Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

Reviews For My Surrender
You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 15

It's great to have you back!!! It's also wonderful knowing your husband is doing better. There probably is still a long way to go, but you will be perfect, no doubt. 

Time has passed, it probably seems like too long and at moments not long enough. Carlisle's sentiments are understandable and expected. It's not something he has to take care of by himself, it's something they all have to work at together. It might take a bit of time, but they will handle it in time. And there's also the fact that eventually Carlisle will have the same chance Jasper has. 

Bella was to eventually make a mistake in the playroom, after so much time out of it, it was understandable to happen at the first sesion. Will it be the same with Jasper? Or will she do better tomorrow?

We'll have to wait...



Author's Response:

We will have to wait and find out. I will give you a hint Jasper will read the journel first, so he will understand where she is in her headspace better. I'm already working on the next chapter.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15

yummy return.

Author's Response:

I thought it would be a fun way to get back in the saddle so to speak. Jasper will also be having some fun.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

So glad you are back to this story too! And glad they are back to the playroom!



Author's Response:

It was fun writing this chapter. I felt it was the right way to go with it coming from Carlisle's POV next we will have Jaspers.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

great chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much,

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awwwe. Is she ready for Carliles baby now? I am thinking not yet.



Author's Response:

I agaree with you and we will see which way I take it hehe.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm sad I wanted the baby to be Carlisle....



Author's Response:

Sorry, I had not idea whose it was going to be until I picked the name. Trust me Carlisles will get his chance to share DNA.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awe, it's Jasper's. And I'm all caught up;~D(

I kinda felt like she should of told them in private, i know how supportive each guy is but still it's a little bit of a loss.

Looking forward to next update.



Author's Response:

The are going to get plenty of priviate time hehe....

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love that, "treat you, as their little princess" attitude towards their daughter. Every little girl should be treated that way.  I feel lucky that all my boys and man treat me like a queen.



Author's Response:

I'm with you, I'm treated as a queen most days, but somedays hubby seems to forget, but then again I understand his health is going down hill and it frustrates him that he can't do the things he loves to do. I'm the only girl in the house beside some female animals.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

shoot I was hoping it was carlises baby.  Oh well as long as it was healthy



Author's Response:

I've been jumping back and forth on who should be the father until I picked her name. when I saw the spelling of Jasmyne I fell in love with it and the plan all alone was that her name would start with the same letter as her dads.  Don't worried Carlisle will get his also.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

i'm glad B. isn't sharing her men with Alice, I think it would of demeaned what they have.



Author's Response:

Alice is just the doctor and friend nothing more.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm enjoying reading this pleasant, non-angst ff. I like the idea of these 3 staying steady + rock solid.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm not a big fan of angst ff either, so I tend to stay away from them.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hawt times for the lovebirds;~))



Author's Response:

Kind of but things will all turn out.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love it! Love baby's name!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a first chapter, complete with multiple O's and Christmas presents:~D))



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.

 

hugs

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

YAAAAAY WE FINALLY GOT TO SEE THE BABY.. WELL NOT SEE HER, BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN. OH THIS IS JUST SO EXCITING!!!!!

 

I WAS HOPING IT WOULD BE JASPERS BABY!! YIPPEE!!! i hope carlisle isnt sad.. i know hew wished the baby was his too, i hope he loves Jasmyne as his own too!



Author's Response:

He will trust me next chapter will be from Carlisle's pov.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

Awwwww - I love Carlisle, but I am soooo happy the baby is Jaspers.  Beautiful name you chose for her.

Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

It was a very hard choice but when I saw the spelling I just fell in love with it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

im glad that mommy and baby made it ! excited to see what happens next chapter 



Author's Response:

Yup mommy and baby made it just fine.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: caspertheghost Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

cant wait for the next chapter to come out



Author's Response:

I'm working hard on the next chapter. I'm hoping to have it to my prereader and then beta later this week.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

Sometimes we need to go over things more than once to be able to really see and understand them. That's what happened to Bella. She had read most of the information but this time was able to see it with different eyes it seems. And it made all the difference.

Author's Response:

I agree we all do that from time to time and our emotions do play in that and yes that is what our little Bella did.... Now it's time for baby.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

awww  our little Bella is growing up.



Author's Response:

Yup, becoming a mom makes you grow up.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

excited for the next capter 



Author's Response:

Thank you and we will have it up soon or at least I hope it will be soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

oh oh oh baby time !!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

yup it's baby time...

 

Hugs

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

yay!!! baby time!! i love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and yup baby time.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 13

YAAAAY! we get to meet the baby next!

