much :) One minor mistake I found here "Why is Peter and Alice being so cryptic?" Should be "Why ARE Peter and Alice being so cryptic, since there are two people involved :)
Author's Response:
Fixed the mistake. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for pointing out the boo-boo. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:08 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
Wow, amazing job, once again :) Really loved it :)
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for much for all the reviews!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:14 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
That was amazing! Really loved it so much :) Poor Addy, I can only imagine what her fur looked like after the baby shower. One of the disadvantages to wearing white or in her case, having white fur ;)
Author's Response:
In her case, you can't bleach it out....so it just has to wear off, but she enjoyed the cup cakes...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chat with Friends and Galleos Jewelry
AMAZING! I really cannot wait for more! Edward and Bella's baby is behaving like me, modest even in the womb ;) But, for their sake, I hope that they can find out for sure that it is a girl ;) Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
As always, glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Morning Outdoor Lovin' and Night Out on the Town
Wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it so much! I wish movies here had intermission :)
Author's Response:
They used to but stopped it, it was always a good time to go to the bathroom or get food. So I my theater in my story has intermission...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:11 AM Title: Stay Pharmacy, Family Dinner, and Lil' Lovin'
GAH, amazing job, once again! I really want to live in this world now...with Edward or Emmett ;) Hehe
Author's Response:
I am more of an Edward or Jasper fan, Emmett acts like too big of a kid for me. Thanks again!!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:01 AM Title: Didyme, Ultrasound, and Baby Shower
That was INCREDIBLE! That baby shower was great! I love strawberries...my mom always says "The Lord could have made something better than a strawberry, but He didn't ;)" hehe. Also, I noticed cloth diapers being used, if you want to also use these diapers, it would be cool, they are called gDiapers (http://www.gdiapers.com) and you can FLUSH, compost or throw the lining away. You keep using the outside :)
Author's Response:
That is a lot better than disposable diapers. Thanks for the tip and thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! So happy Makenna's babies are ok :) I also love the birth announcements ;) Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 11:52 PM Title: Imprints, Ultrasound, Night Out on the Town
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! I REALLY love the idea of using reusable things at the movie theatre :) I wish our movie theatres did that ;)
Author's Response:
Maybe someday when everyone gets earth conscience enough. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:20 PM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
Great chapter, I so enjoy this universe! I'm also really glad there is no angst! I don't mind some drama, but thank you for the lack of angst!
I'm also excited about the baby, I love how Edward talks to her in the belly! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoying the story and I am not an angst person myself. I have enough angst in RL without having to write it. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:48 AM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:27 AM Title: The New Age Begins
Amazing job, once again :) I really loved it :)
Author's Response:
Glad you did and thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:07 AM Title: Carlisle's POV and Building Meeting
Wow, great job! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, even though it wasn't a glamorous chapter. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 6:43 AM Title: Bonding Ceremony, Meet the Mates, Hot Lovin'
AMAZING! I really loved it once again :) I also noticed that once again, you used "your" instead of "you're"...here “Oh, baby, your emitting a charge and it makes me feel wonderful, your touch feels different than it has in the past. It feels so good, keep going baby. I'm yours, all yours,” he growled out. “Your so big and hard and yes, you are mine!" Just fix that and it will be PERFECT :)
Author's Response:
Fixed it also and thanks again. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 6:36 AM Title: Homelife, Little Bit of Lovin', Training Center
That was amazing! I really loved it! Monster's Inc. is one of my favorite movies by Pixar :) One minor thing I noticed "“Yes, Cutie, I am going to live with you and your pretty too. My name is Angela,” she said to her." Should be "you're pretty too" :)
Author's Response:
Ok, fixed it! Thanks for telling me about it. I don't have a beta, so there is bound to be some mistakes every now and then. Although I see beta'd stories with mistakes.
I like Monster's Inc. too. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 5:16 AM Title: Family Time and Emmett's POV
Wow, that was amazing :) Once again, I wish I could sew more than I can ;)
Author's Response:
I can crochet, but could never could catch on to knitting. It takes more patience than I have...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 5:03 AM Title: Victoria's Staying, Rosalie's Bound, Family Lunch
Amazing job, once again! I wish I could sew, but I can barely sew up a hole in my jeans/stuffed animals ;)
Author's Response:
I can, just don't take time to do it anymore. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:44 AM Title: The Hunt is On!
Gah, amazing job, so much! So happy everyone is ok :)
Author's Response:
Victoria is a little worse for wear, but it turned out ok. Thanks again!!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:39 AM Title: Rosalie, What are You Doing?
