[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
Awesome!
Date: 27 Nov 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
It wasn't how I would have imagined it woukd go, but I think it was what it should be for them. Edward is used to taking and doing things in his own way and method, this couldn't have been too different. Bella's feactions were surprising, she fought a big battle inside, no doubt. She will probably feel shocked for a bit, but this part of her will become stronger and will make them both enjoy it.
Author's Response:
Yes I know what you mean...the first attempt at writing this scene, it was more brutal but then I thought I want her to fall for him and I couldn't image that if he raped her, so I went with the more persuasive, teasing Edward...I like him!
Date: 27 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
Well the deed is done! Drama to follow!
Date: 27 Nov 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
FANTASTIC!!!!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
I thought pussy was fairly new as well.
What were its origins?
Author's Response:
Have a look on wiki that has some interesting facts according to them pussy was reference to women in general dating back in the 1500's!
I shall look for some cock words for end of next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
Whoa, young Isabella has found something she likes...and I don't think it's Jacob. And, yes, I have a feeling there was someone watching in the woods, like maybe a horny vampire!!! I am loving this story!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:17 PM Title: Arrival
Good grief, do you ever know how to start a story off with a bang!!! I know I'm late to the party, but you have me totally hooked. I am so impressed with your story line so far, and the character of Cullen you have created. I have always been a huge fan of English mysteries; so if you add to that vampire Edward Cullen and hot sex, I am in heaven!! I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of writing with us.
Author's Response:
My pleasure and to use your words welcome to the party!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
I love your end notes ... very amusing! Awesome chapter!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 9 Forceful
Wow, I had no idea what was instore for me in this chapter. Very sexy.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Such excitement! I love a good battle!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
I loved the hot, intense chapter!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
HOT!! I can't wait for more, you have a delicious mind!
Author's Response: Nice, ;0)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Great chapter... Can't wait to read more :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Hey you! =)
I'm going to assume that that was Alice and Jasper at the beginning of this chapter. I'm so excited to see where you are taking this story of yours; I know it will be awesome. You write so well; I'm really drawn in more and more with each chapter.
I was very curious about what Alice said about what's to come. I found that I gained the biggest amount of pleasure from her stating that Isabella was Edward's destiny.
I really love your story, so much! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks for writing.
I have to ask you how many times you've seen BD, I haven't seen it yet! =( I had my ticket for opening day, but I got sick and couldn't go; it was so depressing. I'll have to make up for it by seeing it many, many times! =) Kelly
I don't know for sure where you live,(I think in the UK)and if you celebrate Thanksgiving, but if you do; I wish you a wonderful holiday. =)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, as i've said I am enjoting writing this as much as you're reading and it amazing to have people review... favourably.
I have seen BDx2 so far, he he he, I am really good friends with my beta so we went and vetted it so we then took my daughter who is 11, I know it's an excuse to go twice, then we'll probably go again before it goes off! Can't get enough of yummy Edward.
You're right I'm in the UK. ;0)
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Ah, more characters make themselves known in the story.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Was that Alice and jasper in the beginning? Cool! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Excellent chapter. The plot thickens. I hope to read an update soon.
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
I like really like the fact that Jacob can't change at will it makes the story more interesting then some of the others I've read. I am wondering who the vamps were in the woods... can't wait to find out!
Date: 23 Nov 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
So is Isabella destined to be with wolf or vamp?
Author's Response:
she is destined to be with a..... sorry can't tell you, you'll have to carry on reading, mwah ha ha ha- that was myevil laugh!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
oh I am soooooo loving this story!!!!
Date: 23 Nov 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
There are many more involved in this, both vampire and wolf. Each side is preparing in case fighting might be needed, lets hope it doesn't get that far. But Jacob will not rest until he has answers and Bella back, the first he might get, the second, I doubt it.
As for Bella's father, his mind and memories were tampered, but there are things that are rooted deep, deep down that will emerge, maybe weak as with the hankie but maybe later they might be stonger and he will remember.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 8 Memories
Jacob is going to fight. I hope Bella and Edward have enough time together before they show up. I love the story. I feel bad for Charlie. Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Oh yes! It's snowing here, but I feel as if I need to get the fans back out while I'm reading your sexy, hot assed story! Cripes, that was just a little taste of what's to come; I can't wait for more.
