Date: 18 Nov 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
Awesome update
Date: 18 Nov 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 34
loved the chapter
Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 33
Good Chapter....
Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
I love this story. They are so loving. The baby has such a pretty name, so I hate the AC thing. I love how Edward always goes by Edward. It is such a strong name and gives him character. They are not even giving the baby a chance to know his name.
Date: 27 Oct 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 33
Good chapter...perhaps the writer's block is a signal that the story should finish soon...they have a baby, they're happy...epilogue?
Date: 27 Oct 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 33
writers blocks are a bitch...sooooooo sorry, totally get it...but happy for this chapter.... Yay little Bambino is here. Lily is offically a Big Sister... next up wedding I hope... thanks again for the chapter.... you hang in there
Date: 27 Oct 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
love the update. a boy i am thrilled all went well. lilly is such a happy sister.
they are very lucky to have such a supportive family
Date: 27 Oct 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 33
I liked this chapter. You did not give us every detail of the delivery like some authors do. I am sorry that you are suffering from writers block. Maybe reviews will get those creative juices flowing.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awesome update and I love the name. look forward to the weding.
Hugs
Date: 26 Oct 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 33
loved this chapter !
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity and I love all the suspense! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update! Please don't abandon this story!!
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 32
i think it is so funny that edward is flustered by bella letting him know it was time. like he hasn't delievered hundreds of babies. how funny
well thrilled that they where able to conceieve. these two have so much love and i think lily will be a great big sister. this just makes this family more together. bella was always meant to be a mommy. i am glad she was blessed with a baby. i have had alot of fun with this story and am dying to see whta happens once the baby gets her and how it effects everyone. thanx for writing. love it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the awesome review! Aiming to get the next chapter up this weekend. :)
Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
i am having so much fun reading this story. i love all the relationships between everyone. lilly is so damn adorable. breaks my heart all she is going through. great story it pratically reads it self. thank you for writing.
Date: 29 Aug 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
WOW, that was fast!
Date: 27 Aug 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 32
thanks for a wonderful update! I truly enjoy this story. I was sorry to hear about the tragedy at the show. I hope your family member gets well soon.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 32
RL disasters are trying and thankfully you are fine and most all of you family and loved ones are too.. Goodness!!!! Please feel the love and prayers !!!!!!
okay this chapter was wonderful loved how Lilly told everyone and loved Edward's reaction at the end....
Author's Response:
Thank so for your kind words and understanding with the delay. It's been an interesting few weeks to say the least. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Still hoping to get the next one up soon. :-)
Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow! Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 32
WOW THAT WAS A QUICK 6 MONTHS!!!! LOVIN IT THOUGH!!!!! MIRACLE BABY!!!! WELL ALL ARE BUT ONE CONCEIVED IN THIS CIRCUMSTANCE REALLY IS!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
Lol! Can´t tell you how much I missed this little fic! Sorry to hear about your family, that was a very traggic accident. I hope they have a speedy recovery and all goes well. Yeah, you got us where you stopped, but truthfully, I would have rathered you end there than anywhere else. Update when you can, we´ll definitely still be here!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
haha...glad you missed it but sorry you missed it at the same time - make any sense at all??? Thanks for the review and the kind words. :-)
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 32
So sorry for all the things you have been going through. When I saw what had happened on the news in Indiana it made me sad for all the famlies that had been hurt by that... Loved this chapter and this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Like I said it took me forever to finally decide the route in which I wanted to go to get it where I wanted to set it up for Chapter 33.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 32
Good Chapter.....
Date: 23 Aug 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 32
You have NO need to apologise for the wait for updates! My goodness...
I hope your family member who was injured is getting better! Take care of your family first....we'll still be here when you get back. *hugs*
Catherine
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
LOved it and can't wait for more.
Hugs
Date: 23 Aug 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter looking foward to the next one
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter!
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
clucky bella love it
Date: 11 Jul 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. I am very intrigued :)
Can't wait to find out what his "personal reasons" for moving there are.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wonderful chapter, I am amazed they did not spill the beans accidentally.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
Good Chapter....
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 31
LOL! Loved EPOV of things... but yes, Ali will find out what she is keeping quite for now, understandably so... Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 31
GREAT CHAPTER, IM SO EXCITED, A WEDDING AND A BABY. I HOPE SHE CARRY TO FULL TERM AND HAS TWIN BOYS!! WISHFUL THINKIN, I KNOW!!!I HOPE TANYA IS GONE FOREVER TOO!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE UPDATES!!! PLEASE DON'T MAKE US WAIT TOO LONG!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 31
im excited for the next chapter ! alice is going to be pissed that she didnt get told
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
what a great chapter, very happy!! hope everything works out good with the baby. Always love a jumping Alice.
Date: 10 Jul 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
loved it.
hugs
Date: 30 Jun 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
So did not see that one coming. I really hope that there is a HEA after this, I dont think I could handle her loosing the baby.
