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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

We will see what happens next soon.

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well this is a little complicated. But I am sure Jasper and Carlise will keep it all under control!!



Author's Response:

Yes they will...

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Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

:) !!!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wonderful chapter.  Boy, the clinic doc was a real bitch wasn't she....

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

yup... but wait until you meet her doctor. hehe.

 

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Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

I like your story. I read where you had taken them all of before. I am sorry to here that. I am glad you are reposting. Don't let them get to you. If people don't like a story they should stop reading it!



Author's Response:

I agree with you and I wont be letting people get to me like that again. I was just in a bad mind set first.

 

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Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

love your story glad it is back !!!!  what about the others you started ?  



Author's Response:

I will be reposted them but I will only be working one story at a time. I might repost my one shots soon as they are complete, but my work in progresses will be worked on one at a time and I choose this one first because it was talking to me to finish.

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 4

well im excited for the next chapter to see her growth



Author's Response:

We will be seeing that on friday..

 

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Reviewer: zoey1001 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

i dont care what anyone says you have a good thing going here, see it through...please:D



Author's Response:

I am seenig it through I have found peace within me that will allow me to finish each and every story I have started I will be working one of them at a time as long as I am working on my original.

 

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Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ack!  I really hope Bella isn't pregnant......

Thanks so much for the update!!!!



Author's Response:

Question why?

Reviewer: Bluecanoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 11:14 AM Title: Out Take

I don't normally like Carlisle or Jasper combinations, just a personal thing because I don't find the actors that play them personally attractive.  Sorry, I'm totally Team Edward..:)  Which is the only compaint about this story...Edward gay????!!  Ok...guess you'd have to do that because once she'd see Edward and if he were straight..?  Well Carlisle and Jasper would be toast..ha!



Author's Response:

We all have our opinions on the men of Twilight. I will say I am not a big fan of the movies but of the books. But I will say that even thought I feel they missed casted and missed wrote the scripts that the guys they did pick are all equally hot... Shit even Cam the guy that plays James has to body. I have a very twisted mind.  I will say I love Rob, but not Edward. 

 

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Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:24 AM Title: Out Take

Oh very hot!!!  I love how you write :)

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I enjoy writing and it pleases me that people like my twisted mind.

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Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Awwww - poor Bella!  I'm so glad she has Carlisle and Jasper there for her tho.  They better not hurt her! ;)  Well, at least not in a bad way...hehehehehe



Author's Response:

They would never hurt her. she is to special to them.

 

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: Out Take

well i excited for the next hcapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you and we will have the chapter 4 monday or tuesday...

 

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Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm SO sorry that some inconsiderate idiot has made you reluctant to post.  Please continue posting for those of us that want to read your goodies.



Author's Response:

Thank you and I am back. I will only being posting one story at a time until it is complete. Cause I had some complaints that I had to many stories going at the same time. I am learning to not listen to others and just writing.

 

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Reviewer: Voracious_Reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

I had read this story on FF.net, and yes, while there are some editorial issues, i liked it very much. I am happy that you are finishing your stories--ALWAYS WRITE FOR YOURSELF FIRST! Unless someone has a legitimate complaint and contstructive critiscism, ignore them. If you love doing this, don't stop. Never mind what someone else says; there are a lot of stories out there with far more serious issues than yours, and they are still being written. By the way, are you going to finish the one where Bella was a spy? I loved that one!



Author's Response:

Thank you and I agree that I need to write for myself first. That is what I am now doing.  Yes Of Gods and Ghosts will be the next story I rework. I did this story first because I have all the chapters outline and knew it would be the easiest to finish up. Of Gods and Ghosts I know where I want to take it but still need to think about how I want to get there. Each of my stories will be reposted and revamped, but I am doing them one at a time since I am also working on an original for the contest.

 

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Reviewer: teewhy1977 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

Could Bella be pregnant from Christmas!! That would be cool!! OK this story is perfect!!! sexy as hell!! You are amazing and we love this story!! We cant wait for many long updates.. what an amazing writer and author you are!!  Your adoring fans, The Fanfic Girls Reading Group here atthe university of El Paso, Texas.. UTEP!!  Maureen, Gina , Denise , Larissa, Jackie , Rita, Bailey, Irene, Opal, Carey, Pauline and the rest of us. and me.. Teewhy1977



Author's Response:

I want to thank each of you girls for your support.  We will find out if she is pregnant or not in a later chapter.  I can't remember which right now as I have only had one cup of coffee and it takes at least three to jump start my brain in the mornings.

 

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Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Another wonderful chapter!  Very sad she lost her parents but I can see how that is just going to set things up in later chapters.

Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

I have a very twisted mind and it was the perfect way to let Bella give her all to the guys.

 

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Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am currently in college - why oh why couldn't I have professors like this?  And have them be Dom's!!!!! AND look like Carlisle and Jasper...*heavy sigh*  And I love that you made Edward gay - that is priceless :)

I'm sorry you had haters - I love this story and can't wait to read more!!!!  Wish I could double the amounts of coffee



Author's Response:

Thank you and If those haters come back. I will not listen to them this time around. I know understand that I do have a lot of people that love me. I'm with you can I have two guys like these.   I love a gay Edward and it was the right way to write in him this story.

 

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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

well i find it intresting and i want to find out what happens next 



Author's Response:

Tahnk you and you will on monday or tuesday...

 

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Reviewer: TG100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was wondering what happened to your stories. Glad to see you are reposting them. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you this will be a slow process as I am reworking each of the stories a bit first. chapter 2 tomorrow.

 

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Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

i think that you should keep going - great story line and a mix up of the usual characters.

:)



Author's Response:

I will keep this going... The next chapter is with a new beta to clear up errors that were missed the first time around.

 

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Reviewer: lindsaywin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really like your style of writing and you are crafting a really interesting story-don't give up on it. Keep going and doing what you enjoy. Don't expect everyone to love what you write since its such a subjective matter and life would be really boring if we all loved the same thing, wouldnt it?



Author's Response:

You are so right.... I can take a critcal view on my stories... it was the words that all my stuff is shit that got to me 6 in one week is hard to take. I have learned by all the email I got about people loving my stuff that those little hurtful ones should not hurt as much with so many that seem to enjoy my writings. I will not let them get to me ever again. I write stuff from my heart. Thanks for the kind words and I hope you will continue to enjoy my silly stuff.

 

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Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks girl...  Now read my original please please please.  I am only going to be working on one fan fic at a time, this way they will be better.

 

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