Date: 05 Dec 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
damn that was harsh! looking forward to the next chapter i feel for bella i just hope it gets better !
Author's Response:
Yes, Jess and Lauren both had harsh endings. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ok, I want to whip out cans of Douchebag-Vamp-Away for Alice and Edward...
Love it, and I looked at the wedding and bridesmaids dresses online...*shudders* :)
Love it of course and can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Yes, Alice and Edward need to go, but not yet. It's not the right time.
Weren't those wedding dresses scary?
More to come soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, thank goodness for OCD, or Jasper wouldn't have gotten there in time! If Edward hadn't waited for the laundry to be done, Bella would have been badly hurt. Just a question: if you rip off a vmapire's limbs, do HAVE to be reattached in the same places, or can you swap them around? I think Eddie would look great with his feet where his ears used to be. Use your creativity, I'm sure you can come up with something suitably grotesque, lol. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I'm thankful for Edward's OCD too. As for vampire limbs, I've always been under the impression that they can be swapped. Edward might look nice with boobies. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it and grrr edward and alice have some nerve! so lad jasper was there to stop the rape...and now the wolves know of the whats been goin on.....poor jess i understand her being afraid to change and missing her parents.....cant wiat for more!!!
Author's Response:
Edward and Alice are definitely sick and twisted. Jasper was tuned into Bella because he marked her.
Thank goodness for Charlie straightening out the wolves.
As for Jess, her feelings are the ones Bella should have had in the original Twilight series, I think.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
loved the chapter looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
More coming soon. Thanks for your review. XOXO
Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella: Awww poor sad jess. cant blame her though. lol for hospital stories and Carlisle. Ugh bitchy renee. noooo Malice and Pussyward got them?!?!?! At least Jazz got there in time. Charlie is funny. ROFL for pack showing up. Hmmm Lauren and the Rez boys huh? ha ha for Rachel's cooking. Woo Hoo New Treaty.
Jess: Awww her mom is sweet. Sorry still cant see having a hello kitty gown, and yes I saw the web site. Halloween costumes if ya ask me. lol.
Author's Response:
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! ... I think that Jessica's reservations are good ones :)
Stupid Edward and Alice... hope that they are caught soon! Cant' wait to see that!
Author's Response:
Jessica's reservations are the ones that Bella should have had in the original Twilight series. It always irked me that she only thought of herself.
Edward and Alice need to die.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hahaha, Emmett pulled a Tom Cruise when he proposed at the top of the Eiffel Tower :) It was actually perfectly Emmett, and romantic :)
Haha, in fact each proposal was perfect for each couple, and I have to say that Peter's was the funniest one!
How ironic, and totally funny for Angela and Carlisle! Excellent!!
Haha, I would LOVE to be a fly on the wall when the boys are shopping! What a scream!!
Hello Kitty? Really? Hahahahaha!
Wow...hypocritical much, Alice and Edward? Talk about deluded...
LOVE it of course!
Author's Response:
Really? Did Tom Cruise propose at the top of the Eiffel Tower. I'm not a TC fan at all. Emmett's proposal was my favorite. Now with Jasper, I could see him planning a whole elaborate proposal then stumbling. That's why I wrote his that way. As for Peter and Lauren...well, come on now...it's perfect.
Ahem, Hello Kitty Wedding Dresses really do exist. http://jezebel.com/5069998/hello-kitty-wedding-gowns-for-the-childish-bride
As for Malice and Eddie Pooh....yep, they're deluded.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
I never thought I would be repulsed by Edward but you have done it. Coopulation after you fold your clothes. Who would want to after those words?
Does he take off his undergarmets and fold them properly and then fold back the covers to cover himself when he gets in so she can't see? YIKES.. YUK
Author's Response:
Alice wants to copulate post clothes folding. And of course he folds his undergarments. LOL> XOXO
Date: 07 Nov 2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sadly, Alice and Edward seem to be perfect for one another; both a couple of messed-up head cases. I think Emmet's proposal was my favorite, just too sweet to do it after carrying he up to the top of the Eiffel Tower! Although I had a sort of King Kong kind of picture in my mind, lol. Excellent transitional chapter!
