Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:13 AM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
Carlisle does seem to have a fatherly bond with her. I dont think I like the idea of her being tall though. I just cant picture that at all. lol.
Author's Response:
Edward is still a foot taller than her in this story, so there is still a big height difference. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:59 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
Love the pictures...so good..
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying them!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:57 AM Title: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and rating! I really appreciate both!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:56 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the smiley face and rating!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:51 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
I am loving this... I want a super sonic tooth brush :)
Author's Response:
I tried to find of a photo of a space age looking toothbrush, but all I could come up with is the normal looking battery operated ones. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:49 AM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
Interesting chapter. At first I didn't understand why Rose had such a problem since she had 4 years to adjust, but now it makes perfect since she was holding out to be rescued.
Author's Response:
Rose is just being Rose. She was living the good life back on Earth and feels like her choices have been taken away from her. She isn't as easily satisfied as Alice and Bella.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:35 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating! I really appreciate it!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:34 AM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
electric kisses form Edward yummy !!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:27 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
i wonder if he will different to tanya now that he has mated with bella, and wow is he getting special strength also from the mating?
Author's Response:
No, he still won't be able to stand Tanya. Yes, he is soaking in some of Bella's faerie powers as she is changing.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:25 AM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
i love EPOV
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:21 AM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
sounds clinicial almost, does any emotion come out of the men? they seem very cool right now
Author's Response:
Yes, I get better with the emotions. Thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:14 AM Title: He Picked Me
very interesting !!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you enjoy it and thanks for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 1:02 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
WOW another wonderful chapter. I love how gentle he is with her but its amazingly good too.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:44 AM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
Wow that was a wonderful love making bonding. I really liked it. He was really gentle with her. I thought that to be really weird that his dad came in the room though.
Author's Response:
Well, that was not normal to be heard from one house over and Carlisle wanted to make sure that Bella was not injured. You will find out in the upcoming chapters that Carlisle has a fatherly bond with Bella and does not want to see her injured. He was in doctor and father mode at the moment, nothing perverted was meant by it.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:26 AM Title: Morning Lovin'
i love the pics! thanks
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the pictures! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:26 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
WOW love it so far
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoying the story and thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:12 AM Title: Taking a Peek, Lunch with the Family, and Get-Away Cottage
I am enjoying your story very much, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for much for the review! I really appreciate it!
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:11 AM Title: Reception Part Three
I liked this chapter much more. I guess it was more of a story and not so robotic. I realized that Carlisle sounds more like a secretary dictating the schedule for the day. LOL. I am not laughing at you dont misunderstand me, I am laughing at him. He needs to lighten up. But maybe he will once he trust the girls more.
Author's Response:
Carlisle warms up as the story moves along. He has to put the fear in them at the beginning, so they won't consider running away. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:49 PM Title: Reception Part Three
why don't they just kill tanya and be done with it,she is sicko *itch!
Author's Response:
Her father was once part of the ruling class, so they have to handle the situation with kid gloves. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 10:03 PM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:26 PM Title: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books
lovely chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:25 PM Title: Reception Part Two
Well at least Edward seems to trust Seth completely and Jacob since he is letting them protect her for now. But I think that someone is going to get Addy. We will see I guess.
Author's Response:
Yes, he trusts Seth and Jacob. Only Bella is the target. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:15 PM Title: Reception Part One
Gosh I knew something was going to happen as soon as Edward walked away from her. I love the Animal side to them. I like that they dont care if it is their brother they will defend no matter what.
Author's Response:
Emmett was being Emmett, he doesn't always think before he acts. He is still a big kid...lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:02 PM Title: First Taste
I thought sure that he knew that it was Bella when he picked her at the center. Oh well I guess fate brought them back together. I loved the binding. I was just shocked that they didn't actually make love.
Author's Response:
They are still at the community center, that will be later when they get home.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:50 PM Title: Binding Ceremony
That was really strange that she could see his past. But she at least knows now that he is bound to her even before the ceremony. He was attracted to her that is why he had the pull to go to Forks in the first place.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are true soul mates and the pull was there. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:35 PM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
Gosh Tanya tried to ruin everything. Poor little Addy doesn't know whats going on.
Author's Response:
Tanya tried to do some damage and Addy has been kept in the dark about who her birth mother is, it was part of the agreement and Tanya wouldn't go to jail.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:23 PM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour
It seems like Addy really likes Bella. But I have never seen a 2 year old that could talk that much. My grandson is almost 2 and he doesn't say anything yet.
Author's Response:
My daughter was speaking in sentences at 1 with an almost perfect pronunciation of words and my son didn't start talking till he was 4 and then it sounded like how Addy speaks. All kids are different.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:10 PM Title: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion
oh its great
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:02 PM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
So he has a daughter that can fly? lol. I love it. I hope the little girl really does love Bella. I cant wait for the binding.
