Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:19 PM Title: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'
will u please place it again i just dont want to see addy in black i mean original colours like u showed nahuel and others
Author's Response:
I will place her in a chapter when she next appears, but she is not prominent in the next few chapters. But you can see her now, if you go to the blogspot address I list in the chapters. She is in Chapter 31 pictures. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:55 PM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Interesting twist! Glad to see Carlise has a heart. He had me worried for a bit because it seemed like all he did was bark out orders to everyone!
Author's Response:
He just had to get the bluff in on the girls, so they wouldn't try to run away. He warms up as the story progresses. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:07 PM Title: First Taste
Happy *clit lickin'* Birthday to me Glad I saved that for today Thanks for sharing Maybe I should have my husband read that Um YES!!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL, you like that huh? If today is really your birthday, than Happy Birthday to you! Your welcome on my sharing the story. Thanks so much for all the reviews and ratings!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:50 PM Title: Binding Ceremony
Wow they met that early in her life Loved it very much and this is getting good.....
Author's Response:
Yes, and Edward hadn't even realized it was her. Thanks again for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:35 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
Please do show the complete picture of addy and please not in the shadow form
Author's Response:
I placed it on the at the blogspot address. Look on the right side of the blog and click Chapter 31(TWCS). Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:18 PM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
I thought she was going to be a problem I hope her being locked makes it done but I bet not she is not done yet thanks for sharing this with us......
Author's Response:
Not sure when Tanya will reappear in the future, but she hasn't been gotten rid of yet. Thanks for the review and rating.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:49 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
Well I am glad that Charlie will be a lot happier on planet Twilight than on Earth. Seems like they will have a powerful power. I was really cute the way Charlie fell in love with Addy.
Author's Response:
Yes, Charlie will fit right in with the folks on Planet Twilight. It would be difficult not to fall in love with her. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:25 PM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour
Hay girl live it up he wants to take care of you let him please some of us don't get that thanks for sharing this with us.....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:59 PM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
I can tell Tanya is going to be one of those people in t he story you just want to see dead and it sounds like the baby won't care anyways Can't wait to see what will happen next thanks for sharing.....
Author's Response:
Tanya is seriously deranged in my story. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:44 PM Title: Edward's Rape
OMG What a bitch and he still kept her araound and od course shes pregnant I bet she's cute I hope they keep her away from the egg doner.....
Author's Response:
Her being the daughter of an ex-ruling class citizen lets her get off easily, plus she is family. She will not be part of her daughter's life. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:22 PM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
if you don't know what a smore it you dave never truly lived (unless you are alergic to chocolate then you poor poor person) great chappy
Author's Response:
Thanks, on the other site, I had people ask questions about some of the food items. So I started putting pictures up because there were people from over 75 countries reading the story and I want everyone to understand what I am trying to get across. That is why I am so detailed. Thanks so much for the review.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:58 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
:) Question 7 kids from forks. Mike, Eric, Tyler I wonder who else ???? and who were they peeping on???
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I bet you can guess who those girls were and you will find out in a few chapters. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:48 PM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
ah ha so charlei meets sue, clever girl, that caught me by surprise
Author's Response:
Yes, an elf and a faerie, what a pair...lol. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:25 PM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
I'm just loving this story. You are soo blowing me away with your imagination!! WOW, just WOW!!!
The lemons are great and all aspects of this story (and there's a lot of them) flow beautifully together.
You are doing a great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I really appreciate all the compliments and the review and the rating! Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:33 PM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Your welcome and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:08 PM Title: He Picked Me
This story sounds very interesting. I think I will give it a try.
Author's Response:
Hi, Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy my story!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 11:12 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
WOW!! That was incredible!! Sensual and fuckhot (excuse my language). You did a great job!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review and rating! I really appreciate it!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:33 AM Title: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy
wow Charlie is taking this pretty good. cant wait to see what the binding ceremony is like
Author's Response:
Elf ceremonies are different, they bond their souls together, there is no biting. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:15 AM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
ahahaha and let the binding begin with Charlie...
Author's Response:
It will be love at first sight. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:07 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
I can just tell this is going to be a bad story and I just might have a reson to really hate her thanks for sharing this with us......
