Date: 28 Jan 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 22: Trying to be Normal
Ha! That just cracks me up!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 21: The Longest Night
Edward! What a 5 second man! Come on you ruined my fun! Ha!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 20: My Kind of Town Chicago Is
Another great chapter! I thought that she was starting to look healthier! Kind of disappointed that she isn't.
Date: 28 Jan 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 19: Meeting Your Mother
That was a delicious chapter!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 27: Nightmare
As I sit her crying it to this day just horrifies me that stuff like this actually exsists in the world we live in. I think you did a wonderful job with the chapter. Disturbing yes, but with the subject how can it be anything less than disturbing.
I so hope that you let Bella get better and that her and Edward can be happy but time will tell with that. I will be
Waiting Patiently Impatiently,
OH MIA MYA
Date: 28 Jan 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide
Ha! Alice is a big horn dog! Cracks me up!
Author's Response:
Me too! I like Alice to be more intregal than just dressing Bella for a special occassion and just fading to the background. Thanks for reading!
Date: 28 Jan 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!
Good chapter! I am glad to hear that Bella is looking better!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! :^*
Date: 28 Jan 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: Stopple Thy Mouth, Dame!
Good chapter! I am glad to hear that Bella is looking better!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 16: Bella's Song
That was so sweet!
Author's Response:
I was stealing bits of the plot from the books there... thanks, though!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 15: Girl Talk
Ha ! I love me some girls night too!
Author's Response:
Yeah, gotta recharge!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 14: Get Me Into Trouble
Wow! That was just crazy! I think they are nuts. They were already naked? Why not? HA!
Author's Response:
Devious, are we, dearie? >:D
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: An Overnight Stay
Bella seems to be doing a better job with the anxiety! I hope she keeps it up!
Author's Response:
Anxiety comes and goes. We'll see!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 12: Pizza and Beer
Ha! Bella, Bella, Bella, to be so innocent!
Author's Response:
It was hard writing this innocent when I'm a complete perv myself!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 11: Never Been Kissed
Good Chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you :^*
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 10: Bella's Story
Wow! A lot of sadness . . . I hope more chapters will bring some relief!
Author's Response:
There has to be a history.... had to do it.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 9: Welcome to Forks
Great chapter! I am a little bugged out about Bella refering to the number of dates she has been on the Edward! It drives me nuts. Who does that? Anyways, I am going to keep reading!
Author's Response:
She's a little OCD. Number count!! <ha ha>
Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Flashbacks
That is so sweet!
Author's Response:
I like Edward's total and complete care for Bella in the books. I carried it over here.
Date: 27 Jan 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 7: Normal Girl
That is so sad!
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks for your support with reading & reviewing!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 4: Chinese Take-Out
I am very happy with the story so far! I can't wait for the juicy stuff!
Author's Response:
It's been posted, so read up! Thanks again for all the reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Armchair Medical Advice
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with the story!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Honey I'm Home
I love Alice's insult! I am thinking that Edward is a doctor! Ha!
Author's Response:
Alice didn't mean to insult Edward... just calling it like she sees it!
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1: Broken
Can't wait to keep reading! Thank you for sharing this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your support so far! <muah>
Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 5: Simply a Cup of Coffee
Loved the chapter! Bella is nuts though! It is a different side of Bella . . . very original!
Author's Response:
Thanks again! You've done a wonderful job reviewing me! I love you for that! I hope you'll review my stories in the future!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: Making Plans
Great Chapters! Fuckin Rose! Shes such a bitch. Im so happy that Bella is trying to get better. Edward is too sweet. And Thea is like my fave character..lol...i loved My Big Fat Greek Wedding. More more more please.
Author's Response:
Rose has her reasons, though, but yes, she was a bitch. Thea will make another appearance, trust me.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 18: A Woman's Guide
I'm really enjoying this story. Bella is awkward and cute. Edwards awesome, a little pushy and very sure about himself especially with the whole "I have the future planned out", but hey no body is perfect...lol...great story i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
It's just the doctor in Edward that is trying to plan everything out. But, we'll see... Thanks for reading!