Author's Response:
I surprised someone! Most people either expected this or wanted it. I like that someone was caught off guard with it! I will not say what will happen in the future but I will say that I think it's time that these two got their HEA. ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh, God, how damn sweet. I have tears rolling down my cheeks and my hubs thinks I've lost my freakin' mind. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story! You just read right through it didn't ya? Love that!! I feel like I need to get Chapter 31 up right now for you. :) And don't be surprised if I do get it posted today...I've been working on it and since I'll be out of town for the whole holiday weekend I won't be able to write or post I'm really hoping to get it up today or tonight. Fingers crossed! Thank you for reading and definitely reviewing. Hoping to find some time to read your stories as well - I read the summaries for all. :)
Date: 29 Jun 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
My God, stick a damn sock in her mouth and duct tape it there!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
one word--therapy
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love me some fist fighting Docward;;
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think there's a little collusion between the two camps...
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
I cracked up at the part about maybe Lilly was a little crazy. Very funny!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
so excited! great chapter, I hope everything works out!!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 30
These two have a very, very long road ahead of them. I just hope that they can make it through everything unscathed.
Thank you for the update.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad he got it out there...I was about ready to call her and tell her myself (he he)!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tits on a nun...I had to laugh outloud at that one! Great story so far.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 30
holy shit so excited
Author's Response:
haha...by far my favorite review to date! :)
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
Aw, how sweet was that!! I really hope the pregnancy will work out for them. They both want this so bad. And I'm glad that Edward proposed and already had the ring. That made the day even more special.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
A double yeah yeah.. She preggo and engaged love it.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
You forgot to tell me that I might need some tissues I loved it loved it loved it.
Hugs
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
Good Chapter....
Date: 28 Jun 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 30
im excited for them ! cant wait to see what happens next and im glad that she told him right off the back!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh....please don't make her lose their baby.....
Date: 22 Jun 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 29
im excited that their lifes are right on track
Date: 22 Jun 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
...hmmmm, against the door sounds like fun. Now, I've just got to figure out how to get RP over here!! LOL
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
loved it loved it loved it. I want that lemon at the end.
Hugs
Date: 22 Jun 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good Chapter.....
Date: 21 Jun 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Can't wait for the next chapter! Such a good story! I'm enjoying the dickens out of it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it!!! :-) Next chapter should be up within a day or two.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
WOW, cliffee already! LOL
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am kind of hoping for a miracle pregnancy obviously unexpected for E&B...
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good Chapter.....
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 28
well im excited for her reaction!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it and you left us hanging.
Hugs
Date: 19 Jun 2011 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good Chapter...
Date: 19 Jun 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
well ill take hot car sex any day of the week
Date: 19 Jun 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it and so look forward to the next chapter.
Hugs
Date: 18 Jun 2011 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good Chapter......
Date: 18 Jun 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent CHAPTER, I dont understand why Bella wont consider a surrogate to carry her's and Edwards child. It will be their chile, she just wont carry it!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it.
Hugs
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
well im excited that he passed charlies test! im excites to see whats instore for them next
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wonderful Story, I cant wait for more
Date: 08 Jun 2011 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good Chapter....
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
i would want to do it as much as i could on my birthday!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well alrighty then! Happy B-day E!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
That was awesome and could I have a birthday like that.
Hugs
Date: 05 Jun 2011 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 24
I just love Alice, she can make your day! E&B FINALly already. LOL
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
well i have a feeling that edward has supersperm ....
Author's Response:
LMAO! If anyone does it would be Edward, right? :-)
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 24
love this story your heart can't help but break for poor sweet innocent Lily... so happy they have finally gotten to this point...
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOved it.
Hugs
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter, as always!!! I really hope a miracle happens and Bella gets pregnant. They have both been thru so much they deserve happiness and miracles. Not to mention Lily would have a sibling to bring her happiness and Bella for a mother too. Just sayin.... I look forward to more updates!!! THIS IS A GREAT STORY PEOPLE, READ IT AND TELL YOUR FRIENDS!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! This review really made my day! :)
Date: 01 Jun 2011 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well it's about time with these two! Poor Lily, at least she has a biological parent that loves her unconditionally and I must say that even though I AM A HUGE TANYA HATER I must hand it to Tanya, at least she is giving her daughter a chance and signed those papers...
Date: 01 Jun 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
He may need nothing else but I SURE AS HECK DO!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
WOW, sudden change. She is growing up. Now he needs too!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
well im excited for the next chatper
Date: 31 May 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
love it loved it loved it. I'm so glad to see that Bella is starting to realize that hiding her emotions aren't a good thing. I'm so excite to see them move forward.. Lemon next chapter I hope.
Hugs
Date: 31 May 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
Good Chapter....
Date: 28 May 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome! Bella/Lilly you go girls.
Date: 28 May 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
AWWW!!! I Loved it! I must admit, however, that I am a little excited to see how Edward's Birthday is going to go... :) *wink, wink* lol
XO
Date: 28 May 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
haha mom! thats gunna be good!
loved it ans cant wait fro more :)
Date: 28 May 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, gotta love a matchmaking Mama!
Date: 28 May 2011 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
well im excited for them and to see what happens next
Date: 28 May 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome chapter.... keep it coming.
If you have moment in time please take a look at my original story that I am posting for the romance contest.
I so look forward to some hot and lusty sex between these two soon.
Hugs
Author's Response:
I will definitely read it!! Thanks! :-)
Date: 28 May 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
Woo-hoo, she said it!
Date: 26 May 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 21
they are totally smittin together
Date: 26 May 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it.
Hugs
Date: 25 May 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
well im glad that they talked with out running! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 24 May 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful chapter!