Author's Response:
Oh, you definitely won't like Tanya in my story. Your welcome on the sharing part. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:04 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
Hello girl big red flag He knows more than she does but she should have caught that Loved it very much and I am so excited to see what will happen next......
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:16 AM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
Wow and it could have been her I would have said thank you bite me please LOL Loved it and I am excited to see what will happen next.....
Author's Response:
Rosalie is lucky to be on Twilight and not Earth, but it takes her a while to get it. Thanks again for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:01 AM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
I am worried about her also Loved it and thanks for the facts at the bottom....
Author's Response:
Since I am making a lot of this up, I give you facts and definitions at the bottom of the chapters. Then I have uploaded the glossary for the terms in an outtake as a seperate story. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 6:00 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
Hot!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:23 AM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
Do cold showers work for women I guess I will try that out....
Author's Response:
I think a cold shower should knock any kind of desire out of anyone....lol. Thanks for the review and rating!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:08 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
Awww, so sweet! Loved the pics : )
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 5:03 AM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
Uh oh.. Who is there. Great chap
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:55 AM Title: Rosalie's Dress and Charlie's Here
Well Charlie sure took that well. I can only imagain when he sees Addy how he is going to act. But I am thinking she will have wrapped around her little finger soon.
Author's Response:
Well, Charlie had some choices to make and he chose to give Twilight a chance, he will gain alot by his choice. Yes, he will like being an instant granddaddy. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:24 AM Title: A Little Afternoon Delight and Sleep Aid
Edward seems really emotional about Bella. Well I would be too. I love that he is so possesive of her and her scent. I think that is amazing that he can smell her and I like that he scents her with him.
Author's Response:
That scenting process is supposed to keep the other males away. But humans don't have the enhanced senses that the Twilighters or most of the other male humanoid species that she will come in contact with on the planet. In other male would know she was taken and back off. He is in love with her and her enzymes are in his body now. He has the need to keep her safe and protected. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:08 AM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
It seems like planet twilight needs more human females. I love Carlisle's car that is beautiful. I want one.
Author's Response:
They will get some females in later chapters. Carlisle's car was found in my search for futuristic cars. I think it is supposed to be a limousine though. But I thought it would make a cool Carlisle car. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:08 AM Title: Reception Part Three
WOW! : )
Author's Response:
Tanya's brain has jumped off the deep end. Thanks again for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:55 AM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
Jasper to the rescue. How cute. I love it. That they protect each other so much. I love all the love making too.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are protective of family. Lovemaking is what you're supposed to do when you are first married or bound in their case...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
oh my I wonder who that is? I am glad she got help from Esme and Emily. I wish I had help like that when I was pregnant.
Author's Response:
Luckily there are plenty of females to help out, if there wasn't he would hire someone. I wish I had help too. My first time I was pregnant, I tried to push mow my lawn. I ended up almost fainting in the yard and I barely made it back in the house. Needless to say we had a very grassy yard that year. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:31 AM Title: Shopping, More Shopping, Stupid Human Males
so who was that Tyler?
Author's Response:
Yes, that was Tyler, the last of the human males to meet Bella. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:28 AM Title: Reception Part Two
Can't wait to find out what the hell is going on : )
Author's Response:
LOL, the next chappy will tell you. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:23 AM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
I am glad for this inside look because he does not seem to have a anger issues but I guess I will find out more later......
Author's Response:
No, Edward doesn't have an anger issue, unless you try to take Bella from him. You would see his anger. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:22 AM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
lovin it. you are better than McDonalds !!!
Author's Response:
LOL, first time anyone had told me that. Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:17 AM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
I really love that Bella took over for the role of mother for Addy. i think Edward really loves it too. lol. I really like the pictures of the homes they are so beautiful.
Author's Response:
That is how I feel that Bella would have acted in response to Addy. It isn't the child's fault how she arrived to this world. Yes, Edward loves seeing Bella being motherly to Addy. Glad you are enjoying the pics. I did a lot of research to find just the right ones. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:16 AM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
Wow he is nicer than I thought he would be I really hope he stays that way.....
Author's Response:
The men are in love with their mates and they will be nice to them. Thanks so much for your reviews and ratings!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:07 AM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
wow wonder what that was about......
Author's Response:
Edward isn't the only one that is going to be overprotective. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:05 AM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
Addy is so cute. I am glad she is happy abou the baby and not jealous. But then maybe that will come later.