 

I wonder which one of the guys is the biological father.



Author's Response:

We will find out very soon. I hope everyone will love her name like I do.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

Aaaaarrrggghhhh!  That was just downright evil!  *evil grin*...You already have me hooked....



Author's Response:

I've been know to be very evil and I just felt it was the perfect place to leave it hehe.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

Your really going to leave us hanging right there?  Oh sweetie you are such a tease!!!!!

Wonderful chapter and can I please have Carlisle and Jasper in the shower for my very own???  :D

Thanks love!



Author's Response:

I will share the men. And I just couldn't help myself on being a tease......

 

Hugs

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 12

this is a fantastic story!!!! i absolutely love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I sent my next chapter to the prereader late last night.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Curlykate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

i AM REALLY ENJOYING YOUR STORY. THANK YOU



Author's Response:

Thank you

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awesome chapter sweetie!  Bella needs to hurry up and have that baby!

Hope things are going better for you!  Hugs

Thanks so much :D



Author's Response:

Bella will have her soon... I have about 1/4 of the chapter written hopping to have it to my prereader and Beta soon.  Things are still crazy and we are still waiting.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

Silly Girl.  She has the hardest job of all being the baby cooker.



Author's Response:

She don't think so, but her mind will change soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

they are so cute with her and shes a ragging bitch i understand hormones but come on now ! 



Author's Response:

trust me a little I had to do something that was 100% not me hehe.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 12

Slowly but it seems Bella is coming to accept her situation. I guess we found a very important clue to her mood swings. Her thoughts about her parents. As much as she would love to see them again, she also fears what they would say to her. That can't be easy to deal with.



Author's Response:

I know if my mom even know I read stuff like this let a lone write she would have a cow.  To my mom it's G rated or nothing at all... I had to discover life on my own so I used some of my feelings on this to help get Bella's correct. She will be learning to deal more with Alice in the next chapter.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

This is too much, I am so surprised!  This I must say is the first story of its kind!  Update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thankyou and I'm working hard on the next chapter hoping to have it to my prereader today and then tomorrow ship it off to my beta.

So, you like my twisted tale.

Hugs

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

I guess the lesson here is to check, check, recheck when signing a contract even if your relationship is suppose to be based on trust.



Author's Response:

Yes always double check conracts no matter what.  Alice will find more than jus a Dom she can trust.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8

poor alice - i guess there is a few bad in every bunch :(



Author's Response:

Thank you and just wait Alice will find more than just the perfect Dom.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

ok so i still need one question answered why didn't the use condoms in the playroom :) it is like 2am here in australia and really need to get to bed - nighty night :)



Author's Response:

If you know anything about Bd/Sm you will know that every dom requires his sub to be on birthcontrol and be tested for STD's. In their minds knowing she is a virgin it was safe, thinking that all college students are on some form of birthcontrol.  I hope this answers your question.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

ahhh her boys love her so



Author's Response:

yup they love her dearly.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

oh poor bella - atleast she now has people who love her and will bring her comfort



Author's Response:

Yes it will be a slow process up and down.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

this is the first story i have read of yours and lovin it so far  thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I have fun writing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 11

hormones can suck.  great xhapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you and yup hormones can suck.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

Yes, we've missed you and the story, but there are more important things at the moment which meed your time and attention, we will be waiting.
We will be more patient than Bella, and hopefully as much as Carlisle and Jasper. It hasn't been easy for any of them and there's still some more waiting left. Hormones, those pesky litte things we both hate and love. I think Bella is being a bit harsh with Alice. She needs to hear what her and her guys are telling her, really hear it. Hopefully the BBQ will work wonders ;)

Author's Response:

 

thank you for your understanding. She couldn't ask for two more patient guys. We will find out soon how the BBQ goes.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

Poor Bella! I feel sad that she cant have sex, that must be killing her. Can you imagin how frustrating that must be! I duno how I would survive.



Author's Response:

Trust me I know what Bella is going through. This was taken from a page of my second pregnancy. I was do Feb 14th and when I went in on the 3rd of Jan I was already dilated to 4C's. You only have to be 3C before they will admit you into the hospital. My doctor thought for sure I would deliver early can we say March 1st. damn kid didn't want to be born. So, I know what Bella is going through and damn it's hard. I'm not going to have Bella come late she just might come a little early.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

excited to see what happens next with bella and her hormones



Author's Response:

Us moms know just how bad those hormones can get, but we will hear it from Bella in the next chapter.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thank you so much for the update - wonderful chapter!!!!

I'm sorry RL is being such a bitch = I hope your husband gets his heart valve soon. 

Take care!



