Date: 07 Mar 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
lol so candestine
but please do let me know because i'll def. buy it.
even if it's avalible for the kindle
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll be sure to let everyone know!
Date: 06 Mar 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
I once worked in a pharmacy and to my chagrin, had to check out the police chief of my small town buying condoms with a woman who was not his wife. Made for an interesting shift.
Author's Response:
*groan* What an ass hole. Well, at least he was using a condom. (Really? He didn't have the sense to have the woman buy them? She was probably married too. *sigh* None of my business I guess.) Pharmacy check out clerks have seen it all I'm sure.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
As much as I like Twilight, I am happy to read a story that does not host the same names in different situations but basically the same story outcome.
Author's Response:
I was actually toying with writing my first fanfic after this, but I too am getting tired of those same names playing over and over... Maybe I'll just describe the 2 lead characters as looking like everyone's favorite couple. The story itself is nothing like Twilight. It's bittersweet and dark at times and features plenty of awkward family drama. I'm excited to start it! (But I have to finish Second Spins first before Julien and Lara jump off the pages and kill me!)
Date: 06 Mar 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the way the dinner panned out. I was worried you were going to have Margot and Jason pretend to fall for one another to allow people to see him and Alli together and keep saying "he's my sister's boyfriend". I like this way much better.
Author's Response:
That would have been a fun plot twist to write, but Jason's far too morally plagued to try a stunt like that. I'm glad you liked the way I went with it.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think this is a more than fair reaction and solution to this issue. I had a simular situation when I was almost 17 except that he was 20, not my teacher, and he did know my age. When I did turn 18, he was one of the first to get in touch with me. He had school to keep him occupied and I was thinking more about homecoming and proms and at the time I knew that he would not fit into this. But it was soooo hard to find any boyfriends my own age that had the same amount of maturity. It is going to be interesting to see what happens!!
Author's Response:
As a teen, I always had a thing for much older men. (Well, not MUCH older - usually they were within 10 years of my own age, but when you're 17, that's over a third of your lifetime!) I think it's sweet that he got in touch with you when you turned 18.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 28
What it's ending? no!!!
OH i love that Margot defended Jason.
i've so enjoyed this when you put the story on hold i thought it was because you were offically pupblishing the story like binding and the whole nine yards.
any ways i thing this story definty is good enough for that
can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was going to publish it with TWCS, but they ended up passing (I'm not allowed to say more than that.) I have added 30,000 words to it and am submitting it to a few other publishers for consideration. I will of course let everyone know if/when it gets accepted. I really like the newer, longer story. It shows you different sides of Alli and Jason when they're a little older.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
I have sooooo missed this story and am happy you finally posted it in full.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm always flattered to get a nice review.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
Margo is so funny.
And Jason is just too noble to be real. *sigh*
Author's Response:
I have a longer version of this story that explains Jason's reasoning a little better. But yeah, he is a martyr, isn't he.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
I knew Margot would come to the rescue. And Jason is to perious for words.
Author's Response:
I like Margot's spunk. She's a good sister.
Date: 05 Mar 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
I kind of figured when she got pregnant that she'd lose the baby. I didn't see you taking this story all the way to the end with them being parents so soon.
And Alli's dad is out for blood, isn't he?
Poor Jason and Alli. This has got to be the wost possible situation.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's pretty bleak right now. I like to think the cheeseyness of the epilogue makes up for it though.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
Sniff Sniff *dabs misty eyes* I am honored that you mentioned my comment in your notes. Dreams really do come true :P Anywho. On a serious note that is a horrid thing that Ali and Jason are dealing with and it sounds like there may be some T R O U B L E with Daddy
Im glad We are going to hear from Julian and Laura soon they have been missed.
You seem to like the J's both of your men have them Jason,Julian are you going to keep the theme if you write story number three?
Author's Response:
LOL - my sister said the same thing about my proclivity for choosing J names. Jason was the name of my childhood sweetheart, so that's why Alli's beau is named Jason. Julien named himself Julien, but his last names are all family names from my husband's family. Lara is a twist on my mother-in-law's name Laura. Second Spins is a gift to her in a way. (It's hilarious hearing her review chapters as she reads them. Especially the steamy ones! She gets very flustered.)