Author's Response:
I don't plan to make her jealous, she will want to help out. She will still get plenty of attention. Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:58 AM Title: He Picked Me
Loved it very much thanks for sharing this with us.....
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks again for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:54 AM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
loved this chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:42 AM Title: Reception Part One
Rut Roh!
Author's Response:
LOL, that's right. Thanks so much for your reviews and ratings! I really appreciate them!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:39 AM Title: The New Age Begins
I am new to this story and I hope to catch up quick thanks for sharing this with us....
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review and rating! I really appreciate them and I hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:31 AM Title: Working too Hard and a Day for Deliveries
You know this is interesting. Very descriptive on the chores. I guess you young women today have never had all that much responsiblity. First thing in the morning is you turn on the oven. Fix coffee. While that is perking the first load of laundry goes in (if you have an automatic washer). The next thing is putting in the breakfast bread in the already heated oven. Next put on the meat that is cooking along with the bread first load of laundry is washed put in basket, then start second load. Bread is now done and meat should be done as well, cook eggs. Serve breakfast. Clean up the table place dishes in dishwater. Second laundry load is now washed, take out put in third load. Now while the dishes soak you and the third load is washing HANG the first two loads on the line. Come back in the house wash the dishes dry them and put them up. Sweep kitchen and mop if necessary. Then the third load is washed, hand it on line. Now if you are done washing clothes you can start cleaning the rest of the house making beads etc. By the time that is mostly done it is time for lunch. After lunch time to check hanging clothes start bringing dried ones in to fold or hang also seperate out ironing items. LOL.. this is how it was with no clothes dryers and no dishwasher. I was in hog heaven to have an electic washing machine @ HOME. Then when I got a dishwasher, I thought life was really great.
Author's Response:
I still hang my clothes out and my dishwasher is broke, so pretty much in the same situation as Bella...lol. But I have a breadmaker that makes my bread, so it does all the work. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:24 AM Title: Jasper Explains and Smores
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Your welcome and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:15 AM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
Oh how cute, he can smell the baby. He seems like he is going to be very overprotective.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, he will be, but he was already about as overprotective as you can get. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:07 AM Title: First Taste
: ) : ) : ) : ) : )
Author's Response:
Loved all the smiley faces and rating! Thanks!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 1:06 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
sounds like a fun place to be.
Author's Response:
I try to make it be. I know it isn't an ideal situation, but I would live there...lol. Thanks again!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:58 AM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Bella is even more special that Edward thought. They are having some really good alone time ;)
Author's Response:
Yes, she is special. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:55 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
Wow that was hot. Cool toilet and office
Author's Response:
Thanks, you know they have toilets that do most of that stuff that I listed. The one pictured does a lot, but the price tag is ridiculous. But they are the Cullen's they can afford it....lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:52 AM Title: Reception Part Three
James is lucky to still be intact. The wolves are a good thing to have around.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are good as security. Forkington is doing them a favor by rescuing them and they protect the town. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:42 AM Title: Binding Ceremony
Great chapter, loved it!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks, as always, for the review and rating!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:27 AM Title: Grillin' Out and Addy's Bath and Bedtime
OH I would kill for that back yard. but alas.. I live in Texas and those pillows wouldn't make it one season.. but if you are that wealthy.. I guess you don't care.
I really love that Addy is so cute with Bella. And Edward seems very happy about it too.
Why do I keep getting this feeling that something horrible is about to happen. Everything has been so sweet and smooth.. I guess I am just thinking that the bottom is going to drop out on these two. I am sure we haven't heard the last of James and the likes.
You know what I love best... Just when I think I am all caught up, you post another chapter... Your the best...Thanks
Author's Response:
The climate where they live is mild year round and thus they will always have a garden available. I am not going to let anything horrible happen, just a little drama a few chapters down the road. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:02 PM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:59 PM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
Is it bad that I kind of wish that I lived there... It just sounds so pleasant. Loved the chapters
Author's Response:
No, I have made it desirable to live there. Even though the women are in the situation that they are in, I want them to enjoy life too. So they don't barely realize the situaton they are living. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:26 PM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
Me likee!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:01 PM Title: You Have Value and Addy's Excited
I am loving this story I wish I got to read the orginial story you based it on but of course this one is soooooooooooooo good.