Author's Response:

Thankyou and we are just waiting for the call.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

"Wow I loved your story. The Affection and love between these threeis palpable across of your writing, congratulations fic. Please updatesoon, I am eager to read more."
  That's what I said in last review, I use "Google translator" to read all the fics that I can put my eyes.
Grateful to announce that the next update is coming.
hugs

PS. I am writing in Portuguese in Google translator and it is who isautomatically translated into English, though not everything is perfect, but you can understand very well. My Google Chrome browser isalready configured to automatically translate all (51 languages) to my tongue, "Portuguese"

PPS. I had to do this review in the ninth, because he can not enter the10 he already had used with the previous review



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for translating this back to english for me. As I said I'm currently working on the next chapter the reason for such a delay in this chapter being posted is RL. My husband is getting ready to have open heart surgery in the next week, so my writing time has been limited. I'm hoping to have this sent to my prereader and then my beta in the next two days.

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2011 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 10

Uau amei sua história. O Carinho e amor entre esses três se torna palpável atravez de sua escrita, parabéns pela fic. Por favor atualize em breve, estou ansiosa para ler mais. 



Author's Response:

I have no clue what this review say since I only read and write english.  Just so you know I'm am working on the next chapter.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

I NEVER rate a story based on perfection in punctuation, grammar or spelling. I rate based on the storyline...how well the story flows, if it is consistant and the feelings it elicits.  If your story can make me laugh, cry or get all hot and bothered and still hold my interest, I will rate it well.  And yours does all the above.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I am working on the next chapter.

the reason I asked for people to explain their ratings was because I got some 2.5 cups and I need to understand why some people rate high and some people rate low.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

Just keeps getting better and better......



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

Sweetie....your story is too good to not give you some appreciation! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Your stoy is a grabber.....grabs my interest from the beginning and never lets go.  Looking forward to seeing where you take them.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 10

they treat her like a princess! im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

gee, I think we all dream about being treated like this. We will learn more soon I am working on the next chapter.

Hugs

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

hot as always!!  you are great!!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you and new chapter in a few days working on it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: zoey1001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

HOT!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell me she will allow some bondage play



Author's Response:

trust me Bella as stuff running throw her head right now,  I was in my 30's before I tried bondage play so sometime it just takes a while to get to that point you want to try something new.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Dayum that was hot hot hot!  The senator better treat Alice right!  And I so want a swing :D

Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

trust me we will be seeing a little bit more of the senator and Alice  they will become more than a Dom/sub.  I want a swing. I had so much fun researching this one since I knew nothing about them.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

Glad Alice could find someone for her.



Author's Response:

We just had to find someone for her and oh, the trouble that is coming down for James hehe... Cause Randell and Alice will become more than just Dom/sub.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

good update, liked the way that they handled Alice's  test scene with Randall.  waiting till after she was tied up before she went in.  They show great care with her



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. The guys love her deeply and they know what she can handle, they will never put her in front of something that might make her rethink the use of the playroom. 

 

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for updating so oftrn. I know it was already written but still greatly appreciate the time you spend



Author's Response:

Thank you and the next chapter is the last one I had written so posting will slow down some.

Hugs

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9

glad it was splash and not slash!  hahaha!!!  liked the changes! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks you and why not slash hehe... rereading it the changes made it flow better. I will post the last written chapter on saturday and you should have the next new one on monday or tuesday.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 9

awww such a sweet surprise



Author's Response:

I never did a nursery and all my stuff was second hand so I went all out for this little one.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

Hmmm a lifetime with Jasper and Carlisle is my kind of heaven... :D

Awesome chapter!  I love that you used Posh Tots to decorate and for clothing.  Have you seen the princess carriage bed?  It's like $40,000.00 or something like that....

 

Thanks so very much!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

they are so loving with her im excited that the whole family is happy for them 



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm rewriting the next chapter a bit before I post it.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

They worked very, very fast!!!! They must have started a few days before and without Bella realizing it, but still it was fast and a great surprise. 

Bella is lucky to have such a love and caring family besides her guys. Lets hope they find someone good for Alice.



Author's Response:

It's been in the works since the day they found out the sex of the baby, we will find out in a later chapter how it got all do so fast when someone lets it slip hehe.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

I have a feeling that James is going to be a problem for them all. I just knew it was james when i started reading that part



Author's Response:

James will not be a problem for him, but problems for him are coming.

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

awww poor Alice.  Hope they get back at James somehow.



Author's Response:

Trust me he will be getting into some very big trouble and not even realize how it all came about.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Of course you get 10 coffee's!!!!  Wonderful chapter and the whole Alice thing was a total surprise - didn't see that coming at all!