OH SNAP! I really hope they can save Rosalie and get James and Victoria (and possibly Irina too. Kate seems like she is going to be a good person :)
Author's Response:
The good guys win. Thanks again!!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:31 AM Title: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'
I really loved it so much :) That chute is a great idea ;) Cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Although she lost some of her clumsiness when she changed into a faen, she still doesn't need to be carrying laundry down the stairs. Since they can afford to put in a chute, then that is the way to go. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 4:03 AM Title: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting
That was amazing! So happy for everyone :) I love that Addy purrs. Tink purrs LOUDLY ;) I have wondered this for a while but kept forgetting to ask...does Addy take naps in the afternoon, since she is so young (and being half felinas, cats nap constantly)? Just curious :)
Author's Response:
I hadn't really thought about naps, but I am sure she would. She gets up about 8 o'clock every morning, so I am sure she would tire out in the early afternoon. I have been writing in some of Bella's naps, so you could say Addy is taking one at the same time. My daughter took naps till she started school and my son, once he got out of the baby stage...never took one unless he was sick. So all kids are different. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 1:03 AM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
so sweet, how he always wants to take care of her. Glad not many men would be reading fan fic or we woudl all have to start getting sparks inour fingers for them LOL
Author's Response:
It is a wonder more men aren't reading fanfiction, as much sex goes on in a lot of the stories. They may be closet readers....lol. I don't know about sparks, but I sure could put some folks in a bubble sometimes. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 9:49 PM Title: Ladies Discussion and Lil' Bit of Lovin'
yey! belly time! i love it!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review. But your rating says something different. ?
Date: 09 Apr 2011 9:18 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
Wow, that was amazing! So happy that Addy and Charlie bonded so quickly :) Sue is so pretty :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:59 PM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
Amazing job, once again! I would be just as confused as Charlie if I had been told all of this information in only a few hours ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah, who believes in aliens and I would think it would have to be some big elaborate joke. Well some people believe in aliens...but anyway. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:41 PM Title: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid
Wow, amazing job, once again! I think I may need this Edward's help sleeping some times ;)
Author's Response:
It would be nice....lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:29 PM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
Wow, amazing job, once again!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 8:07 PM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
So amazing :) I really loved it so much! Question, since you mentioned Bella is now immortal, is Edward immortal too? Just curious, because I am sure she cannot live without him and he cannot do the same. Man, reading this chapter makes me really want some smores!
Author's Response:
The Twilighters have a very long livespan, so the story will be over long before we have to worry about that. Thanks for the update!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:36 PM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
Wow, that was amazing! I really love homemade bread, so jealous they get some ;) I hope Bella won't overwork her self anymore :)
Author's Response:
She learned her lesson and spread her work out more, so she wouldn't do so much at one time. Thanks!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:20 PM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
That was amazing :) I really loved it! I was worried about Addy's bath time too :)
Author's Response:
I was thinking, her being similar to a cat....she might not like a bath, but what kid doesn't like a bath...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 7:00 AM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
Wow, amazing job, once again! I wonder if it really is a girl? I love the list for the dairy :)
Author's Response:
I plan on it being a girl. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:52 AM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
YAY! I KNEW IT! I am SO happy for them :)
Author's Response:
It wouldn't take long as much as they are doing it....lol. Thanks!!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:43 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
Wow, amazing job, once again :) Really loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:33 AM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon
Wow, amazing job! So precious to have Addy start so young, but still have her enjoy it. She will love it because she probably wants to be "just like Mama Angel" :) I know sometimes I wanted to be just like my mom when I was younger :)
Author's Response:
If you start them out young helping, they get used to it and think of it as normal.....she still has plenty of time to play and be a kid. Thanks again!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:27 AM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
Amazing job, once again :) I really loved it! I am starting to think Bella needs to wear skirts all the time...you know as Edward would say "easy access" ;)
Author's Response:
She only wears long dresses. Except when she works in the garden, she gets to wear leggings. Thanks again!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:21 AM Title: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party
Amazing :) I really loved it! I would love the ability to talk to animals, mostly because my cats do some things that annoy me and I want to knwo what they are thinking ;)
Author's Response:
I am not sure I would want to know what mine are thinking...lol. They would probably be fussing at me about something. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:13 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
AMAZING! I really loved it so much! I also LOVED the picture someone (I don't know if it was you or not) drew of Addy on your blog, so precious!