Author's Response:
It is not based on any other story. I wrote this story myself, but the site I had it uploaded on, is currently not working. I am just uploading it here, so I will have a place for people to read it that is actually functioning. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:39 PM Title: Edward's Rape
Ugh!!
Author's Response:
Sorry, I tried to make it as non-tramatizing as I could. As if that act could not be tramatizing, but I needed it to happen for the story. I didn't want him to willingly participate, I wanted hime to be waiting for his true mate.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:35 PM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
Tanya, that bitch. I hate her. In every story I read, I hate her. I read a story one time where she was a horse. It was hysterical.
Author's Response:
I have read Tanya as a animal too, she is usually in a story somewhere. Her character rubs me the wrong way. She won't take no for an answer in the books and that irks me. So I made her the bad gal in my story. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:27 PM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
I wish the sex talk was that easy. My girls are 9 and 6 and we are already encountering that talk, God forbid. It would be easy if I could just tell them all about it like Esme did but with girls this young, you can't tell them everything, yet, unless you want to scare the shit out of them. Ya know?
Author's Response:
My girl already knew most of it from school, but I think it was more embarrassing for me than it was for her. Good luck with the talk and hope it goes well when you do reveal the birds and bees to them. I wonder where that saying came from anyway, I never see birds and bees doing it....lol Thanks again for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:16 PM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
WOW!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 9:06 PM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
Carlisle seems like a fair man but not the loving, caring, compassionate Carlisle I'm use to. I'm not complaining. Just making an observation.
Author's Response:
Carlisle has to get the bluff in on them, so they wont try to escape. He warms up as the story progresses. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:51 PM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
I'm in awe of your imagination!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I really appreciate the compliment!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:47 PM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
They are soo similar to us. That's wild.
Author's Response:
I just wanted the Twilighter's to be somewhat different from humans. Some of the differences are they are more durable, have heightened senses, longer lifespans, more animalistic during sex, and a somewhat higher intelligence. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:46 PM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
Poor Emmett!! Hopefully Rosalie will come around.
This is soo interesting!!
Author's Response:
It takes Rosalie a while to come to her senses. Thanks again for all the reviews and ratings.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:45 PM Title: He Picked Me
WOW!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:43 PM Title: The New Age Begins
I have read many a story in the last two years and none of them like this one. This is VERY creative and very intriguing. I love it.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and I hope you enjoy continuing to read it! Thanks so much for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:34 PM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour
Cute chapter! : )
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:33 PM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
definitely still enjoying your story. How many chapters do you think this will be?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and rating! I have written 54, but I am combining some of them to put on this site. There will be more after that. But I am having to add to my new blog as I add chapters, so it is taking some time to add the chapters to this site.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 8:11 PM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
so nice :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:54 PM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
This is one crazy planet with all the crossbreds. Really enjoying your story. It is very unique and your brain must hurt from all the creavity you put into this crazy planet, LOL!
Author's Response:
Planet Twilight wants to increase their population and they are doing it with any humanoid species that is available to them. Thanks again for the review and rating!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:22 PM Title: Hot Steamy Night of Lovin', You're Having My Baby
loved it please write the next chapter soon
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 7:12 PM Title: Edward's Rape
WOW! Didn't see that one coming! : )
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review and rating!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:26 PM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
Yes I am very much enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing. Your Edward pov is wonderful, I think you did a great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it!!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:58 PM Title: The New Age Begins
I likey..........
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:45 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
Cool
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:00 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
Ok I am wiped out for today. So I think I am all caught up. lol. I love how protective the guys are for their mates and I love that you made the wolfs their protectors too instead of their enemies.
Author's Response:
That is all I am going to upload today, I will start back tomorrow. I like when the wolves are the Cullen's friends, I like their characters too. I can come up with enemies from somewhere else. Thank you so much for all the reviews! I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:38 AM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon
Well I wonder how much Charlie is going to freak out. Ok so I am guessing that Bella is a shield like in Twilight. I am glad he got his anal sex. He seemed to enjoy that. There wasn't much communication during that though. I guess I expected him to talk her through it more.