I'm also anxious to see how Charlie is doing, and if/when Jacob becomes suspicious. Maybe he will catch Edward's scent, although I remember that Edward stood right outside where Jacob was sleeping; I thought that Jacob would smell or sense him then, but he didn't. Oh I don't know what I'm talking about! =) I'll just wait and see. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. I'm absolutely in love with your story! xo Kelly =)
Author's Response:
Great review so pleased you're enjoying hope I can keep it up! Some of your questions will be answered in next chapter, will post asap off to see BD again now! ;0)
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
phew!!! fanning wildly!!!!! LOL!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2011 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
very nice can't wait for more... because I'm a perv!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
This is an swesome story. I love this type of story set in this time frame. Didn't like the horse being beaten, but sooo far the rest of the story has been awesome!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Loved what u have so far. How the hell is Jacob going to react to Charlie not remembering and Bella gone? Can't wait for ur next update
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Work it Eddie! LOL
Date: 19 Nov 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Okay so he will change her then? He said so. HOT, can't wait for more great surprise from coming back home from watching BD! Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
He has every intention of changing her...but when, she still doesn't know what he is yet. Thanks for you review, much appreciated, my turn to see BD. x
Date: 19 Nov 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
I love it. I am sure things will be rocky for a while, but I can't wait to see how things go. Great job...thanks!!
Date: 19 Nov 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
It's getting hotter and hotter. Bella keeps surprsing me, and I'm loving it. How in touch she seems to be with her body. It's a process and she hasn't reached the middle yet, but it is needed to be done.
So, the Chenneys know the truth about Edward, the information is safe with them and that will help Bella adapt.
Author's Response:
I love the way Bella is progressing and experimenting and hopefully the pupil will overtake the master and teach him a thing or two!
Yes the Cheney's know and his horseman, Crowley... these names so fit with the time period they're great!
Date: 19 Nov 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
For a moment at the end of last chapter I thought Bella and her father had crossed ways to and from Cullen Manor, I was glad to be wrong. CHarles might have been unconscious, but Bella was able to say good-bye and spend some time with him.
Edward completed the plan, she is with him, her father is safe back in his house and if it goes as Edward expects, Jacob will be dismissed. However, I can't be sure it's the best choice. Edward hipnotized Charles but not Jacob, and their recollections of the days will be so different and interesting.
Date: 19 Nov 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Edward planned it very well it seems. The thing that stands out the most is Charles not remembering Jacob. What did they put in his drink?
Convincing Bella wasn't difficult, what I don't get is why take her in such way. i guess later on in the story....
Author's Response:
Edward wants Bella...even more, he wants her to want him, Charlie's drink had a sleeping potion in it so there would be no conspiring between Bella and Charlie.
He took Bella that way, he has a thing about her choosing to be with him even if it is forced...at first, he is manipulative and selfish because he knows no better...he needs to be shown!
Hope that helps
Date: 19 Nov 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
This is a bolder, braver and more curious Isabella. Each thing she learns and finds out makes her keep going, finding out more and more. Jacob is more than happy in assisting her. But even if both are enjoying this, it won't last too long. Charles has to come back soon.
Date: 19 Nov 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
I think Charles wouldn't be entirely against Isabellla marrying Jacob, but he would prefer someone else, no doubt. Jacob will insist and try his best to get her to be his. He is confident of the success, I wouldn't be that sure.
Their afternoon was intresting. Jacob arose sensations Isabella enjoyed a lot. But they are just sensations, no real feelings or interest pass them. Isabella is considering if it could be enough... Could she really settle just for this?
And I think who might have been in the woods... ;)
Date: 19 Nov 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Cullen is in a way responsible for Charles entering his house, he left the door open, a fire making the house warm and welcoming and he did scare the horse earlier. All he wanted was to be really angry and make the intruder pay, life had other plans. He will charge Charles for his hospitality but in ways neither would have considered. Charles surprised Edward, with how little he can get from his mind and how different to what he expected his thoughts were.
Date: 19 Nov 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Can't wait for the next chapter. When they do come together it will be epic for both I believe. Please update soon!
Date: 19 Nov 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Make sure all the panties get washed this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
You little hussy! lol!
Loved it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I know it's you lot that keep encouraging me ;0)
Date: 19 Nov 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
:O Whoa!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Wow what a chapter! Please update soon! I'm hopeful for a HEA between them!!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
I thought she was going to put up more of a fight,lol!