Author's Response:
I drew the one under the link that says Adanna Esme. I didn't draw the one where I think she would look the age 5 or 6. Thanks again!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:10 AM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Wow, that was amazing! I think I know what is "wrong" with Bella ;) Hehe. Is there a difference in these pregnancies, just wondering :) Is the picture of Bella what she is supposed to look like now that it has been discovered she is a faen?
Author's Response:
Each time they have sex and his fluid is entering her, she is changing to her authentic self....which is a faen. She is changing little by little. So I doctored a picture to make it look like she sort of glows. She still looks the same, other than she grew a few inches and glows and is now immortal. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:04 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
Gah, amazing job, once again! I wonder what their sex life will be like whenever Bella gets pregnant? Maybe just like this ;)
Author's Response:
They are always going to want sex.....lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:57 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
WOW, amazing job, once again! Really loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:36 AM Title: Reception Part Three
Wow, that was amazing :) I think James deserved that violence ;)
Author's Response:
LOL, You didn't mind violence to James' manly parts, huh? He is a mean character in my story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:17 AM Title: Reception Part Two
Gah, amazing job, once again! Poor Bella, I hope they can be alone soon :)
Author's Response:
It won't be long until the honeymoon night. Thanks again!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:50 AM Title: Reception Part One
Gah, amazing job, once again! Addy is adorable, really love her so much :)
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:42 AM Title: First Taste
HOLY SHIT! That was INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I really cannot wait for their wedding night now ;)
Author's Response:
LOL, thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:37 AM Title: Binding Ceremony
Gah, that was INCREDIBLE! Guess I should have read this chapter before asking how old Bella was...she is 18 right?
Author's Response:
Yes, but I have no problem answering your questions. Thanks again!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:29 AM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much :) I was not happy to see Tanya but I hope that she can stay away forever! Addy is so precious :) How old is Bella? I know Edward is 35, but just curious on Bella :)
Author's Response:
Bella is 18, a character list with all the ages is posted under my profile as Planet Twilight Outtakes. It has a glossary of my terms and a character list in it. But Rose, Alice, and Bella are all 18...the age they can be chosen as mates. Thanks again for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:25 AM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it! Their house is GORGEOUS! I have a question, what does the tattoo look like?
Author's Response:
Thanks, I have put up pics of the tattoo. Although I need to touch up the one on Bella's arm because I never intended to blow it up that big. It is under chapter 6. Thanks!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:20 AM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
Wow, really loved it so much! Addy sounds adorable :) Cannot wait for the ceremony :) So happy Bella is giong to adopt her :)
Author's Response:
Thanks again for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:20 AM Title: Edward's Rape
OH SNAP! I really loved this so much!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks again!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:19 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
Wow, sounds amazing! Poor Edward!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:14 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
Gah, amazing job, once again! I will DEFINITELY check out your blog :)
Author's Response:
Again, glad you are enjoying the story and thanks so much for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 4:00 AM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
Amazing job, once again :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and thanks for the review. You are fixing to get to the chapters that have pictures. When you go to the blog, click 'March' under 'Blog Archive' and you can pull up the chapters.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:59 AM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
This story is amazing :) I really love it so much! I cannot wait to learn more about this planet ;)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 12:58 AM Title: Matching up Mates
:) need a reminder on how far along bella is. How is charlie doing?
Author's Response:
She is a little over 19 weeks, going to have to do a chart with all the pregnant ladies on it....I am not going to be able to keep up with them all...lol. Charlie has been busy with his new job and his new mate and will be even busier with the Didyme situation. I know I need to squeeze some Bella/Charlie/Addy time in there somewhere. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:37 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
I love this story. Great writing, I am hooked!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Date: 08 Apr 2011 2:44 AM Title: Matching up Mates
interesting so is cassandra going to be there breeder or are they allowed to have a second wife?
Author's Response:
Cassandra will be a breeder, but will be treated as a mate....only the humans have wives on Twilight. Although a mate is technically the same thing. Alice will want her to be happy, so she will be treated well and there will be little difference in Alice and Cassandra's status. I will do an Alice POV to explain why it is happening. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 2:06 AM Title: Matching up Mates
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Your welcome and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:46 PM Title: Matching up Mates
:)
so happy to see the update today!