Author's Response:
I know, I am not a big talker during sex scenes. I am the quiet type and it is hard for me to imagine a lot of talk during sex. Maybe I can have all my quirks worked out by the time I write my next story....lol. Yes, she is a shield. It shows up when she needs it to. Charlie acclimates pretty well, learning Bella is alive is a big incentive to cooperate.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:24 AM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
Well now he has claimed her in all places. lol. I wonder what her power will be. I hope Rose comes around soon. She seems like she is a little bit better.
Author's Response:
Yep, I have run out of options...lol. You can take one big guess on her power. I have tried to make everything resemble Twilight that I could and still be on a different Planet. Rosalie will eventually come around.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:11 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
haha Mike,,, what an idiot. glad that Rose is finally out of the dog house for now. Oh and I love all the pics on your blog!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I am glad you enjoying the story and pics!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:05 AM Title: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party
I love the secret place of Edwards very pretty.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I like that picture too. Waterfalls are always romantic. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 5:01 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
really enjoy your story !!! Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your reviews and ratings! I really appreciate!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:16 AM Title: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington
I was just about to go to bed, and I got one more..email ping... yipee!!! I really am starting to feel that the pressure is building.. there are too many things stacking against them. And you have roundaboutly, hinted that they need to be really careful. Scary
I also keep waiting for her to mess up something and get punished. I wonder what his punishment would intel.
very interesting... Thanks for the very creative story.. I am thrilled you brought it here.
Author's Response:
So far, she hasn't gotten into trouble. Rosalie is getting into enough trouble by herself...lol. I would say she would get a spanking, if she got into trouble...but I really hadn't put much thought into it. Thanks so much for all your reviews! I am glad you are enjoying my story!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:55 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
never had an enema or anal sex either
Author's Response:
ummmm, ok...lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:47 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
oh shit i lov ethat bed !!!!!!
Author's Response:
It is pretty. I tried to find one that was similar to what was described in the books. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:30 AM Title: Reception Part Three
wow, what a delusion bitch
Author's Response:
Yep, I don't Tanya can be helped....she is way out there. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:18 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
It's getting crazy, but Tanya always brings the crazy : )
Author's Response:
Yep, got to have some bad guys or gals in the story, though...lol. Thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 3:02 AM Title: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon
Where in the world are you coming up with these pictures.. I am beginning to think this place is real... If it is... have Edward come pick me up please... I am packed and ready.
Author's Response:
I spent hours going through pictures online, doctored some up and some I used as I found them....you hadn't seen nothing yet...got lots more to come....lol That is why I am using so many pictures, I want you to see what I see in my head and visualize yourself on Planet Twilight.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:56 AM Title: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella
What a brilliant idea....I love it.. They are changing more and more everytime. That is such a unique Idea... Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:56 AM Title: The New Age Begins
interesting
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:47 AM Title: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party
I love Addy. I have a boy, and forcing him to have a tea party with me is not fun.. he he he Great chapter
Author's Response:
Now, you wouldn't force him would ya'? I had trouble keeping my boy out of the dirt, I don't think I would want to have a tea party with him....lol. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the reivew!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:40 AM Title: Binding Ceremony
you have an amazing imagination
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hadn't used my imagination in years, but I thought I would give it a shot. Thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:39 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
Very interesting, thanks for giving more "planet" details.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and I try to be as detailed as I can be, sometimes I am a little too detail oriented. I need to find a happy balance. Thanks so much for the review and rating!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:37 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
Well they finally broke the bed. lol That was funny. I would be worried that he was going to hurt her when she releases her light because he doesn't seem to be able to control himself wihen that happens.
Author's Response:
He is trying his best to keep her safe, even in his blissed out state of mind. He knows she is fragile and he definately doesn't want to hurt her.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:35 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
LOve the chap.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:29 AM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
new that crazy bitch woudl make a scene
Author's Response:
LOL, she tried, now she gets to go sit in a loony bin somewhere.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:22 AM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Very lovely... They are so sweet to each other. BTY.. as this story develops so does your writing... I can really feel the emotions now, and the amazing details really adds to the overall effect. Great job
Author's Response:
Thanks, I probably should have rewrote the first chapters to see if I could improve them before uploading. But I was trying to get my story moved to this site because fanfiction is on the fritz. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
what a slut (Tanya of course) but i hope she is taken away from them before she hurts anyone.
Author's Response:
She will try, she is a desperate woman, unfortunately.