Author's Response:
I did try writing it with more of a fight, but then he fought and it became more of a wrestling match...so I had her give in like a good girl and let him have his way...perhaps this is more my fantasy!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 Enraptured
Amazing chapter!!! Cant' wait to see more! :)
Date: 18 Nov 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
He just took what he wanted didn't he. I have a feeling Bella is not going to make this all pleasant for him. I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
So Edward made him forget??? The was quite the plan Edward develped. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
Wow...I really thought Edward had found her. So, it was Jacob that was watching. I can't wait for Edward. He is going to spoil all of Jacob's plans. It is very interesting that Jacob can change her to be like him. Great story...thanks!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
Something has been woken up in Bella. I am guessing Edward was watching her. Jake showed a different side, I think. I love it! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
Charlie was brave to square his shoulders to Edward. That has to show Edward something. I think Edward will have his hands full with Isabella. I bet life as he knew it is over. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 9:36 PM Title: Arrival
Wow...very interesting! I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
great story so far! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you...good to hear
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
*Rubs hands together like a villain* I'm dying here; I'll be anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Now I'm on the edge of my seat! This is so exciting, I love your story, so much! I don't know what to say about the chapter; I'm so excited, but I will say it was great just like all your other chapters. I know I'm repeating myself but, thanks again for writing. I'm so invested in your story, I can't wait to see what happens next! =) Kelly
Author's Response:
Don't worry I love to hear you repeating yourself...for a novice writer you're a dream come true. THANK YOU> :0)
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
So Charles is back home, but why doesn't he recognize Jacob? It could be the drug that he ingested that's made him so disoriented, but it seems that Charlie could have been mesmerized by Edward. I wonder if he can do that even when a person is asleep. Hmmm...
Bella may be gone, but Jacob will pick up her scent, won't he? He'll pick up Edward's scent, gather the rest of the pack and go try to rescue Isabella. Then at some point Edward will gather his family, and the fight will be on! (I'm laughing at myself; I have such an imagination, and I'm usually wrong when I guess at what's going to happen)
I can't wait for Isabella to arrive at the mansion. I'm excited to see her reaction to Edward, and his when he will no doubt see how feisty she is; Bella is going to be pissed and probably scared when she finds out that she was lured there. But who knows, (except for you of course)just what Edward's plans are for Bella. (besides the obvious) ;)
I'm starting to feel like I'll be on the edge of my seat very soon. This is so, so good. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
Author's Response:
I think you should have a go at writing yourself!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
I love your story, but oh crap; I really wanted it to be Edward watching Isabella out by the tree. I don't mean to complain, but I have to be honest and say what I feel.
I could have slapped myself silly for being surprised that werewolves would be in your story. I get so caught up with the vampire side of the story, but I realize that vampires aren't the only supernatural beings that can roam the moors.
Well of course there will be a big battle between Jacob and Edward for Isabella, I would expect nothing less. Also I think it's great that Jacob has awakened these feelings in Isabella and is showing her about pleasures that are foreign to her, but orgasms and being aroused by peasuring yourself or being pleasured by someone else does not spell LOVE, that's just LUST. That's just my opinion. (please don't hate me, I do love your story)
I'll be anxious to see if you'll have Jacob and Isabella marry. I look forward to reading the next few chapters. And once again, thanks for writing. I really do love your story, and your style of writing. You're really quite good. =) Kelly
Author's Response:
To make it a GOOD fight for Isabella Jacob has to be a involved emotionally...ok a little physical too...she has to be able to have a comparison, eventually, makes life and reading more interesting.
I do appreciate reviews even if they don't agree with my ideas...you have been constructive and yes I agree lust and love don't necessarily go hand in hand...unless you're really lucky...but maybe someone will have it all.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
You had me worrying there for a minute. As much as I love the lemons, I was cringing at the thought of Jacob fucking Isabella. I'm sorry, I'm not the biggest Jacob fan.
I think if Jacob has the chance to ask for Bella's hand in marriage, her father might just say yes, but if Charles does indeed return home, whose to say he may not be compelled or mesmerized? In that case he would say no to Jacob, which would leave the door wide open for Edward to swoop in and take her. I know Edward will make Isabella his, one way or another, open door or not.
I think maybe that Edward was watching Isabella's interactions with Jacob, and when she was pleasuring herself. That is so hot. ;) Again I thank-you for writing your story, it really is so great. =) Kelly
Author's Response:
You would be surprised at how hostile some people are to the idea of Isabella fucking Jacob, one person over on fanfic refused to read any more of this story because of the way I had involved Jacob! I'm totally team Edward so he will come out on top...on the bottom...on the side....sigh...I'll have him coming everywhere, sorry lost it there for a while ;0)
So glad you're enjoying so far love enthusiastic reviews.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
The anticipation is building; I love it! I can't wait to see what he does with Mr. Swan, and of course I look forward to Edward and Bella's reactions to each other when they meet. Thanks again for writing. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 11:02 AM Title: Arrival
I love your story so far! I also love the way you are writing it, I think you've done a great job; I can just about picture Oakwood Ridge on the moors. I also love Edward so far.
Your story reminds me of some of the vampire movies I saw when I was younger, and I think it will continue to as the story moves along. Just give me a dark, sexy, mysterious vampire and a big ominous castle or manor, of course add in the moors, a great plot, and I'm pretty happy. Oh and the time period for your story is perfect too.