Author's Response:
Emmett's proposal was my absolute favorite too! XOXO
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
BPOV: Figures Renee wouldnt come even for Bella's sake. What a selfish bitch. Aww for Pete buying the place. LOL for Charlie living it up as an oddball newborn. Woo Hoo for traveling in Europe. I'll do that someday. Awww Sweet proposal Jazz. Awww Em too. OMG for Peter/Lauren. ROFL.
Ang/Carl: I lived here 4 years and I still havent seen BMG.
Jazz POV: ROFL for the idiot going back to a steakhouse again. Dayum. Big ass gift card. Woo Hoo for finally popping that cherry.....although surprised she didnt make him wait till married. Hee hee. OMG for TrueBlood reference.... psst I hate ScumBill too. lol for wedding clothes conversations. Hello Kitty?!?!? You have a warped mind. lol
Malice POV: Copulation??? What a pussy Fuckward is. Fold clothes first? almost spit my tea out on my screen. Idiots.
Author's Response:
Renee is not a malicious lady, she's just extremely selfish. She's not malicious like in the Walmart story though. She cares about Bella, but she cares about herself more...which is unacceptable for a mother's standpoint. I'm sure that, as a mommy, you'd drop everything to make sure that your kid was emotionally okay.
Charlie was meant to be a vampire, he's living life and loving it.
Pete is a proactive thinker.
Really? BMG is terrific, I saw it here in Boston. I took my kids and they all loved it. It's truly a show worth seeing.
Jasper really is a glutton for punishment. Why would you take Bella to a steakhouse again. And Bella's cherry needed to be popped and now she's marked. Oh, and Bill is just...blech...he's perfect for Edward.
Hello Kitty Wedding gowns. Alas, my mind is not warped. They really do exist. Check this page out. http://jezebel.com/5069998/hello-kitty-wedding-gowns-for-the-childish-bride
Most people have sex...Edward and Alice copulate. XOXO
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG Loved Angela and Carlisle's wedding and the fact that in the end she married someone that her parents would have wanted!! LMAO too funny and Peter's proposal was just so him.... Jasper's was so sweet!
Hello kitty wedding and bridesmaid dresses! WOW I think even Alice would have an problem with those! LOL
Alice and Eddie Pooh are just disturbing and crazy ..............
Can't wait to read the next one! :)
Author's Response:
The irony that Angela married the type of guy that her parents would have wanted is too funny. I tried to get the proposals as close to their personalities as possible.
Yep, I do declare that Alice would have definite issues with Hello Kitty wedding dresses. Check out this link: http://jezebel.com/5069998/hello-kitty-wedding-gowns-for-the-childish-bride
Alice is consumed with pleasing Eddie Pooh--that's it. More coming soon. XOXO
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
What happened to Eddie and Alli? Were they just putting on a show when Edward was with Bella?..........I hope Jasper can keep Bella safe from them.
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward was putting on a show...he was following Alice's every command. Jasper is now more connected to Bella now that he's marked her. XOXO
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved it looking forward to the enxt one
Author's Response:
Aww...I'm glad you enjoyed it. More soon. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved it and jasper did great with his slip! at least he wsa able to stop! and peter drinking from lauren? im surprised she hadnt told the other girls i loved the prorosals..lol peter and laurens has the funniest! hmmm bet there will be trouble in forks for the wedding hopefully peter will know something is up and they can be ready!
Author's Response:
Now that Jasper has slipped, therefore marking Bella, they'll feel more connected. That should give you a big hint. Bella and Jess are up next. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well, there's not a lot more I can say that hasn't already been said. I am SO looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
More coming soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like that Laurent and Victoria were written as good guys. It was kind of a surprise, and I am glad that they were there with the best of intentions :)
Edward needs a good kick up the...nevermind.
Alice needs to be smacked for a variety of reasons, not the least of which is the nickname 'Eddie Pooh'. Really?!?!?
Love it as always!!
Author's Response:
Laurent and Victoria...here's the thing, I really like Victoria. I truly feel as if she was dealt a raw deal by first having a scum bag like James as a mate and for having to deal with the loss of her eternal love.
