Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:17 PM Title: Forgive Me Not
great start, would love it if you continued.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Forgive Me Not
Wow. Very powerful piece, which by the way, is just begging for more!
Coppertop
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:18 PM Title: Forgive Me Not
Does he make it? Please continue it .
Author's Response:
Dear Mae,
I don't think I've heard from you before. Thank you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it!:) Please note that Edward crashed. I didn't not specify anywhere that he died! Hehe!
This was really more of a personal challenge than anything else for me, to see if I can write a OS or not. I'm so happy you took a look:)
If I get more inquiries I will definitely tell the full story. I would be honored if you came on that journey with me.
Thank you.
Hugs:)
X0X0
Issy
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:28 PM Title: Forgive Me Not
Very interesting! I love all the mystery! Please continue!
Author's Response:
Dear Catherine,
I don't think I've heard from you before! Thank you so much for your kind review. I really appreciate it!:)
It was really more of a personal challenge than anything else for me, to see if I can write a OS or not. It was really tricky cramming a massive canvas into 2000 words. I am not surprised at all that it feels unfinished.
Regardless, I'm so happy you took a look:)
If I get more inquiries I might tell the full story. Who knows?
Hugs:)
X0X0
Issy
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:06 PM Title: Forgive Me Not
YES! Please expand this! I want to know what he did. I want to know what it was that sent his parents away, and what she did that Rose was thanking her for.
Author's Response:
Dear Kimberly,
OMG! Thank you so much for kindly checking this out. I never thought anyone would even bother to look at it. I am really floored!
Also, thank you for being my first (and quite possibly only) reviewer at TWCS!! Yay!!
I am seriously thinking about expanding it. However, I am also realizing that I have a very deranged mind and things that are spewed out of my brain are often not fit for normal people. So, I will have to think long and hard about it.
Thank you very much in either case:)
Lots of love:)
X0X0
Issy