Author's Response:
No, she doesn't have the ability to fly. That is the batillions, Jane and Alec. Sorry about any confusion. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:50 PM Title: Edward's Rape
I am going to take a guess here and say Tanya got pregnant. What a bitch. I cant believe she would go so low as to do that to him.
Author's Response:
Tanya is a desperate crazy person, but she doesn't get what she really wants and that is Edward.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:41 PM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
It seems like Tanya was drugging him to get some of his seed. Well I cant wait for the rest of the story.
Author's Response:
Hmmm, you might be right. Thanks for the review and I am glad you are still interested!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:35 PM Title: Reception Part Two
What is he doing to the bad twi???? What do they want Bella for??? I need to know LOL
Author's Response:
Patience...you are probably already reading it as I write this....lol. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:30 PM Title: Reception Part Two
Wow This has been an awesome story I can't wait for more thanks so much
Author's Response:
I am glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review and rating!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:30 PM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
The only thing I dont like so far is that the chapters are so short. lol. I love that Edward growls. It seems Bella really likes him too because she was getting so wet just from kissing.
Author's Response:
The reason they are so short was because I was updating every day. I guess I could have combined some chapters, but all I have just been trying to do is get it uploaded and redo my blog site at the same time. Between Fanfiction being on the fritz and livejournal suspending my account, for who knows what....I have been a busy beaver....lol. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:27 PM Title: Reception Part Two
i loved it
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:17 PM Title: Reception Part Two
It's verry interesting never read anything like this:) I really like it so far
Author's Response:
Thanks so much and glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:08 PM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
Wow so Rosalie at least knows that it would have been her that was raped and killed. It looks like the girls might be able to help Rosalie after all. I really appreciate that you respond to my reviews. So many authors just ignore them.
Author's Response:
It takes a while, but Rosalie finally gets with the program...lol. Thank you so much for revewing and if you take the time to review, I am going to take the time to respond. Because I really do appreciate them.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:06 PM Title: Reception Part One
i still love this story, i can't help myself.....it is one of a kind
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Reception Part One
Oh no someone must want to die
Author's Response:
That may be true. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:58 PM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
Wow so what you saying is that any male can rape a female and not leave his scent behind so that no one knows who did it? Thats messed up. Now as for them being robit, I think its Carlise that is more cold than the rest. It just he is so formal, (i.e. do this then do that.)
Author's Response:
Carlisle is more formal, that is his personality. As for not expelling expulsion fluid, it was more for promiscuity than crime use. As heightened as their senses are on Twilight, a rape crime would rarely go unsolved. There isn't a problem of having no one to have sex with, the problem lies with finding someone to procreate with.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:39 PM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
I am really interested in this story. But they seem almost robotic. Like everything is on a schedule. Not very warm.
Author's Response:
I am not good with expressing emotions and hopefully the story will improve for you. It is my first attempt at writing, so I am always in need of improvement. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:26 PM Title: First Taste
Wow that was pretty intence.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:57 PM Title: First Taste
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it and thanks for the review and rating!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:50 PM Title: Binding Ceremony
This story is different and I like different. :>) You have written a very creative turn on Twilight. I just read all 14 chapters and looking forward to the next one. I am wondering how Tanya got pregnant, I mean I know how, but in chapter 6 the AN:
"Planet Twilight fact – A male does not have to produce expulsion fluid when he orgasms during sex. The act will not be as fulfilling, but he does not have to worry about impregnating, binding, or scenting a female that is not his mate. In other words, he is having sex with someone he shouldn't.
Does he the male have to be conscious as to not produce expulsion fluid? I'm thinking it must be a conscious act; otherwise Tanya should have been gotten pregnant. Since Tanya is bonded to Edward, I know she won't give up trying to get him, which means she is a danger to Bella. Which means drama!
Looking forward the next chapter.
Author's Response:
He thought he was dreaming and didn't have to hold back anything. It is more fulfilling for him to expel the expulsion fluid and since he thought he was dreaming, he did expel it. Thanks so much for the review and I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:06 PM Title: Binding Ceremony
That is what you call a conection. He had a feeling of her when she was a baby he imprinted on her then in a way????
Author's Response:
Yes, she is his true soul mate. Thanks so much for all the reviews.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:51 PM Title: Binding Ceremony
hope we get an update soon i want to know what happends after he takes her enzymes and she is coming out of that memory tunnel!
Author's Response:
I will update more today. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:40 PM Title: Pre-Ceremony and Tanya
The cars on your blog are amazing wow. So Tanya had to try to ruin there day OH what a suprise LOL she messed up now she has to live with it I wish she would be able to leave Bella alone but I dont think she will.