Edward is truly obsessed with Bella's blood and Alice is a lost soul. You'll see what I mean soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
I figured it would be something like that with Bella and the steaks. I have a relative that is a bit extreme in that area as well and I recognized the signs haha :)
I like that there was not a big freak out when they found out about the vampage. This just keeps getting better and better :)
Author's Response:
Nah, Jess and Lauren weren't going to freak out. Jess is a romantic and she's fallen head over heels in love with Em and Lauren is freaky--perfect for Petey.
As for the steaks, I plead the fifth. That was partly based on me. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
I freaking love this! I can't wait to click 'next' :)
I had a question. With the other stories you have going right now, do you find it hard to keep the story lines straight? If you do, it sure doesn't show. This is fantastic!!
Author's Response:
No, I think all three of the stories that I'm working on have completely different story lines so I manage to keep it straight. If I experience a bit of a block then I have a couple of one-shots that I've been working on forever that were started because I needed to take my mind to a completely different plane just so I could go back to the stories I'm working on. Does that make any sense to you?
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow...what a twist of events! I am hoping for the HEA for Jasper and Bella, because I totally get why she is freaked out right now...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you understand why she's freaked out. Some readers thought she was selfish for her reaction, but the only thing she knew of vampires is what Edward told her so her reaction is normal. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am alone reading this at the moment and it is a good thing too, because I am laughing out loud quite a bit!!
Author's Response:
Don't drink anything while reading and put plastic wrap over the keyboard...I was told to advise this by one of my readers. Glad you got to laugh. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
I was trolling for a new J/B story, and when I found this one I saw it was one of yours and I almost didn't even read the summary before starting the story. I know whatever you post is going to rock!
I love how you have a way with taking characters and fleshing them out differently than they have been before. It is believable and it works :)
Oh my word, this is going to be one freaking awesome story! I cannot WAIT to read more!
Author's Response:
Welcome to my new story! This one is going to be a bit different as you can see from the characters involved. Thank you for the compliments. You really made my day. XOXO
Date: 28 Oct 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Charlie>>>LOL
Author's Response:
Charlie is all kinds of win. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! Charlie knew all along! so awesome... and now he is going to be a vampire and can deal with Edward and Alice!!! Can't wait to see more! :)
Author's Response:
Of course Charlie knew. I always figured that he was too close to the Quileutes not to know. More to come. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love the cruiser on the roof, I could just see it in my head. I reslly love the way you write Charlie in all your stories. And thanks, by the way; you write him as an intelligent man, Meyer made him a total idiot. He'd have never made it as a cop let alone become Cheif.
Author's Response:
I agree with you on Meyer making him an idiot. Actually, in the original series, I'm convinced that every character is stubborn, hard-headed, and an idiot to boot. I mean, what kind of father allows his daughter to fall into a deep, dank depression for months over a boy? Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG just found this story and I love it. Never thought I would like Lauren and Jess but I do roll on the rest of the transformations i just love the way you write x
Author's Response:
Welcome! This is going to be one nutty ride and someone had to redeem Lauren and Jess, and since I specialize in the redemption of traditionally bad characters, it had to be me. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG LOVED IT. Charlie is such a blast.
Author's Response:
Charlie is absolutely fantabulous! Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Oct 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
love that charlie is joining them in the journey! looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Charlie is joining them and for very fatherly reasons too. Glad you liked it. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 22 Oct 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love that Jasper reads the novels too, he is a sensitive guy in touch with feelings afterall! Edward is a real creeper and Alice is the uber manipulator. I also like Victoria and Laurent being mates instead of her and James. :)
Author's Response:
Jasper is an avid reader and reading those romance novels brings him closer to all of the girls. Your synopsis of Ali and Eddie are correct. Vicky and Laurent are all sorts of good. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 21 Oct 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am laughing as usual when mama is the author. Humor is such a good medicine. Edward ahh give it up. She is not going to let you in anything. Jasper will kill you straight out for touching his mate.
I say change Bella soon. She is so nifty as a vamp.