Author's Response:
Thanks for my smiley face, review, and rating! Have a great night!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:18 PM Title: Matching up Mates
I want to be Esme and Carlise's guest. Man that bedroom is to die for!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the pics. I have fun going through pictures, trying to figure out what would fit best in each house. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:56 PM Title: Matching up Mates
Wow! I have been glued to this story since saw it this morning. I Can't believe I hadn't come across it before. Love the concept of it all - you obviously have a great imagination! Looking forward to reading future chapters!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating! Be sure and check out my pics.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:48 PM Title: Matching up Mates
wow lots of bonding in this one! I wish it was that easy here!!!haha
Author's Response:
Well, we would need a keen sense of smell and the mating pull and we would be set up...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:15 PM Title: Matching up Mates
please write some more chapters today
lovely chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I will add a chapter every 2-3 days.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:39 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
Will they every find out about how Charlie was shielded to Forks and will they every find his family? I know Rene was a nut but did she know about Charlie being different? You may have mentioned about Rene's feelings on Bella disappearing if not, what was her feelings on this? Just wondering. I am truly in love with this story. I love all the pics on your blog as well!
Author's Response:
I hadn't thought about covering Charlie's real family, they would more than likely be still on Earth. Charlie discussed that Renee was more upset about losing the child support than she was Bella. Glad you are enjoying the story and the pics. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:20 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
oooh another faerie. Great chap
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:26 AM Title: Makenna's Babies, Dinner, Esme's Past
She is actually a fox on the blog, you go Marcus!!!
Author's Response:
Never knew what she looked like, so why not make her hot.....lol. Thanks for the review and the rating!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 11:48 PM Title: Charlie's Back, Lil' Lovin', Bonfire
I think this is probably one of my all time favorite stories. The details are just unreal.
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review and rating! I hope you are checking out my pics too!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 9:43 PM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
wonderful. :)
...(is this good?) I can just say 'wonderful' and you are ok with that?
and I always WONDERED about those coffee cups!
Author's Response:
You can leave me a smiley face and I will be happy with that...:) I am not picky, I just like knowing folks are enjoying the story enough to leave a review. I really appreciate it! Whether it be a smiley face, one word, or a whole paragraph, it doesn't matter to me. You are taking time to acknowledge you enjoyed what you read. Thanks so much for this review and rating!
Date: 06 Apr 2011 8:48 PM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
Ok, I'll admit it...I've been lurking!
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed each chapter...I know it's iimportant to the authors, but I really suck at reviews!
I am loving this story though and wanted you to know. I love the universe you've put us all in, and the characteristics everyone has...it's really amazing!
I have now gotten hooked on the pics on the blog, and am enjoying being fully immersed into the story!
Well done!! (see, this is where I suck!) but I wanted you to know you had another follower, and she's very pleased...she's just quiet and lurking about...
Plus, I don't know what the rating thing is, and I'm afraid I'll screw you up somehow, is 10 like the best? so, I'm basically giving you a grade? ummmm...I'm not comfortable with that...What kind of scale does a person use? is there a curve? ugh...the pressure!!!
Author's Response:
lol, you are putting too much pressure on yourself. A smiley face would be fine, at least I know you are out there enjoying the story. You do not have to be elaborate with me. I am really glad that you are enjoying the story and pics. Yes, 10 is the best and that would be those 5 cups you see on the reviews. You do not have to give me a rating unless you want to, you can go back and look at my reviews and see that not everyone gives ratings. Thanks for this review and I hope you keep enjoying the story!
Date: 06 Apr 2011 2:14 PM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
These other communities sound horrible. I would not want to live there.
Author's Response:
They are not all like Forks Community. Some might be similar, but others are not. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06 Apr 2011 1:31 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
The story is very different.
Author's Response:
Well, that could be a good or a bad thing...lol. Whatever it is, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2011 1:22 AM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 10:33 PM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
Jessica, Lauren and Tyler should fit right in at their new community!
Author's Response:
Yes, they should. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 9:23 PM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
I know before you said 54 chapters, hope there are more than that !!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, that is how many were on Fanfiction at the time, I put some of the chapters together when I uploaded them here. So there is a difference in chapter numbers for the two sites, this site has less, because of the doubleing up of chapters. I usually write a chapter and update every two to three days. So in other words, both sites are getting the chapters as I write them. Did you not like the chapter? I am asking because of the rating you gave me.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 7:37 PM Title: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls
Hello! I just wanted to say that I love this story! It is so unique and original! I was wondering why the chapters are getting shorter? I guess I was getting spoiled with the super long chapters and daily updates lol. I also think I read somewhere that this a a re-work of the original? Do you have the original posted anywhere? I love watching writers progress and grow in their writing.
Looking forward to reading more!