Author's Response:
Glad you like the pictures, I had to scramble to get up a new blog. Livejournal suspended my account and I have no idea why they did it. Thanks so much for all the reviews!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 1:56 PM Title: The New Age Begins
Perfect
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it, hope you enjoy the story and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:45 AM Title: Edward's Rape
Oh that's just RUDE... hahahahah.. God I hope she isn't pregnant
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:41 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
WOW.. Tanya is not nice at all. Poor Edward
Author's Response:
Yes, Tanya is crazy.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:33 AM Title: Meet Addy, Meet Jane and Alec, House Tour
cool blog
Author's Response:
Thanks, I had to scramble to get another blog up. Livejournal suspended my account and I have no clue why they did it.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:11 AM Title: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter
So Tanya is a crazy ho??? Bella is an instant mom????
Author's Response:
Yes, Tanya is crazy and Bella now has a little girl.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 11:05 AM Title: Binding Ceremony
such an origanal story...i like it. love the glossary too. it helps
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it. I will have a glossary I will upload as an outtake for this story. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 10:53 AM Title: Edward's Rape
He has been violated by the ho.
Author's Response:
Yes, he unfortunatly was violated.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 10:45 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
Tanya is a skanky ho??? She druged him to have sex a kind of date rape???
Author's Response:
She was desperate to get him, she thought if she got pregnant....that he would want her. I guess you call it date rape, but they weren't even on a date. She was sneaking in when he was staying at his office from working too many long hours.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 10:18 AM Title: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns
glad rose is coming around. poor Bella not knowing her bodys reation to him.
Author's Response:
They have kept the girls very isolated and naive. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:55 AM Title: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past
See Rose the grass is not always greener on the other side of the univers
Author's Response:
LOL, Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:44 AM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
I hope they are able to talk Rose in to being a good girl LOL this is Rose we are talking about.
Author's Response:
She eventually comes around, but it takes her a while. Like you said....this is Rose....lol.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:29 AM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
I love the different things you put in like the plant of La Push and the explanations are great. I think Bella likes Edward ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:11 AM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
I think you did a great job with Edwards POV
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 9:00 AM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
Rose will be Rose hope she does not make it tuff on everyone else to.
Author's Response:
No, she just makes it rough on herself.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:46 AM Title: He Picked Me
It doesnt sound like a bad place.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:37 AM Title: The New Age Begins
Sounds very interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:41 AM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
Looking forward to the conversation with Rose
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:31 AM Title: Edward's Rape
Omg you can't leave me hanging........LOL wahhhhhhhhhh I want more please.
Author's Response:
LOL, I am trying to get it uploaded and deal with my picture problem too. I didn't know anyone had made it this far, I was going on the reviews I was getting to judge when I needed to upload again.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 6:17 AM Title: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown
Fun chapter, liked the progress! : )
Author's Response:
Your great for reviewing every chapter! Thanks so much!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:48 AM Title: The New Age Begins
impressed with this story. interesting begining, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:18 AM Title: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction
This is a really good story thanks please keep updating thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:15 AM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
: )
Author's Response:
Thanks for the smiley face!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 4:20 AM Title: He Picked Me
Rose can never stay quiet, LOL! "Loving" it so far.
Author's Response:
Rose will be Rose! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:48 AM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
Really enjoying!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:27 AM Title: The New Age Begins
Very interesting so far. At first as I was worried it was ripping off the Pets series with the large aliens but I definitely saw enough differences by the end of the first chapter! Looking forward to see where you take this! : )
Author's Response:
I haven't read the Pets series. I will have to check it out. I am have been writing this on Fanfiction and they have been down all weekend. I decided to upload it to this site. Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:15 AM Title: Tattoos and Gowns
Oh this is very interesting, Thanks
Author's Response:
Again, glad you liked and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:58 AM Title: Edward's POV of 1st Day
Okay... this was much more intimate. I liked his insight into the situation,
Author's Response:
Thanks, that was my first attempt at getting into Edward's head.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:54 AM Title: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made
I enjoyed this chapter, but I wish I could see more of what they are all feeling. Is Bella Scared? Is she happy to be there?
I am nervous for her.
Author's Response:
I got better at the feeling part in later chapters. This is my first story and I didn't start out with enough emotions. Still working on it. Bella is happy with Edward. Thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:46 AM Title: He Picked Me
Nice...I like it
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!
Date: 22 Mar 2011 2:42 AM Title: The New Age Begins
I love it so far...and I can feel it is only just beginning..(well..duh.. it is only the first chapter... hahaha... sometimes I can be so blonde)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, I really appreciate it!