Author's Response:
Edward is completely obsessed with Bella's blood. She is his singer after all. Jasper will kill him and someone else will be lining up right behind him. Bella does need to be changed, pronto ASAP. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
poor bella and her crazy bdsm nvels haha! and edward and alice have major issues!! im glad vicky and laurent want to help though snd cant wait to see how bella and her shield turn out..as ausual cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
Edward is sick and Alice is sicker. Bella and BDSM don't mix. Laurent and Vicky are good guys and there are more adventures to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved this... and yay for a nice Victoria again! :) OMG the halloween part was just too funny and then the end with Bella getting scared reading all the BDSM books! LMAO!
-Kate
Author's Response:
Hi Kate,
I love making Victoria a good character. I thought that she was dealt a raw deal when James was killed. Bella should never read a BDSM novel. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
Peter POV: LOL for boys not loking the costumes. ROFL green M&M. Jazz will loan Bella? Dumbass. LOL for not knowing he was invoted to a goy sorority party. LOL for jazz playing with the emotions. Hee hee for jazz still not getting laid
Eddie: What a skanky prick. Him and Malice really need to just die
Jazz: Ah well at least he is almost getting laid. Hee hee. Ah well at least vicky is smart enough to be afraid of the major. Wow interesting Malice story they are telling. LOL for Lauren and skanky panties. Nooo keep reading the novels. Yummyness.
Author's Response:
Those boys should have paid more attention to their costumes instead of becoming so possessive. These are modern girls, for goodness sakes. You're right, Jazz wasn't thinking on the loaning of the girlfriend front.
Eddie is obsessed with Bella's blood and Alice is obsessed with pleasing Eddie. Does that make sense?
Jazz will get laid eventually. Bella's going to hold out for a while. And Vicky and Laurent are really good folks. As for Lauren, she doesn't want anyone wearing skanky panties. One year without bathing? Blech.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella......dangerous vampires always after her. She just needs to be changed already!
Author's Response:
You're right, she does need to be changed. Others feel the same way. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 19 Oct 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
More coming soon. That's a promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 19 Oct 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOl! Pete should have read that name tag before wearing that lab coat. Edward and Alice need to take a road trip through a forest fire. The BDSM novel thing was funny, what a misunderstanding!
Author's Response:
Pete wasn't paying attention to his costume and reaped the consequences of it. It's his fault for being so possessive. You're right, Edward and Alice need to be turned to cinder. And Bella should never, ever read a BDSM novel. LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 12 Oct 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
Okay well I love ya Mama. I wish Bella was a little sweeter. I know life has been kicking her for a while. Relax Bella you finally have someone that will love you like you should be loved. I think part of her problem is Lauren. Lauren is another version of Rose.
I think it is nice to switch everything up and give people different partners and out come. The fact Bella has been the "boss" is funny. She is smart and uses her head. I do not understand why Edward and Malice wont leave them alone.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Mary, Bella's a sweet girl. She has to put on a tough exterior around everyone because she's been burned a lot. Lauren's a bit different from Rose, she actually wears every emotion on her sleeve and never holds back. She's also a ditz.
Bella can keep her head together, that's why she's the Major's mate. As for Edward and Malice, you will learn about them next when you hear from the boy himself.
Thanks for reading and reviewing XOXO
Date: 12 Oct 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved it ! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. More to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing XOXO
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Lauren: yeah Poor bella with the pain. LOL for the steak house. Bella knows what she wants huh. OMG for her storming the kitchen. LOL for anal steaks.
EM: LOL for Dude looking like paris hilton. LOl for Em being in awe of mean Bella. Woo Hoo for Fuckward and Malice's powers on the fritz. Oh Crap..... Carlisle was the first to break???
Carlisle: Go quick thinking Bella. LOL for Carlsile losing the bet. Silly man
Peter: oooh knocking Bella out will probably bite Jazz in the arse later. Well Lauren is taking it well. LOL for Bella and Lauren's dirty mouths. Aww for mushy jess. Surprised they want to wait and finish school first. OOOOh I love cheesecake factory. Peter got a good job. Poor Em.
EM: WOW Em got the short end of the stick at his age and all. lol for Jazz not getting laid
Jasper: Glad Jazz is happy about the job and school. Glad Ang is doing ok. Spray tanning....smart. I bet charlie does know something.
Great job.