I have two more stories begging to be put down on paper. One is supernatural and deals with guardian angels. The other one I'm toying with turning into my first fanfic. The hero in it could easily be played by RPatz, but it's just as easy for me to make them my own characters. Do you have a preference?
Date: 04 Mar 2012 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oooh! Can't wait to see what Daddy says!
Author's Response:
He wont say much - most everything out of his mouth will be yelled at full volume. :)
Date: 04 Mar 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ok I'm sad i Hate it when Babies die
But i understand that it was not at the best possible time.
I hope that things aren't to rough with Alli's dad.
I'm very glad that Alli is ok.
Author's Response:
Babies dying is never cause for celebration. It was a really hard decision to make plot-wise. My sister and I agonized over it. (I'm always calling her to run by plot lines. This was a tough one!)
Alli's dad is a very hot headed, angry papa bear. He wants blood.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh poor Jason, I just want to give a big hug. At least he got to see Allie. I hope the Margot gets to help Jason out by backing up their story. I hope the next one comes soon.
Author's Response:
I know - poor poor Jason.
Next chap will be up soon!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG i'm just... i have no words
Author's Response:
No words good -page-turning-drama or no words bad -hate-you-for-doing-that?
Date: 02 Mar 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH your killing me please write MORE SOON!
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm doing it right.
So glad you are hooked on the story!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
OH it's good to be back i missed my dear Alli and Jason I'm glad that they are on more than speaking trems
lol
I dislike Gossipy women wish the vamps would get them too
;)
Author's Response:
I remembered you would be gone for 3 days, and thought of you when I posted. Isn't it nice to have extra chapters to come home to? (Even if they are sad chapters...)
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
no no no she cant lose the baby.....
Author's Response:
I know. It's very sad, but necessary for the storyline. :(
Date: 02 Mar 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
You and your cliffys please don't leave us hanging with the blood stained man like you did in second spins :P
Author's Response:
I wont!
Poor Julien. I have re-written the next chapter of Second Spins THREE times. I just can't find a way to explain what's happening without it soundly totally cheesey. I will keep trying.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
i dont want her to lose the baby i hope evrything works out
Author's Response:
Everything works out...eventually.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my goodness. I can't beleive you did that. I can't hate you because you'll make it all better, but I still can't believe you did that. I hope we don't need to wait long for the next one.
Author's Response:
It was not an easy decision to make - believe me.
The next chapter will be posted soon. Probably tomorrow. Or should I apply the whoring rules again?
Date: 01 Mar 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
oooooo things are getting interesting so we've cleared up that jason and ali having sex wasn't illegal as such bust i still think peopl are going to be extremely opinionated about it and his job is still in jepardy
Author's Response:
According to the law it wasn't illegal UNTIL he became her teacher. So, now that he is in a position of authority over her, a sexual relationship between the two of them would be illegal. Alli would need to transfer schools or turn 18 in order for them to be together without legal repercussions.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I say post the longer one, because I know I can't get enough of Allie and Jason. But that is just my two cents.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
Some Teachers are worse than students. It's all very sad. I hope Ali opens up soon to her parents.
Yvette is a thorn but i personally would rather see your story the way you wrote it
In completion no deviation
Author's Response:
Thanks! I did add a little snippet about Yvette, but it in no way changes the ending of this version of the story.
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
oh she needs to get a smack down or something!! :)
Kay
Author's Response:
Noted!
Date: 29 Feb 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
What goes around comes around. Just sayin........ We love it when karma is a bitch!
Author's Response:
Karma is our friend. I went ahead and put a little blurb in there about Yvette so she doesn't get off scott free. (It comes later...)
Date: 29 Feb 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
bitch should suffer
Author's Response:
She brings it on herself!
Date: 29 Feb 2012 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think that you should post it how you wrote it. You are the author and this is your show! We are just comin along for a terrific ride.
