Date: 22 May 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Damn! It's fascinating how Bella and Edward are getting into their characters, while exploring their real-life passion. Seems even Jake is getting the proper mind-set, and Aro is very encouraging. This play is is really cool!
Date: 22 May 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not a milieu I'm familiar with, so it's very interesting. The gender-switch thing is different, for sure. Edward needs to get his head screwed on straight, where Bella is concerned. If he has feelings for her, and she for him, things may get a lot more interesting! Hopefully, he will listen to Angela's advice.
Date: 25 Jul 2011 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
You have got to be kidding me. I know what a good author you are. I would of thought you would have more reviews than this. I loved it funny and crazy at the same time. Are you expanded on it or done that part has me confused. I do feel for bella her dad is not there to support her.
Date: 02 Jul 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Definite potential but a little confused on the Jessica, Mike & Bella thing. Was Mike forcing himself on Bella & why did she go p there with him? Didn't get why Jessica's comments to her & a condom would do that.
Hoping subsequent chapters will be a bit clearer..