-Emily
Author's Response:
I had added some chapters together and that is the reason some of the chapters were longer. The reason I was so quick at posting at first was because I already had that part written. It isn't a re-work, it is just posted on Fanfiction and Fanfiction was down. I wanted a second place to have my story so that if the site went down again, there would be a place for my readers to go for my updates. Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 8:37 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
I am loving this story! Cant wait to read more.
would love to see maybe an alternate reality where they needed to use a breeder...just thought it would be an interesting story line!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and you just might get your wish. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:42 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
They seem to have weddings every couple of weeks in this community. This seems to keep the ladies busy with all of the dressmaking. Alice should be happy. Bella should be happy going to the library. She loves to read. I hope they can find Mike a good mate. He needs a good wife.
Author's Response:
I think I found him a gal in this group they will be picking up in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 6:49 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
i love the story so far ...yay getting rid of jessica and lauren :)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and yes, I got rid of the them...lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:25 PM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
I really love this version of the twilight out of box story. You have captured it so well in this re-write. Awesome!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:46 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
i love this story, fresh and orignal. I have enjoyed reading each chater. Sorry for not reviewing more often, but i just wanted to get to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving me this review! I really appreciate it and glad you enjoyed my story!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 5:15 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
Te escrevo do Brasil, e amo sua fic. Ela é diferente por completo do usual que contam por aqui neste site. Acho bem criativa além de diferente, com uma história romântica quente e sex de outro mundo, com conteúdo, mais que agrada bem a quem lê. Não tenho nada para reclamar dela, nem quero que coloque nada que eu queira(pelo menos até agora), acho que a sua criatividade já dá vida o suficiente para nós leitores. Acho que o importante é a sua criatividade que faz com que fiquemos com vontade de querer ler mais e mais e a sua fic é ótima prendendo nossa atenção e nos deixando curiosos e satisfeito com a história cada vez mais.Cada vez mais nós queremos mais e mais.
Mas também acho importante a interação das pessoas desde que não modifiquem a essência desta que é a alma do autor. Abraços do Rio de Janeiro,Brasil
Author's Response:
Fico feliz que você está gostando da história, eu espero que você esteja olhando para as fotos também. Eles ajudam a visualizar o que está acontecendo em minha mente. Muito obrigado pelas suas amáveis r03;r03;palavras e obrigado por deixar a avaliação e classificação! Abraços do Tennessee, Estados Unidos da América
Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:26 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
I would like to see some more Edward and Bella loving and some Edward, Bella, and Addy interaction.
Author's Response:
Well, I will always sprinkle a little lovin' here and there and I will try to give Addy some more chapter time. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:32 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
:) it is english but sometimes mis-spelled. hope that is ok..:) love theupdate
Author's Response:
English is definitely ok! :)......blogspot keeps up with browsers that visit and I noticed a lot of people used Chrome, got to investigating, and found out it translates whole pages, easily. I knew I was getting read by people from over 75 countries on fanfiction....have no clue on this site. So even though the page is translated for them, they may not know how to respond to me in English. So now I am using Chrome and found a great transation tool to answer them back. Anyway more than you probably wanted to know. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:19 AM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
thanks good chapter i had to re read the an the phone thing i can't twcs on my phone fanfiction yes but not this thanks
Author's Response:
So I can take that message out for TWCS then. Folks had said they couldn't leave reviews because they were reading the story on the phone. I just wanted to see who would be willing to leave a review. I wanted to see if there is still enough interest to read the story. I see a high read count on both sites, but few reviews. Thanks for the review and rating! I really appreciate it!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:08 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
Love the cow cake!! When does my flight for twilight leave? Lol. Great chap
Author's Response:
I like the pic too, there were some cow cakes out there too...that looked like real cows. Too realistic looking to be cutting into a dairy cow....lol.
Sorry, no flight, just a place in my head...lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:46 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
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Author's Response:
Thanks for the smiley face and rating!!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:39 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
still loving your story. Look forward to the next chapter.....
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:17 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
i'm really injoying this story thank you for sharing
angel
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:15 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
you know what? i want some daddy and belly time! i always loved it when my hubbie talked to mine!
Author's Response:
That is an easy request and I am sure you will see some more daddy and belly time coming up. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 7:47 PM Title: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding
Hi I am hospital bound right now But I wanted to let you know I am reading Just not right now Hope to be home by Wednesday......
Author's Response:
I am so sorry to hear that you are in the hospital. I had been wondering where you were, because you had been giving me reviews per chapter and I could tell where were in the story. Then I saw this review for the last chapter and went back to look and see if I had the right user name, before I even read your message. I know on one of your earlier reviews you mentioned dealing with doctors, sorry it must of got to the point of putting you in the hospital. Hope you get to feeling better and I hope your wishes come true about getting to go home Wednesday. Thanks for the review and rating!