Jo
Author's Response:
Thanks Jo, I added a little tangent to one of the last chapters to tie up the Yvette loose end. (133 words) It doesn't change the story, it just makes you smile at the karmic justice.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sure we'll all be happy what even way you end the story. But I have to ask is it just about over, because see any way to end it soon. But then again I'm just a reader not a writer. Hope you guys get better soon. I had a house full of sick kids last week so I feel you pain. Any ways can't wait for the next one
Author's Response:
Thanks! My husband is the worst sick person EVER. Very needy.
This version of the story is almost over :(
There are 30 chapters total, including the epilogue. There is another version of this story. It has an alternate ending and shows you Jason and Alli 6 years in the future. It's about 30,000 words longer than this one. I'm debating whether to post it or not.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yet the should def, get her just deserts
Author's Response:
I added a little snippet just for our sweet Yvette.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
Please tell me somebody gets to put Yvette in her place. That would be good
Author's Response:
Yvette is barely worth Alli's time. That said, karma usually finds its own way around...
Date: 29 Feb 2012 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Just found your story and read all chapters, dinner's late but who cares!! Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
That's always the best kind of comment to read - late dinner for you means I did my job well! Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yvette is evil. So, Josh took her to Homecoming? Haha -him leaving her for Alli.
What will Jason's mom say????
Author's Response:
Jason's mom is a reasonable woman. I think it's good he tells her.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
You were right i do have a strong dislike for Yvette grrr...
she should go jump in a puddle and drown.
Something tells me that while Mary will me upset she will continue being his stongest supporter.
Author's Response:
Mary is most definitely a supportive mother. (Thank God!)
[Report This]Date: 29 Feb 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
Nicely handled. I can't manage when the girl spends the next three days in bed over baby news.
Author's Response:
I'm not big on melodrama! Besides, Alli doesn't want to draw any attention to herself.
Date: 28 Feb 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh i hate Yvette i always hated the girls at school who got off on everyone else's misery. can't wait to see how the discussion with JAson's mom goes
Author's Response:
Yeah, mean girls suck.
Date: 28 Feb 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
write more!
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 28 Feb 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 24
yea we have all had girls like that in school but i always found it best to resist the urge to punch her face in and just ignore her every thing dont even show any reaction and blow it off like its nothing and they stop because usually they act like that either they want to make themselves feel better or they just want the attention. (or both) and when you dont give them the reaction they want they will move on to someone else....that being said i love this story so far cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Yvette is a typical snarky bully. Sometimes they get bored with you and other times they try harder to get a reaction from you.
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
you know he so wanted to rip yvette a new one. poor allie, if the craps already stating i feel so bad for them.
Author's Response:
I don't know that I would be able to handle being in Jason's shoes!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hoping for a new chapter??
Kay
Author's Response:
New chapter is up!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yvette argh I hate that sneaky bitch. I really cant wait until she gets what coming to her
Author's Response:
Every school has an Yvette... and they all suck.
Date: 28 Feb 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ok to say that i was shocked that she was prego. well it knocked me on my rear.
I have fallen in Love with Jason.
I'm upset because Weds morn i leave to a place where the internet is but a roumer and i don't come back until friday after noon thats almost 3 days with out my JASIE fix boo hoo
Maybe you can put in a few more chapters between now and then?
can;t wait for more
Author's Response:
I dropped a few subtle hints - Alli thinking the chicken meat had gone bad, mentioning that she was "glowing", her being tired and missing class, but I didn't want to give it away, so I'm glad you were surprised.
I'm also happy that so many of you are in love with Jason. I know he's no Edward Cullen, but he is actually based on a RL man!
As to the next chapter - I'll see what I can do. A whore's gotta stick to her guns! She can't be giving it away for free!!
Date: 28 Feb 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
please make them longer....i LOVE my Jason
Author's Response:
Thanks! The chapters are already written. They are a bit short compared to my other story, but I tried to end them at appropriate places, and I had a word count I needed to stay under. There are 30 chapters total including the epilogue I think.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love the story! A little disappointed to see you go with the pregnancy angle, but more than willing to find out where you go with it.
