Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Okay, but his mom saw the painting of Alli. Granted its only a quarter finished, but how much of her is exposed? She was posing nude wasn't she?
Author's Response:
Yes! Very, very nude, and it's a full body portrait.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
tissues were needed. i am not sure who i feel worse for, allie or jason. i have faith in them though
Author's Response:
Fair warning: It's going to get worse before it gets better.
Date: 21 Feb 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well, if you're whoring for comments I suppose I'm a repeat offender.
Jason must have the patience of a saint; I was expecting fireworks and recriminations. Bring on the insatiable longing :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's not a hot-headed kind of guy. Plus, he had a few hours to process things before Alli found him in the shop.
Thanks for the reviewing - I will continue to whore and post in the hopes that you continue to read and enjoy!
Date: 21 Feb 2012 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh god! I would have thrown up too. And then I would have been visibly shaking during the entirety of the class.
As bad as I feel for Alli, she deserves everything she's about to get. But poor Jason.....!
Author's Response:
If you ask me, Alli gets off easy.
Well, that's not true. Karma's a bitch. But more on that in the coming chapters...
Date: 20 Feb 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
holy cow. i had a extremely hot biology teacher i high school who was all of maybe twenty two. they have to be ok, they make such a cute couple. sorry for the punctuation and stuff i couldnt wait to review and my phone sucks
Author's Response:
I had a serious crush on my theater teacher. He was around 24 or 25. Now as I sit here, 33 years old, I laugh at how sophisticated and mature I thought he was.
Thanks for reviewing - comments make me smile as much as writing this stuff in the first place.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh I feel so bad for poor Jason! His heart is going to break into a million furious pieces when he finds out.
I am on the edge of my seat here. Please keep writing!
Author's Response:
I feel bad for him too. He really is a sweet man. He doesn't deserve such drama! (If you're like me, you'll love him all the more in the coming chapters!)
Date: 20 Feb 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
write more
Author's Response:
Yes ma'am.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
oooo me thinks Alli's world is about to come crashing in around her
Author's Response:
I'm glad *I'm* not in her position. At least this time - I wouldn't mind being in her position other times. *cough*
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
I HOPE they make it through Allies' Lil white lie! THey are so cute together. Yes there is a big age difference, BUT, it can be worked through!
Jo
Author's Response:
It wouldn't be a romance if they didn't end up together, right? That being said, Jason is a man of integrity, and very much not okay with breaking the law. We'll see how he deals with this new revealation.
Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can't imagine what his reaction will be when he finds out her age.
Author's Response:
He probably wouldn't be as bothered by the age difference if he wasn't her TEACHER. That's gotta put a little extra suckiness in to the mix for him. Poor guy.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Whoring for comments? *standing, waving a wad of notes*
School week...eek! *bites knuckles* Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Your enthusiasm makes me grin. Thanks so much for the review support!! I hope you like the way it all plays out.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
i can't wait for the next chapter. i have been wanting to read the whole school and meeting the teacher thing for ages
korenx
Author's Response:
I hope you liked it - I tried to give it just the right amount of awkward. It was actually inspired by a pilot I read years ago. I might have to dig it up and post it with credits so you guys can enjoy it. I was shocked the pilot never got picked up as it was HILARIOUS. (Not that Alli and Jason's school meeting is funny by any stetch of the imagination.)
Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm a late comer to the TWCS but i have to tell you I read your story in one sitting, I enjoyed it so much.
I love the characters and their dialouge; the story is sweet, funny and sexy and I'm so looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much. I really had a lot of fun with these characters. I look forward to the feedback!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
So pleased you have updated and I'm now eager for more. What will your posting schedule be like?
Author's Response:
A chapter a day most likely. This version of the story is finished and ready to go!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
If you are still interested in publishing this i know of an ebook publisher that might be interested. email me at vbfb19@hotmail.com if you are interested.
Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I thoroughly enjoyed this chap. but i am curious i thought this was one of the winners of the contest and was expecting to see it published. What happened?
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it. TWCS has passed on this story. I'm not at liberty to say more. The good news is you can look forward to reading the rest of it right here!
Date: 17 Sep 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh okay!! I love this story and I am so happy that you won!! :) I can't wait to read the rest when its done! :) Good Job!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'll be sure to sing it from the roof tops when it comes out!
Date: 11 Sep 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
I spent all afternoon engrosed in this story. I'm so glad you won and will be publishing it. I can't wait to finish reading this story. I'm definitely hooked :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - that makes my night! I can't wait to share the rest of the story with everyone. I'm proud of it! They go on quite a ride!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
The instant chemistry between these two is very well written. You can feel their butterflies and you captured the rush of a surprise instant attraction perfectly. And I'm a bit less sceptical for the poor guys that swear, "she said she was 18" .
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. This was a very fun story to write.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm relatively new here and am guessing that a "Beta" is like an editor?? Do you read first drafts for people and give suggestions/clean up mistakes? To answer your question, Yes, a Beta in the fanfiction world prereads, helps with typos, grammer, sentence structure and little stuff like that. I tend to be more of a hands on one, loving to make suggestions and additions...my wonderful authors lovingly call it "wendynitis", but I love doing it and think most of my authors like the way I do things... Haven't got to read more today, been stuck in the recliner all day due to pain, and since laptop died, can only get into office to answer emails or edit or write in spurts... I will get to it eventually, promise... WendyD
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, please know that as a Beta...I am very busy and commenting is hard...but I just had to let you know that I really like this story...
I was hoping the relationship would get a little farther than naked cuddles...but now since the contest got pushed another month for some reason...I will take my time and try to comment in more detail as my Stalker Fan persona loves to do!