I'm probably wayyyyy off base here, but are you going to put Alice and Jasper together or are they both staying with Bella......Ok, I know it will be a wait and see, so don't answer that.  :)



Author's Response:

I will say that no Alice will not be getting with my guys, but they will be helping her to get a new dom. We will find out aobut her dom in chapter 10.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

wow didn't see this chapter turning out the way it did.....



Author's Response:

Thank you and we will find out more on thursday.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you,

 

Hugs

Reviewer: bownbey Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Alice, she deserves so much better. I love how the guys make sure Bella is not scared by what happened to Alice.



Author's Response:

Yes, and we will see Alice meet and have a play date with her new dom hehe.  that is chapter 10.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 8

looks good girl! :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm having fun all over again with this story. I am writing some changes in chapter  rereading 8 caused me to rethink a few things.

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8

well im excited that they are having a little girl! those 2 boys are going to love that little girl to pieces



Author's Response:

Yup she will be so spoiled.

Hugs

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 8

Your different character profiles are interesting. I like them.

Although I am a die hard Edward freak it is hard to see him in the story without Bella but I am still loving your story!



Author's Response:

Thank you.. I do have another poly that is E/B/A/J that will be posted soon.  I just have a thing for poly's and doing something different with them than what is the norm.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

They all got their wish, who could have guessed they wanted the same thing. That's going to be one very loved and spoiled baby.
To see how much Alice trusts Bella to call her in her time of need proves how strong their friendship has become. Also having Garret and Edward there as support is also wonderful.
Alice needs time to heal and to move on with her life, lets hope she is able to do it quickly.

Author's Response:

Thank you and we will see just how everything turns out for Alice.

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 7

They granted her their wish, and I am certain they enjoyed it as much as she did.

As for the doctor's appointment, they are really a lucky family. The one extra thing they needed was someone who they could talk to openly about everything. And they found her. She is willing to be as much assistance as she possibly can plus a friend to Bella. Again, they are very, very lucky.



Author's Response:

Alice will be a big part of this story, but not in the way some people my think. She is a mentor, friend, and doctor.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

They have began to find a routine in their daily lives, one that makes them happy. Although the guys would like to help Bella out in the kitchen, they do enjoy being taken care of.

Bella is a research junkie!!! I am impressed. Every thing that has come across their paths she has done research. So of course looking for lotions to take care of her skin would not be ignored by her.

Their evening turned out better than they probably expected and Bella has a doctor's appointment. I am sure they are going to really like the doctor.



Author's Response:

I will say Bella is a research junkie, because I'm one. The internet is a wonderful place and just littlest question can be answered by a few clicks of the keys.

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

When Bella made the comment about the guys not wearing protection in the playroom, the thought ran through my mind. Then I remembered she got the call about her parents when she was going to or from the clinic.  It's not the first time in this story that life takes an unexpected and shocking turn.

They are all taking it all very well and calmly, hopefully it will remain that way. The one thing concerning me is what will happen now she is moving in with them.



Author's Response:

In what way? It will not change their contract.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 4

They are taking her into the lifestyle at an incredibly fast pace. Perhaps in any other situation it would be too much, but as I said in the last review, with Bella's situation, I think it's the best idea. 

The party was interesting and a very good learning experience for Bella. She found something none of them have ever tried, that is a really good challenge and a wonderful experience for them to eventually share. 



Author's Response:

Your right for Bella this was the right way to go to fully emerse her into the life style fast, it is all to help with her trust.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:56 PM Title: Out Take

I had imagined a different type of session. Perhaps one in which she would express some of her sadness. But I think this one was better. They are working on pushing her quickly, which in this case I think is good for her, given the circumstances.

She still has a lot to learn and will eventually make a mistake that will get her punished. I just hope it's not too soon. 



Author's Response:

She will make mistakes even the most seasoned sub makes mistakes sometimes on propose to get punished. We will see her get punished sometime real soon.

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is in such a terrible moment. For her it seems nothing will be right ever again. Both guys tried while at Forks to reassure her, it didn't work out too well, which is really understandable. However she hasn't given up on them. She wants her things to go to their place that is a good sign. They need to help her and they are about to do so the way they kow best.

Author's Response:

I feel it's normal for people to shut down like this when they lose those they love the most.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's great that you write and post mainly for you, that makes the stories so much better, thanks!!!!