Author's Response:
I hated having to go there too - Thanks for sticking with me!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
hmmm i so hope Gran comes to the rescue because Alli is going to need the support.
Author's Response:
Alli is in the middle of a big, ugly mess... and it's only going to get worse.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
readin both. both are exciting. jason is awesome, i love the daily updates
Author's Response:
Thanks! Sadly, we are almost finished with the saga that is Alli and Jason's story. Then I can't promise daily updates on Second Spins - but I'll do my best to post more often.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow I wasn't expecting that but Jason handled that like a pro.
I hope he puts Yvette in her place next chapter
I have read second spins can't wait for the updates so may questions and Julian is totally drool worthy with the french/ italian thing and that was a terrible cliffy you left on that story
Author's Response:
There are certain things in this world that are absolute truths:
Yvette is a cunt.
French/Italian lovers with mad skills are swoon worthy.
I am a cliffy bitch.
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Crap really??? A baby?? well there goes the fun!!! Please tell me you have a plan? I will be waiting to see where this train wreck of Ali's life goes!! :)
Kay
Author's Response:
Haha - I promise I have a plan!!! The train wreck gets pretty hairy for a while, but there is a HEA!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good to see Margot's there for Ali I wish she would listen to her older sister but where would be the fun in that ;)
Date: 27 Feb 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hot man swimming in the summer :) NAKED I think that sums it up.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have never had poison oak but who would complain about it or stink tea when it is being applied by a Adonis countryMan
Author's Response:
Sadly Alli's sensitivity to poison oak is autobiographical for me. Even more sadly, I have never had an Adonis Counrtyman anoint me with stink tea or any other itch relieving substance.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Belly Butterflies :) you never forget that exited giddy feeling you get from a new crush/romance
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Jason remembers his " worth the wait" words in the future.
Author's Response:
Ah yes, my not-so-subtle foreshadowing...
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Old fashion soda shops are very cool I have been to one in Texas and one in Arizona
I feel for Ali with the prune juice I have been there but PrepH shopping for grandma I think there is some rule that says a cute guy has to see you buy embarrassing stuff at least once.
Author's Response:
Getting caught in embarrassing situations is the story of my life. I've learned to make awkward an artform.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love the update...wish it was longer though :) This should be interesting.
Author's Response:
It was a necessary filler chapter, that is true. Next chap is up!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
What if you get ten reviews from one person. Does that count? Cause just say the word and I review nine more times. ;)
Author's Response:
I am a review whore - I'll take what I can get!
xo
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 22
First remined me not to get pregnant those test cost a lot 11 doallars are you out of your mind.
My Honest opion I don't think she's preggo.
but who knows?
and for the first time in this story i wish there were VAmps so that they can take out Yvette.
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Yvette sucks. You'll hate her more in the coming chapters. I promise.
Date: 27 Feb 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have been reading this story since you started it I'm sorry for my prior lack of review but you should know yours is the first story I have felt compelled to review at all thank you for an amazing original.
Author's Response:
Being considered review worthy is truly an honor! I can't tell you how encouraging it is to get such wonderful feedback! Thank you thank you thank you!!!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 22
I knew that little biaotch would be a problem when she was introduced
A few chapters back. I'm going back to 1 and read the belly butterflies, baby goats and a hot man swimming in summer and hope for another update today
Author's Response:
Mmmm - good idea. Nothin' wrong with revisiting a little skinny dipping action!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ok I love the purple ans silver decorations!
Loved the almost kiss.
I find you very cruel for leaving us with such a massive cliffhanger!
I want more- i wail
Author's Response:
Hahaha - those were my school colors, I couldn't resist.
More has been posted! (But I'm not promising I'm not leaving you with another cruel cliffy!)
Date: 27 Feb 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oopsie on Jason and Ali wonder if anyone noticed that almost kiss and about the ending I'm just holding my breath and hoping you get 10 tonight
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you're invested in the story. This is a pretty big cliffy!
Date: 27 Feb 2012 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh no this can't be good
Author's Response:
Pregnancy scare, ailse 4.