So, you will see me back here again...I promise....well...okay I strongly intend to!
WendyD
Author's Response:
Wow - thanks! I look forward to your possible stalking. I love these characters, and I promise their story doesn't stop at naked cuddles. I give them quite an adventure (both good and bad).
I'm relatively new here and am guessing that a "Beta" is like an editor?? Do you read first drafts for people and give suggestions/clean up mistakes?
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
i was wondering why my phone didn't beep with an update message from you today! so glad to hear you are finished, i thought you were with the daily updates, so sucks that we have to wait until august-ish to fnish the story! but i am glad that you have entered the contest. i wish you luck the story is good, trust me i read a LOT!!! lol
so the phone call.... the reason she is staying for school next year perhaps? i was thinking that would come later in the story you know for the shock and awe factor, too late to do anything.
can't wait for august! good luck again!
suzie :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sunshine-Sue. I look forward to getting your reviews!
Yeah, the phone call was about Alli staying for the school year, but don't worry, there is plenty of shock and awe when her ruse is revealed. Trust me.
Date: 29 Jun 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
write more!
Author's Response:
I promise to update daily just as soon as voting is over and I'm allowed to show you the rest!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
OO she's allprepared for sex yeah right being on the pill doesn't make you prepared there is so much more to it.
I am a little sad tht we have to wait so long for the next chap but as a challenge entrant myself i understand the rules. Good luck
Author's Response:
Yes, sometimes Alli's age shows and reminds us how naive she is. I remember thinking I knew everything at 17. Ah those were the days.
Thanks for your reviews, and good luck with the challenge! I'll have to go check out your submission.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 10
hubbie was like that for my first time, almost completely killed the mood by asking if i was sure! heehee silly man but you gotta love the thought behind it.
these two have definately crossed over from friend to more.and they have finally admitted to it both to themselves and to eachother.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm naked cuddles almost as good as sex. If i was Alli though i would have at least offered him a little hand relief maybe some mutual hand relief.
Hmm can't wait to see whats next
Date: 26 Jun 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh dear Alli is showing her age a little. Poor Jason all mopy oh well can't wait to see what happens when a little UST gets resolved.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nothing like jealousy to push you in the right direction.. ;)
Another great chapter.
-Angie
Date: 25 Jun 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
ahhh! just what alli needed to push in the right direction. time for her to have a chat with jason and move things away from the friends only section.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
alli is too funny, she is trying to be so good by having the friend talk but she still hasn't told him the truth of why they should just be friends. she is making sure to keep their options open. jason seems so enthralled with her. i think all it will take is a a little nudge and maybe some of that strawberry wine to get these two pushed over the edge and into eachother's arms...
Author's Response:
Or jealousy over a cheap bar fly...
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
the differences is not that bed is it? only 6 years right? anyway :) i love this and cant wait fro mroe :)
Date: 24 Jun 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Aww I love them. Poor Alli and her guilt. I can't wait until he finds out her real age.
Keep up the amazing work.
-Angie
Date: 24 Jun 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok so i totaly no a baby goat is a kid but gosh it is stange to read it with thinking about children.
It was a cute chapter though it felt a little transitional can't wait to see whats next though
Date: 24 Jun 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh shit things are getting a little close there. i wonder how alli will be able to avert this one? more poison oak maybe? jason is over his hurt from his lost love, must be something healing his heart...
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Typical bloke always putting his foot in his mouth. If jason is looking for curvy women to paint nude i'll put my hand up.
Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.
Date: 22 Jun 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
ooo poor Allie got to go swimming with a naked man *sarcasm* i am really loving this story can't wait to see how far they take their relationship
Author's Response:
Oh, they take it far. Very far.
Glad you like it so far!
Date: 22 Jun 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
Things are heating up and neither of them seems ready to stop the burn.
Author's Response:
Now why would they want to STOP?! :)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
haha he gave her a rash! too funny, see what happens when you give in and kiss the sexy man? but then he got rub her with lotion and tea.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all of your encouraging reviews! I love getting feedback.
You're going to love the next chapter. (I hope) :)
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
sounds like jason is ready to take the next step. wonder how he is gonna do it? or will alli make the first move?
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
they are cute together. and poor alli keeps freaking out over getting caught in her little lie.
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
i love the banter and back and forth with these two. they seem to compliment eachother nicely.
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh the idea for this story was just too good to pass up! i can not wait to see where you will tak these 2!!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
likin the start of this and cant wait for more :)
Date: 21 Jun 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm YAY they kissed and boy what a kiss. i would so happily get a dose of poison oak if it meant a sexy man was gonna look after me.
i keep thinking that 6 years isn't really a big age gap but when your a minor those years until 18 make such a difference. cannot wait to see how this is going to play out.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok i am really enjoying this at the moment i can't help but keep thinking just kiss already.
Now i'm going to confess i read a lot of twilight fanfiction and i can't help but think how Bella like Allie is bookworm tendancies and all. It is still a good story
Author's Response:
Thanks! Ask and you shall receive. Chapter five has that long awaited kiss.
Alli's love of books, aweful first kiss with a high-school boy, and interest in older men are all part of what I was like at her age. However I never lied about my age to bag my hot teacher... more's the pity!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
this is such a good story please write more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I just posted a few more chapters.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Very good, looking forward to more. You're doing a great job.
-Angie
Author's Response:
Thanks! I checked out your stories and am already hooked on Quiet on the Set.
Date: 18 Jun 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
So great! Can't wait to read more about these two. And is that some foreshadowing - "she was studying his torso through his open shirt as if she would be tested on the knowledge"? Already smokin hot. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it. Stick with me - I promise things heat up in chapter five!!