Author's Response:
Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG.......this story is a riot!!!! I've enjoyed every chapter so far. Keep up the good work ;-) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. This has been a joy to write. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOL! Carlisle's reaction to his slip was way too funny! I love how Bella is the only one who keeps her head. Poor Peter and Emmett, I've seen how customers treat people in the service industries, and I know how it sucks. At least Peter can get tipped. Congratulations on your nomination!
Author's Response:
It was time for Carlisle to slip. He was so sure of his control around humans that he neglected to take the power of mating into consideration. Bella can keep her head for two reasons: one, she's Charlie's daughter and he's a cop, and two, she is the only one that is level headed enough to be mated to an empath. As for Peter and Emmett, they needed to be brought down a notch. I remember working part time as a waitress in the summers during college, not easy, you have to have lots of patience. Thanks, I'm still in shock over the nomination.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
loved it! so funny! bella in a steakhouse was a trip! and love that we got to hear from peter and em at the new jobs! haha! cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
I put a little of me when I wrote Bella in the steakhouse. I'm a tyrant when it comes to steak. And as for Peter and Em working, I had to bring them down a notch. Thanks for reading and reviewing XOXO
Date: 11 Oct 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! wow I didn't think that Carlisle would be the one to lose control! Love how Bella and Jasper took charge :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
It's about time Carlisle lost control. He's been too perfect all along. And Bella and Jasper took charge because, well, one is the Major and the other one is the only one who can keep her head well enough to be his mate. Thanks for reading and reviewing XOXO
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved this chapter... at least Bella and Jasper made some progress and she knows everything now :) LOL at the backwash beer they served the guys.... they so deserved that!
Can't wait to see what happens at the steakhouse!
Author's Response:
B and J made a lot of progress. Jasper has learned not to come on too strong with her and Bella has learned to trust him a little. The backwash beer...yes...gee, I don't know where that came from..*smirks*
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to their reaction !
Author's Response:
More coming soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 03 Oct 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
loved it and cant wait to find out what happed to bella steakhouse
Author's Response:
I love a good steak, don't you? Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 03 Oct 2011 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm really loving this story. I like that they are together but I thought Bella would have resisted Jasper more but It looks like she could have some evil plans for the four vampires. Looking forward to next update.
Author's Response:
Bella have evil plans? Nah, not really, there are other dangers lurking out there. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 03 Oct 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
I feel Bad for Jasper he gets stuck with Bella. I understand that she may be pissed about the situation she is in but damn its not like Jasper asked for it either, maybe Jasper needs to go off on her and call her out on how she is being a childish bitch. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
I have to disagree with you there. Jasper really infringed upon Bella's personal space by invading her hotel room while she was trying to rest and think. She had no reason whatsoever to inform him of where she was going because, quite frankly, they only became reacquainted a few hours prior. Bella's understanding of the mating came mostly from Edward, who as you know, wasn't forthcoming. The other thing is that sure she knew about vampires, but they weren't exactly a good experience for her. Bella's more concerned about the well being of her friends. Also, bear in mind that Bella has serious trust issues because of Edward and because of the attempted rape by an ex-boyfriend. So, in this case, we must agree to disagree. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 03 Oct 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hee-hee! Emmett at McDonald's? Sheer genius! I can almost hear it now: "Do you want fries or A-negative with that?" LOL. I like the way Carlisle cusses now, it suits him better than his uptight, perfect persona, since the 1600's were a lot more earthy than the victorian era he's been emulating. The face-slapping round-robin was hilarious as well, Mama, brilliant. So what did Bella do at the steakhouse; cause a chain reaction incident and set the place on fire or just faint at a rare tenderloin?
Author's Response:
"At McDonald's, we do it all for you!" Oh my God, I'm giving my age away with that jingle. Carlisle has changed in a huge way. Well wouldn't you if you found out that your wife of a hundred or so years was sleeping with the girl that you thought was your daughter. This is very Woody Allen of me, isn't it? As for the steakhouse? It's next. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
why do i have a feeling that the guys are not going to be able to order there steaks rare they are going to have to be well done this is going to get good i have a feeling that all the guys are going to pay for the matting pull so please let me know if i am right and update soon
Author's Response:
Hmm...right on one thing, wrong on the other. Which one? I can't say...XOXO
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter. I really love Bella in this. Strong (mostly) and not putting up with crap.