School has to come first, even if it's not easy for anyone of them. They do have the week-ends though and are working on making the best out of them.
Life has its path, one that's crooked, strange and keeps us on alert. Bella's life seemed to be gping really weel. She just needed to tell the guys about her parents and viceversa. It won't happen as she thought it would. Sadly she has lost her parents. She isn't alone though, a wonderful thing considering her current situation.
Going back home won't be easy, neither returning to school. Fortunately, she is not alone.

Author's Response:

I think having a loving suport system will help her through all of this.

Hugs

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella is an extremely intelligent and naive girl. She has worked very hard to make her dreams come true. For two years, things have gone as she planned, but this time around she is risking loosing alll she has achieved. Facing such a dilema she takes an incredible risk. What she didn't know was that her professors had noticed her. They had realized she is a uique student who also tempts them both. All three of them make the decision to take a chance and see what happens. They couldn't have been more surprised, in a good way. As incredible as it might seem, they are connected immediarely, all three of them. Can their plans really work? Can they find a wa to balance it and keep it to themselves? At least for now. We hope so.
It's a story with an u usualmgroup, that makes it intersting on itself,madd the plot and we have a great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you, I have a very twisted mind. I don't do anyting normal.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

short but sweet.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I always let the chapter telll me how long it's going to be, but yes it was short than most.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

they are totally hot in the play room and im excited to see how the baby brings them together ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you we will have more playroom scene's, along with seeing just how this baby changes stuff.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

i like the connections you make between the characters,  example - bella and alice being subs.  also love the lemons !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. We will see more of Alice later on.

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

ohhhh 10 coffees for this chapter...very sensual chapter.  I want my body "wax" painted by Jaspers and Carlisles hands......how sinful :D

I love that you have Alice as her Doctor - how fun is she going to be...hehehehehe

Thanks so much!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I will say I got a little hot writing this chapter. I'm with you body "wax" being painted on my body by the hands of Jasper and Carlisle's hands. We will learn more soon.

Hugs

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm rating this chapter a 10.

 

The reason for it is because each chapter is just as good as the last. It never dissapoints whats so ever. I love the whole thing with the doctor knowing about their lifestyle and it was nice knowing she could give them good advice without them being truely judged.

Also, I liked the wax. It was nice of them to do something different. I couldnt believe she got off more than once just by wax. This story makes me want to find out more, and read more.

till next time!



Author's Response:

Thank you, so much... From what I read it's quite normal to get off from the sentations you feel when having wax poured on you and basically have your body used for finger painting. It the combination between the warmth and the fingers on your body. I would love to try this with an experiance dom. I have done Ice and that is Wow. 

 

Reviewer: carebearconnor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

I have to say that I'm not usually a fan of non-Edward & Bella stories but I am totally enjoying yours!  It is different and unexpected and I can't wait for your updates!  Keep them coming.

Sincerely,

Carolyn



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and you will be getting more very soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

that was totally hot ! cant wait to see how her appoitment goes 



Author's Response:

Thank you, You will see it soon.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 6

HOT!



Author's Response:

Thank you

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

yummy times



Author's Response:

and more yummy times to come.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 5

glad they took the news well.    Silly men, you knew she was a virgin, why would she be on birth control?



Author's Response:

They thought that because so many young lady's go on it to help control their periods.  Shit my step daughter's mom put her on it for her 14th birthday.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmmm  hope she not prego yet. too soon. maybe just stress.   the touchy feely dom will be a prob I think



Author's Response:

All depending on the club and it's members it's very common to share and a new young sub will get the doms going.

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:59 PM Title: Out Take

yummy time.  Hope they at least let her use an apron while cooking the bacon.  lol



Author's Response:

Well I sure hope they do also...

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

poor thing.  hope they can help her.



Author's Response:

They will.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

sweet chapter.  Poor B.  Well at least she doesnt have to tell her parents now.



Author's Response:

The next couple of chapters were hard to write.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

yummy start,



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am having fun writng.

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

As always I loved the chapter  alot :)

You deserve way more review than you ot so far :)

Awesome ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you and I don't write for the reviews. I write for the love of the story and for those that love to read my stories. I could have 0 reveiws and as long I see people are reading I will write and post.

Hugs

Reviewer: zoey1001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

Hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you

 more to come

 

Hugs

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

whew, getting warm in here!!!



Author's Response:

Just a little warm I'm sure you can handle it...

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

MMMMM wouldn't you just love to be the center of a Carlisle/Jasper Sandwich????  Oh Yeah....  thanks so much!



Author's Response:

I would love to be a Carlisle/Jasper sandwich....

 

Hugs

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 5

This story is soooooo good :)

I really love it and and you for writing it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am having a good time with this story.

 

Hugs

You must login (register a new account) to review.