Date: 26 Feb 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
I Love this story. It has brillant writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you - it also has brilliant reviewers!
Thanks for the continued support!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
I thought Jason was going to maul Derek! I can't wait for them to get back together, their love is so obvious:)
Jo
Author's Response:
All in due time. They need a little more drama first!
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Margos the best. I would like to hear more of the dinner arguments - that was funny.
So, if gram knows, then Linda was the only one at dinner that didn't know about Allie and Jason.
Homecoming!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks - if this were a tv series, I would love a full episode of the dinner argument. Hehehe
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Awwwwww. I love the apology!
Date: 26 Feb 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oooohhh Gran knowed something! (lol)
I like that Margot is such a wonderful sister she could have been a man stealer not that Jason would have gone along with it.
Oh and in case i did not say anything last time i like the way Jason apologized to Alli.
Can;t wait for the HOLY REPERCUSSIANS!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was rather proud of Jason's clever apology.
Gran and Margot seem to be firmly team Jaslie!
Date: 26 Feb 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
Love Gran and Margot can't wait for homecoming.
Author's Response:
Alli's got a lot of cool chicks in her family.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 26 Feb 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 20
oooo Gran's not as oblivious as Ali thinks can't wait to see what happens at homecoming
Author's Response:
We should never underestimate the perceptive qualities of our elders!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love Margot she is an awesome sister. And I can not wait to meet the juvy boy and see how much of a bad boy he is.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Margot's a sweetheart.
Juvy boy's bark is worse than his bite!
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
write more!:)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm ready for a good homecoming jealous rage!!!!
Author's Response:
What Homecoming is complete without a little date drama?
Thanks for commenting!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Holy hieroglyphics Isis, you big tease!
No pulling the wool over a granny's eyes and to ladies 'd'un cetain age' differences in age not measured in decades is the stuff of trivia, surely?
Come on peoples, comment!
Author's Response:
Gran is a smart bird.
Thanks for the reviews!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
totally love it. poor linda though if she only knew she only had the wrong daughter pegged.
Author's Response:
Let's hope she remembers how much she likes Jason when she finds out about his relationship with Alli!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
No they won;t make a cute couple.
I'm glad he apologized to Alli!
Can;t wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
No, they wouldn't make a cute couple - but perhaps cute partners in crime? I hope you like how they team up at dinner!
Date: 24 Feb 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
brillent
Author's Response:
Thank you. One can never go wrong when referencing Pride and Prejudice!
Date: 24 Feb 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love this story... I am glad your back and posting it daily I'm craving it like my caffeine.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! I liked your comment more than chocolate!
Date: 24 Feb 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
nope, they wont. team jaslie all the way
Author's Response:
Haha - Team Jaslie. That's catchy.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh so much drama!
I but i'm glad mary knows about them.
Alli has her sister. He deserves to have someone in his corner!
Can't wait for more I love it!
Author's Response:
I love his mom. She's very supportive and understanding.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
He's such a sweetheart.
Surely the old 'cruel-to-be-kind' chestnut won't last long??
The course of true love never did run smooth, but I can't help but wonder how this will pan out with his job and her age.
Write more please & soon :)
Author's Response:
Some sacrifices will be made. We can't have it all, can we?
This is the nice and sweet version of this story. There is a longer version with much more angst that takes place 6 years later.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
This should be interesting. Does Jason the saint get jealous???
Please post soon!
Author's Response:
I promise, Homecoming will be a beautiful disaster.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm with the other reviewers on this one - HOW did Jason not totally go off on Allie? And why would he want her to date highschool boys if he plans to get back together with her?
Author's Response:
He wants Alli to try to have a normal highschool experience. It's the ol' If you love someone set them free thing. Yeah, it doesn't work so well for him...
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 15
I would definitely have thrown up. Definitely. Allll over my cute little school uniform. Gah.
I used to have Bantam chickens! They do make cute little eggs.
Author's Response:
I love chickens. I wish I had the yard to keep a few of them again. I would make sure to have some Bantys!
Thanks for all the reviews. You're a spped reader!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Awwww. Jason's in love. His heart is going to crumble when he finds out the truth. OMG School starts!!!
