Date: 16 Jul 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
I think this story is kind of cute ;-) Please keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it. And I'm glad you're enjoying!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the chapter! I really enjoy the way your Edward and Bella interact, even at this early stage of their relationship. Oh, and thanks for referencing a song that us older readers can recognize ("Relax").
As always, looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Coleen! Haha, I'm really glad you got the reference this time, too! It really can be a delicate balance trying to write E & B in a way in which they aren't moving too quickly or too fast.
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Edward, being a vampire and is actually nervous!
Author's Response:
He really is! This Edward is worried about how Bella will take all the information he has to share with her, lol. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Rachel
Date: 02 Jul 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, as always!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
so many cute things from this chapter !!! really enjoyed it !!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing. I always appreciate it!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh how I love this story. It is so different. I love that he can read her mind and I love that she can show him his past. Wonderful compliment for them both!
Author's Response:
Personally, I would much rather have Edward be able to read Bella's mind than to be distracted by her blood. I'm glad you're enjoying my deviations from canon. Thanks so much for your review, as well as your input!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love it, plane glass window. He is to cute for words. I am truly enjoying this story so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Rachel
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Cute story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Rachel
Date: 15 Jun 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
I enjoyed the chapter! I'm anxious to see how she will take the news of his telepathic ability. I'm not sure she will be as understanding as he thinks! Great choice for the second antique.
I love your Edward and Bella. They are different from canon, but in a way that is pleasant and fun. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Coleen! I love my Edward and Bella, too. :)
Rach
Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved this chapter. As a Floridian here I have been using FOP since I was a teenager, hell now I even have my mom using FOP....LOL
Great story can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Hahaha, awesome! I've never been to Florida, but I've heard from relatives/friends that there are a LOT of FOPs there. I think it's hilarious that you've been using FOP for so long!
Rach
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow really love your story !!!! eagerly await your next update
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it! And I'm glad you're enjoying!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Very nice introduction to the family. Good idea about human mates having different rules. I'm glad that he recognizes that she's his mate.
I love the idea of him going to the different cities with his antiques to get them appraised by Bella. Esme's idea of the family meeting her by bringing their antiques is a fun idea.
Great chapter. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what kind of complications you're planning to introduce!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Hopefully you got the longer version of my response via ff.net. I forgot to copy & paste it before I sent it to you. If you didn't, let me know and I'll re-type it. :)
Rachel
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story is really cute. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying my spin on Edward and Bella. :)
Rachel
Date: 02 Jun 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
It is wonderful how supportive the family is and I cant wait till he sees her again but two weeks will seem like years to them.
Author's Response:
You took the words right out of my mouth! It will feel like years. I'm really glad you're enjoying this, and thanks again!
Rachel
Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was a good first date and get to know one another
Author's Response:
I thought their first initial 'date' went well, too. Thank you for reviewing, I really appreciate it!
Rachel
Date: 01 Jun 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am really enjoying your story. It is light and funny. Thanks for your time.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you're enjoying my story, and you're very welcome! Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it.
Rachel
Date: 18 May 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. That smiley face tells me you're enjoying it!
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter. I enjoyed their dinner together and I'm looking forward to finding out what Edward has planned for seeing her again. I'm also looking forward to the rest of the Cullens joining the story.
It's different having him hear her thoughts (but in a good way).
Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response:
If you didn't get my response at ff.net, I want to thank you for your review! I'm really glad you're still enjoying my story.
I'd much rather have Edward be able to hear Bella's thoughts. Makes it really interesting, to me.
Rachel
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you're posting here too. I think this will be a fun story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I was thinking that it makes sense that Edward might like to watch television - no annoying, distracting thoughts to listen to!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapter is with my beta and in the editing process, so it shouldn't be long. Next week, likely. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I like this one...humor, wit and intelligence with a smattering of need an want...glorious.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your kind words and your review! There will be more of what you mentioned, for sure!
Rachel
Date: 06 May 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sooooo not what I was expecting. Sweeti, cute, funny...and I cannot wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! This would be my ideal Edward. Sweet, cute and funny, with a touch of arrogance. :)