Author's Response:
Bella is mostly strong...that's a perfect description for her. She's very forthright about her feelings too. Jasper was the one that messed up at the beginning of this chapter. He had no right to intrude on her personal space. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
No cant blame Bella for being wary. Wait till the rest of the girls find out the secret B's been keeping about the Cullens. Hope they dont freak.
Author's Response:
You're right, Bella has and absolute right to be wary. She has a good life and a great support system so why should she trust Jasper straight off the bat? Freak? Yes, Lauren is a freak. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Ang's parents need to be struck down by lightening. Woo Hoo for Charlie and Pat. LOL for telling off Fuckward, Malice, and the cunt twins. LOVING this
Author's Response:
Oh, Ang's parents are the worst. They hide behind their religion. Charlie and Pat are wonderful! You'll meet them in two chapters. As for the mindfuckers and the tuna taster, blech...unfortunately they'll be back. Glad you enjoyed it. XOXO
Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good start.
Bye bye Malice and Fucward.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Not quite on saying goodbye to the malicious duo. Thank you for your review. XOXO
Date: 01 Oct 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wondered why Edward wanted to hang around them? I am glad they moved on even if the police had to be threatened.
Author's Response:
Edward has his own reasons for wanting to hang around them. It has a lot to do with nosiness, arrogance, and something else which I cannot reveal yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 01 Oct 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start Mama..
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you, Mary! XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Given her history, it makes complete sense for her to try to find a quiet place to process all of the events of the evening. I'm just glad she had the sense to text her friends before they got worried. So, when do we get Emmett and Carlisle's POV on their new mates? And when do they plan on telling/changing them? inquiring minds want to know!
Author's Response:
Thank you! You hit the nail on the head: Bella needs time to process everything, it was just too much. Her friends are all drunk, but Bella is completely sober. And she text messaged her friends, but not Jasper because she really had no obligation to inform him of anything yet. Bella hasn't agreed to anything. The next chapter is Jasper and Bella will be interrogating all of the vampires. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter! Don't blame Bella at all for getting out of there... she had alot to process after that night out.... with everything that went on and the whole Mate thing! LOL :) at least Peter told her because I don't think that Jasper would have had the guts to tell her for a bit and she needed to know :) and OMG Loved Jess' ride! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Bella absolutely needed some time to process everything, the question is, will Jasper give her the time to do so. As for the mate thing, Bella doesn't understand it yet. Remember she was with Edward who told her nothing significant about vampirism. Oh, and you're right, Peter told Bella because Jasper would have danced around the issue. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
loved it !
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review. XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
loving it already ! the 4 men together are going to be epic!
Author's Response:
Those four men have a common bond just like the four women do. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 Sep 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am such a fan of your stories. I love the pairings in this story. Poor Jasper is going to freak out when he can't find Bella. It should be interesting to see how you decide to keep them together as they currently live so far apart. I am glad to see Peter with a great role in this story as well.
Author's Response:
Jasper will be unhappy and he'll over react like a typical male. Bella is in the right here, though. She has no obligation to Jasper whatsoever at this point. Peter will have a terrific role in this story. Thanks for your review. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2011 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Estou gostando do desenrolar da sua história. Acho que as meninas mandaram bem encima do Edward. Acho que Edward, Alice, Esme e Rosalia devem viver e assistirem de perto os quatro se darem bem e ficarem com inveja haha. Para falar a verdade, gostaria que fossem vegetarianos novamente e que tivessem olhos dourados novamente pois acho lindo os olhos dourados e o fato de poderem interagir no meio dos humanos ao invez de terem que ficar a margem da sociedade nas florestas e tem o fato do Carlisle que adora viver em um hospital, ficar a trocar de lentes a toda hora é penoso e irritante certo?
Author's Response:
The plot is definitely developing. You'll hear from Edward soon, he and Alice are very evil in this story.
As for the golden eyes, Carlisle now has embraced his natural food source so he'll only be switching over to animals when he is in Forks. I agree that the golden eyes are beautiful as well.