I'm really excited to read your story! Thanks so much for writing. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
This is going to be interesting! Excellent chapter.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Wow! Keep writing! I can't wait to see how this unfolds!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Cannot wait to see how this will play out!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
How will Charlie deal with Jacob when the stories dont mesh?
Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Quite the illusion. I wonder if is going to work on Isabella or if he cares.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Oh boy....it is going to get interesting! Thanks for the update.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
I need more!!! What will happen?
This is so exciting :)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Well, now the fun begins! At least for Edward and us!
Author's Response:
I'll try and make it good for Bella too!!!!!! ;0)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 Conform
Poor Bella here comes your worst fears in the flesh!! :)
Author's Response:
I know, but what lovely flesh!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
looking forward to reading more oh and what a hot banner :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, yes the banner is great curtousy of my lovely husband, he'll be pleased someone mentioned it, ;0)
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
:D this is going to be so much fun! when are yhu going to update & do yhu update regularly?
Author's Response:
I will up date at LEAST once a week, it will be done regularly...unless unforseen circumstances dictate otherwise and it will finish. I have it mapped out and 4 chapters in various states of completion. Thanks for your support. ;0)
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
Bella is a Nympho! like always! Are they going to meet soon! and what about Jacob? he's going to be a big problem! love this story hope your going to finish it & not leave it uncompleted for 4ever
Author's Response:
Jacob will be returning soon...that's all I can say, wink, wink
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
OMG that was HOT! So i guess no one in your story is going to be a prude thats good!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
that was great! building up the suspense! Whats going to actually happen when he meets her. is she going to be a snuck up snob?
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2011 7:28 PM Title: Arrival
FUCK! Yhu were got damn serious when yhu categorized it as an erotica! lol
Date: 12 Nov 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Please keep writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will do, this one has me excited too. ;0)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
This chap was HOT. Excellent descriptions! =D
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Great stuff!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Love the story!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
That was quite the musical chairs, I'm impressed. Now on to Edward!!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Great plan. Charlie doesn't know anything. Jacob doesn't know anything. Bella in Edward's clutches.
Bring on the next chapter!
Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Does Charlie have amnesia now?
Author's Response:
Kind of...it is explained in the next chapter
Date: 11 Nov 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
Damn, it was just Jacob watching? I like Bella's curiosity, but I hope she experiments on Edward! Awesome story!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Thank you for the early posting. I am hoping that the next chapter is the meeting of Bella and Edward!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
Wonderful deception!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
wow two chapters in a day! so they aren't going to know where bella went... intersting turn of events. ed used his mind games on charilie and jacob has not a clue... this is going to get GOOD!! thanks for the update!!!
Author's Response:
It felt like I was torturing people...impatient to get to Edward...I'm as bad with other peoples stories, so I thought best put people out of their misery and get Bella away from Jacob. thank you for you review much appreciated
Date: 10 Nov 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 Decieved
thanks for the new chapter so quickly. it was very good and I am excited to see what you have instore for us readers.
Author's Response:
that's great to hear, thankyou,;0)
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
Awesome!
Author's Response:
thanks sooo much ;0)
Date: 10 Nov 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
cant wait for edward. good job.thanks
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
oh come on get rid of jacob she needs to be doing that stuff with ed!!! so jake is a real werewolf right? damn bella is a danger magnet. there is gonig to be one hell of a fight!! thanks for the update!!!
Author's Response:
Yes Jacob is a real werewolf and it is her last 'physical' encounter with him, Edward coming soon.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
How will Edward handle it knowing Jacob is there?
Author's Response:
in true Edward style ;0)
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
Ungh....you're KILLING me here! Ah, where's Edward?!! Gah!
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4 Curiosity
Ewww sorry but jacob, not a jacob fan hopefully it will be better with Edward.....hehe. Thanks :)
Author's Response:
I'm not a Jacob fan either...Team Edward through and through and he'll be worth the wait.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
I can't wait for the next chapter please update ASAFP.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
oh ed were you watching? humm.. nope there will be no jacob only ed. but jacob is going to be one pissed off guy!! oh bella you are turning into a hussy with all that self love... can't wait for more! :)
Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 Consumed
oh boy look out bella ed is going to get you!! well at least you will be well statisfied... i know i would be...hmmmmm
Author's Response:
hmmmm me too! ;0)
Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:14 PM Title: Arrival
wow! WOW!! interesting... ed is one helluva vamp in this one.. drinking from Mike Newton at is groin! my oh my...... can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 Feelings
Ack! Charlie would have a fit,lol! A bit of self discovery there! Good chapter, is Edward already there?