Author's Response:
The fist day at a new school is always a bit nerve wracking, no? ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Community college? Is he reallly buying that?
Author's Response:
*shrug* It seemed like a plausible idea at the time.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Squeeeeee! You're posting again! How did I miss this?!?! Can't wait to catch up.
VERY sweet/sexy lemon btw.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm trying to post in my other story too. Thanks for the reviews!!
Date: 23 Feb 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok glad she was smart and did not except the date to homecoming with her school mate.
Can't wait till Jason is rating will it be because of Alli's choice of homecoming date or because mama Taylor finds out about them?
Egarly awaiting next chapter.
Author's Response:
Homecoming is going to be a glorious mess!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
I so LOVE this fic!!! Sorry I didn't get to review yesterday but I wanted to be able to give you proper grammar and such! I holding outfor the HEA, andI will make sure I review each chapter.
I feel SO bad for Allie and Jason, this cannot be easy on either one of them. Hopefully both Mommas' and Grandma will let this play out as smoothly as possible for them.
Jo
Author's Response:
I'm thrilled you're seeing it through to the end. They do get a HEA - I promise! This is actually a very sweet/sappy version of this story. I revised it and came up with a very different ending. It's twice as long and shows us Alli and Jason 6 years in the future. I'm debating whether or not I should post it.
Thanks again for the reviews!
Date: 23 Feb 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
write more!!
Author's Response:
*salute*
Date: 22 Feb 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooo me thinks the green eyed monster is going to come out and play
Author's Response:
Well see... there's only so much one man can take!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Phew! Ellen to the rescue! I don't think I could bear fore Alli to have to experience another of Josh's slobbering kisses!
Trip
Author's Response:
As someone who has lived through one of Josh's slobbery kisses, I quite agree!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jason is going to be really jealous, but it isn't like he can do anything about it. Alli is just doing what he told her to do.
I think you mixed up the names "jason," and "Josh" in the scene where Alli and Ellen are talking to Josh by the lockers. At one point you refer to him as "Jason." That threw me through a loop for a minute before I realized you most likely meant to write "Josh."
And you said you were surprised that your readers (including me) thought Jason was going to be livid with Alli. I that for myself, I came to this conclusion because when I am feeling hurt, betrayed, and heartbroken, I am also very, very angry and I lash out. It is a very human response. Jason's quiet sorrow and regret is so noble and mature it's borderline superhuman. I keep waiting to see a crack in his perfect facade.
Author's Response:
Yes! Thank you for catching that mistake. This is a very old version of this story, and I keep forgetting to check for mistakes that have been fixed in later versions. (The current version of this story is twice as long and shows Jason and Alli 6 years in the future. It's much darker - but very rewarding.)
Jason is far from perfect - he's just very level-headed and not one to lash out. (He's based very much on a RL person.) You'll see him have a bit of a meltdown in the next chapter.
Date: 22 Feb 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow! Jason is a saint. Seriously. I was expecting some impressive hurtfelt rage and all he gave us was quiet regret. I am really surprised.
And I really want another chapter, so keep posting!
Author's Response:
The rage happened in private. By the time Alli came around he had reached a place of reason. Don't worry - he'll blow off some steam real soon.
Date: 22 Feb 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
I had no clue you had started posting again but I'm Loving it. Can't wait til the next chapter.
I'm glad that he is not MAD but the next 11 months have to feel like a life time to both Allie and Jason>
Author's Response:
Hi *is* mad - but being mad isn't going to change the situation. He's a very level-headed guy.
The next 11 months are quite a roller coaster for our friends.
Date: 22 Feb 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
whoa dang i just read the last 5 chapter and even though i was perpared for this i was no wat ready for this!
Author's Response:
It's gonna get worse before it gets better!
Date: 22 Feb 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
upload soon:)
Author's Response:
Will do :)
Date: 22 Feb 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
HUH i was so sexpecting him to be furious with her guess love does conquer all
Author's Response:
He was. It's a shame he didn't stay that way, because being pissed off would be easier than pining...