There are many more twists and turns coming.
Obrigada for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ha ha ha, amei a fic, diferente e divertida continue escrevendo que eu irei acompanhar. Abraços e até a próxima atualização
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you're enjoying this story. I am having a wonderful time writing it. Obrigada. XOXO
Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved this chapter! and it is so fitting that you put the 2 preacher's kids together! :) So excited to read more!
Author's Response:
Don't Carlisle and Angela make the perfect pair? They're very close in age, too. Carlisle's just a year older than Angela. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
loved it!! perfect pairings too!! cant wait for more...looks like jess will get her frozen man after all!! cnt wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Jess will definitely get her frozen man. And they'll soon find out that people do eat people alive as well. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
OHHHH I loved this chapter!!! Perfect! I knew that was the way to go with them, you paired them off perfectly! It was the first thing I did when I finished reading the chapter...think, think, think...lol! This is going to be too great, I am really enjoying this story, and can't wait for the next chapter! Take care until then, thank you for a super fun story, this should be a great ride!
Author's Response:
I'm actually having a real blast writing this story, and I truly love the couples in this one. Just wait until you see what I get them into. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 18 Sep 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved the standoff, I was grinning the whole time I was reading it. Jessica really is good for Emmett, she's not quite as vain as Rose and has a better sense of humor. Angela and Carlisle should find lots to talk about, don't you think? Besides, with all that anatomical training between them, they will probably burn a hole in the floor!
Author's Response:
Jessica doesn't have a morsel of vanity. None of the girls do, that's why they're so good for these guys. Yes, Angela and Carlisle will definitely have lots to talk about. LOL. As for the challenge, Bella won't give it up so easily so I can tell you for sure that Jasper is losing this one. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Sep 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start!!! wow! I am excited to see more :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I'm glad you're joining me for this one, too. Thanks for your review. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
love it so far! cant wait to see what happends...hmm bella/jasper...angela/emmett..lauren/carlisle and jessica/ peter? hmm cant wait to find out!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hmm...I wonder who is with whom? Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
i want to see if i can guess who is going to be with who lets see we already know that its going to be bella and jasper, i say carlisle and angela, and lets see jessica with emmett, and lauren with peter i cant wait to find out if i am right i was also wondering what is going on with your story YOULL FIND WHAT YOUR LOOKING FOR IN WALMART are you going to continue with it or is it on hold for now i also wanted to let you know that i love the way you write you have a very good flow when it comes to your storys i also love your mind when it comes to figuring out what trouble our favorit twilight carrictors can get themselfs into i am so looking forward to seeing what you come up with for not only the new story but also your other ones so please update soon
Author's Response:
Hello reneesmay...Walmart is not on hold...it's definitely continuing. I had a one week power outage at my house after Hurricane Irene and I was stuck between a rock and a hard place...no electricity means no internet, phone, hot water, refrigeration, lights, etc... After that it was back to school time, and I had to scramble to get my kids ready. September is just a crazy month...school forms, parent open houses, activities for kids begin, etc. I'm just now catching up on everything so the story is still on course and should be back on track this weekend.
Thanks for your kind compliments, I'm happy that you enjoy my style of writing.
Now, as for the pairings, nope...I'm not telling you. LOL> XOXO
Date: 10 Sep 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
A story from Lauren's POV? Well, that's original. Her scolding Bella in the hospital for the 'dangers' she could have encountered in the forest was hilarious, I must say. If I'd been Bella, I'd have laughed myself sick! Just one request: Please, please don't match Lauren to Carlisle? Just, no. She and Peter would be a better match since you have removed her head from her ass.
Author's Response:
Oh, I know...Lauren was worried about skeeter bites. No, I won't match Lauren to Carlisle...or maybe I will...hmm... Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I was laughing almost all the way through. hmmm wonder how guys will split up the girls aside from Jazz and B. I see Angela with Em, Lauren with Peter, and Jess with Carlisle. Am I close? Huggles.
Author's Response:
Hmm...you're an interesting one, most people see Angela with Carlisle. I refuse to give away the mate parings, but you'll have your answer with chapter 2. I swear you and I have to do LV together...um...do they let mothers into the Rehab pool party? XOXO